Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Difference.
chani said:
Hello Fay, your difference is different. But I like it. Love to read more and more what you write.
October 2nd, 2019 04:09
chani said:
Hello Fay, your difference is different. But I like it. Love to read more and more what you write.
October 2nd, 2019 04:09
Maybe.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (8pm WED evening !) Love the picture that stirred your MUSE *Til the BOATS CUM IN !* The wife of a Deep Sea Fishherman is a fearful & lonely one - cos often they fish at night ! There are more Men Lost @ Sea than this world dreams of. Brian & I are separated but I know he is not in danger from *SEA or SIRENS* and He knows I am keeping all the Male Maoris & Kiwis at arms length ! Ruth & I chaperone each other ! My massages are purely therapeutic ! Please check our Collab on Roses - You will feel the LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 2nd, 2019 03:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (8pm WED evening !) Love the picture that stirred your MUSE *Til the BOATS CUM IN !* The wife of a Deep Sea Fishherman is a fearful & lonely one - cos often they fish at night ! There are more Men Lost @ Sea than this world dreams of. Brian & I are separated but I know he is not in danger from *SEA or SIRENS* and He knows I am keeping all the Male Maoris & Kiwis at arms length ! Ruth & I chaperone each other ! My massages are purely therapeutic ! Please check our Collab on Roses - You will feel the LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 2nd, 2019 03:03
Maybe.
orchidee said:
Maybe - or rather certainly - this is a good write Fay!
October 2nd, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Maybe - or rather certainly - this is a good write Fay!
October 2nd, 2019 01:44
Difference.
Christina8 said:
This poem is an excellent visual and a wonderful tribute to a great poet. Great job, Fay!
October 1st, 2019 07:30
Christina8 said:
This poem is an excellent visual and a wonderful tribute to a great poet. Great job, Fay!
October 1st, 2019 07:30
Difference.
Clara said:
Absolute stunning visuals created here. A wonderful tribute to the poet, nature and the animal kingdom at large. Wonderful Fay.
October 1st, 2019 06:43
Clara said:
Absolute stunning visuals created here. A wonderful tribute to the poet, nature and the animal kingdom at large. Wonderful Fay.
October 1st, 2019 06:43
Difference.
Neville said:
Ah.. a sight for sore eyes and a treat for the remaining senses.... a lovely tribute and true..... N
October 1st, 2019 05:34
Neville said:
Ah.. a sight for sore eyes and a treat for the remaining senses.... a lovely tribute and true..... N
October 1st, 2019 05:34
Difference.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm TUESDAY EVENING) soon have to reajust to GMT again ! Love the picture & poem & mention of GMH ! God created a very colourful WORLD and created H.Sapiens with amazing EYES to appreciate it. We see in moving 3D and can distinguish thousands of shades. Our eyes are one of our greatest assets. Restoring mobility - movement - confidence to the BLIND is one of our toughest jobs as PHYSIOS. People who are blinded in ADULTHOOD do have a great appreciation of COLOUR and FORM and still say to THEMSELVES *What a Wonderful World* AMEN Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY - THANKS !
October 1st, 2019 05:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm TUESDAY EVENING) soon have to reajust to GMT again ! Love the picture & poem & mention of GMH ! God created a very colourful WORLD and created H.Sapiens with amazing EYES to appreciate it. We see in moving 3D and can distinguish thousands of shades. Our eyes are one of our greatest assets. Restoring mobility - movement - confidence to the BLIND is one of our toughest jobs as PHYSIOS. People who are blinded in ADULTHOOD do have a great appreciation of COLOUR and FORM and still say to THEMSELVES *What a Wonderful World* AMEN Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY - THANKS !
October 1st, 2019 05:04
Difference.
dusk arising said:
Visual arts are a wonder and pleasure our moods.
Though easily overlooked, the artistry has become psychological cleverly entertaining and placing \'happy\' before our eyes, leading us to smile.
Fitting tribute Fay.
October 1st, 2019 03:48
dusk arising said:
Visual arts are a wonder and pleasure our moods.
Though easily overlooked, the artistry has become psychological cleverly entertaining and placing \'happy\' before our eyes, leading us to smile.
Fitting tribute Fay.
October 1st, 2019 03:48
Difference.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that abundance forever be there for us all.
October 1st, 2019 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May that abundance forever be there for us all.
October 1st, 2019 01:34
Now.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the pictures your words paint are so enthralling.
October 1st, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the pictures your words paint are so enthralling.
October 1st, 2019 00:38
Now.
dusk arising said:
Whilst firmly planning the future perfect i find myself gripped by mother natures savagery so it\'s very refreshing to read the purity in your words at this time.
Thank you for this pleasure.
September 30th, 2019 14:06
dusk arising said:
Whilst firmly planning the future perfect i find myself gripped by mother natures savagery so it\'s very refreshing to read the purity in your words at this time.
Thank you for this pleasure.
September 30th, 2019 14:06
Now.
