Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
TRANSFORMATION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY your posting is even more BEAUTIFUL than usual an elegant pictorial and poetical kaleidescope of COLOR ! You highlight Natures awesome display of colour all around us 24/7 and especially on BONFIRE NIGHT ! GOD is an awesome ARTIST and when he created Planet Earth specially to be the unique habitation of MAN & WOMAN he not only gave us FORTY SHADES of GREEN - BUT Forty & more shades of every other colour as well ! I say to myself - *What a Wonderful World* ! GOD also created Man & Woman with awesome vision - which enables us to distinguish a thousand shades (especially Ladies) - in 3D and in motion ! GOD also gave us a BRAIN that could record these scenes in colour & 3D. It is only when we really open our EYES and look around us and through a MICROSCOPE and a TELESCOPE that we fully realise just how AWESOME our Creator God really is ! Thanks for once again lifting us up onto higher ground - AMEN
Blessings Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 16:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY your posting is even more BEAUTIFUL than usual an elegant pictorial and poetical kaleidescope of COLOR ! You highlight Natures awesome display of colour all around us 24/7 and especially on BONFIRE NIGHT ! GOD is an awesome ARTIST and when he created Planet Earth specially to be the unique habitation of MAN & WOMAN he not only gave us FORTY SHADES of GREEN - BUT Forty & more shades of every other colour as well ! I say to myself - *What a Wonderful World* ! GOD also created Man & Woman with awesome vision - which enables us to distinguish a thousand shades (especially Ladies) - in 3D and in motion ! GOD also gave us a BRAIN that could record these scenes in colour & 3D. It is only when we really open our EYES and look around us and through a MICROSCOPE and a TELESCOPE that we fully realise just how AWESOME our Creator God really is ! Thanks for once again lifting us up onto higher ground - AMEN
Blessings Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 16:07
TRANSFORMATION.
Neville said:
as complex as they come, tho simply stunning as already said......
even with these eyes your message cries out loud
and I imagine those that can and those that want to see, will see it too...
November 5th, 2019 09:02
Neville said:
as complex as they come, tho simply stunning as already said......
even with these eyes your message cries out loud
and I imagine those that can and those that want to see, will see it too...
November 5th, 2019 09:02
Far More.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ We Love your new Picture very GLAM ! For ME (Brian) this Poem rings a Bell ! Sincere Worshipperss coming to CHURCH ~ come rain or shine ! The importance of the *LORDS DAY* and the desire (and JOY) to *ASSEMBLE TOGETHER* to Pray to Praise and to be Purified through 24/7 humble Faith & Salvation (not through going to Church ~ BUT) through Christs atonement for us on the CROSS ~ AMEN. It reminds me of the CHURCH I was taken to (not in the Country but the City) were I was dedicated by my Grandfather ( Baptism was for Adults not Babies) in 1983 ! A sharp contrast (outside) to the Moor-top Chapel ~ but inside IDENTICAL ! Love the closing verse ! The Service complete then home to the smell of fresh baked Bread (My Mum always made her own Loaves & crusty Cobs) and the Sunday Joint in t\'oven ! Memories are made of this ! If I am anything today I owe it all to My Parents & Extended Family and of course ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela
💙🧡💙🧡💙
November 5th, 2019 05:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ We Love your new Picture very GLAM ! For ME (Brian) this Poem rings a Bell ! Sincere Worshipperss coming to CHURCH ~ come rain or shine ! The importance of the *LORDS DAY* and the desire (and JOY) to *ASSEMBLE TOGETHER* to Pray to Praise and to be Purified through 24/7 humble Faith & Salvation (not through going to Church ~ BUT) through Christs atonement for us on the CROSS ~ AMEN. It reminds me of the CHURCH I was taken to (not in the Country but the City) were I was dedicated by my Grandfather ( Baptism was for Adults not Babies) in 1983 ! A sharp contrast (outside) to the Moor-top Chapel ~ but inside IDENTICAL ! Love the closing verse ! The Service complete then home to the smell of fresh baked Bread (My Mum always made her own Loaves & crusty Cobs) and the Sunday Joint in t\'oven ! Memories are made of this ! If I am anything today I owe it all to My Parents & Extended Family and of course ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela
💙🧡💙🧡💙
November 5th, 2019 05:17
Far More.
Michael Edwards said:
I lost myself in the images conjured by your fine words = now back to damp-Monday-afternoon-reality.
November 4th, 2019 11:11
Michael Edwards said:
I lost myself in the images conjured by your fine words = now back to damp-Monday-afternoon-reality.
November 4th, 2019 11:11
Far More.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Very nicely composed Fay. The atmosphere is with me as I read. Sounds a lot like yesterday here in the moors of Yorkshire. I\'ll make a mug of tea with honey in to warm me up now.
Lovely words!
Ex animo, Alan
November 4th, 2019 06:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Very nicely composed Fay. The atmosphere is with me as I read. Sounds a lot like yesterday here in the moors of Yorkshire. I\'ll make a mug of tea with honey in to warm me up now.
Lovely words!
Ex animo, Alan
November 4th, 2019 06:58
Soul-beauty.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write fay,mystical and great imagery
November 2nd, 2019 14:59
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write fay,mystical and great imagery
November 2nd, 2019 14:59
Peerless.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A wonderful tribute to the gift of parenthood.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:47
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A wonderful tribute to the gift of parenthood.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:47
Until Day.
