Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Whisperings.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Pianissimo ~ pp.
Nay, pianississimo ~ ppp.
Ex animo, Alan
September 11th, 2019 03:18
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Pianissimo ~ pp.
Nay, pianississimo ~ ppp.
Ex animo, Alan
September 11th, 2019 03:18
Constant.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Every Fisherman ~ saline drenched
battles the sea gales ! Thunder & Lightening
Threaten the Men and their Vessel !
Water takes no PRISONERS it is Life or Death !
BUT still many relish the JOB and discount ~
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Thanks for Sharing & Caring FAY ! A dynamic Poem which captures the Thrills & Spills of Deep sea Fishermen !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 10th, 2019 16:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Every Fisherman ~ saline drenched
battles the sea gales ! Thunder & Lightening
Threaten the Men and their Vessel !
Water takes no PRISONERS it is Life or Death !
BUT still many relish the JOB and discount ~
*The Price of Fish & Ships*
Thanks for Sharing & Caring FAY ! A dynamic Poem which captures the Thrills & Spills of Deep sea Fishermen !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 10th, 2019 16:02
Constant.
Goldfinch60 said:
That courage can always be seen on their faces. Good write Fay.
September 10th, 2019 14:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That courage can always be seen on their faces. Good write Fay.
September 10th, 2019 14:45
Constant.
dusk arising said:
Singing \'hey-ho me laddie oh, away on the tide... we must go\'.
Brings to mind the faces i have seen around Newlyn. What they do day to day would surely terrify me land lovers soul (though i do love to be on the coast).
Your pen paints a lovely picture of traditional Cornish seafarers lives without romancing the pretty bits.
September 10th, 2019 06:47
dusk arising said:
Singing \'hey-ho me laddie oh, away on the tide... we must go\'.
Brings to mind the faces i have seen around Newlyn. What they do day to day would surely terrify me land lovers soul (though i do love to be on the coast).
Your pen paints a lovely picture of traditional Cornish seafarers lives without romancing the pretty bits.
September 10th, 2019 06:47
Constant.
Neville said:
absolutely atmospheric my friend....
made me shiver and reach for the nearest sou\'wester ...
September 10th, 2019 06:43
Neville said:
absolutely atmospheric my friend....
made me shiver and reach for the nearest sou\'wester ...
September 10th, 2019 06:43
Constant.
Michael Edwards said:
I can taste the salt - another top notch write dear Fay.
September 10th, 2019 04:06
Michael Edwards said:
I can taste the salt - another top notch write dear Fay.
September 10th, 2019 04:06
Constant.
orchidee said:
A fine sea-faring write Fay. Sometimes I have to make do with the pond at the back of the Co-op, not being near the sea! lol.
September 10th, 2019 03:23
orchidee said:
A fine sea-faring write Fay. Sometimes I have to make do with the pond at the back of the Co-op, not being near the sea! lol.
September 10th, 2019 03:23
Exciting.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words transported me to the beauty and wonder of that place Fay. Thank you.
September 10th, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words transported me to the beauty and wonder of that place Fay. Thank you.
September 10th, 2019 00:19
Exciting.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here ! As you know NZ is two Slim Islands consequently the Coast is very esturine ! Like the Corwall Peninsular - Auckland has two Coasts East & West and I love to watch the Sea ebbing & flowing in the Esturies any time of the Day or Night. The EBB & FLOW always reminds me that my Brian will soon *flow back again* straight into my
waiting ARMS ~ AMEN ! I often portray myself as the *Lady on the Shore !*
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 9th, 2019 16:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here ! As you know NZ is two Slim Islands consequently the Coast is very esturine ! Like the Corwall Peninsular - Auckland has two Coasts East & West and I love to watch the Sea ebbing & flowing in the Esturies any time of the Day or Night. The EBB & FLOW always reminds me that my Brian will soon *flow back again* straight into my
waiting ARMS ~ AMEN ! I often portray myself as the *Lady on the Shore !*
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 9th, 2019 16:18
Exciting.
