Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Distracted.
Neville said:
smashing my dear.. a super distraction from the hum drum of the moment... my moment that is..... hence I\'m off to my own patch of ocean and shore... not too far from your own methinks......
Neville
July 31st, 2019 03:25
Neville said:
smashing my dear.. a super distraction from the hum drum of the moment... my moment that is..... hence I\'m off to my own patch of ocean and shore... not too far from your own methinks......
Neville
July 31st, 2019 03:25
Thirst.
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope is within us may it soon be beyond hope and become proof in our glorious lives.
July 31st, 2019 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope is within us may it soon be beyond hope and become proof in our glorious lives.
July 31st, 2019 00:41
Thirst.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! When one anthropomorphises the Ocean in to LOVER it produces a very powerful picture of relentless LOVE which Angela & I loved ! Love both the printed Poem and the awesome riposte it sparked in You ~ Powerful writing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 30th, 2019 15:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! When one anthropomorphises the Ocean in to LOVER it produces a very powerful picture of relentless LOVE which Angela & I loved ! Love both the printed Poem and the awesome riposte it sparked in You ~ Powerful writing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 30th, 2019 15:31
Thirst.
dusk arising said:
There\'s an ocean of love out there... I\'m hoping for a tsunami any day now... even got my cozzie on.
July 30th, 2019 12:06
dusk arising said:
There\'s an ocean of love out there... I\'m hoping for a tsunami any day now... even got my cozzie on.
July 30th, 2019 12:06
Thirst.
moordykspot2 said:
Hello Young Fay Some super verse my friend I really love reading your poems Thank you
July 30th, 2019 11:33
moordykspot2 said:
Hello Young Fay Some super verse my friend I really love reading your poems Thank you
July 30th, 2019 11:33
Thirst.
Michael Edwards said:
Your magical pen has again created a joy of a read.
July 30th, 2019 10:19
Michael Edwards said:
Your magical pen has again created a joy of a read.
July 30th, 2019 10:19
Thirst.
Neville said:
there can be no mistaking where the inspiration for today\'s poetic gift were conceived ...
I think it came from the heart and your\'s and true.....
July 30th, 2019 03:36
Neville said:
there can be no mistaking where the inspiration for today\'s poetic gift were conceived ...
I think it came from the heart and your\'s and true.....
July 30th, 2019 03:36
Learnt Curves.
Christina8 said:
The last line sums it up perfectly for me. I like your metaphors! A captivating read, Fay!
July 29th, 2019 19:21
Christina8 said:
The last line sums it up perfectly for me. I like your metaphors! A captivating read, Fay!
July 29th, 2019 19:21
Learnt Curves.
dusk arising said:
Reading your first stanza brought forth a gasp and \"there is much wisdom gained from the actual there\".
And so it continued, as i agreed with the sentiment so exquisitely phrased.
So very true and heartfelt by all who have journeyed loves chapters and allow a guarded hope a corner of their life.
July 29th, 2019 16:10
dusk arising said:
Reading your first stanza brought forth a gasp and \"there is much wisdom gained from the actual there\".
And so it continued, as i agreed with the sentiment so exquisitely phrased.
So very true and heartfelt by all who have journeyed loves chapters and allow a guarded hope a corner of their life.
July 29th, 2019 16:10
Learnt Curves.
Michael Edwards said:
And long may that love continue to breathe dear Fay. No room for shivers.
July 29th, 2019 13:04
Michael Edwards said:
And long may that love continue to breathe dear Fay. No room for shivers.
July 29th, 2019 13:04
Learnt Curves.
Suresh said:
You speak of love that once stoked melts all in its wake, and have poem\'d it with such depth. But, love is an uncontrolled emotion that once inflicted, cannot be tamed or inflamed.
July 29th, 2019 10:17
Suresh said:
You speak of love that once stoked melts all in its wake, and have poem\'d it with such depth. But, love is an uncontrolled emotion that once inflicted, cannot be tamed or inflamed.
July 29th, 2019 10:17
Learnt Curves.
Neville said:
Love the title and the rest warms the cockles of this reader\'s heart .....
Neville
July 29th, 2019 07:03
Neville said:
Love the title and the rest warms the cockles of this reader\'s heart .....
Neville
July 29th, 2019 07:03
Learnt Curves.
Poetic Dan said:
Saved for more time to read but loved the start
July 29th, 2019 05:27
Poetic Dan said:
Saved for more time to read but loved the start
July 29th, 2019 05:27
Twice Stirred.
