Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Morphing.
Neville said:
Said it before but I knead to say it again.. absolutely delicious ... and good lookin too.........
September 3rd, 2019 11:33
Neville said:
Said it before but I knead to say it again.. absolutely delicious ... and good lookin too.........
September 3rd, 2019 11:33
Morphing.
Michael Edwards said:
A great smile - wasn\'t expecting this when I clicked on ..!
September 3rd, 2019 10:39
Michael Edwards said:
A great smile - wasn\'t expecting this when I clicked on ..!
September 3rd, 2019 10:39
Morphing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for Sharing FAY ~ Loved the PICTURE and the POEM it generated ! I can speak from experience ! ANGELA is a Smart - Strong - Sensual - Woman. She stimulates All my Senses and never ever disappoints ~ Taste and know the sensuality of LOVE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE Brian & Angela
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check my SONNET for FIDO !
September 3rd, 2019 06:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for Sharing FAY ~ Loved the PICTURE and the POEM it generated ! I can speak from experience ! ANGELA is a Smart - Strong - Sensual - Woman. She stimulates All my Senses and never ever disappoints ~ Taste and know the sensuality of LOVE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE Brian & Angela
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check my SONNET for FIDO !
September 3rd, 2019 06:02
Today\'s Poem.
Neville said:
and just as your little birdie seems to have done.. you my poetic friend have equally succeeded ....... N
September 3rd, 2019 03:42
Neville said:
and just as your little birdie seems to have done.. you my poetic friend have equally succeeded ....... N
September 3rd, 2019 03:42
Today\'s Poem.
kevin browne said:
Your poem reflects back thousands of years as the bird flies above, to taste their prey and to diversify into different species in which we marvel at every day. You\'ve captured a natures thriving environment and to the connection in the lives these amazing creature which we adore. Thanks for sharing this warm-hearted poem. I love it, too...
September 3rd, 2019 01:34
kevin browne said:
Your poem reflects back thousands of years as the bird flies above, to taste their prey and to diversify into different species in which we marvel at every day. You\'ve captured a natures thriving environment and to the connection in the lives these amazing creature which we adore. Thanks for sharing this warm-hearted poem. I love it, too...
September 3rd, 2019 01:34
Journey Concluded.
Chris Yellow said:
Playing the game can be so painful, you need to get so vulnerable to have any chance, I feel your pain.
September 2nd, 2019 07:44
Chris Yellow said:
Playing the game can be so painful, you need to get so vulnerable to have any chance, I feel your pain.
September 2nd, 2019 07:44
The Journey Continued.
Chris Yellow said:
It is fantastic how we loose all wit and fall into such clever nature devices as our own lips, hips, cleavage... I don\'t think I allow myself to admit it, though.
September 2nd, 2019 07:40
Chris Yellow said:
It is fantastic how we loose all wit and fall into such clever nature devices as our own lips, hips, cleavage... I don\'t think I allow myself to admit it, though.
September 2nd, 2019 07:40
The Journey.
Chris Yellow said:
It is scary, the trapping effect of the appealing gender. Loved your description.
September 2nd, 2019 07:36
Chris Yellow said:
It is scary, the trapping effect of the appealing gender. Loved your description.
September 2nd, 2019 07:36
Today\'s Poem.
Chris Yellow said:
Oh, nature.. the eternal muse, such perfection and intricate simplicity drives an attentive audience to hunger in marvel.
September 2nd, 2019 07:09
Chris Yellow said:
Oh, nature.. the eternal muse, such perfection and intricate simplicity drives an attentive audience to hunger in marvel.
September 2nd, 2019 07:09
Today\'s Poem.
dusk arising said:
Yours is the dawn Fay. Time after time you give us another facet of its beauty.
Today one of our common wild birds sadly in decline, much overlooked. These brisk little chaps and chapettes suddenly appear and are gone in a flash. A pleasure to catch one taking its morning dew. Lovely picture too.
We used to put out stale bread for them as a child and there would be a huge flight of hedge sparrows and house sparrows, starlings and blackbirds. Rarely seen in such numbers today.
September 2nd, 2019 05:24
dusk arising said:
Yours is the dawn Fay. Time after time you give us another facet of its beauty.