Neville said:
There is an optimum time for all things, often a small window... and although perfect harvests are invariably those well planned.. yet they are always at the mercy of dear old mother nature...
this is such a well crafted poem my friend..... cheers, N
September 30th, 2019 05:59
Neville said:
There is an optimum time for all things, often a small window... and although perfect harvests are invariably those well planned.. yet they are always at the mercy of dear old mother nature...
this is such a well crafted poem my friend..... cheers, N
September 30th, 2019 05:59
Now.
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a super picture - and I am now planning the garden for next year.
September 30th, 2019 03:39
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a super picture - and I am now planning the garden for next year.
September 30th, 2019 03:39
Mystery.
CindyB said:
There\'s always life to be seen if we know where to look. Or rather, how to look. I love this.
September 28th, 2019 23:03
CindyB said:
There\'s always life to be seen if we know where to look. Or rather, how to look. I love this.
September 28th, 2019 23:03
Mystery.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write and that last stanza is so true.
September 27th, 2019 23:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write and that last stanza is so true.
September 27th, 2019 23:42
Mystery.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Brian here (ANGELA still in bed 5:30 am SATURDAY in NZ} Love the PIC & the sbsequent POEM. Attenboroughs SERIES on the SEA has shown us just how ignorant we are of SUBAQUA ~ LIFE & DEATH ! I envy some of my Friends who studied MARINE BIOLOGY @ UNI. I love CRABS (especially Living Ones) but deceased ones taste Divine ~ Fresh Cromer Crab is a fairly local delicacy in Essex !
The discarded SHELL of any deceased FISH is a PARADOX ! A thing of BEAUTY and yet at the same time the discarded ARMOUR of a once Proud Warrior !
To me the lesson is ~ WE HUMANS clothe ourselves with Expensive Clothes & Jewellry ~ Intellect & Pride & Honour in our Communities etc. BUT when the time comes for our DEMISE we all stand NAKED & SHELLLESS before our MAKER ~ AMEN. Thanks for a very thought provoking POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN 💙💙💙💙💙
September 27th, 2019 12:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Brian here (ANGELA still in bed 5:30 am SATURDAY in NZ} Love the PIC & the sbsequent POEM. Attenboroughs SERIES on the SEA has shown us just how ignorant we are of SUBAQUA ~ LIFE & DEATH ! I envy some of my Friends who studied MARINE BIOLOGY @ UNI. I love CRABS (especially Living Ones) but deceased ones taste Divine ~ Fresh Cromer Crab is a fairly local delicacy in Essex !
The discarded SHELL of any deceased FISH is a PARADOX ! A thing of BEAUTY and yet at the same time the discarded ARMOUR of a once Proud Warrior !
To me the lesson is ~ WE HUMANS clothe ourselves with Expensive Clothes & Jewellry ~ Intellect & Pride & Honour in our Communities etc. BUT when the time comes for our DEMISE we all stand NAKED & SHELLLESS before our MAKER ~ AMEN. Thanks for a very thought provoking POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN 💙💙💙💙💙
September 27th, 2019 12:54
Mystery.
Neville said:
Only a poet could make something as beautiful as the mystery you have crafted here from bits of stone, sea waste and an old discarded carapace...... N
September 27th, 2019 02:31
Neville said:
Only a poet could make something as beautiful as the mystery you have crafted here from bits of stone, sea waste and an old discarded carapace...... N
September 27th, 2019 02:31
Coveted.
Suresh said:
So realistically you bring to life a product that moved the world, and people that moved the product, in days past.
September 27th, 2019 00:28
Suresh said:
So realistically you bring to life a product that moved the world, and people that moved the product, in days past.
September 27th, 2019 00:28
Stones Know.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for a fascinating insight into the Toughness & Toils of Cornish Tin Mines. It was almost Burnsian *To a Tin Mine* in its use of dialect ~ thaks for the glossary SIX of the BEST !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
September 26th, 2019 16:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for a fascinating insight into the Toughness & Toils of Cornish Tin Mines. It was almost Burnsian *To a Tin Mine* in its use of dialect ~ thaks for the glossary SIX of the BEST !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
September 26th, 2019 16:01
Stones Know.
FredPeyer said:
Fay,
the colloquialism was lost on me, but even though, I truly enjoyed your writing.
September 26th, 2019 12:57
FredPeyer said:
Fay,
the colloquialism was lost on me, but even though, I truly enjoyed your writing.
September 26th, 2019 12:57
Stones Know.
Clara said:
Definitely a lot of skill shown here. Wonderful Fay.
September 26th, 2019 08:57
Clara said:
Definitely a lot of skill shown here. Wonderful Fay.
September 26th, 2019 08:57
Stones Know.
Neville said:
Of course they do.... they\'ve been around for a long long time... and not everyone knows they have been watching and absorbing energy all along the way........ A memorable poem indeed our Fay..... must brush up on my Kernow speak.. I have a book somewhere..... N
September 26th, 2019 04:47
Neville said:
Of course they do.... they\'ve been around for a long long time... and not everyone knows they have been watching and absorbing energy all along the way........ A memorable poem indeed our Fay..... must brush up on my Kernow speak.. I have a book somewhere..... N
September 26th, 2019 04:47
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