Neville said:
Damn good in its own write
Calliope is all these things and more... her beauty and mystery limited only by the imaginations of those poets and authors who pen her name...
July 27th, 2019 11:00
Neville said:
Damn good in its own write
Calliope is all these things and more... her beauty and mystery limited only by the imaginations of those poets and authors who pen her name...
July 27th, 2019 11:00
HAPPENINGS.
Suresh said:
Nature - your perception, quiet different from that of the moth or thrush or every single creature and plant... to them everyday is a fight to survive ....
.... but your words woven here, a rarity
July 26th, 2019 11:33
Suresh said:
Nature - your perception, quiet different from that of the moth or thrush or every single creature and plant... to them everyday is a fight to survive ....
.... but your words woven here, a rarity
July 26th, 2019 11:33
HAPPENINGS.
dusk arising said:
Eeh bah gum lass, the\'rs nowt strange bout nature nor nowt stranger than nature herself. For nature be a lady didn\'cha know.
An it taks a reet poetic bint such as thee\'sen to make a parcel a goodies wi words so fine that ... well.. so fine that yous could parcel em up in a chocolates box and give \'em as a lasting thing o beauty to a reet gud lookin young love.
\'Appen.
July 26th, 2019 09:43
dusk arising said:
Eeh bah gum lass, the\'rs nowt strange bout nature nor nowt stranger than nature herself. For nature be a lady didn\'cha know.
An it taks a reet poetic bint such as thee\'sen to make a parcel a goodies wi words so fine that ... well.. so fine that yous could parcel em up in a chocolates box and give \'em as a lasting thing o beauty to a reet gud lookin young love.
\'Appen.
July 26th, 2019 09:43
HAPPENINGS.
Neville said:
and they call it evolution.... strange that..... I have long called it nature...
a mighty poem if ever there was... with all manner of strengths .. I particularly like the way you set me thinking about each of the observations you have made......
Neville
July 26th, 2019 03:47
Neville said:
and they call it evolution.... strange that..... I have long called it nature...
a mighty poem if ever there was... with all manner of strengths .. I particularly like the way you set me thinking about each of the observations you have made......
Neville
July 26th, 2019 03:47
Love\'s Call.
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fay, the anguish flows through your words.
July 26th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fay, the anguish flows through your words.
July 26th, 2019 00:57
Love\'s Call.
Suresh said:
War has produced most romantic poems imaginable, for it holds the suspense of ever meeting again, in body and soul, as when departed.
Very well scripted
July 25th, 2019 16:13
Suresh said:
War has produced most romantic poems imaginable, for it holds the suspense of ever meeting again, in body and soul, as when departed.
Very well scripted
July 25th, 2019 16:13
Love\'s Call.
MendedFences27 said:
Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the former the more painful. Those that wait also die from the separation, and and endure the anxiety of not knowing.
The ancient cry to end all wars keeps repeating, but hopefully growing in volume.
Oh, how you have recreated the longing felt, the risks taken, and the futility of it all. It saddens the reader while truthfully displaying the over-riding dread. Your words fall like her tears and their meaning explodes in the mind of the reader.
I really enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:27
MendedFences27 said:
Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the former the more painful. Those that wait also die from the separation, and and endure the anxiety of not knowing.
The ancient cry to end all wars keeps repeating, but hopefully growing in volume.
Oh, how you have recreated the longing felt, the risks taken, and the futility of it all. It saddens the reader while truthfully displaying the over-riding dread. Your words fall like her tears and their meaning explodes in the mind of the reader.
I really enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:27
Love\'s Call.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ooo the famished mind
hungry
ravenous...
I like this fay
VERY WELL expressed my dear
July 25th, 2019 10:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ooo the famished mind
hungry
ravenous...
I like this fay
VERY WELL expressed my dear
July 25th, 2019 10:08
Love\'s Call.
Neville said:
On reflection, these well crafted words remind me that war is not for lovers........ Neville
July 25th, 2019 04:30
Neville said:
On reflection, these well crafted words remind me that war is not for lovers........ Neville
July 25th, 2019 04:30
Love\'s Call.
dusk arising said:
Reads like the heartache of a lovers parting with the agonising waiting, hoping, and the anguish of fear that her hero may be yet another sacrifice to some politicians war game.
Compelling and heart wrenching.
July 25th, 2019 04:12
dusk arising said:
Reads like the heartache of a lovers parting with the agonising waiting, hoping, and the anguish of fear that her hero may be yet another sacrifice to some politicians war game.
Compelling and heart wrenching.
July 25th, 2019 04:12
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