Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Exciting.
Neville said:
Your obvious enthusiasm for all things of this earth both natural and naturerous (new word) but applicable methinks, spills over and leaves your reader in no doubt that poetry is not only a magnificent art form and means of expression but a force to be reckoned with too....... A mighty fine write Fay.....
Neville
September 9th, 2019 02:40
Neville said:
Your obvious enthusiasm for all things of this earth both natural and naturerous (new word) but applicable methinks, spills over and leaves your reader in no doubt that poetry is not only a magnificent art form and means of expression but a force to be reckoned with too....... A mighty fine write Fay.....
Neville
September 9th, 2019 02:40
Affinity.
kevin browne said:
Ah, I see your affinity connection with your pen resognates beautiful poetic marvel within the short space of time in reading it. I\'ve had to re-read it because of the gravity is over whelming. Such a treat...
September 7th, 2019 11:49
kevin browne said:
Ah, I see your affinity connection with your pen resognates beautiful poetic marvel within the short space of time in reading it. I\'ve had to re-read it because of the gravity is over whelming. Such a treat...
September 7th, 2019 11:49
Affinity.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What a thrill... are there line of beauty Fay
If I could hold today in my hand, there it would be
How uncanny we all seen to have a similar feel this week
In my book this is first prize however
BRAVO!
September 6th, 2019 07:28
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What a thrill... are there line of beauty Fay
If I could hold today in my hand, there it would be
How uncanny we all seen to have a similar feel this week
In my book this is first prize however
BRAVO!
September 6th, 2019 07:28
Affinity.
dusk arising said:
You definitely are at one with nature \'old bean\'. You\'ve taken me on a journey i would not have travelled today.
September 6th, 2019 01:59
dusk arising said:
You definitely are at one with nature \'old bean\'. You\'ve taken me on a journey i would not have travelled today.
September 6th, 2019 01:59
Affinity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (6:30pm FRIDAY !) no more WORK til MONDAY. Its Spring here (15C = 60F) and the Tree Ferns are sending out new bright green fronds - The sound & scents of Spring are in the AIR as the Sun begins to set over the BAY - AMEN. The affinity of WOMN with Nature is the same here as in Cornwall ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 6th, 2019 01:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (6:30pm FRIDAY !) no more WORK til MONDAY. Its Spring here (15C = 60F) and the Tree Ferns are sending out new bright green fronds - The sound & scents of Spring are in the AIR as the Sun begins to set over the BAY - AMEN. The affinity of WOMN with Nature is the same here as in Cornwall ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 6th, 2019 01:48
Affinity.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write Fay again showing the wonder and beauty that nature lays before those who want to see it.
September 6th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write Fay again showing the wonder and beauty that nature lays before those who want to see it.
September 6th, 2019 01:43
Affinity.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I shall soon be a Snail-saver again, on any damp Autumnal mornings or evenings.
I have to spot them before the dreaded \'crunch\' underfoot.
I speed their journey, and move them from the pavement to the grass. Well, it takes them a while to cross the \'road\'(path)!
September 6th, 2019 01:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I shall soon be a Snail-saver again, on any damp Autumnal mornings or evenings.
I have to spot them before the dreaded \'crunch\' underfoot.
I speed their journey, and move them from the pavement to the grass. Well, it takes them a while to cross the \'road\'(path)!
September 6th, 2019 01:21
Affinity.
Neville said:
what can this geezer say that CLARA has not previously said....
might I use the word exquisite tho.. just this once... Neville
September 6th, 2019 01:03
Neville said:
what can this geezer say that CLARA has not previously said....
might I use the word exquisite tho.. just this once... Neville
September 6th, 2019 01:03
Affinity.
Clara said:
Wow, you have outstanding skill of capturing the very \'miniscule\' beauty of nature. \'\' Silvery snail-tracks signed
little pathways of night \'\' the imagery and innate beauty this speaks of is just lovely. A wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing Fay.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:42
Clara said:
Wow, you have outstanding skill of capturing the very \'miniscule\' beauty of nature. \'\' Silvery snail-tracks signed
little pathways of night \'\' the imagery and innate beauty this speaks of is just lovely. A wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing Fay.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:42
Suave.
Seek said:
A fine tribute to a golden time of year. Beautifully written, Fay.
September 5th, 2019 08:45
Seek said:
A fine tribute to a golden time of year. Beautifully written, Fay.
September 5th, 2019 08:45
Suave.
Clara said:
This creates such a lovely image. The words feel almost warm and inviting. Like you could just step into it and be embraced by autumn\'s golden touch. Beautiful.
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 08:44
Clara said:
This creates such a lovely image. The words feel almost warm and inviting. Like you could just step into it and be embraced by autumn\'s golden touch. Beautiful.
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 08:44
Suave.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm Thursday) ! Thanks for sharing FAY ! Its SPRING here so Im missing SEPTEMBER in the UK (and Brians 36th BIRTHDAY !) Love AUTUMN must be fab in CORNWALL. The picture reminded Me of my new Blonde Look ! I blame the SUN & SEAWATER ! BRIAN wont recognise Me - til I KISSSSSSSSSS HIM ! I always remember that kind of September & Follow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 5th, 2019 05:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm Thursday) ! Thanks for sharing FAY ! Its SPRING here so Im missing SEPTEMBER in the UK (and Brians 36th BIRTHDAY !) Love AUTUMN must be fab in CORNWALL. The picture reminded Me of my new Blonde Look ! I blame the SUN & SEAWATER ! BRIAN wont recognise Me - til I KISSSSSSSSSS HIM ! I always remember that kind of September & Follow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 5th, 2019 05:29
Suave.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, another Autumn. But we say \'Oh, no not another birthday, cos we\'re all 21 again!\'
September 5th, 2019 04:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, another Autumn. But we say \'Oh, no not another birthday, cos we\'re all 21 again!\'
September 5th, 2019 04:47
Suave.
