Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
TRANSFORMATION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY your posting is even more BEAUTIFUL than usual an elegant pictorial and poetical kaleidescope of COLOR ! You highlight Natures awesome display of colour all around us 24/7 and especially on BONFIRE NIGHT ! GOD is an awesome ARTIST and when he created Planet Earth specially to be the unique habitation of MAN & WOMAN he not only gave us FORTY SHADES of GREEN - BUT Forty & more shades of every other colour as well ! I say to myself - *What a Wonderful World* ! GOD also created Man & Woman with awesome vision - which enables us to distinguish a thousand shades (especially Ladies) - in 3D and in motion ! GOD also gave us a BRAIN that could record these scenes in colour & 3D. It is only when we really open our EYES and look around us and through a MICROSCOPE and a TELESCOPE that we fully realise just how AWESOME our Creator God really is ! Thanks for once again lifting us up onto higher ground - AMEN
Blessings Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 16:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY your posting is even more BEAUTIFUL than usual an elegant pictorial and poetical kaleidescope of COLOR ! You highlight Natures awesome display of colour all around us 24/7 and especially on BONFIRE NIGHT ! GOD is an awesome ARTIST and when he created Planet Earth specially to be the unique habitation of MAN & WOMAN he not only gave us FORTY SHADES of GREEN - BUT Forty & more shades of every other colour as well ! I say to myself - *What a Wonderful World* ! GOD also created Man & Woman with awesome vision - which enables us to distinguish a thousand shades (especially Ladies) - in 3D and in motion ! GOD also gave us a BRAIN that could record these scenes in colour & 3D. It is only when we really open our EYES and look around us and through a MICROSCOPE and a TELESCOPE that we fully realise just how AWESOME our Creator God really is ! Thanks for once again lifting us up onto higher ground - AMEN
Blessings Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 16:07
TRANSFORMATION.
Neville said:
as complex as they come, tho simply stunning as already said......
even with these eyes your message cries out loud
and I imagine those that can and those that want to see, will see it too...
November 5th, 2019 09:02
Neville said:
as complex as they come, tho simply stunning as already said......
even with these eyes your message cries out loud
and I imagine those that can and those that want to see, will see it too...
November 5th, 2019 09:02
Far More.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ We Love your new Picture very GLAM ! For ME (Brian) this Poem rings a Bell ! Sincere Worshipperss coming to CHURCH ~ come rain or shine ! The importance of the *LORDS DAY* and the desire (and JOY) to *ASSEMBLE TOGETHER* to Pray to Praise and to be Purified through 24/7 humble Faith & Salvation (not through going to Church ~ BUT) through Christs atonement for us on the CROSS ~ AMEN. It reminds me of the CHURCH I was taken to (not in the Country but the City) were I was dedicated by my Grandfather ( Baptism was for Adults not Babies) in 1983 ! A sharp contrast (outside) to the Moor-top Chapel ~ but inside IDENTICAL ! Love the closing verse ! The Service complete then home to the smell of fresh baked Bread (My Mum always made her own Loaves & crusty Cobs) and the Sunday Joint in t\'oven ! Memories are made of this ! If I am anything today I owe it all to My Parents & Extended Family and of course ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela
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November 5th, 2019 05:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ We Love your new Picture very GLAM ! For ME (Brian) this Poem rings a Bell ! Sincere Worshipperss coming to CHURCH ~ come rain or shine ! The importance of the *LORDS DAY* and the desire (and JOY) to *ASSEMBLE TOGETHER* to Pray to Praise and to be Purified through 24/7 humble Faith & Salvation (not through going to Church ~ BUT) through Christs atonement for us on the CROSS ~ AMEN. It reminds me of the CHURCH I was taken to (not in the Country but the City) were I was dedicated by my Grandfather ( Baptism was for Adults not Babies) in 1983 ! A sharp contrast (outside) to the Moor-top Chapel ~ but inside IDENTICAL ! Love the closing verse ! The Service complete then home to the smell of fresh baked Bread (My Mum always made her own Loaves & crusty Cobs) and the Sunday Joint in t\'oven ! Memories are made of this ! If I am anything today I owe it all to My Parents & Extended Family and of course ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela
💙🧡💙🧡💙
November 5th, 2019 05:17
Far More.
Michael Edwards said:
I lost myself in the images conjured by your fine words = now back to damp-Monday-afternoon-reality.
November 4th, 2019 11:11
Michael Edwards said:
I lost myself in the images conjured by your fine words = now back to damp-Monday-afternoon-reality.
November 4th, 2019 11:11
Far More.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Very nicely composed Fay. The atmosphere is with me as I read. Sounds a lot like yesterday here in the moors of Yorkshire. I\'ll make a mug of tea with honey in to warm me up now.
Lovely words!
Ex animo, Alan
November 4th, 2019 06:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Very nicely composed Fay. The atmosphere is with me as I read. Sounds a lot like yesterday here in the moors of Yorkshire. I\'ll make a mug of tea with honey in to warm me up now.
