Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Need.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. It\'s started me off crooning. No one can bear it, but it can\'t be helped! heehee.
August 5th, 2019 02:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. It\'s started me off crooning. No one can bear it, but it can\'t be helped! heehee.
August 5th, 2019 02:53
Need.
Neville said:
not only tender, but tantalizing too and so very satisfying right at the end, where you would most want it to be... N
August 5th, 2019 02:22
Neville said:
not only tender, but tantalizing too and so very satisfying right at the end, where you would most want it to be... N
August 5th, 2019 02:22
Need.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Fay, innocence moving on into love.
August 5th, 2019 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Fay, innocence moving on into love.
August 5th, 2019 02:12
Tended.
Suresh said:
In some places they have bells as collars to let us know if they have wandered off, otherwise very docile and hardly needing prodding to feed. A very lack-a-daisical activity, till the end of day, and then a lot of tending indeed.
A lovely poem on a lovely subject
August 4th, 2019 11:44
Suresh said:
In some places they have bells as collars to let us know if they have wandered off, otherwise very docile and hardly needing prodding to feed. A very lack-a-daisical activity, till the end of day, and then a lot of tending indeed.
A lovely poem on a lovely subject
August 4th, 2019 11:44
Do Try -
Neville said:
A flies sad demise is see & all despite your efforts to revive it.. maybe shoulda landed on ya biscuit...
stirred but not shaken tis truly heart breaken...... bless ya Fay....
Neville
August 4th, 2019 04:39
Neville said:
A flies sad demise is see & all despite your efforts to revive it.. maybe shoulda landed on ya biscuit...
stirred but not shaken tis truly heart breaken...... bless ya Fay....
Neville
August 4th, 2019 04:39
Love\'s Call.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A superb write and interesting look at love.
Keep writing
FineB
August 3rd, 2019 16:54
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A superb write and interesting look at love.
Keep writing
FineB
August 3rd, 2019 16:54
Shyless.
Neville said:
this is bloomin excellent... and I dont use the e word often.... love the language... or the L word either.... and to cap the whole thing off... tis more than just a token tug in the direction of erotica.......
Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:34
Neville said:
this is bloomin excellent... and I dont use the e word often.... love the language... or the L word either.... and to cap the whole thing off... tis more than just a token tug in the direction of erotica.......
Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:34
Tended.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY (BRIAN HERE) Thanks for caring ! We love your *Tone Poems* they are always a perfect compliment to the Picture ! I copied the picture & poem and used it today (hope thats OK !) - together with my own - at our last Pensioners Lunch & Poetry reading til September ! They loved the nostalgia !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 2nd, 2019 15:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY (BRIAN HERE) Thanks for caring ! We love your *Tone Poems* they are always a perfect compliment to the Picture ! I copied the picture & poem and used it today (hope thats OK !) - together with my own - at our last Pensioners Lunch & Poetry reading til September ! They loved the nostalgia !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 2nd, 2019 15:37
Tended.
moordykspot2 said:
What a superb descriptive piece. Loved it thank you
August 2nd, 2019 13:43
moordykspot2 said:
What a superb descriptive piece. Loved it thank you
August 2nd, 2019 13:43
Tended.
dusk arising said:
Bah gum lass tha\'s dun it agin... boil kettle an put pot on t\'ob for i\'s avvin steel bath down afore t\'fire forra reet good scrubbin.
Peace at the end of the day for hard working farm folk who lived and worked by the available light of the seasons.
August 2nd, 2019 07:38
dusk arising said:
Bah gum lass tha\'s dun it agin... boil kettle an put pot on t\'ob for i\'s avvin steel bath down afore t\'fire forra reet good scrubbin.
Peace at the end of the day for hard working farm folk who lived and worked by the available light of the seasons.
August 2nd, 2019 07:38
Tended.
Neville said:
Your words read more atmospheric and even prettier than the image you have used to accompany them..
delightful is an oft abused and misused term, but this truly is delightful... Neville
August 2nd, 2019 03:13
Neville said:
Your words read more atmospheric and even prettier than the image you have used to accompany them..
delightful is an oft abused and misused term, but this truly is delightful... Neville
August 2nd, 2019 03:13
Unwrapped.
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
was opening the poem
and seeing words,
Composed with love and joy
Where Fay led her pen.
August 2nd, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
was opening the poem
and seeing words,
Composed with love and joy
Where Fay led her pen.
August 2nd, 2019 01:10
Unwrapped.
dusk arising said:
How love makes the world spin for lovers..... life at the excitement end and lasting memories...... With such memories one knows they really took part in what is probably lifes most exciting and rewarding of experiences.
August 1st, 2019 11:38
dusk arising said:
How love makes the world spin for lovers..... life at the excitement end and lasting memories...... With such memories one knows they really took part in what is probably lifes most exciting and rewarding of experiences.
August 1st, 2019 11:38
Unwrapped.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the PHOTO FAY ~ and yes it does stir ones MUSE ! Angela & I love all your LOVE POEMS because they come direct from your Loving Heart and Loving Experience !
Verse 1. Made us smile ~ we have booked a Four-poster for our Honeymoon ! V 2. Echoes of passion to come ! V 3. Does one Skinny Dip on ones Honeymoon ? Spanish Honeymoon Suits have King Size baths with the taps in the middle ~ skinny soaping ! V 4. Covert Rapture indeed but for *Our Eyes Only* ~ sorry to disapoint but nothing on YOUR-TUBE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 1st, 2019 10:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the PHOTO FAY ~ and yes it does stir ones MUSE ! Angela & I love all your LOVE POEMS because they come direct from your Loving Heart and Loving Experience !
