Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Journey Concluded.
dusk arising said:
Aha, the ways and wiles of the growing lady. Heartbreak shrugged off and sounding in that thought balloon above her head = NEXT!
Hmmm will this entertaining lady be content to sip her coffee contentedly or will she letch further episodes across our mps screens. Somehow i think her growing pains may yet further entertain us.
A story teller AND a fine poet. Very entertaining.
August 30th, 2019 03:07
dusk arising said:
Aha, the ways and wiles of the growing lady. Heartbreak shrugged off and sounding in that thought balloon above her head = NEXT!
Hmmm will this entertaining lady be content to sip her coffee contentedly or will she letch further episodes across our mps screens. Somehow i think her growing pains may yet further entertain us.
A story teller AND a fine poet. Very entertaining.
August 30th, 2019 03:07
Journey Concluded.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY - ANGELA HERE (7:30 pm) so just relaxin - WORK DONE for today - Saturday tomorrow AMEN ! Loved the sting in the tale ! The best laid plans o\' Mice & Women - gang aft agley ! But as you and I know (from experience) if one ploy fails - theres always another (equally) attractive MAN round the CORNER ! I guess she SCORED with the HANDSOME LAD ! Thanks for sharing a great trilogy on *Our Feminine Wiles* No red blooded MAN is SAFE !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 30th, 2019 02:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY - ANGELA HERE (7:30 pm) so just relaxin - WORK DONE for today - Saturday tomorrow AMEN ! Loved the sting in the tale ! The best laid plans o\' Mice & Women - gang aft agley ! But as you and I know (from experience) if one ploy fails - theres always another (equally) attractive MAN round the CORNER ! I guess she SCORED with the HANDSOME LAD ! Thanks for sharing a great trilogy on *Our Feminine Wiles* No red blooded MAN is SAFE !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 30th, 2019 02:50
The Journey Continued.
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Fay we wait with baited breath (heavy breathing) for the denouement of this passionate tale of love.
August 30th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Fay we wait with baited breath (heavy breathing) for the denouement of this passionate tale of love.
August 30th, 2019 00:48
The Journey Continued.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Its nearly 7am (Friday) here and I just checking MPS. Glad you *continued* today ! Judging by the responses everyone was waiting ! In the 21st C it s in order for the Lady to be proactive !
I love the thoughts of your heroine : Vamping - Enticement - Siren - Nubility - Cleavage - Hot Breath ~ Pouting etc etc ! We have so many weapons to use when Man only has TWO - His Checkbook & His Manhood ! How can we Girls ever fail ! More please !
Blessings & much JOY
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 29th, 2019 13:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Its nearly 7am (Friday) here and I just checking MPS. Glad you *continued* today ! Judging by the responses everyone was waiting ! In the 21st C it s in order for the Lady to be proactive !
I love the thoughts of your heroine : Vamping - Enticement - Siren - Nubility - Cleavage - Hot Breath ~ Pouting etc etc ! We have so many weapons to use when Man only has TWO - His Checkbook & His Manhood ! How can we Girls ever fail ! More please !
Blessings & much JOY
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 29th, 2019 13:42
The Journey Continued.
dusk arising said:
So glad you spelled \'wily\' correctly here.
In the words of Joni Mitchell \"If there\'s one rule to this game everybodies gonna name it\'s - be cool. If your heart is on the floor cos you just saw your lover walking thru the door with a new fool - be cool\"
Will she won\'t she? Does he, doesn\'t he. Will they, won\'t they? Look at what you have done to MPS..... our tongues are out.... waiting.
MORE!!!
August 29th, 2019 11:57
dusk arising said:
So glad you spelled \'wily\' correctly here.
In the words of Joni Mitchell \"If there\'s one rule to this game everybodies gonna name it\'s - be cool. If your heart is on the floor cos you just saw your lover walking thru the door with a new fool - be cool\"
Will she won\'t she? Does he, doesn\'t he. Will they, won\'t they? Look at what you have done to MPS..... our tongues are out.... waiting.
MORE!!!
August 29th, 2019 11:57
The Journey Continued.
Christina8 said:
Ooh this is an enticing read..wonderful!
August 29th, 2019 09:26
Christina8 said:
Ooh this is an enticing read..wonderful!
