Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Underprized..
Christina8 said:
I must say I love that quote!
I do love your poem today, it does seem that \'love\' has become abused as the word has just been thrown around. This is a great write and goes into my faves.
August 12th, 2019 15:55
Christina8 said:
I must say I love that quote!
I do love your poem today, it does seem that \'love\' has become abused as the word has just been thrown around. This is a great write and goes into my faves.
August 12th, 2019 15:55
Underprized..
dusk arising said:
We begin to understand love as a romantic notion i think. But as we mature so we become aware that love is a much much bigger \'force\' for good in this world.
Love is all and love is our teacher. Love is Godly, though so abused.
Gosh you really got my juices flowing with your piece today.
August 12th, 2019 01:00
dusk arising said:
We begin to understand love as a romantic notion i think. But as we mature so we become aware that love is a much much bigger \'force\' for good in this world.
Love is all and love is our teacher. Love is Godly, though so abused.
Gosh you really got my juices flowing with your piece today.
August 12th, 2019 01:00
Unreal.
Chagrined said:
So much wonderful imagery, here. I must read more of your pieces. This was a pleasure!
August 11th, 2019 16:04
Chagrined said:
So much wonderful imagery, here. I must read more of your pieces. This was a pleasure!
August 11th, 2019 16:04
Not Again.
Neville said:
Although this poem smacks of hurt, beauty nevertheless still sits comfortably upon your page.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 03:17
Neville said:
Although this poem smacks of hurt, beauty nevertheless still sits comfortably upon your page.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 03:17
Motley.
Neville said:
a new one on me.. but I am sure you did G. Manly-Hopkins proud .. I must investigate
This by the way is more than aptly titled and you deserve some kind of award for crafting such a beaut of a patch worked poem.. tis a work of art........... Neville
August 10th, 2019 05:29
Neville said:
a new one on me.. but I am sure you did G. Manly-Hopkins proud .. I must investigate
This by the way is more than aptly titled and you deserve some kind of award for crafting such a beaut of a patch worked poem.. tis a work of art........... Neville
August 10th, 2019 05:29
Fulfilled.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
In your inimitable style you’ve expertly penned the words that express what ‘Age looks on with experience care’!
The older I get, the more appreciative I am of that thing called LOVE...a love that can heal all wounds..at least my wounds!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2019 23:58
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
In your inimitable style you’ve expertly penned the words that express what ‘Age looks on with experience care’!
The older I get, the more appreciative I am of that thing called LOVE...a love that can heal all wounds..at least my wounds!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2019 23:58
Fulfilled.
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem and I loved how you presented it!
August 9th, 2019 17:40
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem and I loved how you presented it!
August 9th, 2019 17:40
Fulfilled.
dusk arising said:
Aaah yes, love\'s learning curve we know as life.
Thoughful mature writing reveals this love shining out to us, as it does in your well crafted works daily.
August 9th, 2019 08:24
dusk arising said:
Aaah yes, love\'s learning curve we know as life.
Thoughful mature writing reveals this love shining out to us, as it does in your well crafted works daily.
August 9th, 2019 08:24
Road-Shock.
Neville said:
Sad indeed and oh\' so very true.. and frequent. ...
I folk would only cut their speed, just a little, I feel sure we would see far fewer such casualties.... one of your necessary poems this I think Fay and tho hard to make such a topic pretty, you have done a sterling job of drawing attention to it..... Neville
August 9th, 2019 08:17
Neville said:
Sad indeed and oh\' so very true.. and frequent. ...
I folk would only cut their speed, just a little, I feel sure we would see far fewer such casualties.... one of your necessary poems this I think Fay and tho hard to make such a topic pretty, you have done a sterling job of drawing attention to it..... Neville
August 9th, 2019 08:17
Fulfilled.
Neville said:
The voice of experience whispers soft throughout these words and oh\' so very meaningfully ....
a poem penned to near perfection ..
You are a diamond too...... Neville
August 9th, 2019 03:53
Neville said:
The voice of experience whispers soft throughout these words and oh\' so very meaningfully ....
a poem penned to near perfection ..
You are a diamond too...... Neville
August 9th, 2019 03:53
Fulfilled.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A diamond of a verse Fau
Well presented
August 9th, 2019 03:06
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A diamond of a verse Fau
Well presented
August 9th, 2019 03:06
Unreal.
Christina8 said:
Your writing almost put me in a trance as I read...so beautiful, Fay! Absolutely lovely!!
