Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Ours.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Those friendships we have in our lives are so meaningful.
August 21st, 2019 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Those friendships we have in our lives are so meaningful.
August 21st, 2019 02:31
Ours.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, friendships and loves may not always be on a \'laying down your life\' level. We know different people at different levels, some just as casual friends.
August 21st, 2019 02:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, friendships and loves may not always be on a \'laying down your life\' level. We know different people at different levels, some just as casual friends.
August 21st, 2019 02:06
Trouble.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here (6:30 am Wednesday !) Loved the POEM another CAD of High Estate not willing to face the consequences of His thoughtlessly sown seed *Such men are nunerous*. It happens of course and several times within both our extended Families. Brian U& I have had lovers in the past but have always loved *circumspectly* without conception. Because of the positions we hold in the Community (and Church !) Brian and I make doubly sure that we avoid pregnancy - but we would (in due course) love to have a BABY - watch this space. In the 18th & early 19th C I am told that concepion *out of wedlock* was a disgrace resulting in dangerous *back street abortions* and *shotgun - often unhappy - marriages* You empathetic poem plucked many strings ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 20th, 2019 13:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here (6:30 am Wednesday !) Loved the POEM another CAD of High Estate not willing to face the consequences of His thoughtlessly sown seed *Such men are nunerous*. It happens of course and several times within both our extended Families. Brian U& I have had lovers in the past but have always loved *circumspectly* without conception. Because of the positions we hold in the Community (and Church !) Brian and I make doubly sure that we avoid pregnancy - but we would (in due course) love to have a BABY - watch this space. In the 18th & early 19th C I am told that concepion *out of wedlock* was a disgrace resulting in dangerous *back street abortions* and *shotgun - often unhappy - marriages* You empathetic poem plucked many strings ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 20th, 2019 13:50
Trouble.
dusk arising said:
Oh I get letters like these every other week!
Away wench of loose ways and tarry not upon such imaginings. Look ye to those, your favoured, drunkard lifters of the tankard and your skirts in the foul ale house of your father.
Just thought a horrible response here would be such a contrast.
I know your piece is in an authentic classical style and brings to my mind how indirect such personal communication was \'in them days\'.
Cor - to call a spade a spade or what. Oi cock - you\'ve got me up the duff! Meet me at the vestry at 6 o\'clock.
August 20th, 2019 05:02
dusk arising said:
Oh I get letters like these every other week!
Away wench of loose ways and tarry not upon such imaginings. Look ye to those, your favoured, drunkard lifters of the tankard and your skirts in the foul ale house of your father.
Just thought a horrible response here would be such a contrast.
I know your piece is in an authentic classical style and brings to my mind how indirect such personal communication was \'in them days\'.
Cor - to call a spade a spade or what. Oi cock - you\'ve got me up the duff! Meet me at the vestry at 6 o\'clock.
August 20th, 2019 05:02
Trouble.
orchidee said:
Absolutely outrageous in those days, methinks! A fine write Fay.
August 20th, 2019 03:17
orchidee said:
Absolutely outrageous in those days, methinks! A fine write Fay.
August 20th, 2019 03:17
Trouble.
Neville said:
I am mightily impreffed and verily fo my fine lady and poetess...
and what a sorry tale is told hereupon this page.... tis true... and sadly...... Yours respectfully ... N
August 20th, 2019 02:21
Neville said:
I am mightily impreffed and verily fo my fine lady and poetess...
and what a sorry tale is told hereupon this page.... tis true... and sadly...... Yours respectfully ... N
August 20th, 2019 02:21
Such and When.
Suresh said:
Put it in a different language, and it will Be a serene poem for any fishing village around the globe.
August 19th, 2019 20:41
Suresh said:
Put it in a different language, and it will Be a serene poem for any fishing village around the globe.
August 19th, 2019 20:41
Such and When.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE 8am Tuesday - just waking up ! Thanks FAY for a very special Poem ! We are at our best when we are waxing lyrical about our Homes our Lives our Jobs our Lovers or our Hobbies ! BRIAN writes about Science & the Environment and I about Sailing in Auckland Harbour ! You share your love of your Beloved Corwall ! Verse 1. Introduces us to the awakening of Cornish Nature. V 2. To the Cornish Fisherfolk preparing to set out for the days catch continued in V 3.
Have you always lived in Cornwall (a Magic County) or did you retire there ? Thanks for sharing such a gem !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
August 19th, 2019 15:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE 8am Tuesday - just waking up ! Thanks FAY for a very special Poem ! We are at our best when we are waxing lyrical about our Homes our Lives our Jobs our Lovers or our Hobbies ! BRIAN writes about Science & the Environment and I about Sailing in Auckland Harbour ! You share your love of your Beloved Corwall ! Verse 1. Introduces us to the awakening of Cornish Nature. V 2. To the Cornish Fisherfolk preparing to set out for the days catch continued in V 3.
Have you always lived in Cornwall (a Magic County) or did you retire there ? Thanks for sharing such a gem !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
August 19th, 2019 15:04
Such and When.
dusk arising said:
I hear the strains of Cornishmen\'s voices raised in \'no hopers, jokers and rogues\' as rises the sun and village life begins.
