Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Peerless.
Goldfinch60 said:
Mums keep the family together and will always be there for their offspring. Great true write Fay.
November 1st, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Mums keep the family together and will always be there for their offspring. Great true write Fay.
November 1st, 2019 01:25
Peerless.
orchidee said:
I never knew mum and baby could be so eloquent. Well I know now! heehee.
October 31st, 2019 11:06
orchidee said:
I never knew mum and baby could be so eloquent. Well I know now! heehee.
October 31st, 2019 11:06
Peerless.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem and especially your picture. Reminded me of something else:
Duct tape is like the \"force\", it has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the Universe together!
October 31st, 2019 10:14
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem and especially your picture. Reminded me of something else:
Duct tape is like the \"force\", it has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the Universe together!
October 31st, 2019 10:14
Soul-beauty.
elphaba993 said:
Excellent writing! It\'s very thought provoking
October 30th, 2019 16:02
elphaba993 said:
Excellent writing! It\'s very thought provoking
October 30th, 2019 16:02
Soul-beauty.
AlitaOpal said:
This masterpiece simply describes where I\'ve been within myself. If I could describe no-thing it would simply be void of thought/things.. In fact I couldn\'t describe it at all.. It\'s great to get back to the middle and be impartial which I understand myself to being part of it all.. Now i\'m going into my own tangent..
Thank you Fay x
October 30th, 2019 12:44
AlitaOpal said:
This masterpiece simply describes where I\'ve been within myself. If I could describe no-thing it would simply be void of thought/things.. In fact I couldn\'t describe it at all.. It\'s great to get back to the middle and be impartial which I understand myself to being part of it all.. Now i\'m going into my own tangent..
Thank you Fay x
October 30th, 2019 12:44
Soul-beauty.
Neville said:
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly beautiful little poetic gem... No B...
October 30th, 2019 05:52
Neville said:
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly beautiful little poetic gem... No B...
October 30th, 2019 05:52
Soul-beauty.
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a soul searching poem Fay and so meaningful in my new found life.
October 30th, 2019 05:33
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a soul searching poem Fay and so meaningful in my new found life.
October 30th, 2019 05:33
Soul-beauty.
orchidee said:
Well, see ya when I get back. I\'m gonna get me boat out and find a place where two seas meet. lol.
October 30th, 2019 04:31
orchidee said:
Well, see ya when I get back. I\'m gonna get me boat out and find a place where two seas meet. lol.
October 30th, 2019 04:31
Soul-beauty.
dusk arising said:
Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read those two seas as the real inner you and the perceived outer you. When they meet you have \'oneness\'...
Oneness is teaching me all about beauty and how wide a subject love is.
Great use of metaphor. Compact and punchy piece for this vast spiritual subject.
October 30th, 2019 03:49
dusk arising said:
Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read those two seas as the real inner you and the perceived outer you. When they meet you have \'oneness\'...
Oneness is teaching me all about beauty and how wide a subject love is.
Great use of metaphor. Compact and punchy piece for this vast spiritual subject.
October 30th, 2019 03:49
Making Richer.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, the image of dawns awakening is wonderful.
October 30th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, the image of dawns awakening is wonderful.
October 30th, 2019 01:16
Making Richer.
dusk arising said:
I doubt there is a view of anything, anywhere which seen through your poetic eyes, and poetic mind which would not, once recounted upon our screens by yourself, enrich our appreciation of your poetic prowess, as does todays gem.
A great build to the theatre of those last four lines.... Why theatre?, because this piece fits together like a play with plot leading to the final vision. Woven and crafted so well.
October 29th, 2019 19:32
dusk arising said:
I doubt there is a view of anything, anywhere which seen through your poetic eyes, and poetic mind which would not, once recounted upon our screens by yourself, enrich our appreciation of your poetic prowess, as does todays gem.
A great build to the theatre of those last four lines.... Why theatre?, because this piece fits together like a play with plot leading to the final vision. Woven and crafted so well.
October 29th, 2019 19:32
Making Richer.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Good Evening FAY were back in the same Timezone now not 12 hours apart ! Your last line suggests *POEMS are spawned by Experience* and that is the theme of OUR todays & tomorrows POEM (still in draft) Today as you were inspired by THE DAWN making life richer so today we are inspired by the capriciouness of The Seasonal Change AUTUMN to WINTER ! Dawn is more predictable (but no less awesome) Autumn to Winter is unredictable and its suddenness is always a surprize how ever many we have witnessed ! Tomorrows deals MOONLIGHT WALKS - IN THE WOODS triggered by BEETHOVEN ! Loved your POEM and the PICTURE - mesmerising !
Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Love Angel & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 29th, 2019 14:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Good Evening FAY were back in the same Timezone now not 12 hours apart ! Your last line suggests *POEMS are spawned by Experience* and that is the theme of OUR todays & tomorrows POEM (still in draft) Today as you were inspired by THE DAWN making life richer so today we are inspired by the capriciouness of The Seasonal Change AUTUMN to WINTER ! Dawn is more predictable (but no less awesome) Autumn to Winter is unredictable and its suddenness is always a surprize how ever many we have witnessed ! Tomorrows deals MOONLIGHT WALKS - IN THE WOODS triggered by BEETHOVEN ! Loved your POEM and the PICTURE - mesmerising !
Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Love Angel & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 29th, 2019 14:03
Making Richer.
Neville said:
early mane captured in all its glory..
far more than fifty shades of silver and grey here in your accompanying image... both superb.....
October 29th, 2019 08:51
Neville said:
early mane captured in all its glory..
far more than fifty shades of silver and grey here in your accompanying image... both superb.....
October 29th, 2019 08:51
In Transit.
kevin browne said:
Such beauty exists in every word that\'s read. Read with the influence of feeling raindrops keep falling on my head with the wisdom you, Fay of capturing magnificent gems and pearls. Just wonderful..!!
October 28th, 2019 20:06
kevin browne said:
Such beauty exists in every word that\'s read. Read with the influence of feeling raindrops keep falling on my head with the wisdom you, Fay of capturing magnificent gems and pearls. Just wonderful..!!
October 28th, 2019 20:06
In Transit.
Suresh said:
For long I have been wanting to write about a raindrop, but no matter what your art is unique.
October 28th, 2019 18:23
Suresh said:
For long I have been wanting to write about a raindrop, but no matter what your art is unique.
October 28th, 2019 18:23
In Transit.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your insight into water droplets ~ delightful ! Although water has a simple Molecular Structure H - O - H it is an amazing substance ! Intra-mlecular bonding makes water molecules stick together (other liquids dont do this) to form Water Droplets and surfce tension makes it stick to the wet glass and slide down slowly giving a wonderful & clourful display if light catches the prismatic water drops forming mini rainbows ! Water Droplets in transit is a rare glimse of Nature @ molecular level and an insight into the secret *World of Molecules*. It is these intramolecular foces that cause liquid water to form ICE which is 10% less dense than water causing ponds & lakes to FREEZE from the top downwards. This forms an insulating layer which prevents the whole pond freezing and preserves the Pond Life ~ AMEN ! BRIAN & I have both studied Science @ a higher level ! However the fact that we understand and can explain these things does not diminish the Mystery & Wonder of Nature ~ rather it enhances it ! We say to ourselves *What a Wonderful World !* Science is only thinking GODs thoughts after HIM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 28th, 2019 17:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your insight into water droplets ~ delightful ! Although water has a simple Molecular Structure H - O - H it is an amazing substance ! Intra-mlecular bonding makes water molecules stick together (other liquids dont do this) to form Water Droplets and surfce tension makes it stick to the wet glass and slide down slowly giving a wonderful & clourful display if light catches the prismatic water drops forming mini rainbows ! Water Droplets in transit is a rare glimse of Nature @ molecular level and an insight into the secret *World of Molecules*. It is these intramolecular foces that cause liquid water to form ICE which is 10% less dense than water causing ponds & lakes to FREEZE from the top downwards. This forms an insulating layer which prevents the whole pond freezing and preserves the Pond Life ~ AMEN ! BRIAN & I have both studied Science @ a higher level ! However the fact that we understand and can explain these things does not diminish the Mystery & Wonder of Nature ~ rather it enhances it ! We say to ourselves *What a Wonderful World !* Science is only thinking GODs thoughts after HIM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 28th, 2019 17:35
In Transit.
dusk arising said:
Aaaaaah, even from the tiniest of natures gems she creates yet another pearl!
October 28th, 2019 10:12
dusk arising said:
Aaaaaah, even from the tiniest of natures gems she creates yet another pearl!
October 28th, 2019 10:12
In Transit.
Neville said:
this is an absolute delight, no matter which way one looks at it....
October 28th, 2019 03:53
Neville said:
this is an absolute delight, no matter which way one looks at it....
October 28th, 2019 03:53
Ours.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B Here (together again !) HI FAY (as the SONG says) LOVE is a many splendoured thing. Angela & I have a lot in common also much that separates us ! Even in the Spiritual Dimension She loves the pomp & ceremony of Catholic Cathedrals but she is happy to be married in the minimalism of OUR Evangelical Church where she is now a MEMBER. However we are having a Post Nuptual Blessing ~ by the BISHOP ~ in Seville Cathedral on our HONEYMOON ~ AMEN We are still in early glow of our Romance and Your final couplet scared us ! Even during this week ~ when we are getting back on track as ONE ~ we cannot imagine a life without each other ~ AMEN !
Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 25th, 2019 16:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B Here (together again !) HI FAY (as the SONG says) LOVE is a many splendoured thing. Angela & I have a lot in common also much that separates us ! Even in the Spiritual Dimension She loves the pomp & ceremony of Catholic Cathedrals but she is happy to be married in the minimalism of OUR Evangelical Church where she is now a MEMBER. However we are having a Post Nuptual Blessing ~ by the BISHOP ~ in Seville Cathedral on our HONEYMOON ~ AMEN We are still in early glow of our Romance and Your final couplet scared us ! Even during this week ~ when we are getting back on track as ONE ~ we cannot imagine a life without each other ~ AMEN !
Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 25th, 2019 16:01
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