Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Suave.
Neville said:
the view is to die for...
another autumn..... how they do come round....... a majestic scene you create here in words...
the tools of a poet... Neville
September 5th, 2019 03:40
Neville said:
the view is to die for...
another autumn..... how they do come round....... a majestic scene you create here in words...
the tools of a poet... Neville
September 5th, 2019 03:40
Suave.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, those browns and golds will soon change to reds and oranges and autumn will paint nature with its beautiful colours.
September 5th, 2019 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, those browns and golds will soon change to reds and oranges and autumn will paint nature with its beautiful colours.
September 5th, 2019 03:05
Suave.
dusk arising said:
Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade with you through those avenues of autumnal beauty, delighting in each step, a debonaire march of pleasure.
Autumn - the colours of sun brought to earth.
September 5th, 2019 02:57
dusk arising said:
Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade with you through those avenues of autumnal beauty, delighting in each step, a debonaire march of pleasure.
Autumn - the colours of sun brought to earth.
September 5th, 2019 02:57
Ink-Bitten.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for a very elegant Poem to compliment a very elegant Picture. My Poem tomorrow *MEMORIES* was also triggered by the picture attached !
I sometimes wake in the night with an ODE in my mind - I write it down for later use. My MUSE is triggered by Pictures - Scenes & Events ! Capturing a POEM is just the beginning - honeing it - polishing it - collaborating with BRIAN - to publish on MPS takes ages and sometimes it NEVER crystallises ! To be *Born a Poet* is a great responsibility - greater than most appreciate - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 4th, 2019 16:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for a very elegant Poem to compliment a very elegant Picture. My Poem tomorrow *MEMORIES* was also triggered by the picture attached !
I sometimes wake in the night with an ODE in my mind - I write it down for later use. My MUSE is triggered by Pictures - Scenes & Events ! Capturing a POEM is just the beginning - honeing it - polishing it - collaborating with BRIAN - to publish on MPS takes ages and sometimes it NEVER crystallises ! To be *Born a Poet* is a great responsibility - greater than most appreciate - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 4th, 2019 16:43
Ink-Bitten.
Suresh said:
...a rarity to recall your past life, and once again pen your thoughts, enliven them, then and now...
September 4th, 2019 10:24
Suresh said:
...a rarity to recall your past life, and once again pen your thoughts, enliven them, then and now...
September 4th, 2019 10:24
Ink-Bitten.
dusk arising said:
Yeay dear Charlotte whence i didst first sight ye \'pon that sweet day, your quill o\'er parchment, adventure beset my amour.
What nonesense do you tarry above when my spoken word upon your delicate lobes would free your quill\'s restraint. Though thoughts, these only be, within my smitten mind I most fervently hold the desire of a mention, when parchment sees again your tender touch.
Look what you do.... you\'re so inspiring Fay.
September 4th, 2019 05:35
dusk arising said:
Yeay dear Charlotte whence i didst first sight ye \'pon that sweet day, your quill o\'er parchment, adventure beset my amour.
What nonesense do you tarry above when my spoken word upon your delicate lobes would free your quill\'s restraint. Though thoughts, these only be, within my smitten mind I most fervently hold the desire of a mention, when parchment sees again your tender touch.
Look what you do.... you\'re so inspiring Fay.
September 4th, 2019 05:35
Ink-Bitten.
Goldfinch60 said:
Ah, Calliope has been in your mind and you have scribed these wonderful words.
September 4th, 2019 04:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Ah, Calliope has been in your mind and you have scribed these wonderful words.
September 4th, 2019 04:55
Ink-Bitten.
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely piece Fay - and it maketh the poetry in art.
September 4th, 2019 04:36
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely piece Fay - and it maketh the poetry in art.
September 4th, 2019 04:36
Ink-Bitten.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The answer to the question in the author comment box is a resounding...YES! I think she’s penning your magical words onto paper for us to enjoy the read...which I most certainly did! That ink flows like a gentle river!
An exceptional write indeed!
All praise for thee,
my dear poetess!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 03:55
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The answer to the question in the author comment box is a resounding...YES! I think she’s penning your magical words onto paper for us to enjoy the read...which I most certainly did! That ink flows like a gentle river!
An exceptional write indeed!
All praise for thee,
my dear poetess!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 03:55
Ink-Bitten.
Neville said:
Ah\' yes.. a poets poem poemed to perfection and pinned to the page with blutack held tween fingers like a weavers both quick and cool.... I never stumbled upon these words, I went hunting for the,......... Neville
September 4th, 2019 03:54
Neville said:
Ah\' yes.. a poets poem poemed to perfection and pinned to the page with blutack held tween fingers like a weavers both quick and cool.... I never stumbled upon these words, I went hunting for the,......... Neville
September 4th, 2019 03:54
Ink-Bitten.
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like she could have written this fine poem!
September 4th, 2019 03:49
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like she could have written this fine poem!
September 4th, 2019 03:49
Morphing.
dusk arising said:
She stood on the bridge at midnight
Looking prim and somewhat dour
She offered me her favours
For 10/6d per half an hour.
What you see ain\'t always what you get.
September 4th, 2019 02:13
dusk arising said:
She stood on the bridge at midnight
Looking prim and somewhat dour
She offered me her favours
For 10/6d per half an hour.
What you see ain\'t always what you get.
September 4th, 2019 02:13
Morphing.
Neville said:
Said it before but I knead to say it again.. absolutely delicious ... and good lookin too.........
September 3rd, 2019 11:33
Neville said:
Said it before but I knead to say it again.. absolutely delicious ... and good lookin too.........
September 3rd, 2019 11:33
Morphing.