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A wonderful tribute to Autumn.
Good write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:10
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A wonderful tribute to Autumn.
Good write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:10
Suave.
Neville said:
the view is to die for...
another autumn..... how they do come round....... a majestic scene you create here in words...
the tools of a poet... Neville
September 5th, 2019 03:40
Neville said:
the view is to die for...
another autumn..... how they do come round....... a majestic scene you create here in words...
the tools of a poet... Neville
September 5th, 2019 03:40
Suave.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, those browns and golds will soon change to reds and oranges and autumn will paint nature with its beautiful colours.
September 5th, 2019 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, those browns and golds will soon change to reds and oranges and autumn will paint nature with its beautiful colours.
September 5th, 2019 03:05
Suave.
dusk arising said:
Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade with you through those avenues of autumnal beauty, delighting in each step, a debonaire march of pleasure.
Autumn - the colours of sun brought to earth.
September 5th, 2019 02:57
dusk arising said:
Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade with you through those avenues of autumnal beauty, delighting in each step, a debonaire march of pleasure.
Autumn - the colours of sun brought to earth.
September 5th, 2019 02:57
Ink-Bitten.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for a very elegant Poem to compliment a very elegant Picture. My Poem tomorrow *MEMORIES* was also triggered by the picture attached !
I sometimes wake in the night with an ODE in my mind - I write it down for later use. My MUSE is triggered by Pictures - Scenes & Events ! Capturing a POEM is just the beginning - honeing it - polishing it - collaborating with BRIAN - to publish on MPS takes ages and sometimes it NEVER crystallises ! To be *Born a Poet* is a great responsibility - greater than most appreciate - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 4th, 2019 16:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for a very elegant Poem to compliment a very elegant Picture. My Poem tomorrow *MEMORIES* was also triggered by the picture attached !
I sometimes wake in the night with an ODE in my mind - I write it down for later use. My MUSE is triggered by Pictures - Scenes & Events ! Capturing a POEM is just the beginning - honeing it - polishing it - collaborating with BRIAN - to publish on MPS takes ages and sometimes it NEVER crystallises ! To be *Born a Poet* is a great responsibility - greater than most appreciate - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 4th, 2019 16:43
Ink-Bitten.
Suresh said:
...a rarity to recall your past life, and once again pen your thoughts, enliven them, then and now...
September 4th, 2019 10:24
Suresh said:
...a rarity to recall your past life, and once again pen your thoughts, enliven them, then and now...
September 4th, 2019 10:24
Ink-Bitten.
dusk arising said:
Yeay dear Charlotte whence i didst first sight ye \'pon that sweet day, your quill o\'er parchment, adventure beset my amour.
What nonesense do you tarry above when my spoken word upon your delicate lobes would free your quill\'s restraint. Though thoughts, these only be, within my smitten mind I most fervently hold the desire of a mention, when parchment sees again your tender touch.
Look what you do.... you\'re so inspiring Fay.
September 4th, 2019 05:35
dusk arising said:
Yeay dear Charlotte whence i didst first sight ye \'pon that sweet day, your quill o\'er parchment, adventure beset my amour.
What nonesense do you tarry above when my spoken word upon your delicate lobes would free your quill\'s restraint. Though thoughts, these only be, within my smitten mind I most fervently hold the desire of a mention, when parchment sees again your tender touch.
Look what you do.... you\'re so inspiring Fay.
September 4th, 2019 05:35
Ink-Bitten.
Goldfinch60 said:
Ah, Calliope has been in your mind and you have scribed these wonderful words.
September 4th, 2019 04:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Ah, Calliope has been in your mind and you have scribed these wonderful words.
September 4th, 2019 04:55
Ink-Bitten.
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely piece Fay - and it maketh the poetry in art.
September 4th, 2019 04:36
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely piece Fay - and it maketh the poetry in art.
September 4th, 2019 04:36
Ink-Bitten.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The answer to the question in the author comment box is a resounding...YES! I think she’s penning your magical words onto paper for us to enjoy the read...which I most certainly did! That ink flows like a gentle river!
An exceptional write indeed!
All praise for thee,
my dear poetess!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 03:55
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The answer to the question in the author comment box is a resounding...YES! I think she’s penning your magical words onto paper for us to enjoy the read...which I most certainly did! That ink flows like a gentle river!
An exceptional write indeed!
All praise for thee,
my dear poetess!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 03:55
Ink-Bitten.
Neville said:
Ah\' yes.. a poets poem poemed to perfection and pinned to the page with blutack held tween fingers like a weavers both quick and cool.... I never stumbled upon these words, I went hunting for the,......... Neville
September 4th, 2019 03:54
Neville said:
Ah\' yes.. a poets poem poemed to perfection and pinned to the page with blutack held tween fingers like a weavers both quick and cool.... I never stumbled upon these words, I went hunting for the,......... Neville
September 4th, 2019 03:54
Ink-Bitten.
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like she could have written this fine poem!
September 4th, 2019 03:49
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like she could have written this fine poem!
September 4th, 2019 03:49
Morphing.
dusk arising said:
She stood on the bridge at midnight
Looking prim and somewhat dour
She offered me her favours
For 10/6d per half an hour.
What you see ain\'t always what you get.
September 4th, 2019 02:13
dusk arising said:
She stood on the bridge at midnight
Looking prim and somewhat dour
She offered me her favours
For 10/6d per half an hour.
What you see ain\'t always what you get.
September 4th, 2019 02:13
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