Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Foremost.
dusk arising said:
You have encapsulated many of love\'s wonders here but i feel there\'s one big quality of love which is missing - \"love hurts\".
Yes, love in all it\'s guises is the foremost power just as you state. I wish we could prescribe buckets full of it for those who have evil intent in their hearts.
December 9th, 2019 18:31
dusk arising said:
You have encapsulated many of love\'s wonders here but i feel there\'s one big quality of love which is missing - \"love hurts\".
Yes, love in all it\'s guises is the foremost power just as you state. I wish we could prescribe buckets full of it for those who have evil intent in their hearts.
December 9th, 2019 18:31
Foremost.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ The greatest Human Passion is LOVE ! We were created to LOVE& be LOVED !
V1. LOVE is supreme and acts unreservedly ~ it is eternal and is its own reward !
V2. LOVE is consistent & unflappable ~ Love is eternal & embraces Strangers ! Love sure is CATHARTIC ! All these descripters of Love are very important ~ day-by-day ~ in our RELATIONSHIP ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE Angela & Brian
🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 9th, 2019 15:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ The greatest Human Passion is LOVE ! We were created to LOVE& be LOVED !
V1. LOVE is supreme and acts unreservedly ~ it is eternal and is its own reward !
V2. LOVE is consistent & unflappable ~ Love is eternal & embraces Strangers ! Love sure is CATHARTIC ! All these descripters of Love are very important ~ day-by-day ~ in our RELATIONSHIP ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE Angela & Brian
🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 9th, 2019 15:09
Catchtrap.
Goldfinch60 said:
The engineering capability of spiders is eloquently displayed in your words Fay, wonderful write. I don\'t mind spiders.
One of my work colleagues had very severe arachnophobia, she told me that once she was in her sitting room and a spider appeared, she raced out of the room, put pillows and blankets at the foot of the door and \'phoned her husband at work and got him to come home to deal with it\".
I of course then found a computer screen saver that had spiders on it - I think I still have the bruises!
December 6th, 2019 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The engineering capability of spiders is eloquently displayed in your words Fay, wonderful write. I don\'t mind spiders.
One of my work colleagues had very severe arachnophobia, she told me that once she was in her sitting room and a spider appeared, she raced out of the room, put pillows and blankets at the foot of the door and \'phoned her husband at work and got him to come home to deal with it\".
I of course then found a computer screen saver that had spiders on it - I think I still have the bruises!
December 6th, 2019 02:19
Catchtrap.
dusk arising said:
The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end reading this. What is it about the spider which puts us on edge so?
They\'re magnificent creatures and i respect them but i can\'t bring myself to like/love them as i do most other creatures.
If you find them as creepy as i do then you\'re a brave lass to write this splendid piece.
P.S. I was taught that they didnt kill their victims but paralyzed them so that they could eat them alive at their leisure. Not a very cuddly attribute.
December 5th, 2019 04:43
dusk arising said:
The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end reading this. What is it about the spider which puts us on edge so?
They\'re magnificent creatures and i respect them but i can\'t bring myself to like/love them as i do most other creatures.
If you find them as creepy as i do then you\'re a brave lass to write this splendid piece.
P.S. I was taught that they didnt kill their victims but paralyzed them so that they could eat them alive at their leisure. Not a very cuddly attribute.
December 5th, 2019 04:43
Catchtrap.
orchidee said:
An eloquent tale Fay. I was off to rescue a spider from the bath. It was too big to go down the plug hole anyway. Or was it? How do they suddenly appear in the bath?!
December 5th, 2019 04:37
orchidee said:
An eloquent tale Fay. I was off to rescue a spider from the bath. It was too big to go down the plug hole anyway. Or was it? How do they suddenly appear in the bath?!
December 5th, 2019 04:37
Treasured.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those days are always so very special.
December 3rd, 2019 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those days are always so very special.
December 3rd, 2019 01:54
Treasured.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another wonderful voicing Fay, thank you.
Ex animo, Alan
December 2nd, 2019 11:32
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another wonderful voicing Fay, thank you.
Ex animo, Alan
December 2nd, 2019 11:32
Treasured.
sarahlynne said:
Such a thought provoking write, how simple, yet complicated as we know humans can be. Beauty in every thought if one stops and feels the words.... splendid work
December 2nd, 2019 11:10
sarahlynne said:
Such a thought provoking write, how simple, yet complicated as we know humans can be. Beauty in every thought if one stops and feels the words.... splendid work
December 2nd, 2019 11:10
Trust.
benevolentbluebabe said:
Trust, the foundation of love and intimacy; beautifully written!
November 28th, 2019 12:49
benevolentbluebabe said:
Trust, the foundation of love and intimacy; beautifully written!
November 28th, 2019 12:49
Trust.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - We have missed you in the last few Days -welcome back MPS seems to be back in equilibrium !This is an elegant LOVE POEM in both Form & Function ! It reminds us both of some of the important qualities of TRUE LOVE !
Constancy - Tenderness - Trust & Temperance - These are four of the many qualities in OUR RELATIONSHIP !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 28th, 2019 09:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - We have missed you in the last few Days -welcome back MPS seems to be back in equilibrium !This is an elegant LOVE POEM in both Form & Function ! It reminds us both of some of the important qualities of TRUE LOVE !
Constancy - Tenderness - Trust & Temperance - These are four of the many qualities in OUR RELATIONSHIP !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 28th, 2019 09:55
Trust.
orchidee said:
Yes, as Alan says - but why do I use about a million words (sometimes) when five might do?! heehee.
