Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Flight.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY - ANGELA here. Its 7am (SATURDAY) and I like to rise early on SAT & SUN to extend leisure time ! See tomorrows POEM ! Young People (for economic reasons) are staying home longer and getting married later (Brian will be 36 and I 32 !). We both have our own flats but live close enough to our Parents - for Sunday Lunch and to interact with our Family Pets. After we are married (next year) we will of course BUY or RENT our FIRST HOME. We still regard our Parental Homes as HOME and we still have STUFF there !
Verse by verse your very elegant Poem (where does you vocabulary come from ?) describes the inevitable *Cutting of the Apron Strings* and *Leaving the Family Nest* ! Your last doublet will ring many MPS bells !
Whether fur- flesh or feather .........
Successful flight will always remember HOME !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 16th, 2019 14:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY - ANGELA here. Its 7am (SATURDAY) and I like to rise early on SAT & SUN to extend leisure time ! See tomorrows POEM ! Young People (for economic reasons) are staying home longer and getting married later (Brian will be 36 and I 32 !). We both have our own flats but live close enough to our Parents - for Sunday Lunch and to interact with our Family Pets. After we are married (next year) we will of course BUY or RENT our FIRST HOME. We still regard our Parental Homes as HOME and we still have STUFF there !
Verse by verse your very elegant Poem (where does you vocabulary come from ?) describes the inevitable *Cutting of the Apron Strings* and *Leaving the Family Nest* ! Your last doublet will ring many MPS bells !
Whether fur- flesh or feather .........
Successful flight will always remember HOME !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 16th, 2019 14:10
Flight.
dusk arising said:
So it ever was. To mind came the wonderful BBC Serengeti program where the mother cheetah watched her offspring bring down the gazelle just as she had taught them... she then turned and disappeared. The law of the wild and as nature intended.
Though i was there to catch and encourage I proudly stand next to a tall son who did it his way with his learned scars about him.
Every 16 yr old\'s parent should have a copy of your piece today Fay.
August 16th, 2019 13:25
dusk arising said:
So it ever was. To mind came the wonderful BBC Serengeti program where the mother cheetah watched her offspring bring down the gazelle just as she had taught them... she then turned and disappeared. The law of the wild and as nature intended.
Though i was there to catch and encourage I proudly stand next to a tall son who did it his way with his learned scars about him.
Every 16 yr old\'s parent should have a copy of your piece today Fay.
August 16th, 2019 13:25
Sensuality.
dusk arising said:
and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... cheated!
Never found professional lady dancers feminine enough to appeal to be honest. Sexy and sensual yes, but something missing.
Now a good dancer with her partner down at the club can be something else, as she carefully avoids stepping on all the watching fella\'s tongues.
August 16th, 2019 12:29
dusk arising said:
and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... cheated!
Never found professional lady dancers feminine enough to appeal to be honest. Sexy and sensual yes, but something missing.
Now a good dancer with her partner down at the club can be something else, as she carefully avoids stepping on all the watching fella\'s tongues.
August 16th, 2019 12:29
Flight.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This asks so many questions of the human heart Fay it truly is an amazing piece.
The struggle with our feelings over what\'s best for the next generation.
This encapsulates lifes fine balance for me.
Bloody brilliant...
August 16th, 2019 09:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This asks so many questions of the human heart Fay it truly is an amazing piece.
The struggle with our feelings over what\'s best for the next generation.
This encapsulates lifes fine balance for me.
Bloody brilliant...
August 16th, 2019 09:16
Flight.
Neville said:
This has got your signature written right the way through my friend..
a great poem in every respect.... N
August 16th, 2019 07:18
Neville said:
This has got your signature written right the way through my friend..
a great poem in every respect.... N
August 16th, 2019 07:18
Sensuality.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, i could see the gyrations in my mind.
August 16th, 2019 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, i could see the gyrations in my mind.
August 16th, 2019 00:28
Sensuality.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi FAY - Angela here 8:30 am Friday ! Loved the Poem & the Picture. Belly Dancing is by Title & Tickle Sensuous - love to watch it & try it. Flamenco is also sensuous but more subtle. We have Moroccan influences in Andalucia and the exposed Navel (with an embedded Gemstone !) is considered both Sensual & Sacred ! I love to watch the reactions of Brian (and other red-blooded men) as the Dance proceeds it enlivens all the senses and leaves nothing to the imagination ! I am much too modest to ever be a Professional Belly Dancer ! Brian is very proud when I dance Flamenco but would draw the line @ Belly Dancing especially as we are engaged to be married ! Thanks for sharing a very elegant Poem - in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 15:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi FAY - Angela here 8:30 am Friday ! Loved the Poem & the Picture. Belly Dancing is by Title & Tickle Sensuous - love to watch it & try it. Flamenco is also sensuous but more subtle. We have Moroccan influences in Andalucia and the exposed Navel (with an embedded Gemstone !) is considered both Sensual & Sacred ! I love to watch the reactions of Brian (and other red-blooded men) as the Dance proceeds it enlivens all the senses and leaves nothing to the imagination ! I am much too modest to ever be a Professional Belly Dancer ! Brian is very proud when I dance Flamenco but would draw the line @ Belly Dancing especially as we are engaged to be married ! Thanks for sharing a very elegant Poem - in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 15:48
Sensuality.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
What an awesome, amazing write.
The beautiful Britt Ekland defined beauty as sensuality.
She said in a interview along the lines irregardless of our physical appearance the underlying factor is sensuality. If we are sensual we are beautiful.