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of sleep takes away the troubles of that day and you awaken into a bright, new better day. Great write Fay.
November 2nd, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of sleep takes away the troubles of that day and you awaken into a bright, new better day. Great write Fay.
November 2nd, 2019 01:44
Until Day.
Suresh said:
If any poem should be heard, it\'s yours, for the plea to sleep, sleep away the fears, the troubles, the night away - till the light of a fresh new day.
November 1st, 2019 22:08
Suresh said:
If any poem should be heard, it\'s yours, for the plea to sleep, sleep away the fears, the troubles, the night away - till the light of a fresh new day.
November 1st, 2019 22:08
Until Day.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Sleep & Dreams & Nivea Cream are all great soothers in time of sadness & despair ! The only problem is when you awake the problems are still there ~ even if somewhat mollified !
ALWAYS REMEMBER
Burdens are lifted @ Calvary
Jesus is very near ~ AMEN
Bkessings & Love & Joy & Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 1st, 2019 11:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Sleep & Dreams & Nivea Cream are all great soothers in time of sadness & despair ! The only problem is when you awake the problems are still there ~ even if somewhat mollified !
ALWAYS REMEMBER
Burdens are lifted @ Calvary
Jesus is very near ~ AMEN
Bkessings & Love & Joy & Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 1st, 2019 11:42
Until Day.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You floated away? you coming back?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 10:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You floated away? you coming back?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 10:22
Peerless.
Goldfinch60 said:
Mums keep the family together and will always be there for their offspring. Great true write Fay.
November 1st, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Mums keep the family together and will always be there for their offspring. Great true write Fay.
November 1st, 2019 01:25
Peerless.
orchidee said:
I never knew mum and baby could be so eloquent. Well I know now! heehee.
October 31st, 2019 11:06
orchidee said:
I never knew mum and baby could be so eloquent. Well I know now! heehee.
October 31st, 2019 11:06
Peerless.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem and especially your picture. Reminded me of something else:
Duct tape is like the \"force\", it has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the Universe together!
October 31st, 2019 10:14
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem and especially your picture. Reminded me of something else:
Duct tape is like the \"force\", it has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the Universe together!
October 31st, 2019 10:14
Soul-beauty.
elphaba993 said:
Excellent writing! It\'s very thought provoking
October 30th, 2019 16:02
elphaba993 said:
Excellent writing! It\'s very thought provoking
October 30th, 2019 16:02
Soul-beauty.
AlitaOpal said:
This masterpiece simply describes where I\'ve been within myself. If I could describe no-thing it would simply be void of thought/things.. In fact I couldn\'t describe it at all.. It\'s great to get back to the middle and be impartial which I understand myself to being part of it all.. Now i\'m going into my own tangent..
Thank you Fay x
October 30th, 2019 12:44
AlitaOpal said:
This masterpiece simply describes where I\'ve been within myself. If I could describe no-thing it would simply be void of thought/things.. In fact I couldn\'t describe it at all.. It\'s great to get back to the middle and be impartial which I understand myself to being part of it all.. Now i\'m going into my own tangent..
Thank you Fay x
October 30th, 2019 12:44
Soul-beauty.
Neville said:
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly beautiful little poetic gem... No B...
October 30th, 2019 05:52
Neville said:
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly beautiful little poetic gem... No B...
October 30th, 2019 05:52
Soul-beauty.
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a soul searching poem Fay and so meaningful in my new found life.
October 30th, 2019 05:33
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a soul searching poem Fay and so meaningful in my new found life.
October 30th, 2019 05:33
Soul-beauty.
orchidee said:
Well, see ya when I get back. I\'m gonna get me boat out and find a place where two seas meet. lol.
October 30th, 2019 04:31
orchidee said:
Well, see ya when I get back. I\'m gonna get me boat out and find a place where two seas meet. lol.
October 30th, 2019 04:31
Soul-beauty.
dusk arising said:
Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read those two seas as the real inner you and the perceived outer you. When they meet you have \'oneness\'...
Oneness is teaching me all about beauty and how wide a subject love is.
Great use of metaphor. Compact and punchy piece for this vast spiritual subject.
October 30th, 2019 03:49
dusk arising said:
Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read those two seas as the real inner you and the perceived outer you. When they meet you have \'oneness\'...
Oneness is teaching me all about beauty and how wide a subject love is.
Great use of metaphor. Compact and punchy piece for this vast spiritual subject.
October 30th, 2019 03:49
Making Richer.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, the image of dawns awakening is wonderful.
October 30th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, the image of dawns awakening is wonderful.
October 30th, 2019 01:16
Making Richer.
dusk arising said:
I doubt there is a view of anything, anywhere which seen through your poetic eyes, and poetic mind which would not, once recounted upon our screens by yourself, enrich our appreciation of your poetic prowess, as does todays gem.
A great build to the theatre of those last four lines.... Why theatre?, because this piece fits together like a play with plot leading to the final vision. Woven and crafted so well.
October 29th, 2019 19:32
dusk arising said:
I doubt there is a view of anything, anywhere which seen through your poetic eyes, and poetic mind which would not, once recounted upon our screens by yourself, enrich our appreciation of your poetic prowess, as does todays gem.
A great build to the theatre of those last four lines.... Why theatre?, because this piece fits together like a play with plot leading to the final vision. Woven and crafted so well.
October 29th, 2019 19:32
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