Christina8 said:
I love how you describe the tide...I\'ve never seen the tide come in because I live on a lake....but many of the things you wrote about are similiar....wonderful write dear Fay!
September 9th, 2019 10:02
Christina8 said:
I love how you describe the tide...I\'ve never seen the tide come in because I live on a lake....but many of the things you wrote about are similiar....wonderful write dear Fay!
September 9th, 2019 10:02
Exciting.
kevin browne said:
The little boy casts out his fishing line and pulls in the ebb and lets go with the flow of the estuary you write so eliquently about. A place I and others would without hesitating retiring to. Such beauty not only within the diversity of sea creatures, but within this naturally expressed poem. Estuary forever....
September 9th, 2019 09:40
kevin browne said:
The little boy casts out his fishing line and pulls in the ebb and lets go with the flow of the estuary you write so eliquently about. A place I and others would without hesitating retiring to. Such beauty not only within the diversity of sea creatures, but within this naturally expressed poem. Estuary forever....
September 9th, 2019 09:40
Exciting.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A fine poem Fay ~ The tide is at it\'s highest
Ex animo, Alan
September 9th, 2019 06:01
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A fine poem Fay ~ The tide is at it\'s highest
Ex animo, Alan
September 9th, 2019 06:01
Exciting.
dusk arising said:
Though Fay is a lovely feminine name, we really could rename you Dawn you know.
Once again my mind is transported into the scene and i smell the salt air, hear the wildfowl fly past, the gentle lap of ebbing tide perhaps.
Thank you for this brief transport away from my laptop to wild imaginings. Much needed.
September 9th, 2019 03:38
dusk arising said:
Though Fay is a lovely feminine name, we really could rename you Dawn you know.
Once again my mind is transported into the scene and i smell the salt air, hear the wildfowl fly past, the gentle lap of ebbing tide perhaps.
Thank you for this brief transport away from my laptop to wild imaginings. Much needed.
September 9th, 2019 03:38
Exciting.
orchidee said:
A fine naturerous poem then Fay! And \'Bonjour\'. That\'s about my limit of French . lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine naturerous poem then Fay! And \'Bonjour\'. That\'s about my limit of French . lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:52
Exciting.
Neville said:
Your obvious enthusiasm for all things of this earth both natural and naturerous (new word) but applicable methinks, spills over and leaves your reader in no doubt that poetry is not only a magnificent art form and means of expression but a force to be reckoned with too....... A mighty fine write Fay.....
Neville
September 9th, 2019 02:40
Neville said:
Your obvious enthusiasm for all things of this earth both natural and naturerous (new word) but applicable methinks, spills over and leaves your reader in no doubt that poetry is not only a magnificent art form and means of expression but a force to be reckoned with too....... A mighty fine write Fay.....
Neville
September 9th, 2019 02:40
Affinity.
kevin browne said:
Ah, I see your affinity connection with your pen resognates beautiful poetic marvel within the short space of time in reading it. I\'ve had to re-read it because of the gravity is over whelming. Such a treat...
September 7th, 2019 11:49
kevin browne said:
Ah, I see your affinity connection with your pen resognates beautiful poetic marvel within the short space of time in reading it. I\'ve had to re-read it because of the gravity is over whelming. Such a treat...
September 7th, 2019 11:49
Affinity.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What a thrill... are there line of beauty Fay
If I could hold today in my hand, there it would be
How uncanny we all seen to have a similar feel this week
In my book this is first prize however
BRAVO!
September 6th, 2019 07:28
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What a thrill... are there line of beauty Fay
If I could hold today in my hand, there it would be
How uncanny we all seen to have a similar feel this week
In my book this is first prize however
BRAVO!
September 6th, 2019 07:28
Affinity.
dusk arising said:
You definitely are at one with nature \'old bean\'. You\'ve taken me on a journey i would not have travelled today.
September 6th, 2019 01:59
dusk arising said:
You definitely are at one with nature \'old bean\'. You\'ve taken me on a journey i would not have travelled today.
