Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Reverie.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful poem capturing the beauty of dreams.
Keep writing FineB
September 14th, 2019 09:27
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful poem capturing the beauty of dreams.
Keep writing FineB
September 14th, 2019 09:27
Reverie.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful poem capturing the beauty of dreams.
Keep writing FineB
September 14th, 2019 09:27
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful poem capturing the beauty of dreams.
Keep writing FineB
September 14th, 2019 09:27
Reverie.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Nearly Midnight here. Great day sailing in the BAY ! Spring has arrived 16C = 61F I love this sub-tropical Weather ! Brian & I have gone Chinese today TANG POETRY & 20th C Chinese Music - Enjoy !
CONFUSIUS He Say : *Old poems never die nor never fade away !* Love the mystic Pic an* Poem ! There is a time between Sleep & Wakefulness - Dawn & Reverie - Rouse & Retreat ! A time when often the Muse is at its most Active. I alway try to write down what my Muse dictates. Alas often when I am clothed & in my right mind I cant decipher a word of what Id thought Id written ! Some great poems TODAY - for a Saturday !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN
š§” š š§” š š§”
September 14th, 2019 07:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Nearly Midnight here. Great day sailing in the BAY ! Spring has arrived 16C = 61F I love this sub-tropical Weather ! Brian & I have gone Chinese today TANG POETRY & 20th C Chinese Music - Enjoy !
CONFUSIUS He Say : *Old poems never die nor never fade away !* Love the mystic Pic an* Poem ! There is a time between Sleep & Wakefulness - Dawn & Reverie - Rouse & Retreat ! A time when often the Muse is at its most Active. I alway try to write down what my Muse dictates. Alas often when I am clothed & in my right mind I cant decipher a word of what Id thought Id written ! Some great poems TODAY - for a Saturday !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN
š§” š š§” š š§”
September 14th, 2019 07:02
Reverie.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Are we all in a No-time Fay?
Excellent revision my friend
Excellent
September 14th, 2019 03:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Are we all in a No-time Fay?
Excellent revision my friend
Excellent
September 14th, 2019 03:34
Reverie.
Michael Edwards said:
Pleased you reposted - that\'s the place where I am most of the time these days - in fact I think I\'ll go and have a lie down right away.
September 14th, 2019 03:13
Michael Edwards said:
Pleased you reposted - that\'s the place where I am most of the time these days - in fact I think I\'ll go and have a lie down right away.
September 14th, 2019 03:13
Reverie.
Neville said:
Do you know what... I thought I recognised these words right from the very off.. That\'s the mark of a good poem, I reckon, if you can remember it the day after tomorrow, when ya spend so much time considering the words of others, you bet.. it\'s gonna be one of those rare good uns.... and Reverie, is no exception to that rule...... N
September 14th, 2019 02:45
Neville said:
Do you know what... I thought I recognised these words right from the very off.. That\'s the mark of a good poem, I reckon, if you can remember it the day after tomorrow, when ya spend so much time considering the words of others, you bet.. it\'s gonna be one of those rare good uns.... and Reverie, is no exception to that rule...... N
September 14th, 2019 02:45
Solo.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (11am Saturday Morning) and your Poem rang my BELL ! How such an empty Room can be so full of lonliness ! I last saw and held and kissed Brian - Five months ago - His visit was too short and the last five months too long. I love it here and I have loads of New Friends - @ Work @ Church and in the Community - BUT I realise BRIAN is 11,500 miles away and all my enjoyment fades and I am really really lonely again ! BUT by October it will all be OBER and we will be together Body - Soul - Sprit FOREVER - AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing. Love the VISUAL - THAT IS ME !!!!!! LAMENTING THE 11,500 MILES BETWEEN ME & BRIAN - SO SO SAD - Roll on OCTOBER !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Lots of Love ANGELA
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September 13th, 2019 17:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (11am Saturday Morning) and your Poem rang my BELL ! How such an empty Room can be so full of lonliness ! I last saw and held and kissed Brian - Five months ago - His visit was too short and the last five months too long. I love it here and I have loads of New Friends - @ Work @ Church and in the Community - BUT I realise BRIAN is 11,500 miles away and all my enjoyment fades and I am really really lonely again ! BUT by October it will all be OBER and we will be together Body - Soul - Sprit FOREVER - AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing. Love the VISUAL - THAT IS ME !!!!!! LAMENTING THE 11,500 MILES BETWEEN ME & BRIAN - SO SO SAD - Roll on OCTOBER !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Lots of Love ANGELA
š§” š§” š§” š§” š§”
September 13th, 2019 17:20
Solo.
