Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Fulfilled.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A diamond of a verse Fau
Well presented
August 9th, 2019 03:06
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A diamond of a verse Fau
Well presented
August 9th, 2019 03:06
Unreal.
Christina8 said:
Your writing almost put me in a trance as I read...so beautiful, Fay! Absolutely lovely!!
August 8th, 2019 19:03
Christina8 said:
Your writing almost put me in a trance as I read...so beautiful, Fay! Absolutely lovely!!
August 8th, 2019 19:03
Otherness.
moordykspot2 said:
Oh my word Superb memory restorer my friend A finel scripted piece of verse. I think of my first Girlfriend always has remained special to me. AND bless her still in touch to this day
Thank you Fay for allowing me to read
August 8th, 2019 15:28
moordykspot2 said:
Oh my word Superb memory restorer my friend A finel scripted piece of verse. I think of my first Girlfriend always has remained special to me. AND bless her still in touch to this day
Thank you Fay for allowing me to read
August 8th, 2019 15:28
Unreal.
dusk arising said:
moody Fay.. moody
that big ole moon\'s reflection plays a hide n seek game with the clouds upon the living lake. I want to see the flash of colour, ... yes there it is!... before i set off home to the root of that whispy smokes source and my loved ones.
every poet tells a story. yours draw me in.
August 8th, 2019 13:33
dusk arising said:
moody Fay.. moody
that big ole moon\'s reflection plays a hide n seek game with the clouds upon the living lake. I want to see the flash of colour, ... yes there it is!... before i set off home to the root of that whispy smokes source and my loved ones.
every poet tells a story. yours draw me in.
August 8th, 2019 13:33
Unreal.
Neville said:
You have just gone and done it again Fay... another absolute work of poetic art......
Respect & hats off to you......
Neville
August 8th, 2019 04:05
Neville said:
You have just gone and done it again Fay... another absolute work of poetic art......
Respect & hats off to you......
Neville
August 8th, 2019 04:05
Unreal.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay.
I recall a poem I did about a trout, an old trout. I mean KP. I wish I never had married her! (That\'s cruel Orchi. heehee).
August 8th, 2019 03:26
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay.
I recall a poem I did about a trout, an old trout. I mean KP. I wish I never had married her! (That\'s cruel Orchi. heehee).
August 8th, 2019 03:26
Unreal.
sylviasearcher said:
Such other worldly beauty you have crafted here 💜
August 8th, 2019 03:24
sylviasearcher said:
Such other worldly beauty you have crafted here 💜
August 8th, 2019 03:24
Otherness.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a superb write Fay, those times of innocence portrayed in your wonderful words.
The artwork is so meaningful with your words. It is called the \'The Lovers Tryst\' by Adelaide Salles-Wagner, an artist of whom I had never heard.
August 8th, 2019 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
What a superb write Fay, those times of innocence portrayed in your wonderful words.
The artwork is so meaningful with your words. It is called the \'The Lovers Tryst\' by Adelaide Salles-Wagner, an artist of whom I had never heard.
August 8th, 2019 01:14
Otherness.
Suresh said:
There is complexity in how you sow together the simplest of words, and for certain takes a reader on an imaginative journey
August 7th, 2019 11:27
Suresh said:
There is complexity in how you sow together the simplest of words, and for certain takes a reader on an imaginative journey
August 7th, 2019 11:27
Otherness.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your exceptional write transported me to way back when...
when I was holding my first love’s hand and the experience of our many firsts!
A blissful reading!
Thank you for sharing your talents!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 09:08
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your exceptional write transported me to way back when...
when I was holding my first love’s hand and the experience of our many firsts!
A blissful reading!
Thank you for sharing your talents!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 09:08
Otherness.
Michael Edwards said:
Me too - back into childhood - a gentle yet poignant write.
August 7th, 2019 08:11
Michael Edwards said:
Me too - back into childhood - a gentle yet poignant write.
August 7th, 2019 08:11
Otherness.
dusk arising said:
Again i journeyed with your words. Today you took me to the path along the Avon in Stratford where one afternoon words became hard to find and strolling sideways glances melted into mutual long held eye contact.... the rest is poetry.
Today your gentle verses place poetry into the fumblings of our youth and the beauty of discovery is relived here.
On re-reading this i have again to visit my favourite\'s \'in-box\' because it\'s flippin brilliant gal!
August 7th, 2019 05:24
dusk arising said:
Again i journeyed with your words. Today you took me to the path along the Avon in Stratford where one afternoon words became hard to find and strolling sideways glances melted into mutual long held eye contact.... the rest is poetry.
Today your gentle verses place poetry into the fumblings of our youth and the beauty of discovery is relived here.
On re-reading this i have again to visit my favourite\'s \'in-box\' because it\'s flippin brilliant gal!
August 7th, 2019 05:24
Otherness.
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is absolutely brilliant.... am almost lost for words...
Tis really quite beautiful .. this is precisely how I grew up... thank you for triggering such fond memories and for helping me keep faith in poetry............ Neville
August 7th, 2019 04:00
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is absolutely brilliant.... am almost lost for words...
