Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Singing. - - ( A Tribute )
orchidee said:
A fine tribute Fay.
From my (non-existent) book \'Meanwhile\' (meaning an assortment of daftness) - I remember it well. I sang there. We always won the wars. My singing scared off the enemy! heehee.
November 8th, 2019 03:59
orchidee said:
A fine tribute Fay.
From my (non-existent) book \'Meanwhile\' (meaning an assortment of daftness) - I remember it well. I sang there. We always won the wars. My singing scared off the enemy! heehee.
November 8th, 2019 03:59
Attack.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay.
The raptors only kill for food and for every bird taken by a raptor to feed themselves and their chicks four hundred are killed by cats for pleasure.
November 8th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay.
The raptors only kill for food and for every bird taken by a raptor to feed themselves and their chicks four hundred are killed by cats for pleasure.
November 8th, 2019 01:20
Attack.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ We love the Picture and the Poem ! Nature RED in Tooth & Claw indeed ! The Human Race have largely ceased to be Hunter Gathers so we have put ourselves outside the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! We farm our meat and kill our Animals humanely and it is seldom that we end up as Animal Food for the Big Cats etc. Because of this most of us avoid Abatoires and we no longer raise and kill & pluck our own Turkey for Christmas ! Because of this we are often horrified if we see a *Kill in the Wild* forgetting that is how they survive 24/7 !
Hawks survive in the wild by killing small mammels and small Birds such as Sparrows ! In this elegant Poem you have captured the moment & its after-effect ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please ad a Poem to our FUSION on PETS ~ Thanks !
November 7th, 2019 17:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ We love the Picture and the Poem ! Nature RED in Tooth & Claw indeed ! The Human Race have largely ceased to be Hunter Gathers so we have put ourselves outside the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! We farm our meat and kill our Animals humanely and it is seldom that we end up as Animal Food for the Big Cats etc. Because of this most of us avoid Abatoires and we no longer raise and kill & pluck our own Turkey for Christmas ! Because of this we are often horrified if we see a *Kill in the Wild* forgetting that is how they survive 24/7 !
Hawks survive in the wild by killing small mammels and small Birds such as Sparrows ! In this elegant Poem you have captured the moment & its after-effect ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please ad a Poem to our FUSION on PETS ~ Thanks !
November 7th, 2019 17:23
Attack.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, what an ending too! a difficult read for me. Took a few attempts but I got there.
Thank you
Much appreciated
November 7th, 2019 08:40
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, what an ending too! a difficult read for me. Took a few attempts but I got there.
Thank you
Much appreciated
November 7th, 2019 08:40
Attack.
Neville said:
to witness such an event was a privilege, though some might argue otherwise... to capture it in words alone, an incontestable marvel...... N
November 7th, 2019 04:55
Neville said:
to witness such an event was a privilege, though some might argue otherwise... to capture it in words alone, an incontestable marvel...... N
November 7th, 2019 04:55
Unreal.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY - ANGELA HERE ! Im enjoying being back @ WORK and enjoying my New Role - being responsible for the *hands-on* Training of six Trainee Physiotherapists. I earned my Training Quaification in New Zealand ! My POEM tomorrow is about MYSTERIOUSNESS - A one-word Acrostic Sonnet !
Love your POEM & PICTURE ! Twilight is always a Myterious time of DAY - Shadowy - Lacy Light - Smoky limpidity - Translucency - Mist - Flickering light - Clouds & Rainbows ! You have painted a *Perfect Tone Poem* - AMEN - Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 6th, 2019 16:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY - ANGELA HERE ! Im enjoying being back @ WORK and enjoying my New Role - being responsible for the *hands-on* Training of six Trainee Physiotherapists. I earned my Training Quaification in New Zealand ! My POEM tomorrow is about MYSTERIOUSNESS - A one-word Acrostic Sonnet !
Love your POEM & PICTURE ! Twilight is always a Myterious time of DAY - Shadowy - Lacy Light - Smoky limpidity - Translucency - Mist - Flickering light - Clouds & Rainbows ! You have painted a *Perfect Tone Poem* - AMEN - Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 6th, 2019 16:34
Unreal.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Excellent words Fay, A pleasure to read.
Ex animo, Alan
November 6th, 2019 12:16
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Excellent words Fay, A pleasure to read.
Ex animo, Alan
November 6th, 2019 12:16
TRANSFORMATION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY your posting is even more BEAUTIFUL than usual an elegant pictorial and poetical kaleidescope of COLOR ! You highlight Natures awesome display of colour all around us 24/7 and especially on BONFIRE NIGHT ! GOD is an awesome ARTIST and when he created Planet Earth specially to be the unique habitation of MAN & WOMAN he not only gave us FORTY SHADES of GREEN - BUT Forty & more shades of every other colour as well ! I say to myself - *What a Wonderful World* ! GOD also created Man & Woman with awesome vision - which enables us to distinguish a thousand shades (especially Ladies) - in 3D and in motion ! GOD also gave us a BRAIN that could record these scenes in colour & 3D. It is only when we really open our EYES and look around us and through a MICROSCOPE and a TELESCOPE that we fully realise just how AWESOME our Creator God really is ! Thanks for once again lifting us up onto higher ground - AMEN
Blessings Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 16:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY your posting is even more BEAUTIFUL than usual an elegant pictorial and poetical kaleidescope of COLOR ! You highlight Natures awesome display of colour all around us 24/7 and especially on BONFIRE NIGHT ! GOD is an awesome ARTIST and when he created Planet Earth specially to be the unique habitation of MAN & WOMAN he not only gave us FORTY SHADES of GREEN - BUT Forty & more shades of every other colour as well ! I say to myself - *What a Wonderful World* ! GOD also created Man & Woman with awesome vision - which enables us to distinguish a thousand shades (especially Ladies) - in 3D and in motion ! GOD also gave us a BRAIN that could record these scenes in colour & 3D. It is only when we really open our EYES and look around us and through a MICROSCOPE and a TELESCOPE that we fully realise just how AWESOME our Creator God really is ! Thanks for once again lifting us up onto higher ground - AMEN
Blessings Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 16:07
TRANSFORMATION.