Goldfinch60 said:
Being on your own, as I virtually am now you need not feel lonely, there are still so many things to pull you from feeling lonely, being alone can be therapeutic.
September 13th, 2019 14:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Being on your own, as I virtually am now you need not feel lonely, there are still so many things to pull you from feeling lonely, being alone can be therapeutic.
September 13th, 2019 14:50
Solo.
H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites said:
SO moving, thank you for this read! :)
September 13th, 2019 08:58
H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites said:
SO moving, thank you for this read! :)
September 13th, 2019 08:58
Solo.
dusk arising said:
All of the above! Except loneliness.
Singleton is simple and so many people are living the singleton life - either well or poorly. For me i live it well but that doesn\'t mean i live without desire.
Good questions you pose but many will find them uncomfortable to dwell upon.
September 13th, 2019 06:16
dusk arising said:
All of the above! Except loneliness.
Singleton is simple and so many people are living the singleton life - either well or poorly. For me i live it well but that doesn\'t mean i live without desire.
Good questions you pose but many will find them uncomfortable to dwell upon.
September 13th, 2019 06:16
Solo.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Long empty days makes the mind turn inwards and ask too many questions Fay that when you have to be brave...
Very powerful write well done you!
September 13th, 2019 04:11
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Long empty days makes the mind turn inwards and ask too many questions Fay that when you have to be brave...
Very powerful write well done you!
September 13th, 2019 04:11
Solo.
Neville said:
Some times going it alone is forced on one and hurts like hell... conversely.......I quite like that term in a poetry review
Nothing could be better if it was engineered and intentional....
another super poem Fay....
September 13th, 2019 03:56
Neville said:
Some times going it alone is forced on one and hurts like hell... conversely.......I quite like that term in a poetry review
Nothing could be better if it was engineered and intentional....
another super poem Fay....
September 13th, 2019 03:56
Solo.
kevin browne said:
Indeed there is always the provocation for the life of humands need. Over a quarter of the human population live in poverty for modt of their pitiful lives. These people are naturally spirited because it\'s probably one of the few things they own and and will never let go. I think you\'ve hit a perfectly exspressed how lonliness spreads across so many regions from around the world. A fetching read, Fay...
September 13th, 2019 03:33
kevin browne said:
Indeed there is always the provocation for the life of humands need. Over a quarter of the human population live in poverty for modt of their pitiful lives. These people are naturally spirited because it\'s probably one of the few things they own and and will never let go. I think you\'ve hit a perfectly exspressed how lonliness spreads across so many regions from around the world. A fetching read, Fay...
September 13th, 2019 03:33
Solo.
sylviasearcher said:
Iām a mystical freedom kind of girl for sure...
September 13th, 2019 03:18
sylviasearcher said:
Iām a mystical freedom kind of girl for sure...
September 13th, 2019 03:18
Indelible.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (7:30am FRIDAY !) Thanks FAY for another awesome tribute to Nature and a realisation that EDEN is all around !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”šš§”šš§”
September 12th, 2019 14:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (7:30am FRIDAY !) Thanks FAY for another awesome tribute to Nature and a realisation that EDEN is all around !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”šš§”šš§”
September 12th, 2019 14:51
Indelible.
dusk arising said:
I was being driven through a part of Eden\'s remains today in the beautiful sunshine. Along the edge of the cotswolds from cheltenham to broadway and back home. I heard no scurrying feet, nor birdsong but i know they are there to be sure.
Yes all your fine words ring true for me in what was Eden on my doorstep.
September 12th, 2019 10:23
dusk arising said:
I was being driven through a part of Eden\'s remains today in the beautiful sunshine. Along the edge of the cotswolds from cheltenham to broadway and back home. I heard no scurrying feet, nor birdsong but i know they are there to be sure.
Yes all your fine words ring true for me in what was Eden on my doorstep.