August 29th, 2019 09:26
The Journey Continued.
orchidee said:
Ooohh, good write Fay. I\'m all of a swoon - I\'ve had (read of) wenches and saucy milk-maids today already (from Neville\'s poem). Now I\'m reading of sirens and libido.
I tried to impress a gal with my breath, but I had been eating garlic! I not quite got the hang of this. lol.
August 29th, 2019 04:12
orchidee said:
Ooohh, good write Fay. I\'m all of a swoon - I\'ve had (read of) wenches and saucy milk-maids today already (from Neville\'s poem). Now I\'m reading of sirens and libido.
I tried to impress a gal with my breath, but I had been eating garlic! I not quite got the hang of this. lol.
August 29th, 2019 04:12
The Journey Continued.
Neville said:
Do not dally, just get stuck in there gall ........ luverly..... N
August 29th, 2019 03:09
Neville said:
Do not dally, just get stuck in there gall ........ luverly..... N
August 29th, 2019 03:09
The Journey.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY - You are a Naughty Lady raising a Girls Libido and posing the question *Did they or didnt they ?* Then sudden closure and TO BE CONTINUED ! WHEN ? I have cooled down now and of course theres no point in being HOT when BRIAN is 11,500 miles away (too far for too long !) BUT by October it will all be ober for ever - AMEN - TO BE CONTINUED !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 28th, 2019 17:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY - You are a Naughty Lady raising a Girls Libido and posing the question *Did they or didnt they ?* Then sudden closure and TO BE CONTINUED ! WHEN ? I have cooled down now and of course theres no point in being HOT when BRIAN is 11,500 miles away (too far for too long !) BUT by October it will all be ober for ever - AMEN - TO BE CONTINUED !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 28th, 2019 17:43
The Journey.
Christina8 said:
Looking forward to the continuation....so far this sounds fun!
August 28th, 2019 17:08
Christina8 said:
Looking forward to the continuation....so far this sounds fun!
August 28th, 2019 17:08
The Journey.
kevin browne said:
Super job acheived within you and I hope you enjoyed your coffee...
August 28th, 2019 08:12
kevin browne said:
Super job acheived within you and I hope you enjoyed your coffee...
August 28th, 2019 08:12
The Journey.
dusk arising said:
One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing new postings from poets i have come to respect for the quality of their many poems i have read. In your work today i am delighted for i haven\'t seen you produce anything like this before and i love it!
Well that last line is a real hook! All your readers will be waiting with baited breath for the poor girl\'s downfall and heartbreak now.... or have you twists and turns the poor girl will wrestle with as you tease us into submission?
hmmm breath baited!
August 28th, 2019 05:12
dusk arising said:
One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing new postings from poets i have come to respect for the quality of their many poems i have read. In your work today i am delighted for i haven\'t seen you produce anything like this before and i love it!
Well that last line is a real hook! All your readers will be waiting with baited breath for the poor girl\'s downfall and heartbreak now.... or have you twists and turns the poor girl will wrestle with as you tease us into submission?
hmmm breath baited!
August 28th, 2019 05:12
The Journey.
orchidee said:
If this is continued, I fear I shall swoon..... heehee. Doh, I\'m always in a swoon! lol.
August 28th, 2019 03:47
orchidee said:
If this is continued, I fear I shall swoon..... heehee. Doh, I\'m always in a swoon! lol.
August 28th, 2019 03:47
Suchness.
kevin browne said:
Emotionally written by someone who has delved into the deep end of loves drowning spirit. You express clearly some of the eternal evocative love thta\'s lay in the core of your own heart. A brilliant peice of poetry written with clarity of meaning. Good work, Fay...
August 28th, 2019 01:23
kevin browne said:
Emotionally written by someone who has delved into the deep end of loves drowning spirit. You express clearly some of the eternal evocative love thta\'s lay in the core of your own heart. A brilliant peice of poetry written with clarity of meaning. Good work, Fay...
August 28th, 2019 01:23
Suchness.
dusk arising said:
I so agree with your sentiment. Where does it come from, this mental transformation we undergo. Accepting, transcending? It must be one of those lessons love teaches us.
Beautiful poetry from you.
