Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
First Light.
Goldfinch60 said:
That first light is as fine as the words in your poem Fay.
October 10th, 2019 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That first light is as fine as the words in your poem Fay.
October 10th, 2019 02:08
First Light.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I breath in every fine word Fay. Thanks for starting my day so well. I hope I am first to comment.
Ex animo, Alan
October 10th, 2019 01:53
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I breath in every fine word Fay. Thanks for starting my day so well. I hope I am first to comment.
Ex animo, Alan
October 10th, 2019 01:53
Awayness.
FredPeyer said:
A picture is worth a thousand words, they say. Your poem conjures up that feeling of loneliness and regret in only a few words. Well done!
October 8th, 2019 11:35
FredPeyer said:
A picture is worth a thousand words, they say. Your poem conjures up that feeling of loneliness and regret in only a few words. Well done!
October 8th, 2019 11:35
Awayness.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was on about a hymn: \'When a knight won his spurs\'. This fits to it perfectly, so I shall sing it! Arrgghhhh, they all say. lol. It\'s in 12.12.12.12. metre, though the hymn is slightly irregular metre I think.
October 8th, 2019 08:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was on about a hymn: \'When a knight won his spurs\'. This fits to it perfectly, so I shall sing it! Arrgghhhh, they all say. lol. It\'s in 12.12.12.12. metre, though the hymn is slightly irregular metre I think.
October 8th, 2019 08:02
Awayness.
dusk arising said:
How melancholy can be those final train departures. The innocent yearning, harshly learning stood against the wall in your picture so evocative of her dilemma and pain.
And future holds a jolt of fear and yet hope with each distant train\'s whistle.
Beautifully emotional poetry Fay. Concise but truly conveys young love\'s entry into the big real world timelessly.
For the sheer mastery of this genre this piece deserves to be in everyone\'s favourites.
October 8th, 2019 06:52
dusk arising said:
How melancholy can be those final train departures. The innocent yearning, harshly learning stood against the wall in your picture so evocative of her dilemma and pain.
And future holds a jolt of fear and yet hope with each distant train\'s whistle.
Beautifully emotional poetry Fay. Concise but truly conveys young love\'s entry into the big real world timelessly.
For the sheer mastery of this genre this piece deserves to be in everyone\'s favourites.
October 8th, 2019 06:52
Silence.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Fay. Silence is definitely underrated. Unfortunately I have tinnitus, so even if it is quiet I still have all that noise.
October 8th, 2019 04:01
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Fay. Silence is definitely underrated. Unfortunately I have tinnitus, so even if it is quiet I still have all that noise.
October 8th, 2019 04:01
Silence.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Silences can be so wonderful and meaningful.
October 7th, 2019 15:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Silences can be so wonderful and meaningful.
October 7th, 2019 15:28
Silence.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good afternoon FAY thanks for reminding us ! We have a Motto in Spanish
i SILENCIO ES DE ORO !
Silence is Golden & it really is !
Thanks for your very elegant ODE underlining that fact. Planet Earth is much too cacophanous of late ! One can hardly hear onself think. Im very excited to be going home with Brian on Thursday 19th OCTOBER via Hawaii ! Arrive Heathrow MONDAY 23 OCTOBER back @ work (Culture Shock ?) Monday 30 October !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ANGELA 🧡💙🧡
Please check MONDAY MONDAY MONDAY
Also latest FUSION - FAVOURITE MONTH - Ta A & B !
October 7th, 2019 07:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good afternoon FAY thanks for reminding us ! We have a Motto in Spanish
i SILENCIO ES DE ORO !
Silence is Golden & it really is !
Thanks for your very elegant ODE underlining that fact. Planet Earth is much too cacophanous of late ! One can hardly hear onself think. Im very excited to be going home with Brian on Thursday 19th OCTOBER via Hawaii ! Arrive Heathrow MONDAY 23 OCTOBER back @ work (Culture Shock ?) Monday 30 October !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ANGELA 🧡💙🧡
Please check MONDAY MONDAY MONDAY
Also latest FUSION - FAVOURITE MONTH - Ta A & B !
October 7th, 2019 07:58
Silence.
dusk arising said:
You\'ve encapsulated the beauty of silent times here very well indeed. For satisfaction with silence is a clear path to self knowledge, exploring ones inner mind, reasoning away from the everyday.
For those who look perhaps deeper still a spiritual awareness begins to be realised. Evidence of this can be seen from without when reading some of our fellow poets on mps who quite obviously have ventured well into silence.
Another very enjoyable read Fay. Stimulating, I look forward to commenting on your deliveries here.
October 7th, 2019 07:11
dusk arising said:
You\'ve encapsulated the beauty of silent times here very well indeed. For satisfaction with silence is a clear path to self knowledge, exploring ones inner mind, reasoning away from the everyday.
For those who look perhaps deeper still a spiritual awareness begins to be realised. Evidence of this can be seen from without when reading some of our fellow poets on mps who quite obviously have ventured well into silence.
Another very enjoyable read Fay. Stimulating, I look forward to commenting on your deliveries here.
October 7th, 2019 07:11
Silence.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Noises can be good or bad but silence is always silence. We can be so grateful for silence Fay, as you so well say. A special piece, I think, therefore must be a fave\' if you will allow me.
Ex animo, Alan
October 7th, 2019 05:59
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Noises can be good or bad but silence is always silence. We can be so grateful for silence Fay, as you so well say. A special piece, I think, therefore must be a fave\' if you will allow me.
Ex animo, Alan
October 7th, 2019 05:59
Time\'s Needle.