Verse 1. Made us smile ~ we have booked a Four-poster for our Honeymoon ! V 2. Echoes of passion to come ! V 3. Does one Skinny Dip on ones Honeymoon ? Spanish Honeymoon Suits have King Size baths with the taps in the middle ~ skinny soaping ! V 4. Covert Rapture indeed but for *Our Eyes Only* ~ sorry to disapoint but nothing on YOUR-TUBE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 1st, 2019 10:51
Unwrapped.
Michael Edwards said:
An uplifting write Fay - now where is that skinny dipping taking place?
August 1st, 2019 05:38
Michael Edwards said:
An uplifting write Fay - now where is that skinny dipping taking place?
August 1st, 2019 05:38
Unwrapped.
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is one hell of a love poem for sure... darn near perfect, and then some....
Neville
August 1st, 2019 03:04
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is one hell of a love poem for sure... darn near perfect, and then some....
Neville
August 1st, 2019 03:04
Distracted.
Christina8 said:
The quote was wonderful and your poem simply magnificent! Enjoyed the read very much!
July 31st, 2019 21:27
Christina8 said:
The quote was wonderful and your poem simply magnificent! Enjoyed the read very much!
July 31st, 2019 21:27
Distracted.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA : Angela here ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY. Love your analogy between *A Boat adrift* and the DISTRACTIONS we face every day. I have been sailing here most weekends and the winds can be very unpredictable and Brian has warned me never to go out on my own ! There are many other distractions as well. My JOB is all about being focussed and giving the right advice & treatment to my Clients who want full & pain free MOBILITY asap. I also have a responsibility to my 5 female Maori Students to teach them how to understand X-rays ~ Response to touch & flexings and the ability to make the exercise & recovery Programme specific and appropriate to each client ! There is no room for distraction ! As PHYSIOS we have to be a Jack of All Joints & Muscles and Master of ONE - such as Hand - Foot - Leg - Arm - Neck - Spine ~ Pelvis etc. For the last two years I have specialised on the Hand ! Manual dexterity is so so important as you know ! It will take another Year of Study & Practice to be certified as a Manual Physiotherapist and assigned to specific patients as well as a General Physio & also a General Tutor. I guess about 1 in a 100 Physio Clients need specialist treatment with Manual Physiotherapy. There have been several successful HAND TRANSPLANTS but I have not worked with any ! My own hands are very important in my Job so I always wear light gloves when Gardening and heavy gloves when using Power Tools etc !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love in the Spirit ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙
July 31st, 2019 18:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA : Angela here ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY. Love your analogy between *A Boat adrift* and the DISTRACTIONS we face every day. I have been sailing here most weekends and the winds can be very unpredictable and Brian has warned me never to go out on my own ! There are many other distractions as well. My JOB is all about being focussed and giving the right advice & treatment to my Clients who want full & pain free MOBILITY asap. I also have a responsibility to my 5 female Maori Students to teach them how to understand X-rays ~ Response to touch & flexings and the ability to make the exercise & recovery Programme specific and appropriate to each client ! There is no room for distraction ! As PHYSIOS we have to be a Jack of All Joints & Muscles and Master of ONE - such as Hand - Foot - Leg - Arm - Neck - Spine ~ Pelvis etc. For the last two years I have specialised on the Hand ! Manual dexterity is so so important as you know ! It will take another Year of Study & Practice to be certified as a Manual Physiotherapist and assigned to specific patients as well as a General Physio & also a General Tutor. I guess about 1 in a 100 Physio Clients need specialist treatment with Manual Physiotherapy. There have been several successful HAND TRANSPLANTS but I have not worked with any ! My own hands are very important in my Job so I always wear light gloves when Gardening and heavy gloves when using Power Tools etc !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love in the Spirit ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙
July 31st, 2019 18:43
Distracted.
dusk arising said:
I came back to your poem tonite for a re-read and i have to say its really a moving write. I know exactly where it comes from and you convey a predicament more delicately and poetically than i could ever aspire to.
Hence it simply has to be a favourite.
July 31st, 2019 16:36
dusk arising said:
I came back to your poem tonite for a re-read and i have to say its really a moving write. I know exactly where it comes from and you convey a predicament more delicately and poetically than i could ever aspire to.
Hence it simply has to be a favourite.
July 31st, 2019 16:36
Distracted.
Suresh said:
I am like a dingy in a storm, hopelessly lost, but not in love.....
July 31st, 2019 12:54
Suresh said:
I am like a dingy in a storm, hopelessly lost, but not in love.....
July 31st, 2019 12:54
Distracted.
moordykspot2 said:
A truly meaningful piece of writing young Fay. I am a trifle Low today and your poem finishing with it\'s optimistic outlook was inspirational. thank you
July 31st, 2019 05:49
moordykspot2 said:
A truly meaningful piece of writing young Fay. I am a trifle Low today and your poem finishing with it\'s optimistic outlook was inspirational. thank you
July 31st, 2019 05:49
Distracted.
Goldfinch60 said:
WOW!
I was totally mesmerised by this,
May that song go on forever.
July 31st, 2019 04:52
Goldfinch60 said:
WOW!
I was totally mesmerised by this,
May that song go on forever.
July 31st, 2019 04:52
Distracted.
dusk arising said:
You have just inspired my poem for tomorrow which i gladly dedicate to you and is my response to this marvellous piece today.
Let your heart sing like a bird perched next to a cage who\'s door is now open wide.
July 31st, 2019 04:50
dusk arising said:
You have just inspired my poem for tomorrow which i gladly dedicate to you and is my response to this marvellous piece today.
Let your heart sing like a bird perched next to a cage who\'s door is now open wide.
July 31st, 2019 04:50
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