Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
The Journey.
dusk arising said:
One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing new postings from poets i have come to respect for the quality of their many poems i have read. In your work today i am delighted for i haven\'t seen you produce anything like this before and i love it!
Well that last line is a real hook! All your readers will be waiting with baited breath for the poor girl\'s downfall and heartbreak now.... or have you twists and turns the poor girl will wrestle with as you tease us into submission?
hmmm breath baited!
August 28th, 2019 05:12
dusk arising said:
One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing new postings from poets i have come to respect for the quality of their many poems i have read. In your work today i am delighted for i haven\'t seen you produce anything like this before and i love it!
Well that last line is a real hook! All your readers will be waiting with baited breath for the poor girl\'s downfall and heartbreak now.... or have you twists and turns the poor girl will wrestle with as you tease us into submission?
hmmm breath baited!
August 28th, 2019 05:12
The Journey.
orchidee said:
If this is continued, I fear I shall swoon..... heehee. Doh, I\'m always in a swoon! lol.
August 28th, 2019 03:47
orchidee said:
If this is continued, I fear I shall swoon..... heehee. Doh, I\'m always in a swoon! lol.
August 28th, 2019 03:47
Suchness.
kevin browne said:
Emotionally written by someone who has delved into the deep end of loves drowning spirit. You express clearly some of the eternal evocative love thta\'s lay in the core of your own heart. A brilliant peice of poetry written with clarity of meaning. Good work, Fay...
August 28th, 2019 01:23
kevin browne said:
Emotionally written by someone who has delved into the deep end of loves drowning spirit. You express clearly some of the eternal evocative love thta\'s lay in the core of your own heart. A brilliant peice of poetry written with clarity of meaning. Good work, Fay...
August 28th, 2019 01:23
Suchness.
dusk arising said:
I so agree with your sentiment. Where does it come from, this mental transformation we undergo. Accepting, transcending? It must be one of those lessons love teaches us.
Beautiful poetry from you.
August 27th, 2019 18:20
dusk arising said:
I so agree with your sentiment. Where does it come from, this mental transformation we undergo. Accepting, transcending? It must be one of those lessons love teaches us.
Beautiful poetry from you.
August 27th, 2019 18:20
Suchness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Love this Poem FAY and have saved it as a FAVE ! I love the structure and the substance ! It it especially relevant to me because I miss Brian so so much - and yet knowing in a few weeks our separation will be no more - and we will be together - for ever & eternity !
I am Living & Loving @ Hearts core & Looking @ Loves core and discovering the SUCHNESS (lovely word !) of Love & Heart & Spirit - AMEN
Reading your unique ode has indeed :
V 1. Liberated me from emotion & remorse
V 2. Enhanced Vision and soothed rawness
V 3. Made Life sing and my *Hurting Heart weeps no more !*
I discussed my responce with BRIAN on SKYPE ! He agrees and send His LOVE. Thanks for caring so so much We felt the sentiments of this Poem were writen specially to sooth our *Love Pangs of Separation* THANK YOU !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 27th, 2019 18:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Love this Poem FAY and have saved it as a FAVE ! I love the structure and the substance ! It it especially relevant to me because I miss Brian so so much - and yet knowing in a few weeks our separation will be no more - and we will be together - for ever & eternity !
I am Living & Loving @ Hearts core & Looking @ Loves core and discovering the SUCHNESS (lovely word !) of Love & Heart & Spirit - AMEN
Reading your unique ode has indeed :
V 1. Liberated me from emotion & remorse
V 2. Enhanced Vision and soothed rawness
V 3. Made Life sing and my *Hurting Heart weeps no more !*
I discussed my responce with BRIAN on SKYPE ! He agrees and send His LOVE. Thanks for caring so so much We felt the sentiments of this Poem were writen specially to sooth our *Love Pangs of Separation* THANK YOU !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 27th, 2019 18:10
Suchness.
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing!
-Lauren
August 27th, 2019 15:45
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing!
-Lauren
August 27th, 2019 15:45
Alltogetherness.
