Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Solo.
kevin browne said:
Indeed there is always the provocation for the life of humands need. Over a quarter of the human population live in poverty for modt of their pitiful lives. These people are naturally spirited because it\'s probably one of the few things they own and and will never let go. I think you\'ve hit a perfectly exspressed how lonliness spreads across so many regions from around the world. A fetching read, Fay...
September 13th, 2019 03:33
kevin browne said:
Indeed there is always the provocation for the life of humands need. Over a quarter of the human population live in poverty for modt of their pitiful lives. These people are naturally spirited because it\'s probably one of the few things they own and and will never let go. I think you\'ve hit a perfectly exspressed how lonliness spreads across so many regions from around the world. A fetching read, Fay...
September 13th, 2019 03:33
Solo.
sylviasearcher said:
Iām a mystical freedom kind of girl for sure...
September 13th, 2019 03:18
sylviasearcher said:
Iām a mystical freedom kind of girl for sure...
September 13th, 2019 03:18
Indelible.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (7:30am FRIDAY !) Thanks FAY for another awesome tribute to Nature and a realisation that EDEN is all around !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”šš§”šš§”
September 12th, 2019 14:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (7:30am FRIDAY !) Thanks FAY for another awesome tribute to Nature and a realisation that EDEN is all around !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”šš§”šš§”
September 12th, 2019 14:51
Indelible.
dusk arising said:
I was being driven through a part of Eden\'s remains today in the beautiful sunshine. Along the edge of the cotswolds from cheltenham to broadway and back home. I heard no scurrying feet, nor birdsong but i know they are there to be sure.
Yes all your fine words ring true for me in what was Eden on my doorstep.
September 12th, 2019 10:23
dusk arising said:
I was being driven through a part of Eden\'s remains today in the beautiful sunshine. Along the edge of the cotswolds from cheltenham to broadway and back home. I heard no scurrying feet, nor birdsong but i know they are there to be sure.
Yes all your fine words ring true for me in what was Eden on my doorstep.
September 12th, 2019 10:23
Indelible.
Suresh said:
You made Eden come alive again, and so glad you left the last introduction (humans) out,
September 12th, 2019 10:05
Suresh said:
You made Eden come alive again, and so glad you left the last introduction (humans) out,
September 12th, 2019 10:05
Indelible.
Christina8 said:
This is simply amazing Fay! I simply don\'t have the words to convey the beauty which you\'ve invoked on this page.....
September 12th, 2019 06:22
Christina8 said:
This is simply amazing Fay! I simply don\'t have the words to convey the beauty which you\'ve invoked on this page.....
September 12th, 2019 06:22
Indelible.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
I tried writing with a pen. I couldn\'t figure it out, until I noticed I was using inedible ink instead of indelible. Such are matters of life. It could only happen to me - yes?! lol.
September 12th, 2019 02:51
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
I tried writing with a pen. I couldn\'t figure it out, until I noticed I was using inedible ink instead of indelible. Such are matters of life. It could only happen to me - yes?! lol.
September 12th, 2019 02:51
Indelible.
Neville said:
This is quite simply awesome and whoever made that request ... I owe ya.................................................
Neville
September 12th, 2019 02:22
Neville said:
This is quite simply awesome and whoever made that request ... I owe ya.................................................
Neville
September 12th, 2019 02:22
Whisperings.
Goldfinch60 said:
If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me dear Fay your words certainly seduced me.
Andy.
September 12th, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me dear Fay your words certainly seduced me.
Andy.
September 12th, 2019 00:52
Whisperings.
Bragee said:
Wow....
excellent writing that could melt the strongest of men
September 11th, 2019 11:27
Bragee said:
Wow....
excellent writing that could melt the strongest of men
September 11th, 2019 11:27
Whisperings.
orchidee said:
Aww, why is the only purring I hear, is always the cat?! heehee..
September 11th, 2019 10:34
orchidee said:
Aww, why is the only purring I hear, is always the cat?! heehee..