Neville said:
as complex as they come, tho simply stunning as already said......
even with these eyes your message cries out loud
and I imagine those that can and those that want to see, will see it too...
November 5th, 2019 09:02
Neville said:
as complex as they come, tho simply stunning as already said......
even with these eyes your message cries out loud
and I imagine those that can and those that want to see, will see it too...
November 5th, 2019 09:02
Far More.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ We Love your new Picture very GLAM ! For ME (Brian) this Poem rings a Bell ! Sincere Worshipperss coming to CHURCH ~ come rain or shine ! The importance of the *LORDS DAY* and the desire (and JOY) to *ASSEMBLE TOGETHER* to Pray to Praise and to be Purified through 24/7 humble Faith & Salvation (not through going to Church ~ BUT) through Christs atonement for us on the CROSS ~ AMEN. It reminds me of the CHURCH I was taken to (not in the Country but the City) were I was dedicated by my Grandfather ( Baptism was for Adults not Babies) in 1983 ! A sharp contrast (outside) to the Moor-top Chapel ~ but inside IDENTICAL ! Love the closing verse ! The Service complete then home to the smell of fresh baked Bread (My Mum always made her own Loaves & crusty Cobs) and the Sunday Joint in t\'oven ! Memories are made of this ! If I am anything today I owe it all to My Parents & Extended Family and of course ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela
💙🧡💙🧡💙
November 5th, 2019 05:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ We Love your new Picture very GLAM ! For ME (Brian) this Poem rings a Bell ! Sincere Worshipperss coming to CHURCH ~ come rain or shine ! The importance of the *LORDS DAY* and the desire (and JOY) to *ASSEMBLE TOGETHER* to Pray to Praise and to be Purified through 24/7 humble Faith & Salvation (not through going to Church ~ BUT) through Christs atonement for us on the CROSS ~ AMEN. It reminds me of the CHURCH I was taken to (not in the Country but the City) were I was dedicated by my Grandfather ( Baptism was for Adults not Babies) in 1983 ! A sharp contrast (outside) to the Moor-top Chapel ~ but inside IDENTICAL ! Love the closing verse ! The Service complete then home to the smell of fresh baked Bread (My Mum always made her own Loaves & crusty Cobs) and the Sunday Joint in t\'oven ! Memories are made of this ! If I am anything today I owe it all to My Parents & Extended Family and of course ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela
💙🧡💙🧡💙
November 5th, 2019 05:17
Far More.
Michael Edwards said:
I lost myself in the images conjured by your fine words = now back to damp-Monday-afternoon-reality.
November 4th, 2019 11:11
Michael Edwards said:
I lost myself in the images conjured by your fine words = now back to damp-Monday-afternoon-reality.
November 4th, 2019 11:11
Far More.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Very nicely composed Fay. The atmosphere is with me as I read. Sounds a lot like yesterday here in the moors of Yorkshire. I\'ll make a mug of tea with honey in to warm me up now.
Lovely words!
Ex animo, Alan
November 4th, 2019 06:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Very nicely composed Fay. The atmosphere is with me as I read. Sounds a lot like yesterday here in the moors of Yorkshire. I\'ll make a mug of tea with honey in to warm me up now.
Lovely words!
Ex animo, Alan
November 4th, 2019 06:58
Soul-beauty.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write fay,mystical and great imagery
November 2nd, 2019 14:59
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write fay,mystical and great imagery
November 2nd, 2019 14:59
Peerless.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A wonderful tribute to the gift of parenthood.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:47
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A wonderful tribute to the gift of parenthood.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:47
Until Day.
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of sleep takes away the troubles of that day and you awaken into a bright, new better day. Great write Fay.
November 2nd, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of sleep takes away the troubles of that day and you awaken into a bright, new better day. Great write Fay.
November 2nd, 2019 01:44
Until Day.
Suresh said:
If any poem should be heard, it\'s yours, for the plea to sleep, sleep away the fears, the troubles, the night away - till the light of a fresh new day.
November 1st, 2019 22:08
Suresh said:
If any poem should be heard, it\'s yours, for the plea to sleep, sleep away the fears, the troubles, the night away - till the light of a fresh new day.
November 1st, 2019 22:08
Until Day.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Sleep & Dreams & Nivea Cream are all great soothers in time of sadness & despair ! The only problem is when you awake the problems are still there ~ even if somewhat mollified !
ALWAYS REMEMBER
Burdens are lifted @ Calvary
Jesus is very near ~ AMEN
Bkessings & Love & Joy & Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 1st, 2019 11:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Sleep & Dreams & Nivea Cream are all great soothers in time of sadness & despair ! The only problem is when you awake the problems are still there ~ even if somewhat mollified !
ALWAYS REMEMBER
Burdens are lifted @ Calvary
Jesus is very near ~ AMEN
Bkessings & Love & Joy & Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 1st, 2019 11:42
Until Day.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You floated away? you coming back?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 10:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You floated away? you coming back?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 10:22
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