Suresh said:
Inner calmness will sail through rough waters
Your words, as always, very intense
August 26th, 2019 12:52
Suresh said:
Inner calmness will sail through rough waters
Your words, as always, very intense
August 26th, 2019 12:52
Alltogetherness.
dusk arising said:
I believe that as we age we begin to understand love and self love. With that, the enquiring mind will realise spirituality. The light within.
Spirituality from within brings realisation of the charlatans.
Deep and thought provoking verse.
August 26th, 2019 05:43
dusk arising said:
I believe that as we age we begin to understand love and self love. With that, the enquiring mind will realise spirituality. The light within.
Spirituality from within brings realisation of the charlatans.
Deep and thought provoking verse.
August 26th, 2019 05:43
Outing.
Suresh said:
As we, humans, are the creatures of the light, light is thus our security blanket, and that we seek to pierce our fears away, and very few poems have welcomed dawn as yours.
August 24th, 2019 09:45
Suresh said:
As we, humans, are the creatures of the light, light is thus our security blanket, and that we seek to pierce our fears away, and very few poems have welcomed dawn as yours.
August 24th, 2019 09:45
Outing.
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days be forever wonderful as are your words Fay.
August 24th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days be forever wonderful as are your words Fay.
August 24th, 2019 00:27
Outing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here (9:30am Saturday !) A beautiful Poem - each Dawn is miracle in itself ! I love the adverbs you have chosen. Imperceptibly - Immaculatetly - Imposingly - Impartially - Immediately ! They perfect;y describe the Sunrise - each day - over the Bay in Auckland and Norfolk too I guess - BEAUTIFUL. It has inspired me to post a Poem on Dawn tomorrow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 23rd, 2019 16:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here (9:30am Saturday !) A beautiful Poem - each Dawn is miracle in itself ! I love the adverbs you have chosen. Imperceptibly - Immaculatetly - Imposingly - Impartially - Immediately ! They perfect;y describe the Sunrise - each day - over the Bay in Auckland and Norfolk too I guess - BEAUTIFUL. It has inspired me to post a Poem on Dawn tomorrow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 23rd, 2019 16:38
Outing.
dusk arising said:
Gone! those youthful days of stay in bed and grow.
Nowadays it\'s up at the first hint of birds yawning in readiness for that resounding dawn chorus.
Again you capture the dawn for us with a new angle. Beware of too much \'unsullied azure\' this bank holiday though.
August 23rd, 2019 03:18
dusk arising said:
Gone! those youthful days of stay in bed and grow.
Nowadays it\'s up at the first hint of birds yawning in readiness for that resounding dawn chorus.
Again you capture the dawn for us with a new angle. Beware of too much \'unsullied azure\' this bank holiday though.
August 23rd, 2019 03:18
Flight.
Silkseduction said:
This was beautiful- I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing :)
Lauren xx
August 22nd, 2019 15:16
Silkseduction said:
This was beautiful- I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing :)
Lauren xx
August 22nd, 2019 15:16
Chafing.
dusk arising said:
i\'m embarrassed to reveal i am still a virgin (sssshhh I haven\'t told my son yet) so i can\'t really understand this piece.
On the basis that all the \'poor little rich girls\' i met were right ravers! Ah, those hot summer evenings in the grounds of Cheltenham Girls College.
August 22nd, 2019 03:20
dusk arising said:
i\'m embarrassed to reveal i am still a virgin (sssshhh I haven\'t told my son yet) so i can\'t really understand this piece.
On the basis that all the \'poor little rich girls\' i met were right ravers! Ah, those hot summer evenings in the grounds of Cheltenham Girls College.
August 22nd, 2019 03:20
Oiled with Love.
Neville said:
ya can\'t beat a bit o old fashioned love, specially when it happens in a castle...... in days of yore.....
August 22nd, 2019 03:08
Neville said:
ya can\'t beat a bit o old fashioned love, specially when it happens in a castle...... in days of yore.....
August 22nd, 2019 03:08
Chafing.