Your poem shows that within a person being sensual lies a breathtaking beauty all ita own.
Keep writing FineB
August 15th, 2019 13:24
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
What an awesome, amazing write.
The beautiful Britt Ekland defined beauty as sensuality.
She said in a interview along the lines irregardless of our physical appearance the underlying factor is sensuality. If we are sensual we are beautiful.
Your poem shows that within a person being sensual lies a breathtaking beauty all ita own.
Keep writing FineB
August 15th, 2019 13:24
Sensuality.
Suresh said:
You have truly captured the rythm of the Eastern dancing, where the female displays her art for the pleasure of the opposite sex, I dearly love the rythm of the Latin dances, rumba, samba, paso doble where the movement of the couple is erotically sensual.
Love the poem
August 15th, 2019 09:58
Suresh said:
You have truly captured the rythm of the Eastern dancing, where the female displays her art for the pleasure of the opposite sex, I dearly love the rythm of the Latin dances, rumba, samba, paso doble where the movement of the couple is erotically sensual.
Love the poem
August 15th, 2019 09:58
Sensuality.
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s not fair - here\'s me about to have my knee done and you foist those thoughts in my excited brain box. Down Edwards!!! i
August 15th, 2019 07:38
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s not fair - here\'s me about to have my knee done and you foist those thoughts in my excited brain box. Down Edwards!!! i
August 15th, 2019 07:38
Sensuality.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It all in the heat Fay
Excellent write
August 15th, 2019 04:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It all in the heat Fay
Excellent write
August 15th, 2019 04:03
Sensuality.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Fido my watchdog won\'t let me have any \'carnality\'! lol.
August 15th, 2019 02:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Fido my watchdog won\'t let me have any \'carnality\'! lol.
August 15th, 2019 02:33
Sensuality.
Neville said:
Tis amazing how they do that ..
Tis amazing how you capture movement so dear Fay..
I\'m more a hand jive kinda guy..... N
August 15th, 2019 02:13
Neville said:
Tis amazing how they do that ..
Tis amazing how you capture movement so dear Fay..
I\'m more a hand jive kinda guy..... N
August 15th, 2019 02:13
Nightness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Contented COWS - safe in their field
And treated well the best MILK yield !
Thanks for sharing FAY. In my youth I (BRIAN) stayed on a Dairy Farm and helped with the Milking etc. I was alwys amazed at the docility & contentment of the Cows and was never afriad of them or the Bulls. I guess they did OK ! Fed & Watered and freed from their MILK ~ twice a day ! You have provided an excellent Picture and written a perfect One !
Blessings & Peace & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 14th, 2019 17:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Contented COWS - safe in their field
And treated well the best MILK yield !
Thanks for sharing FAY. In my youth I (BRIAN) stayed on a Dairy Farm and helped with the Milking etc. I was alwys amazed at the docility & contentment of the Cows and was never afriad of them or the Bulls. I guess they did OK ! Fed & Watered and freed from their MILK ~ twice a day ! You have provided an excellent Picture and written a perfect One !
Blessings & Peace & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 14th, 2019 17:45
Nightness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay, evenings colourful fall into night is wondrous.
August 14th, 2019 15:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay, evenings colourful fall into night is wondrous.
August 14th, 2019 15:39
Nightness.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
We can learn so much from nature a natural fear is healthy
Our unnatural one is sometimes not
Great write
August 14th, 2019 02:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
We can learn so much from nature a natural fear is healthy
Our unnatural one is sometimes not
Great write
August 14th, 2019 02:46
Secret.
Neville said:
A single red rose... and words that more than do it justice...... but sshh lit\'s keep it tween ourselves or there will be a whole bunch of em crowding round.... .... N
August 13th, 2019 13:10
Neville said:
A single red rose... and words that more than do it justice...... but sshh lit\'s keep it tween ourselves or there will be a whole bunch of em crowding round.... .... N
August 13th, 2019 13:10
Secret.
Christina8 said:
love the last two lines especially, wonderful writing Fay!!
August 13th, 2019 12:57
Christina8 said:
love the last two lines especially, wonderful writing Fay!!
August 13th, 2019 12:57
Secret.
Michael Edwards said:
Great work and those last two lines are to die for (well not literally 😊 )
August 13th, 2019 10:45
Michael Edwards said:
Great work and those last two lines are to die for (well not literally 😊 )
August 13th, 2019 10:45
Secret.
dusk arising said:
A rose? Or a lady blossoming mature?
I\'m preferring to romance the latter in your words today.
August 13th, 2019 04:41
dusk arising said:
A rose? Or a lady blossoming mature?
I\'m preferring to romance the latter in your words today.
August 13th, 2019 04:41
Secret.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A very fragrant piece , petal
Beautiful again
August 13th, 2019 03:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A very fragrant piece , petal
Beautiful again
August 13th, 2019 03:34
Underprized..
Suresh said:
Love, as any other emotion, is uncontrollable. Neither can we deliberately act upon it, nor can we control it. In majority of the cases, love is a grossly missed word, where \"like\", a concerted effort, better describes the feeling.
As such, your poem well defines the underprization of the word \"love\"
August 12th, 2019 18:54
Suresh said:
Love, as any other emotion, is uncontrollable. Neither can we deliberately act upon it, nor can we control it. In majority of the cases, love is a grossly missed word, where \"like\", a concerted effort, better describes the feeling.
As such, your poem well defines the underprization of the word \"love\"
August 12th, 2019 18:54
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