Tis really quite beautiful .. this is precisely how I grew up... thank you for triggering such fond memories and for helping me keep faith in poetry............ Neville
August 7th, 2019 04:00
Otherness.
kevin browne said:
Where I was brought up in a tiny Village called Street in the 1970/80s used to be such a beautiful little place There were fun things to get on with and golden memories made. Today it is 3 times larger than the original and is also covered in tarmac and restuarants. You poem brought memories flooding back. Thank you for this inspiring peice..!!
August 7th, 2019 03:45
kevin browne said:
Where I was brought up in a tiny Village called Street in the 1970/80s used to be such a beautiful little place There were fun things to get on with and golden memories made. Today it is 3 times larger than the original and is also covered in tarmac and restuarants. You poem brought memories flooding back. Thank you for this inspiring peice..!!
August 7th, 2019 03:45
Knowing.
Seek said:
How many of us want to know without giving a thought to what lies beyond? Knowing is a bridge to that beyond. Great write.
August 7th, 2019 03:44
Seek said:
How many of us want to know without giving a thought to what lies beyond? Knowing is a bridge to that beyond. Great write.
August 7th, 2019 03:44
Knowing.
kevin browne said:
Those aliens been creeping out of you again, Fay? Even if they are or they aijn\'t you ressurect the beleive beyond the knowing. A little gem though I must admit..!!!
August 7th, 2019 00:25
kevin browne said:
Those aliens been creeping out of you again, Fay? Even if they are or they aijn\'t you ressurect the beleive beyond the knowing. A little gem though I must admit..!!!
August 7th, 2019 00:25
Knowing.
Goldfinch60 said:
As you we’ll know Fay each moment is to be treasured as are your words.
August 6th, 2019 15:30
Goldfinch60 said:
As you we’ll know Fay each moment is to be treasured as are your words.
August 6th, 2019 15:30
Knowing.
dusk arising said:
You have me standing on a hilltop common (Burleigh, Glos) gazing to the cloudless 2 am sky. Feeling it.
August 6th, 2019 05:45
dusk arising said:
You have me standing on a hilltop common (Burleigh, Glos) gazing to the cloudless 2 am sky. Feeling it.
August 6th, 2019 05:45
Knowing.
Neville said:
that is a kind of special feeling and a knowing... and you convey that so well here within three perfectly formed stanza\'s............. Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:27
Neville said:
that is a kind of special feeling and a knowing... and you convey that so well here within three perfectly formed stanza\'s............. Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:27
Knowing.
orchidee said:
I\'m knowing this is a fine write Fay!
Some are annoyed by \'This moment in time\' and similar expressions. lol.
August 6th, 2019 03:15
orchidee said:
I\'m knowing this is a fine write Fay!
Some are annoyed by \'This moment in time\' and similar expressions. lol.
August 6th, 2019 03:15
Need.
Christina8 said:
I agree with Da, you are the champion of romantic writes! An excellent read from beginning to end!!
August 5th, 2019 13:30
Christina8 said:
I agree with Da, you are the champion of romantic writes! An excellent read from beginning to end!!
August 5th, 2019 13:30
Need.
dusk arising said:
You are the champion of romantic recollection. Beautiful phrasing held me from line one..... i was there, and those last three lines speak of the longing in any still single romantics very soul.
Is this becoming a habit because this is another for my favourites.
August 5th, 2019 12:51
dusk arising said:
You are the champion of romantic recollection. Beautiful phrasing held me from line one..... i was there, and those last three lines speak of the longing in any still single romantics very soul.
Is this becoming a habit because this is another for my favourites.
August 5th, 2019 12:51
Need.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful Love Poem ! It rings a bell with Me because all Ladies need LOVE and to be LOVED ! being separated from my beloved Brian for over a Year (except for two precious visits) has been hard - but our love has been so strong that we have both remained FAITHFUL - Honest ! He is staying with me for a week when he comes in October ! We will have the Apartment to ourselves because RUTH is returning to England the week before ! So Brian tells Me we will live your LOVE POEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
V 1. Unspoken intention !
V 2. A Time for yielding !!
V 3. Fiery Sparks for lonely Hearts !!!
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 5th, 2019 08:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful Love Poem ! It rings a bell with Me because all Ladies need LOVE and to be LOVED ! being separated from my beloved Brian for over a Year (except for two precious visits) has been hard - but our love has been so strong that we have both remained FAITHFUL - Honest ! He is staying with me for a week when he comes in October ! We will have the Apartment to ourselves because RUTH is returning to England the week before ! So Brian tells Me we will live your LOVE POEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
V 1. Unspoken intention !
V 2. A Time for yielding !!
V 3. Fiery Sparks for lonely Hearts !!!
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 5th, 2019 08:23
Need.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. It\'s started me off crooning. No one can bear it, but it can\'t be helped! heehee.
August 5th, 2019 02:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. It\'s started me off crooning. No one can bear it, but it can\'t be helped! heehee.
August 5th, 2019 02:53
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