September 11th, 2019 10:34
Whisperings.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FAY - ANGELA here (11pm Wednesday). I love your - free verse - metered Poems because your sensuous vocabulary is not rhyme restricted ! Yes it does raise my libido but 11,500 miles prevents me from satisfying my desires with my beloved BRIAN ! I love the inuendos in the odd lines - flexibiiy - bliss - pleasure - freedom - seduction - slide - desire - solicitation - ballad of love - acceptance & *YIELD LOVER TO ME* You naughty Girl - Im having to have a cold shower _ before bed and my Teddy Bear (BOO HOO !) Thanks for sharing - a very sensuous Poem for Wednesday !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”š§”
September 11th, 2019 06:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FAY - ANGELA here (11pm Wednesday). I love your - free verse - metered Poems because your sensuous vocabulary is not rhyme restricted ! Yes it does raise my libido but 11,500 miles prevents me from satisfying my desires with my beloved BRIAN ! I love the inuendos in the odd lines - flexibiiy - bliss - pleasure - freedom - seduction - slide - desire - solicitation - ballad of love - acceptance & *YIELD LOVER TO ME* You naughty Girl - Im having to have a cold shower _ before bed and my Teddy Bear (BOO HOO !) Thanks for sharing - a very sensuous Poem for Wednesday !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”š§”
September 11th, 2019 06:24
Whisperings.
dusk arising said:
LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job on any male here (refreshes the parts other poets cannot reach).
Disgracefully seductive charms you harbour dear Fay. Keep ya distance siren!
September 11th, 2019 06:24
dusk arising said:
LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job on any male here (refreshes the parts other poets cannot reach).
Disgracefully seductive charms you harbour dear Fay. Keep ya distance siren!
September 11th, 2019 06:24
Whisperings.
Neville said:
If you keep getting better and better, I shall quit writing... not that we are in any competition but , this is about as good as it gets .. and that\'s a fucking .. excuse me folks & Fido .....compliment... Brilliant Fay.... N
September 11th, 2019 03:47
Neville said:
If you keep getting better and better, I shall quit writing... not that we are in any competition but , this is about as good as it gets .. and that\'s a fucking .. excuse me folks & Fido .....compliment... Brilliant Fay.... N
September 11th, 2019 03:47
Whisperings.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Pianissimo ~ pp.
Nay, pianississimo ~ ppp.
Ex animo, Alan
September 11th, 2019 03:18
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Pianissimo ~ pp.
Nay, pianississimo ~ ppp.
Ex animo, Alan
September 11th, 2019 03:18
Constant.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Every Fisherman ~ saline drenched
battles the sea gales ! Thunder & Lightening
Threaten the Men and their Vessel !
Water takes no PRISONERS it is Life or Death !
BUT still many relish the JOB and discount ~
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Thanks for Sharing & Caring FAY ! A dynamic Poem which captures the Thrills & Spills of Deep sea Fishermen !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
š š§” š š§” š
September 10th, 2019 16:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Every Fisherman ~ saline drenched
battles the sea gales ! Thunder & Lightening
Threaten the Men and their Vessel !
Water takes no PRISONERS it is Life or Death !
BUT still many relish the JOB and discount ~
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Thanks for Sharing & Caring FAY ! A dynamic Poem which captures the Thrills & Spills of Deep sea Fishermen !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
š š§” š š§” š
September 10th, 2019 16:02
Constant.
Goldfinch60 said:
That courage can always be seen on their faces. Good write Fay.
September 10th, 2019 14:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That courage can always be seen on their faces. Good write Fay.
September 10th, 2019 14:45
Constant.
dusk arising said:
Singing \'hey-ho me laddie oh, away on the tide... we must go\'.
Brings to mind the faces i have seen around Newlyn. What they do day to day would surely terrify me land lovers soul (though i do love to be on the coast).
Your pen paints a lovely picture of traditional Cornish seafarers lives without romancing the pretty bits.
September 10th, 2019 06:47
dusk arising said:
Singing \'hey-ho me laddie oh, away on the tide... we must go\'.
Brings to mind the faces i have seen around Newlyn. What they do day to day would surely terrify me land lovers soul (though i do love to be on the coast).
Your pen paints a lovely picture of traditional Cornish seafarers lives without romancing the pretty bits.
September 10th, 2019 06:47
Constant.