You create such atmosphere for a creative mind to romance.
August 19th, 2019 07:09
dusk arising said:
I hear the strains of Cornishmen\'s voices raised in \'no hopers, jokers and rogues\' as rises the sun and village life begins.
You create such atmosphere for a creative mind to romance.
August 19th, 2019 07:09
Such and When.
kevin browne said:
Tottally love this, Fay. You\'ve bought the aroma of the Cornish coast to our hearts, especially mine because my first ever job was working on his fishing trawlers. We had two boats and worked westwards of Portland bill both for scolloping and fish trawling also. Great read and a reminder how beautiful the South West of Englands coast and sea really is. It\'s a thriving community all over...
August 19th, 2019 05:16
kevin browne said:
Tottally love this, Fay. You\'ve bought the aroma of the Cornish coast to our hearts, especially mine because my first ever job was working on his fishing trawlers. We had two boats and worked westwards of Portland bill both for scolloping and fish trawling also. Great read and a reminder how beautiful the South West of Englands coast and sea really is. It\'s a thriving community all over...
August 19th, 2019 05:16
Such and When.
Neville said:
the perfect picture of a Cornish coastal village waking up to a new day............. lovely tis too....... Neville
August 19th, 2019 03:27
Neville said:
the perfect picture of a Cornish coastal village waking up to a new day............. lovely tis too....... Neville
August 19th, 2019 03:27
Show Me.
Neville said:
I know it has been said several times before, but I think Amen say\'s it all ..... N x
August 18th, 2019 03:48
Neville said:
I know it has been said several times before, but I think Amen say\'s it all ..... N x
August 18th, 2019 03:48
Flight.
Suresh said:
I believe we humans have the longest nurturing stance - at least 18 years, which in the last decade has become even longer.
I have always believed that the sooner the children become independent, the sooner the parents are released of their responsibility.
As always your poem, exquisitely written
August 16th, 2019 15:44
Suresh said:
I believe we humans have the longest nurturing stance - at least 18 years, which in the last decade has become even longer.
I have always believed that the sooner the children become independent, the sooner the parents are released of their responsibility.
As always your poem, exquisitely written
August 16th, 2019 15:44
Flight.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, we must let them go their own way but always be there for them.
August 16th, 2019 15:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, we must let them go their own way but always be there for them.
August 16th, 2019 15:17
Flight.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY - ANGELA here. Its 7am (SATURDAY) and I like to rise early on SAT & SUN to extend leisure time ! See tomorrows POEM ! Young People (for economic reasons) are staying home longer and getting married later (Brian will be 36 and I 32 !). We both have our own flats but live close enough to our Parents - for Sunday Lunch and to interact with our Family Pets. After we are married (next year) we will of course BUY or RENT our FIRST HOME. We still regard our Parental Homes as HOME and we still have STUFF there !
Verse by verse your very elegant Poem (where does you vocabulary come from ?) describes the inevitable *Cutting of the Apron Strings* and *Leaving the Family Nest* ! Your last doublet will ring many MPS bells !
Whether fur- flesh or feather .........
Successful flight will always remember HOME !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 16th, 2019 14:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY - ANGELA here. Its 7am (SATURDAY) and I like to rise early on SAT & SUN to extend leisure time ! See tomorrows POEM ! Young People (for economic reasons) are staying home longer and getting married later (Brian will be 36 and I 32 !). We both have our own flats but live close enough to our Parents - for Sunday Lunch and to interact with our Family Pets. After we are married (next year) we will of course BUY or RENT our FIRST HOME. We still regard our Parental Homes as HOME and we still have STUFF there !
Verse by verse your very elegant Poem (where does you vocabulary come from ?) describes the inevitable *Cutting of the Apron Strings* and *Leaving the Family Nest* ! Your last doublet will ring many MPS bells !
Whether fur- flesh or feather .........
Successful flight will always remember HOME !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 16th, 2019 14:10
Flight.
dusk arising said:
So it ever was. To mind came the wonderful BBC Serengeti program where the mother cheetah watched her offspring bring down the gazelle just as she had taught them... she then turned and disappeared. The law of the wild and as nature intended.
Though i was there to catch and encourage I proudly stand next to a tall son who did it his way with his learned scars about him.
Every 16 yr old\'s parent should have a copy of your piece today Fay.
August 16th, 2019 13:25
dusk arising said:
So it ever was. To mind came the wonderful BBC Serengeti program where the mother cheetah watched her offspring bring down the gazelle just as she had taught them... she then turned and disappeared. The law of the wild and as nature intended.
Though i was there to catch and encourage I proudly stand next to a tall son who did it his way with his learned scars about him.
Every 16 yr old\'s parent should have a copy of your piece today Fay.
August 16th, 2019 13:25
Sensuality.
dusk arising said:
and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... cheated!
Never found professional lady dancers feminine enough to appeal to be honest. Sexy and sensual yes, but something missing.