September 6th, 2019 01:59
Affinity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (6:30pm FRIDAY !) no more WORK til MONDAY. Its Spring here (15C = 60F) and the Tree Ferns are sending out new bright green fronds - The sound & scents of Spring are in the AIR as the Sun begins to set over the BAY - AMEN. The affinity of WOMN with Nature is the same here as in Cornwall ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 6th, 2019 01:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (6:30pm FRIDAY !) no more WORK til MONDAY. Its Spring here (15C = 60F) and the Tree Ferns are sending out new bright green fronds - The sound & scents of Spring are in the AIR as the Sun begins to set over the BAY - AMEN. The affinity of WOMN with Nature is the same here as in Cornwall ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 6th, 2019 01:48
Affinity.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write Fay again showing the wonder and beauty that nature lays before those who want to see it.
September 6th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write Fay again showing the wonder and beauty that nature lays before those who want to see it.
September 6th, 2019 01:43
Affinity.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I shall soon be a Snail-saver again, on any damp Autumnal mornings or evenings.
I have to spot them before the dreaded \'crunch\' underfoot.
I speed their journey, and move them from the pavement to the grass. Well, it takes them a while to cross the \'road\'(path)!
September 6th, 2019 01:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I shall soon be a Snail-saver again, on any damp Autumnal mornings or evenings.
I have to spot them before the dreaded \'crunch\' underfoot.
I speed their journey, and move them from the pavement to the grass. Well, it takes them a while to cross the \'road\'(path)!
September 6th, 2019 01:21
Affinity.
Neville said:
what can this geezer say that CLARA has not previously said....
might I use the word exquisite tho.. just this once... Neville
September 6th, 2019 01:03
Neville said:
what can this geezer say that CLARA has not previously said....
might I use the word exquisite tho.. just this once... Neville
September 6th, 2019 01:03
Affinity.
Clara said:
Wow, you have outstanding skill of capturing the very \'miniscule\' beauty of nature. \'\' Silvery snail-tracks signed
little pathways of night \'\' the imagery and innate beauty this speaks of is just lovely. A wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing Fay.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:42
Clara said:
Wow, you have outstanding skill of capturing the very \'miniscule\' beauty of nature. \'\' Silvery snail-tracks signed
little pathways of night \'\' the imagery and innate beauty this speaks of is just lovely. A wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing Fay.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:42
Suave.
Seek said:
A fine tribute to a golden time of year. Beautifully written, Fay.
September 5th, 2019 08:45
Seek said:
A fine tribute to a golden time of year. Beautifully written, Fay.
September 5th, 2019 08:45
Suave.
Clara said:
This creates such a lovely image. The words feel almost warm and inviting. Like you could just step into it and be embraced by autumn\'s golden touch. Beautiful.
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 08:44
Clara said:
This creates such a lovely image. The words feel almost warm and inviting. Like you could just step into it and be embraced by autumn\'s golden touch. Beautiful.
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 08:44
Suave.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm Thursday) ! Thanks for sharing FAY ! Its SPRING here so Im missing SEPTEMBER in the UK (and Brians 36th BIRTHDAY !) Love AUTUMN must be fab in CORNWALL. The picture reminded Me of my new Blonde Look ! I blame the SUN & SEAWATER ! BRIAN wont recognise Me - til I KISSSSSSSSSS HIM ! I always remember that kind of September & Follow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 5th, 2019 05:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm Thursday) ! Thanks for sharing FAY ! Its SPRING here so Im missing SEPTEMBER in the UK (and Brians 36th BIRTHDAY !) Love AUTUMN must be fab in CORNWALL. The picture reminded Me of my new Blonde Look ! I blame the SUN & SEAWATER ! BRIAN wont recognise Me - til I KISSSSSSSSSS HIM ! I always remember that kind of September & Follow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 5th, 2019 05:29
Suave.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, another Autumn. But we say \'Oh, no not another birthday, cos we\'re all 21 again!\'
September 5th, 2019 04:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, another Autumn. But we say \'Oh, no not another birthday, cos we\'re all 21 again!\'
September 5th, 2019 04:47
Suave.
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A wonderful tribute to Autumn.
Good write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:10
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
A wonderful tribute to Autumn.
Good write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:10
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