November 28th, 2019 08:11
orchidee said:
Yes, as Alan says - but why do I use about a million words (sometimes) when five might do?! heehee.
November 28th, 2019 08:11
Trust.
Poetic Dan said:
Like the man above said! You never fail to give wonder & amazement with your unique flow.
Always a pleasure!
November 28th, 2019 07:59
Poetic Dan said:
Like the man above said! You never fail to give wonder & amazement with your unique flow.
Always a pleasure!
November 28th, 2019 07:59
Trust.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Out of a million words you always know which ones to select Fay. Excellence again....
Ex animo, Alan
November 28th, 2019 06:56
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Out of a million words you always know which ones to select Fay. Excellence again....
Ex animo, Alan
November 28th, 2019 06:56
Crying Wolf.
orchidee said:
An old joke - I used to be a werewolf (don\'t ya know!) but I\'m all right noo-ooo-ooo-www! *permission given to groan at corny jokes of mine!* lol.
November 25th, 2019 06:08
orchidee said:
An old joke - I used to be a werewolf (don\'t ya know!) but I\'m all right noo-ooo-ooo-www! *permission given to groan at corny jokes of mine!* lol.
November 25th, 2019 06:08
Stirrings.
Zuzanna Musial said:
Excellent and a positive feeling in this poem. It is an excellent poem with a great advice. I too love the photo with such truth...Thank you for being my friend, Dear Lady Fay Slimm...Peace & Blessings. Zuzanna
November 23rd, 2019 20:32
Zuzanna Musial said:
Excellent and a positive feeling in this poem. It is an excellent poem with a great advice. I too love the photo with such truth...Thank you for being my friend, Dear Lady Fay Slimm...Peace & Blessings. Zuzanna
November 23rd, 2019 20:32
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Zuzanna Musial said:
Dear Fay Slimm, your poem is filled with the visual beauty of the surroundings. The Nature provides poetry in motion to all. Just looking at the Four Seasons it creates a colorful poem itself...Beautiful poem. The second poem has a deeper meaning yet! I am into it with my whole heart. \"Find me a Club that puts Love first\"~ LOVE is around us, Dear poetess, I see it with my eyes. Great metaphors in your written verse...Fascinating read...Thank you...Zuzanna Musial
November 23rd, 2019 15:20
Zuzanna Musial said:
Dear Fay Slimm, your poem is filled with the visual beauty of the surroundings. The Nature provides poetry in motion to all. Just looking at the Four Seasons it creates a colorful poem itself...Beautiful poem. The second poem has a deeper meaning yet! I am into it with my whole heart. \"Find me a Club that puts Love first\"~ LOVE is around us, Dear poetess, I see it with my eyes. Great metaphors in your written verse...Fascinating read...Thank you...Zuzanna Musial
November 23rd, 2019 15:20
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Goldfinch60 said:
Two for the price of one and both priceless Fay.
November 23rd, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Two for the price of one and both priceless Fay.
November 23rd, 2019 00:57
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
FredPeyer said:
Two great poems, Fay! And Unsub is right, it is a great final stanza!
November 22nd, 2019 21:52
FredPeyer said:
Two great poems, Fay! And Unsub is right, it is a great final stanza!
November 22nd, 2019 21:52
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ Love the Picture and *INTAKE* ! In NATURE nothing is ever static. Dawn to dusk ~ Autumn to Winter ~ Egg to Chicken to Hen. Always changing and you capture the dynamic of change in this excellent Poem !
WINGING IT ! We all have to thank UNSUB for suggesting an *MPS FUNDAY* to lift the melancholy following the removal of OUTBACK from MPS. Your witty contribution sure is *MILE HIGH* ~ Nudge nudge ~ Elbow elbow ~ SAY NO MORE ! Thanks for engaging !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 22nd, 2019 18:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ Love the Picture and *INTAKE* ! In NATURE nothing is ever static. Dawn to dusk ~ Autumn to Winter ~ Egg to Chicken to Hen. Always changing and you capture the dynamic of change in this excellent Poem !
WINGING IT ! We all have to thank UNSUB for suggesting an *MPS FUNDAY* to lift the melancholy following the removal of OUTBACK from MPS. Your witty contribution sure is *MILE HIGH* ~ Nudge nudge ~ Elbow elbow ~ SAY NO MORE ! Thanks for engaging !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 22nd, 2019 18:00
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Two for the price of one Fay. Always good but Doubly Bubbly good this day.
Ex animo, Alan
November 22nd, 2019 10:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Two for the price of one Fay. Always good but Doubly Bubbly good this day.
Ex animo, Alan
November 22nd, 2019 10:39
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
orchidee said:
Ahem, yes - Fido and I will swoon, and keep our feet firmly on the ground, not go a mile high! heehee.
November 22nd, 2019 10:13
orchidee said:
Ahem, yes - Fido and I will swoon, and keep our feet firmly on the ground, not go a mile high! heehee.
November 22nd, 2019 10:13
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Michael Edwards said:
Ah - double bill Friday plus the bit of fun - super as always dear Fay.
November 22nd, 2019 08:54
Michael Edwards said:
Ah - double bill Friday plus the bit of fun - super as always dear Fay.
November 22nd, 2019 08:54
Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - - sorry I didn\'t know anything about a Fun Friday not a chance now of altering my posting but may add a bit of fun at the end.......... will see later what comes into my mind........
November 22nd, 2019 07:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - - sorry I didn\'t know anything about a Fun Friday not a chance now of altering my posting but may add a bit of fun at the end.......... will see later what comes into my mind........
November 22nd, 2019 07:42
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