August 27th, 2019 18:20
dusk arising said:
I so agree with your sentiment. Where does it come from, this mental transformation we undergo. Accepting, transcending? It must be one of those lessons love teaches us.
Beautiful poetry from you.
August 27th, 2019 18:20
Suchness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Love this Poem FAY and have saved it as a FAVE ! I love the structure and the substance ! It it especially relevant to me because I miss Brian so so much - and yet knowing in a few weeks our separation will be no more - and we will be together - for ever & eternity !
I am Living & Loving @ Hearts core & Looking @ Loves core and discovering the SUCHNESS (lovely word !) of Love & Heart & Spirit - AMEN
Reading your unique ode has indeed :
V 1. Liberated me from emotion & remorse
V 2. Enhanced Vision and soothed rawness
V 3. Made Life sing and my *Hurting Heart weeps no more !*
I discussed my responce with BRIAN on SKYPE ! He agrees and send His LOVE. Thanks for caring so so much We felt the sentiments of this Poem were writen specially to sooth our *Love Pangs of Separation* THANK YOU !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 27th, 2019 18:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Love this Poem FAY and have saved it as a FAVE ! I love the structure and the substance ! It it especially relevant to me because I miss Brian so so much - and yet knowing in a few weeks our separation will be no more - and we will be together - for ever & eternity !
I am Living & Loving @ Hearts core & Looking @ Loves core and discovering the SUCHNESS (lovely word !) of Love & Heart & Spirit - AMEN
Reading your unique ode has indeed :
V 1. Liberated me from emotion & remorse
V 2. Enhanced Vision and soothed rawness
V 3. Made Life sing and my *Hurting Heart weeps no more !*
I discussed my responce with BRIAN on SKYPE ! He agrees and send His LOVE. Thanks for caring so so much We felt the sentiments of this Poem were writen specially to sooth our *Love Pangs of Separation* THANK YOU !
Blessings & Peace & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 27th, 2019 18:10
Suchness.
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing!
-Lauren
August 27th, 2019 15:45
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing!
-Lauren
August 27th, 2019 15:45
Alltogetherness.
Suresh said:
Inner calmness will sail through rough waters
Your words, as always, very intense
August 26th, 2019 12:52
Suresh said:
Inner calmness will sail through rough waters
Your words, as always, very intense
August 26th, 2019 12:52
Alltogetherness.
dusk arising said:
I believe that as we age we begin to understand love and self love. With that, the enquiring mind will realise spirituality. The light within.
Spirituality from within brings realisation of the charlatans.
Deep and thought provoking verse.
August 26th, 2019 05:43
dusk arising said:
I believe that as we age we begin to understand love and self love. With that, the enquiring mind will realise spirituality. The light within.
Spirituality from within brings realisation of the charlatans.
Deep and thought provoking verse.
August 26th, 2019 05:43
Outing.
Suresh said:
As we, humans, are the creatures of the light, light is thus our security blanket, and that we seek to pierce our fears away, and very few poems have welcomed dawn as yours.
August 24th, 2019 09:45
Suresh said:
As we, humans, are the creatures of the light, light is thus our security blanket, and that we seek to pierce our fears away, and very few poems have welcomed dawn as yours.
August 24th, 2019 09:45
Outing.
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days be forever wonderful as are your words Fay.
August 24th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days be forever wonderful as are your words Fay.
August 24th, 2019 00:27
Outing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here (9:30am Saturday !) A beautiful Poem - each Dawn is miracle in itself ! I love the adverbs you have chosen. Imperceptibly - Immaculatetly - Imposingly - Impartially - Immediately ! They perfect;y describe the Sunrise - each day - over the Bay in Auckland and Norfolk too I guess - BEAUTIFUL. It has inspired me to post a Poem on Dawn tomorrow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 23rd, 2019 16:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY - ANGELA here (9:30am Saturday !) A beautiful Poem - each Dawn is miracle in itself ! I love the adverbs you have chosen. Imperceptibly - Immaculatetly - Imposingly - Impartially - Immediately ! They perfect;y describe the Sunrise - each day - over the Bay in Auckland and Norfolk too I guess - BEAUTIFUL. It has inspired me to post a Poem on Dawn tomorrow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 23rd, 2019 16:38
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