Today one of our common wild birds sadly in decline, much overlooked. These brisk little chaps and chapettes suddenly appear and are gone in a flash. A pleasure to catch one taking its morning dew. Lovely picture too.
We used to put out stale bread for them as a child and there would be a huge flight of hedge sparrows and house sparrows, starlings and blackbirds. Rarely seen in such numbers today.
September 2nd, 2019 05:24
Today\'s Poem.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (9pm Monday - nice supper of NZ LAMBBURGERS !) Its my experience too FAY - That in all of NATURE there is always a POEM trying to PENETRATE our meditating MUSE. Love Nature - Love YOU for releasing another of Natures hidden gems - AMEN ! Love SPARRERS - Thanks for sharing the PHOTO !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 2nd, 2019 04:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (9pm Monday - nice supper of NZ LAMBBURGERS !) Its my experience too FAY - That in all of NATURE there is always a POEM trying to PENETRATE our meditating MUSE. Love Nature - Love YOU for releasing another of Natures hidden gems - AMEN ! Love SPARRERS - Thanks for sharing the PHOTO !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 2nd, 2019 04:20
Journey Concluded.
Goldfinch60 said:
So your wiles did mot work this time but maybe the next time.
Wonderful write Fay, this trilogy had me falling into its intriguing story.
August 31st, 2019 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
So your wiles did mot work this time but maybe the next time.
Wonderful write Fay, this trilogy had me falling into its intriguing story.
August 31st, 2019 00:04
Journey Concluded.
Christina8 said:
Fay, A delightful trilogy ending! You certainly have a way with words! Just wonderful!
August 30th, 2019 10:08
Christina8 said:
Fay, A delightful trilogy ending! You certainly have a way with words! Just wonderful!
August 30th, 2019 10:08
Journey Concluded.
dusk arising said:
Aha, the ways and wiles of the growing lady. Heartbreak shrugged off and sounding in that thought balloon above her head = NEXT!
Hmmm will this entertaining lady be content to sip her coffee contentedly or will she letch further episodes across our mps screens. Somehow i think her growing pains may yet further entertain us.
A story teller AND a fine poet. Very entertaining.
August 30th, 2019 03:07
dusk arising said:
Aha, the ways and wiles of the growing lady. Heartbreak shrugged off and sounding in that thought balloon above her head = NEXT!
Hmmm will this entertaining lady be content to sip her coffee contentedly or will she letch further episodes across our mps screens. Somehow i think her growing pains may yet further entertain us.
A story teller AND a fine poet. Very entertaining.
August 30th, 2019 03:07
Journey Concluded.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY - ANGELA HERE (7:30 pm) so just relaxin - WORK DONE for today - Saturday tomorrow AMEN ! Loved the sting in the tale ! The best laid plans o\' Mice & Women - gang aft agley ! But as you and I know (from experience) if one ploy fails - theres always another (equally) attractive MAN round the CORNER ! I guess she SCORED with the HANDSOME LAD ! Thanks for sharing a great trilogy on *Our Feminine Wiles* No red blooded MAN is SAFE !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 30th, 2019 02:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY - ANGELA HERE (7:30 pm) so just relaxin - WORK DONE for today - Saturday tomorrow AMEN ! Loved the sting in the tale ! The best laid plans o\' Mice & Women - gang aft agley ! But as you and I know (from experience) if one ploy fails - theres always another (equally) attractive MAN round the CORNER ! I guess she SCORED with the HANDSOME LAD ! Thanks for sharing a great trilogy on *Our Feminine Wiles* No red blooded MAN is SAFE !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 30th, 2019 02:50
The Journey Continued.
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Fay we wait with baited breath (heavy breathing) for the denouement of this passionate tale of love.
August 30th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Fay we wait with baited breath (heavy breathing) for the denouement of this passionate tale of love.
August 30th, 2019 00:48
The Journey Continued.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Its nearly 7am (Friday) here and I just checking MPS. Glad you *continued* today ! Judging by the responses everyone was waiting ! In the 21st C it s in order for the Lady to be proactive !