September 12th, 2019 10:23
Indelible.
Suresh said:
You made Eden come alive again, and so glad you left the last introduction (humans) out,
September 12th, 2019 10:05
Suresh said:
You made Eden come alive again, and so glad you left the last introduction (humans) out,
September 12th, 2019 10:05
Indelible.
Christina8 said:
This is simply amazing Fay! I simply don\'t have the words to convey the beauty which you\'ve invoked on this page.....
September 12th, 2019 06:22
Christina8 said:
This is simply amazing Fay! I simply don\'t have the words to convey the beauty which you\'ve invoked on this page.....
September 12th, 2019 06:22
Indelible.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
I tried writing with a pen. I couldn\'t figure it out, until I noticed I was using inedible ink instead of indelible. Such are matters of life. It could only happen to me - yes?! lol.
September 12th, 2019 02:51
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
I tried writing with a pen. I couldn\'t figure it out, until I noticed I was using inedible ink instead of indelible. Such are matters of life. It could only happen to me - yes?! lol.
September 12th, 2019 02:51
Indelible.
Neville said:
This is quite simply awesome and whoever made that request ... I owe ya.................................................
Neville
September 12th, 2019 02:22
Neville said:
This is quite simply awesome and whoever made that request ... I owe ya.................................................
Neville
September 12th, 2019 02:22
Whisperings.
Goldfinch60 said:
If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me dear Fay your words certainly seduced me.
Andy.
September 12th, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me dear Fay your words certainly seduced me.
Andy.
September 12th, 2019 00:52
Whisperings.
Bragee said:
Wow....
excellent writing that could melt the strongest of men
September 11th, 2019 11:27
Bragee said:
Wow....
excellent writing that could melt the strongest of men
September 11th, 2019 11:27
Whisperings.
orchidee said:
Aww, why is the only purring I hear, is always the cat?! heehee..
September 11th, 2019 10:34
orchidee said:
Aww, why is the only purring I hear, is always the cat?! heehee..
September 11th, 2019 10:34
Whisperings.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FAY - ANGELA here (11pm Wednesday). I love your - free verse - metered Poems because your sensuous vocabulary is not rhyme restricted ! Yes it does raise my libido but 11,500 miles prevents me from satisfying my desires with my beloved BRIAN ! I love the inuendos in the odd lines - flexibiiy - bliss - pleasure - freedom - seduction - slide - desire - solicitation - ballad of love - acceptance & *YIELD LOVER TO ME* You naughty Girl - Im having to have a cold shower _ before bed and my Teddy Bear (BOO HOO !) Thanks for sharing - a very sensuous Poem for Wednesday !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”š§”
September 11th, 2019 06:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FAY - ANGELA here (11pm Wednesday). I love your - free verse - metered Poems because your sensuous vocabulary is not rhyme restricted ! Yes it does raise my libido but 11,500 miles prevents me from satisfying my desires with my beloved BRIAN ! I love the inuendos in the odd lines - flexibiiy - bliss - pleasure - freedom - seduction - slide - desire - solicitation - ballad of love - acceptance & *YIELD LOVER TO ME* You naughty Girl - Im having to have a cold shower _ before bed and my Teddy Bear (BOO HOO !) Thanks for sharing - a very sensuous Poem for Wednesday !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”š§”
September 11th, 2019 06:24
Whisperings.
dusk arising said:
LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job on any male here (refreshes the parts other poets cannot reach).
Disgracefully seductive charms you harbour dear Fay. Keep ya distance siren!
September 11th, 2019 06:24
dusk arising said:
LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job on any male here (refreshes the parts other poets cannot reach).
Disgracefully seductive charms you harbour dear Fay. Keep ya distance siren!
September 11th, 2019 06:24
Whisperings.
Neville said:
If you keep getting better and better, I shall quit writing... not that we are in any competition but , this is about as good as it gets .. and that\'s a fucking .. excuse me folks & Fido .....compliment... Brilliant Fay.... N
September 11th, 2019 03:47
Neville said:
If you keep getting better and better, I shall quit writing... not that we are in any competition but , this is about as good as it gets .. and that\'s a fucking .. excuse me folks & Fido .....compliment... Brilliant Fay.... N
September 11th, 2019 03:47
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