Michael Edwards said:
A great smile - wasn\'t expecting this when I clicked on ..!
September 3rd, 2019 10:39
Michael Edwards said:
A great smile - wasn\'t expecting this when I clicked on ..!
September 3rd, 2019 10:39
Morphing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for Sharing FAY ~ Loved the PICTURE and the POEM it generated ! I can speak from experience ! ANGELA is a Smart - Strong - Sensual - Woman. She stimulates All my Senses and never ever disappoints ~ Taste and know the sensuality of LOVE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE Brian & Angela
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check my SONNET for FIDO !
September 3rd, 2019 06:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for Sharing FAY ~ Loved the PICTURE and the POEM it generated ! I can speak from experience ! ANGELA is a Smart - Strong - Sensual - Woman. She stimulates All my Senses and never ever disappoints ~ Taste and know the sensuality of LOVE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE Brian & Angela
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check my SONNET for FIDO !
September 3rd, 2019 06:02
Today\'s Poem.
Neville said:
and just as your little birdie seems to have done.. you my poetic friend have equally succeeded ....... N
September 3rd, 2019 03:42
Neville said:
and just as your little birdie seems to have done.. you my poetic friend have equally succeeded ....... N
September 3rd, 2019 03:42
Today\'s Poem.
kevin browne said:
Your poem reflects back thousands of years as the bird flies above, to taste their prey and to diversify into different species in which we marvel at every day. You\'ve captured a natures thriving environment and to the connection in the lives these amazing creature which we adore. Thanks for sharing this warm-hearted poem. I love it, too...
September 3rd, 2019 01:34
kevin browne said:
Your poem reflects back thousands of years as the bird flies above, to taste their prey and to diversify into different species in which we marvel at every day. You\'ve captured a natures thriving environment and to the connection in the lives these amazing creature which we adore. Thanks for sharing this warm-hearted poem. I love it, too...
September 3rd, 2019 01:34
Journey Concluded.
Chris Yellow said:
Playing the game can be so painful, you need to get so vulnerable to have any chance, I feel your pain.
September 2nd, 2019 07:44
Chris Yellow said:
Playing the game can be so painful, you need to get so vulnerable to have any chance, I feel your pain.
September 2nd, 2019 07:44
The Journey Continued.
Chris Yellow said:
It is fantastic how we loose all wit and fall into such clever nature devices as our own lips, hips, cleavage... I don\'t think I allow myself to admit it, though.
September 2nd, 2019 07:40
Chris Yellow said:
It is fantastic how we loose all wit and fall into such clever nature devices as our own lips, hips, cleavage... I don\'t think I allow myself to admit it, though.
September 2nd, 2019 07:40
The Journey.
Chris Yellow said:
It is scary, the trapping effect of the appealing gender. Loved your description.
September 2nd, 2019 07:36
Chris Yellow said:
It is scary, the trapping effect of the appealing gender. Loved your description.
September 2nd, 2019 07:36
Today\'s Poem.
Chris Yellow said:
Oh, nature.. the eternal muse, such perfection and intricate simplicity drives an attentive audience to hunger in marvel.
September 2nd, 2019 07:09
Chris Yellow said:
Oh, nature.. the eternal muse, such perfection and intricate simplicity drives an attentive audience to hunger in marvel.
September 2nd, 2019 07:09
Today\'s Poem.
dusk arising said:
Yours is the dawn Fay. Time after time you give us another facet of its beauty.
Today one of our common wild birds sadly in decline, much overlooked. These brisk little chaps and chapettes suddenly appear and are gone in a flash. A pleasure to catch one taking its morning dew. Lovely picture too.
We used to put out stale bread for them as a child and there would be a huge flight of hedge sparrows and house sparrows, starlings and blackbirds. Rarely seen in such numbers today.
September 2nd, 2019 05:24
dusk arising said:
Yours is the dawn Fay. Time after time you give us another facet of its beauty.
Today one of our common wild birds sadly in decline, much overlooked. These brisk little chaps and chapettes suddenly appear and are gone in a flash. A pleasure to catch one taking its morning dew. Lovely picture too.
We used to put out stale bread for them as a child and there would be a huge flight of hedge sparrows and house sparrows, starlings and blackbirds. Rarely seen in such numbers today.
September 2nd, 2019 05:24
Today\'s Poem.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (9pm Monday - nice supper of NZ LAMBBURGERS !) Its my experience too FAY - That in all of NATURE there is always a POEM trying to PENETRATE our meditating MUSE. Love Nature - Love YOU for releasing another of Natures hidden gems - AMEN ! Love SPARRERS - Thanks for sharing the PHOTO !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 2nd, 2019 04:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (9pm Monday - nice supper of NZ LAMBBURGERS !) Its my experience too FAY - That in all of NATURE there is always a POEM trying to PENETRATE our meditating MUSE. Love Nature - Love YOU for releasing another of Natures hidden gems - AMEN ! Love SPARRERS - Thanks for sharing the PHOTO !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 2nd, 2019 04:20
Journey Concluded.
Goldfinch60 said:
So your wiles did mot work this time but maybe the next time.
Wonderful write Fay, this trilogy had me falling into its intriguing story.
August 31st, 2019 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
So your wiles did mot work this time but maybe the next time.
Wonderful write Fay, this trilogy had me falling into its intriguing story.
August 31st, 2019 00:04
Journey Concluded.
Christina8 said:
Fay, A delightful trilogy ending! You certainly have a way with words! Just wonderful!
August 30th, 2019 10:08
Christina8 said:
Fay, A delightful trilogy ending! You certainly have a way with words! Just wonderful!
August 30th, 2019 10:08
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