Neville said:
absolutely atmospheric my friend....
made me shiver and reach for the nearest sou\'wester ...
September 10th, 2019 06:43
Neville said:
absolutely atmospheric my friend....
made me shiver and reach for the nearest sou\'wester ...
September 10th, 2019 06:43
Constant.
Michael Edwards said:
I can taste the salt - another top notch write dear Fay.
September 10th, 2019 04:06
Michael Edwards said:
I can taste the salt - another top notch write dear Fay.
September 10th, 2019 04:06
Constant.
orchidee said:
A fine sea-faring write Fay. Sometimes I have to make do with the pond at the back of the Co-op, not being near the sea! lol.
September 10th, 2019 03:23
orchidee said:
A fine sea-faring write Fay. Sometimes I have to make do with the pond at the back of the Co-op, not being near the sea! lol.
September 10th, 2019 03:23
Exciting.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words transported me to the beauty and wonder of that place Fay. Thank you.
September 10th, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words transported me to the beauty and wonder of that place Fay. Thank you.
September 10th, 2019 00:19
Exciting.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here ! As you know NZ is two Slim Islands consequently the Coast is very esturine ! Like the Corwall Peninsular - Auckland has two Coasts East & West and I love to watch the Sea ebbing & flowing in the Esturies any time of the Day or Night. The EBB & FLOW always reminds me that my Brian will soon *flow back again* straight into my
waiting ARMS ~ AMEN ! I often portray myself as the *Lady on the Shore !*
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”š§”
September 9th, 2019 16:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here ! As you know NZ is two Slim Islands consequently the Coast is very esturine ! Like the Corwall Peninsular - Auckland has two Coasts East & West and I love to watch the Sea ebbing & flowing in the Esturies any time of the Day or Night. The EBB & FLOW always reminds me that my Brian will soon *flow back again* straight into my
waiting ARMS ~ AMEN ! I often portray myself as the *Lady on the Shore !*
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”š§”
September 9th, 2019 16:18
Exciting.
Christina8 said:
I love how you describe the tide...I\'ve never seen the tide come in because I live on a lake....but many of the things you wrote about are similiar....wonderful write dear Fay!
September 9th, 2019 10:02
Christina8 said:
I love how you describe the tide...I\'ve never seen the tide come in because I live on a lake....but many of the things you wrote about are similiar....wonderful write dear Fay!
September 9th, 2019 10:02
Exciting.
kevin browne said:
The little boy casts out his fishing line and pulls in the ebb and lets go with the flow of the estuary you write so eliquently about. A place I and others would without hesitating retiring to. Such beauty not only within the diversity of sea creatures, but within this naturally expressed poem. Estuary forever....
September 9th, 2019 09:40
kevin browne said:
The little boy casts out his fishing line and pulls in the ebb and lets go with the flow of the estuary you write so eliquently about. A place I and others would without hesitating retiring to. Such beauty not only within the diversity of sea creatures, but within this naturally expressed poem. Estuary forever....
September 9th, 2019 09:40
Exciting.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A fine poem Fay ~ The tide is at it\'s highest
Ex animo, Alan
September 9th, 2019 06:01
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A fine poem Fay ~ The tide is at it\'s highest
Ex animo, Alan
September 9th, 2019 06:01
Exciting.
dusk arising said:
Though Fay is a lovely feminine name, we really could rename you Dawn you know.
Once again my mind is transported into the scene and i smell the salt air, hear the wildfowl fly past, the gentle lap of ebbing tide perhaps.
Thank you for this brief transport away from my laptop to wild imaginings. Much needed.
September 9th, 2019 03:38
dusk arising said:
Though Fay is a lovely feminine name, we really could rename you Dawn you know.
Once again my mind is transported into the scene and i smell the salt air, hear the wildfowl fly past, the gentle lap of ebbing tide perhaps.
Thank you for this brief transport away from my laptop to wild imaginings. Much needed.
September 9th, 2019 03:38
Exciting.
orchidee said:
A fine naturerous poem then Fay! And \'Bonjour\'. That\'s about my limit of French . lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine naturerous poem then Fay! And \'Bonjour\'. That\'s about my limit of French . lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:52
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