Now a good dancer with her partner down at the club can be something else, as she carefully avoids stepping on all the watching fella\'s tongues.
August 16th, 2019 12:29
dusk arising said:
and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... cheated!
Never found professional lady dancers feminine enough to appeal to be honest. Sexy and sensual yes, but something missing.
Now a good dancer with her partner down at the club can be something else, as she carefully avoids stepping on all the watching fella\'s tongues.
August 16th, 2019 12:29
Flight.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This asks so many questions of the human heart Fay it truly is an amazing piece.
The struggle with our feelings over what\'s best for the next generation.
This encapsulates lifes fine balance for me.
Bloody brilliant...
August 16th, 2019 09:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This asks so many questions of the human heart Fay it truly is an amazing piece.
The struggle with our feelings over what\'s best for the next generation.
This encapsulates lifes fine balance for me.
Bloody brilliant...
August 16th, 2019 09:16
Flight.
Neville said:
This has got your signature written right the way through my friend..
a great poem in every respect.... N
August 16th, 2019 07:18
Neville said:
This has got your signature written right the way through my friend..
a great poem in every respect.... N
August 16th, 2019 07:18
Sensuality.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, i could see the gyrations in my mind.
August 16th, 2019 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, i could see the gyrations in my mind.
August 16th, 2019 00:28
Sensuality.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi FAY - Angela here 8:30 am Friday ! Loved the Poem & the Picture. Belly Dancing is by Title & Tickle Sensuous - love to watch it & try it. Flamenco is also sensuous but more subtle. We have Moroccan influences in Andalucia and the exposed Navel (with an embedded Gemstone !) is considered both Sensual & Sacred ! I love to watch the reactions of Brian (and other red-blooded men) as the Dance proceeds it enlivens all the senses and leaves nothing to the imagination ! I am much too modest to ever be a Professional Belly Dancer ! Brian is very proud when I dance Flamenco but would draw the line @ Belly Dancing especially as we are engaged to be married ! Thanks for sharing a very elegant Poem - in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 15:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi FAY - Angela here 8:30 am Friday ! Loved the Poem & the Picture. Belly Dancing is by Title & Tickle Sensuous - love to watch it & try it. Flamenco is also sensuous but more subtle. We have Moroccan influences in Andalucia and the exposed Navel (with an embedded Gemstone !) is considered both Sensual & Sacred ! I love to watch the reactions of Brian (and other red-blooded men) as the Dance proceeds it enlivens all the senses and leaves nothing to the imagination ! I am much too modest to ever be a Professional Belly Dancer ! Brian is very proud when I dance Flamenco but would draw the line @ Belly Dancing especially as we are engaged to be married ! Thanks for sharing a very elegant Poem - in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 15:48
Sensuality.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
What an awesome, amazing write.
The beautiful Britt Ekland defined beauty as sensuality.
She said in a interview along the lines irregardless of our physical appearance the underlying factor is sensuality. If we are sensual we are beautiful.
Your poem shows that within a person being sensual lies a breathtaking beauty all ita own.
Keep writing FineB
August 15th, 2019 13:24
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
What an awesome, amazing write.
The beautiful Britt Ekland defined beauty as sensuality.
She said in a interview along the lines irregardless of our physical appearance the underlying factor is sensuality. If we are sensual we are beautiful.
Your poem shows that within a person being sensual lies a breathtaking beauty all ita own.
Keep writing FineB
August 15th, 2019 13:24
Sensuality.
Suresh said:
You have truly captured the rythm of the Eastern dancing, where the female displays her art for the pleasure of the opposite sex, I dearly love the rythm of the Latin dances, rumba, samba, paso doble where the movement of the couple is erotically sensual.
Love the poem
August 15th, 2019 09:58
Suresh said:
You have truly captured the rythm of the Eastern dancing, where the female displays her art for the pleasure of the opposite sex, I dearly love the rythm of the Latin dances, rumba, samba, paso doble where the movement of the couple is erotically sensual.
Love the poem
August 15th, 2019 09:58
Sensuality.
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s not fair - here\'s me about to have my knee done and you foist those thoughts in my excited brain box. Down Edwards!!! i
August 15th, 2019 07:38
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s not fair - here\'s me about to have my knee done and you foist those thoughts in my excited brain box. Down Edwards!!! i
August 15th, 2019 07:38
Sensuality.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It all in the heat Fay
Excellent write
August 15th, 2019 04:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It all in the heat Fay
Excellent write
August 15th, 2019 04:03
Sensuality.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Fido my watchdog won\'t let me have any \'carnality\'! lol.
August 15th, 2019 02:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Fido my watchdog won\'t let me have any \'carnality\'! lol.
August 15th, 2019 02:33
Sensuality.
Neville said:
Tis amazing how they do that ..
Tis amazing how you capture movement so dear Fay..
I\'m more a hand jive kinda guy..... N
August 15th, 2019 02:13
Neville said:
Tis amazing how they do that ..
Tis amazing how you capture movement so dear Fay..
I\'m more a hand jive kinda guy..... N
August 15th, 2019 02:13
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