Neville said:
this is so damn good... probably now one of my favouwrite Fay Slimm\'s yet... this has ticked all the boxes for me Fay well done you, I say........and truly....... Neville
August 22nd, 2019 02:58
Neville said:
this is so damn good... probably now one of my favouwrite Fay Slimm\'s yet... this has ticked all the boxes for me Fay well done you, I say........and truly....... Neville
August 22nd, 2019 02:58
Ours.
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem and tribute Fay....wonderfully chosen words, how sometimes death can take life from you. So sorry......Christina
August 21st, 2019 20:15
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem and tribute Fay....wonderfully chosen words, how sometimes death can take life from you. So sorry......Christina
August 21st, 2019 20:15
Ours.
Suresh said:
Love that graduates into friendship and transforms into companionship, is truly love indeed
August 21st, 2019 15:44
Suresh said:
Love that graduates into friendship and transforms into companionship, is truly love indeed
August 21st, 2019 15:44
Ours.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here ! (its 8:30 am Thursday !splendoured) AS the SONG says *Love is a many Splendoured\" The mutual Love I have for BRIAN is EROS LOVE which enables us to give ourselves to aeach other completely & unreservedly ! The Love I have for You - and several other Members of MPS is PHILEO LOVE - Brotherly & Sisterly Love the same love I have for My Family & Brians Famly ! Then there is AGAPE LOVE - Spiritual Love I share with Jehovah & Jesus & The Holy Spirit. We also share AGAPE LOVE with Those Members who are *BELIEVERS* like Yourself - Orchii - Zion - Christina S etc etc. The Love between Believers is very very Spiritual & Precious.
We must seek to spead LOVE & PEACE & YOU - throughout th Friends e World and be ENCOURAGERS and SUPPORTERS of all MPS MEMBERS ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Your Friends in Agape Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 21st, 2019 15:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here ! (its 8:30 am Thursday !splendoured) AS the SONG says *Love is a many Splendoured\" The mutual Love I have for BRIAN is EROS LOVE which enables us to give ourselves to aeach other completely & unreservedly ! The Love I have for You - and several other Members of MPS is PHILEO LOVE - Brotherly & Sisterly Love the same love I have for My Family & Brians Famly ! Then there is AGAPE LOVE - Spiritual Love I share with Jehovah & Jesus & The Holy Spirit. We also share AGAPE LOVE with Those Members who are *BELIEVERS* like Yourself - Orchii - Zion - Christina S etc etc. The Love between Believers is very very Spiritual & Precious.
We must seek to spead LOVE & PEACE & YOU - throughout th Friends e World and be ENCOURAGERS and SUPPORTERS of all MPS MEMBERS ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Your Friends in Agape Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 21st, 2019 15:43
Ours.
dusk arising said:
Love in a none demanding, acceptance of mutual appreciation, comfort and \'like\' is lacking only in the danger of a passion which is the savage abusive wrecker of so many pairings.
Though familiarity may not acknowledge the underlying love until the familiar is no longer there and the joyousness which you exuded is extinuished. Like an empty fire grate which once was the heart of home comfort.
I really felt the loss in this piece. Very moving. Encourages me to remain singleton.
August 21st, 2019 04:43
dusk arising said:
Love in a none demanding, acceptance of mutual appreciation, comfort and \'like\' is lacking only in the danger of a passion which is the savage abusive wrecker of so many pairings.
Though familiarity may not acknowledge the underlying love until the familiar is no longer there and the joyousness which you exuded is extinuished. Like an empty fire grate which once was the heart of home comfort.
I really felt the loss in this piece. Very moving. Encourages me to remain singleton.
August 21st, 2019 04:43
Ours.
Neville said:
a heart rending post if ever there was...
such friendship assumes an almost sacred feel and not even death can change that feeling.......... a great poem here Fay...... N
August 21st, 2019 03:17
Neville said:
a heart rending post if ever there was...
such friendship assumes an almost sacred feel and not even death can change that feeling.......... a great poem here Fay...... N
August 21st, 2019 03:17
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