Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Nightness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Contented COWS - safe in their field
And treated well the best MILK yield !
Thanks for sharing FAY. In my youth I (BRIAN) stayed on a Dairy Farm and helped with the Milking etc. I was alwys amazed at the docility & contentment of the Cows and was never afriad of them or the Bulls. I guess they did OK ! Fed & Watered and freed from their MILK ~ twice a day ! You have provided an excellent Picture and written a perfect One !
Blessings & Peace & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 14th, 2019 17:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Contented COWS - safe in their field
And treated well the best MILK yield !
Thanks for sharing FAY. In my youth I (BRIAN) stayed on a Dairy Farm and helped with the Milking etc. I was alwys amazed at the docility & contentment of the Cows and was never afriad of them or the Bulls. I guess they did OK ! Fed & Watered and freed from their MILK ~ twice a day ! You have provided an excellent Picture and written a perfect One !
Blessings & Peace & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 14th, 2019 17:45
Nightness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay, evenings colourful fall into night is wondrous.
August 14th, 2019 15:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay, evenings colourful fall into night is wondrous.
August 14th, 2019 15:39
Nightness.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
We can learn so much from nature a natural fear is healthy
Our unnatural one is sometimes not
Great write
August 14th, 2019 02:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
We can learn so much from nature a natural fear is healthy
Our unnatural one is sometimes not
Great write
August 14th, 2019 02:46
Secret.
Neville said:
A single red rose... and words that more than do it justice...... but sshh lit\'s keep it tween ourselves or there will be a whole bunch of em crowding round.... .... N
August 13th, 2019 13:10
Neville said:
A single red rose... and words that more than do it justice...... but sshh lit\'s keep it tween ourselves or there will be a whole bunch of em crowding round.... .... N
August 13th, 2019 13:10
Secret.
Christina8 said:
love the last two lines especially, wonderful writing Fay!!
August 13th, 2019 12:57
Christina8 said:
love the last two lines especially, wonderful writing Fay!!
August 13th, 2019 12:57
Secret.
Michael Edwards said:
Great work and those last two lines are to die for (well not literally 😊 )
August 13th, 2019 10:45
Michael Edwards said:
Great work and those last two lines are to die for (well not literally 😊 )
August 13th, 2019 10:45
Secret.
dusk arising said:
A rose? Or a lady blossoming mature?
I\'m preferring to romance the latter in your words today.
August 13th, 2019 04:41
dusk arising said:
A rose? Or a lady blossoming mature?
I\'m preferring to romance the latter in your words today.
August 13th, 2019 04:41
Secret.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A very fragrant piece , petal
Beautiful again
August 13th, 2019 03:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A very fragrant piece , petal
Beautiful again
August 13th, 2019 03:34
Underprized..
Suresh said:
Love, as any other emotion, is uncontrollable. Neither can we deliberately act upon it, nor can we control it. In majority of the cases, love is a grossly missed word, where \"like\", a concerted effort, better describes the feeling.
As such, your poem well defines the underprization of the word \"love\"
August 12th, 2019 18:54
Suresh said:
Love, as any other emotion, is uncontrollable. Neither can we deliberately act upon it, nor can we control it. In majority of the cases, love is a grossly missed word, where \"like\", a concerted effort, better describes the feeling.
As such, your poem well defines the underprization of the word \"love\"
August 12th, 2019 18:54
Underprized..
Christina8 said:
I must say I love that quote!
I do love your poem today, it does seem that \'love\' has become abused as the word has just been thrown around. This is a great write and goes into my faves.
August 12th, 2019 15:55
Christina8 said:
I must say I love that quote!
I do love your poem today, it does seem that \'love\' has become abused as the word has just been thrown around. This is a great write and goes into my faves.
August 12th, 2019 15:55
Underprized..
dusk arising said:
We begin to understand love as a romantic notion i think. But as we mature so we become aware that love is a much much bigger \'force\' for good in this world.
Love is all and love is our teacher. Love is Godly, though so abused.
Gosh you really got my juices flowing with your piece today.
August 12th, 2019 01:00
dusk arising said:
We begin to understand love as a romantic notion i think. But as we mature so we become aware that love is a much much bigger \'force\' for good in this world.
Love is all and love is our teacher. Love is Godly, though so abused.
Gosh you really got my juices flowing with your piece today.
August 12th, 2019 01:00
Unreal.
Chagrined said:
So much wonderful imagery, here. I must read more of your pieces. This was a pleasure!
August 11th, 2019 16:04
Chagrined said:
So much wonderful imagery, here. I must read more of your pieces. This was a pleasure!
August 11th, 2019 16:04
Not Again.
Neville said:
Although this poem smacks of hurt, beauty nevertheless still sits comfortably upon your page.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 03:17
Neville said:
Although this poem smacks of hurt, beauty nevertheless still sits comfortably upon your page.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 03:17
Motley.
Neville said:
a new one on me.. but I am sure you did G. Manly-Hopkins proud .. I must investigate
This by the way is more than aptly titled and you deserve some kind of award for crafting such a beaut of a patch worked poem.. tis a work of art........... Neville
August 10th, 2019 05:29
Neville said:
a new one on me.. but I am sure you did G. Manly-Hopkins proud .. I must investigate
This by the way is more than aptly titled and you deserve some kind of award for crafting such a beaut of a patch worked poem.. tis a work of art........... Neville
August 10th, 2019 05:29
Fulfilled.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
In your inimitable style you’ve expertly penned the words that express what ‘Age looks on with experience care’!
The older I get, the more appreciative I am of that thing called LOVE...a love that can heal all wounds..at least my wounds!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2019 23:58
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
In your inimitable style you’ve expertly penned the words that express what ‘Age looks on with experience care’!
The older I get, the more appreciative I am of that thing called LOVE...a love that can heal all wounds..at least my wounds!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2019 23:58
Fulfilled.
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem and I loved how you presented it!
August 9th, 2019 17:40
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem and I loved how you presented it!
August 9th, 2019 17:40
Fulfilled.
dusk arising said:
Aaah yes, love\'s learning curve we know as life.
Thoughful mature writing reveals this love shining out to us, as it does in your well crafted works daily.
August 9th, 2019 08:24
dusk arising said:
Aaah yes, love\'s learning curve we know as life.
Thoughful mature writing reveals this love shining out to us, as it does in your well crafted works daily.
August 9th, 2019 08:24
Road-Shock.
Neville said:
Sad indeed and oh\' so very true.. and frequent. ...
I folk would only cut their speed, just a little, I feel sure we would see far fewer such casualties.... one of your necessary poems this I think Fay and tho hard to make such a topic pretty, you have done a sterling job of drawing attention to it..... Neville
August 9th, 2019 08:17
Neville said:
Sad indeed and oh\' so very true.. and frequent. ...
I folk would only cut their speed, just a little, I feel sure we would see far fewer such casualties.... one of your necessary poems this I think Fay and tho hard to make such a topic pretty, you have done a sterling job of drawing attention to it..... Neville
August 9th, 2019 08:17
Fulfilled.
Neville said:
The voice of experience whispers soft throughout these words and oh\' so very meaningfully ....
a poem penned to near perfection ..
You are a diamond too...... Neville
August 9th, 2019 03:53
Neville said:
The voice of experience whispers soft throughout these words and oh\' so very meaningfully ....
a poem penned to near perfection ..
You are a diamond too...... Neville
August 9th, 2019 03:53
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