Lovely words!
Ex animo, Alan
November 4th, 2019 06:58
Soul-beauty.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write fay,mystical and great imagery
November 2nd, 2019 14:59
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write fay,mystical and great imagery
November 2nd, 2019 14:59
Peerless.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A wonderful tribute to the gift of parenthood.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:47
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A wonderful tribute to the gift of parenthood.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:47
Until Day.
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of sleep takes away the troubles of that day and you awaken into a bright, new better day. Great write Fay.
November 2nd, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of sleep takes away the troubles of that day and you awaken into a bright, new better day. Great write Fay.
November 2nd, 2019 01:44
Until Day.
Suresh said:
If any poem should be heard, it\'s yours, for the plea to sleep, sleep away the fears, the troubles, the night away - till the light of a fresh new day.
November 1st, 2019 22:08
Suresh said:
If any poem should be heard, it\'s yours, for the plea to sleep, sleep away the fears, the troubles, the night away - till the light of a fresh new day.
November 1st, 2019 22:08
Until Day.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Sleep & Dreams & Nivea Cream are all great soothers in time of sadness & despair ! The only problem is when you awake the problems are still there ~ even if somewhat mollified !
ALWAYS REMEMBER
Burdens are lifted @ Calvary
Jesus is very near ~ AMEN
Bkessings & Love & Joy & Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 1st, 2019 11:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Sleep & Dreams & Nivea Cream are all great soothers in time of sadness & despair ! The only problem is when you awake the problems are still there ~ even if somewhat mollified !
ALWAYS REMEMBER
Burdens are lifted @ Calvary
Jesus is very near ~ AMEN
Bkessings & Love & Joy & Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 1st, 2019 11:42
Until Day.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You floated away? you coming back?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 10:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You floated away? you coming back?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 10:22
Peerless.
Goldfinch60 said:
Mums keep the family together and will always be there for their offspring. Great true write Fay.
November 1st, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Mums keep the family together and will always be there for their offspring. Great true write Fay.
November 1st, 2019 01:25
Peerless.
orchidee said:
I never knew mum and baby could be so eloquent. Well I know now! heehee.
October 31st, 2019 11:06
orchidee said:
I never knew mum and baby could be so eloquent. Well I know now! heehee.
October 31st, 2019 11:06
Peerless.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem and especially your picture. Reminded me of something else:
Duct tape is like the \"force\", it has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the Universe together!
October 31st, 2019 10:14
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem and especially your picture. Reminded me of something else:
Duct tape is like the \"force\", it has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the Universe together!
October 31st, 2019 10:14
Soul-beauty.
elphaba993 said:
Excellent writing! It\'s very thought provoking
October 30th, 2019 16:02
elphaba993 said:
Excellent writing! It\'s very thought provoking
October 30th, 2019 16:02
Soul-beauty.
AlitaOpal said:
This masterpiece simply describes where I\'ve been within myself. If I could describe no-thing it would simply be void of thought/things.. In fact I couldn\'t describe it at all.. It\'s great to get back to the middle and be impartial which I understand myself to being part of it all.. Now i\'m going into my own tangent..
Thank you Fay x
October 30th, 2019 12:44
AlitaOpal said:
This masterpiece simply describes where I\'ve been within myself. If I could describe no-thing it would simply be void of thought/things.. In fact I couldn\'t describe it at all.. It\'s great to get back to the middle and be impartial which I understand myself to being part of it all.. Now i\'m going into my own tangent..
Thank you Fay x
October 30th, 2019 12:44
Soul-beauty.
Neville said:
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly beautiful little poetic gem... No B...
October 30th, 2019 05:52
Neville said:
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly beautiful little poetic gem... No B...
October 30th, 2019 05:52
Soul-beauty.
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a soul searching poem Fay and so meaningful in my new found life.
October 30th, 2019 05:33
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a soul searching poem Fay and so meaningful in my new found life.
October 30th, 2019 05:33
Soul-beauty.
orchidee said:
Well, see ya when I get back. I\'m gonna get me boat out and find a place where two seas meet. lol.
October 30th, 2019 04:31
orchidee said:
Well, see ya when I get back. I\'m gonna get me boat out and find a place where two seas meet. lol.
October 30th, 2019 04:31
Soul-beauty.
dusk arising said:
Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read those two seas as the real inner you and the perceived outer you. When they meet you have \'oneness\'...
Oneness is teaching me all about beauty and how wide a subject love is.
Great use of metaphor. Compact and punchy piece for this vast spiritual subject.
October 30th, 2019 03:49
dusk arising said:
Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read those two seas as the real inner you and the perceived outer you. When they meet you have \'oneness\'...
Oneness is teaching me all about beauty and how wide a subject love is.
Great use of metaphor. Compact and punchy piece for this vast spiritual subject.
October 30th, 2019 03:49
Making Richer.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, the image of dawns awakening is wonderful.
October 30th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, the image of dawns awakening is wonderful.
October 30th, 2019 01:16
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