I love the thoughts of your heroine : Vamping - Enticement - Siren - Nubility - Cleavage - Hot Breath ~ Pouting etc etc ! We have so many weapons to use when Man only has TWO - His Checkbook & His Manhood ! How can we Girls ever fail ! More please !
Blessings & much JOY
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 29th, 2019 13:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Its nearly 7am (Friday) here and I just checking MPS. Glad you *continued* today ! Judging by the responses everyone was waiting ! In the 21st C it s in order for the Lady to be proactive !
I love the thoughts of your heroine : Vamping - Enticement - Siren - Nubility - Cleavage - Hot Breath ~ Pouting etc etc ! We have so many weapons to use when Man only has TWO - His Checkbook & His Manhood ! How can we Girls ever fail ! More please !
Blessings & much JOY
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 29th, 2019 13:42
The Journey Continued.
dusk arising said:
So glad you spelled \'wily\' correctly here.
In the words of Joni Mitchell \"If there\'s one rule to this game everybodies gonna name it\'s - be cool. If your heart is on the floor cos you just saw your lover walking thru the door with a new fool - be cool\"
Will she won\'t she? Does he, doesn\'t he. Will they, won\'t they? Look at what you have done to MPS..... our tongues are out.... waiting.
MORE!!!
August 29th, 2019 11:57
dusk arising said:
So glad you spelled \'wily\' correctly here.
In the words of Joni Mitchell \"If there\'s one rule to this game everybodies gonna name it\'s - be cool. If your heart is on the floor cos you just saw your lover walking thru the door with a new fool - be cool\"
Will she won\'t she? Does he, doesn\'t he. Will they, won\'t they? Look at what you have done to MPS..... our tongues are out.... waiting.
MORE!!!
August 29th, 2019 11:57
The Journey Continued.
Christina8 said:
Ooh this is an enticing read..wonderful!
August 29th, 2019 09:26
Christina8 said:
Ooh this is an enticing read..wonderful!
August 29th, 2019 09:26
The Journey Continued.
orchidee said:
Ooohh, good write Fay. I\'m all of a swoon - I\'ve had (read of) wenches and saucy milk-maids today already (from Neville\'s poem). Now I\'m reading of sirens and libido.
I tried to impress a gal with my breath, but I had been eating garlic! I not quite got the hang of this. lol.
August 29th, 2019 04:12
orchidee said:
Ooohh, good write Fay. I\'m all of a swoon - I\'ve had (read of) wenches and saucy milk-maids today already (from Neville\'s poem). Now I\'m reading of sirens and libido.
I tried to impress a gal with my breath, but I had been eating garlic! I not quite got the hang of this. lol.
August 29th, 2019 04:12
The Journey Continued.
Neville said:
Do not dally, just get stuck in there gall ........ luverly..... N
August 29th, 2019 03:09
Neville said:
Do not dally, just get stuck in there gall ........ luverly..... N
August 29th, 2019 03:09
The Journey.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY - You are a Naughty Lady raising a Girls Libido and posing the question *Did they or didnt they ?* Then sudden closure and TO BE CONTINUED ! WHEN ? I have cooled down now and of course theres no point in being HOT when BRIAN is 11,500 miles away (too far for too long !) BUT by October it will all be ober for ever - AMEN - TO BE CONTINUED !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 28th, 2019 17:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY - You are a Naughty Lady raising a Girls Libido and posing the question *Did they or didnt they ?* Then sudden closure and TO BE CONTINUED ! WHEN ? I have cooled down now and of course theres no point in being HOT when BRIAN is 11,500 miles away (too far for too long !) BUT by October it will all be ober for ever - AMEN - TO BE CONTINUED !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 28th, 2019 17:43
The Journey.
Christina8 said:
Looking forward to the continuation....so far this sounds fun!
August 28th, 2019 17:08
Christina8 said:
Looking forward to the continuation....so far this sounds fun!
August 28th, 2019 17:08
The Journey.
kevin browne said:
Super job acheived within you and I hope you enjoyed your coffee...
August 28th, 2019 08:12
kevin browne said:
Super job acheived within you and I hope you enjoyed your coffee...
August 28th, 2019 08:12
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