Alta H Mabin said:
An absolute delightful gem of a write. Thank you, Fay.
October 4th, 2019 23:59
Alta H Mabin said:
An absolute delightful gem of a write. Thank you, Fay.
October 4th, 2019 23:59
Time\'s Needle.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This comment box needs an applause button I had to read this several time ,s Fay it almost re-invents itself every time... A bit like the Dawn
Very loud clapping going on here THANK YOU
October 4th, 2019 04:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This comment box needs an applause button I had to read this several time ,s Fay it almost re-invents itself every time... A bit like the Dawn
Very loud clapping going on here THANK YOU
October 4th, 2019 04:37
Time\'s Needle.
Neville said:
Outstanding is perhaps the most apt word I can currently find to apply meaningfully to your page dear Fay....
October 4th, 2019 04:25
Neville said:
Outstanding is perhaps the most apt word I can currently find to apply meaningfully to your page dear Fay....
October 4th, 2019 04:25
Time\'s Needle.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew some much happened with time - well, I do now, reading this!
October 4th, 2019 02:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew some much happened with time - well, I do now, reading this!
October 4th, 2019 02:34
Time\'s Needle.
dusk arising said:
Ah, Fay and the dawning, harmony.
Yes indeed the dawning for the ageing mind is a reminder that the more seed sewn today, the richer the harvest be for those years ahead.....
Alll i need now is the vigour to go out there a sewing!
Do the young sparrows crowd to tap your windows in the morning begging \"tell us more stories of days dawnings please Oh Fay of the Rising Day\"
October 4th, 2019 01:29
dusk arising said:
Ah, Fay and the dawning, harmony.
Yes indeed the dawning for the ageing mind is a reminder that the more seed sewn today, the richer the harvest be for those years ahead.....
Alll i need now is the vigour to go out there a sewing!
Do the young sparrows crowd to tap your windows in the morning begging \"tell us more stories of days dawnings please Oh Fay of the Rising Day\"
October 4th, 2019 01:29
Asking.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem. \'Why\' the unanswerable question in our lives.
October 4th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem. \'Why\' the unanswerable question in our lives.
October 4th, 2019 00:20
Asking.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA HERE - Its 7am Friday - just checking MPS before getting ready for WORK ! First CLINIC 10am ! Love the pathos in Your Poem - The ECSTACY of Life & Love and then the AGONY of Life & Death ! It is a reality we WILL all face & many Members have faced ALREADY ! We grieve with YOU ! Brian & I - hope & pray to see our RUBY Wedding (2060 !) but at the least our SILVER (2045) BUT just in case - We will CHERISH each & every DAY we have together. Thanks for sharing - very challenging as we face our whole future TOGETHER - AMEN !
Please check todays POEM *Discovering a New Cave* - Thanks ! Today is National Poetry Day 2019 ! Please add a Poem (Any Style - Any Subject) to Our New Fusion *NATIONAL ODE DAY* ONLY 9 SPACES LEFT - Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
October 3rd, 2019 14:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA HERE - Its 7am Friday - just checking MPS before getting ready for WORK ! First CLINIC 10am ! Love the pathos in Your Poem - The ECSTACY of Life & Love and then the AGONY of Life & Death ! It is a reality we WILL all face & many Members have faced ALREADY ! We grieve with YOU ! Brian & I - hope & pray to see our RUBY Wedding (2060 !) but at the least our SILVER (2045) BUT just in case - We will CHERISH each & every DAY we have together. Thanks for sharing - very challenging as we face our whole future TOGETHER - AMEN !
Please check todays POEM *Discovering a New Cave* - Thanks ! Today is National Poetry Day 2019 ! Please add a Poem (Any Style - Any Subject) to Our New Fusion *NATIONAL ODE DAY* ONLY 9 SPACES LEFT - Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
October 3rd, 2019 14:34
Asking.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully sad write dear Fay - another real gem.
October 3rd, 2019 11:41
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully sad write dear Fay - another real gem.
October 3rd, 2019 11:41
Asking.
Neville said:
A great big sad little write if I might be so bold....
tis near a sorrow shared..... Neville
October 3rd, 2019 09:35
Neville said:
A great big sad little write if I might be so bold....
tis near a sorrow shared..... Neville
October 3rd, 2019 09:35
Asking.
Clara said:
Those last two lines... Truly heartbreaking. This is a wonderful poem Fay. Sad but wonderful and beautifully expressed... A life together... Then lost. Yes, this is a lovely poem.
October 3rd, 2019 09:02
Clara said:
Those last two lines... Truly heartbreaking. This is a wonderful poem Fay. Sad but wonderful and beautifully expressed... A life together... Then lost. Yes, this is a lovely poem.
October 3rd, 2019 09:02
Asking.
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written poem of \'love\'s story\' in mature years and the inevitable toll of our humanity.
The \'Why\' we all ask is perennial as the wind which blows, and the wind upon a tear stained bears no answer as solace instead begins to dull the pain and haunt the eyes.
October 3rd, 2019 02:54
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written poem of \'love\'s story\' in mature years and the inevitable toll of our humanity.
The \'Why\' we all ask is perennial as the wind which blows, and the wind upon a tear stained bears no answer as solace instead begins to dull the pain and haunt the eyes.
October 3rd, 2019 02:54
Maybe.
dusk arising said:
Cor! Fay.
That is so so beautiful. Just so damn moving.
So beautiful and has to be a Favourite.
October 2nd, 2019 05:59
dusk arising said:
Cor! Fay.
That is so so beautiful. Just so damn moving.
So beautiful and has to be a Favourite.
October 2nd, 2019 05:59
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