August 8th, 2019 19:03
Christina8 said:
Your writing almost put me in a trance as I read...so beautiful, Fay! Absolutely lovely!!
August 8th, 2019 19:03
Otherness.
moordykspot2 said:
Oh my word Superb memory restorer my friend A finel scripted piece of verse. I think of my first Girlfriend always has remained special to me. AND bless her still in touch to this day
Thank you Fay for allowing me to read
August 8th, 2019 15:28
moordykspot2 said:
Oh my word Superb memory restorer my friend A finel scripted piece of verse. I think of my first Girlfriend always has remained special to me. AND bless her still in touch to this day
Thank you Fay for allowing me to read
August 8th, 2019 15:28
Unreal.
dusk arising said:
moody Fay.. moody
that big ole moon\'s reflection plays a hide n seek game with the clouds upon the living lake. I want to see the flash of colour, ... yes there it is!... before i set off home to the root of that whispy smokes source and my loved ones.
every poet tells a story. yours draw me in.
August 8th, 2019 13:33
dusk arising said:
moody Fay.. moody
that big ole moon\'s reflection plays a hide n seek game with the clouds upon the living lake. I want to see the flash of colour, ... yes there it is!... before i set off home to the root of that whispy smokes source and my loved ones.
every poet tells a story. yours draw me in.
August 8th, 2019 13:33
Unreal.
Neville said:
You have just gone and done it again Fay... another absolute work of poetic art......
Respect & hats off to you......
Neville
August 8th, 2019 04:05
Neville said:
You have just gone and done it again Fay... another absolute work of poetic art......
Respect & hats off to you......
Neville
August 8th, 2019 04:05
Unreal.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay.
I recall a poem I did about a trout, an old trout. I mean KP. I wish I never had married her! (That\'s cruel Orchi. heehee).
August 8th, 2019 03:26
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay.
I recall a poem I did about a trout, an old trout. I mean KP. I wish I never had married her! (That\'s cruel Orchi. heehee).
August 8th, 2019 03:26
Unreal.
sylviasearcher said:
Such other worldly beauty you have crafted here 💜
August 8th, 2019 03:24
sylviasearcher said:
Such other worldly beauty you have crafted here 💜
August 8th, 2019 03:24
Otherness.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a superb write Fay, those times of innocence portrayed in your wonderful words.
The artwork is so meaningful with your words. It is called the \'The Lovers Tryst\' by Adelaide Salles-Wagner, an artist of whom I had never heard.
August 8th, 2019 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
What a superb write Fay, those times of innocence portrayed in your wonderful words.
The artwork is so meaningful with your words. It is called the \'The Lovers Tryst\' by Adelaide Salles-Wagner, an artist of whom I had never heard.
August 8th, 2019 01:14
Otherness.
Suresh said:
There is complexity in how you sow together the simplest of words, and for certain takes a reader on an imaginative journey
August 7th, 2019 11:27
Suresh said:
There is complexity in how you sow together the simplest of words, and for certain takes a reader on an imaginative journey
August 7th, 2019 11:27
Otherness.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your exceptional write transported me to way back when...
when I was holding my first love’s hand and the experience of our many firsts!
A blissful reading!
Thank you for sharing your talents!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 09:08
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your exceptional write transported me to way back when...
when I was holding my first love’s hand and the experience of our many firsts!
A blissful reading!
Thank you for sharing your talents!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 09:08
Otherness.
Michael Edwards said:
Me too - back into childhood - a gentle yet poignant write.
August 7th, 2019 08:11
Michael Edwards said:
Me too - back into childhood - a gentle yet poignant write.
August 7th, 2019 08:11
Otherness.
dusk arising said:
Again i journeyed with your words. Today you took me to the path along the Avon in Stratford where one afternoon words became hard to find and strolling sideways glances melted into mutual long held eye contact.... the rest is poetry.
Today your gentle verses place poetry into the fumblings of our youth and the beauty of discovery is relived here.
On re-reading this i have again to visit my favourite\'s \'in-box\' because it\'s flippin brilliant gal!
August 7th, 2019 05:24
dusk arising said:
Again i journeyed with your words. Today you took me to the path along the Avon in Stratford where one afternoon words became hard to find and strolling sideways glances melted into mutual long held eye contact.... the rest is poetry.
Today your gentle verses place poetry into the fumblings of our youth and the beauty of discovery is relived here.
On re-reading this i have again to visit my favourite\'s \'in-box\' because it\'s flippin brilliant gal!
August 7th, 2019 05:24
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