Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WHISPERS.
Neville said:
and who would mind waking up to this.... totally captivating in its entirety ..... Neville
ps... No one could possibly object..
May 30th, 2019 04:30
Neville said:
and who would mind waking up to this.... totally captivating in its entirety ..... Neville
ps... No one could possibly object..
May 30th, 2019 04:30
WHISPERS.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay I love this style and a fitting tribute to this beautiful morning.
The thought that this day is a whole life for some beings makes the dawn such a precious tantalising moment for them.
You captured this emotion with both hands and threw it out there like an Axinaea confusa flower
Thank you
May 30th, 2019 03:33
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay I love this style and a fitting tribute to this beautiful morning.
The thought that this day is a whole life for some beings makes the dawn such a precious tantalising moment for them.
You captured this emotion with both hands and threw it out there like an Axinaea confusa flower
Thank you
May 30th, 2019 03:33
SELFNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
That calmness can come over us all if we look at the flowers.
May 30th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That calmness can come over us all if we look at the flowers.
May 30th, 2019 00:20
SELFNESS.
Michael Edwards said:
Upright and sappy
And unassuming
flowers are happy
They’re always blooming.
May 29th, 2019 14:19
Michael Edwards said:
Upright and sappy
And unassuming
flowers are happy
They’re always blooming.
May 29th, 2019 14:19
SELFNESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I might talk to trees and flowers, but me feeling sorry for lamp-posts at night is going too far. I need another one of me pills! lol.
I shall be bringing the lamp-post indoors next, and tucking it up in bed. See the men in white coats arriving...…! I\'m in a poor state!
May 29th, 2019 11:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I might talk to trees and flowers, but me feeling sorry for lamp-posts at night is going too far. I need another one of me pills! lol.
I shall be bringing the lamp-post indoors next, and tucking it up in bed. See the men in white coats arriving...…! I\'m in a poor state!
May 29th, 2019 11:16
SELFNESS.
Suresh said:
Flowers are living organisms, and source of so much pleasure - sight, taste, touch and smell and sound that we humans can\'t hear.
Fragrant write indeed
May 29th, 2019 10:06
Suresh said:
Flowers are living organisms, and source of so much pleasure - sight, taste, touch and smell and sound that we humans can\'t hear.
Fragrant write indeed
May 29th, 2019 10:06
SELFNESS.
Poetic Dan said:
We are all truly one and connected to everything.
You always fill me with more wonder, thank you
May 29th, 2019 08:41
Poetic Dan said:
We are all truly one and connected to everything.
You always fill me with more wonder, thank you
May 29th, 2019 08:41
SELFNESS.
dusk arising said:
As i matured I began to see this in older folk and still do. I wonder if its visible in me?
May 29th, 2019 05:50
dusk arising said:
As i matured I began to see this in older folk and still do. I wonder if its visible in me?
May 29th, 2019 05:50
SELFNESS.
Neville said:
How could they not be happy, flowers have feelings too.....
Perfectly poemed my dear Fay.... Neville
May 29th, 2019 04:43
Neville said:
How could they not be happy, flowers have feelings too.....
Perfectly poemed my dear Fay.... Neville
May 29th, 2019 04:43
THE VISION.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful creature.
I have never seen an otter in the wild.We went to a place on Skye once that was the habitat of many otters and all we saw were seals and dolphins!
May 29th, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful creature.
I have never seen an otter in the wild.We went to a place on Skye once that was the habitat of many otters and all we saw were seals and dolphins!
May 29th, 2019 01:19
THE VISION.
Michael Edwards said:
A super write and like you, Fay, I am in awe of nature and all that it offers.
May 28th, 2019 11:56
Michael Edwards said:
A super write and like you, Fay, I am in awe of nature and all that it offers.
May 28th, 2019 11:56
THE VISION.
Suresh said:
Both the pic and the poetry reminded me of many a National Geographic episodes that have mesmerized me.
May 28th, 2019 10:52
Suresh said:
Both the pic and the poetry reminded me of many a National Geographic episodes that have mesmerized me.
May 28th, 2019 10:52
THE VISION.
Neville said:
I can understand why you wrote about this particular experience Fay.. I have seen these beauties in the wild on a couple of occasions and aint they summat to seriously behold.... I also had the pleasure of meeting Mr. Gavin Maxwell when I was but a nipper.... but that\'s another story.... Neville
May 28th, 2019 04:11
Neville said:
I can understand why you wrote about this particular experience Fay.. I have seen these beauties in the wild on a couple of occasions and aint they summat to seriously behold.... I also had the pleasure of meeting Mr. Gavin Maxwell when I was but a nipper.... but that\'s another story.... Neville
May 28th, 2019 04:11
THE VISION.
dusk arising said:
I recall the last time i took a plunge several ladies seemed to take pleasure in those moments too.... judging by their raucus laughter.
You lucky person seeing this creature at home in its element. Thank you for sharing with us.
May 28th, 2019 03:57
dusk arising said:
I recall the last time i took a plunge several ladies seemed to take pleasure in those moments too.... judging by their raucus laughter.
You lucky person seeing this creature at home in its element. Thank you for sharing with us.
May 28th, 2019 03:57
THE VISION.
kevin browne said:
Ah, bless. it looked there for a moment for you and the otter shall have a lasting love affair. Such a smooth talker are these elusive animals and to have this for my first read of the morning has left me feeling I wan\'t an otter as a pet. Your devotion and love for the wilderness you desire have been totally rewarded within the life of an otters world. Love this, Fay Slimm. Thank you.
May 28th, 2019 03:55
kevin browne said:
Ah, bless. it looked there for a moment for you and the otter shall have a lasting love affair. Such a smooth talker are these elusive animals and to have this for my first read of the morning has left me feeling I wan\'t an otter as a pet. Your devotion and love for the wilderness you desire have been totally rewarded within the life of an otters world. Love this, Fay Slimm. Thank you.
May 28th, 2019 03:55
LUSH.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay.
I do hope it is the tempranillo grape to produce my Rioja.
May 28th, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay.
I do hope it is the tempranillo grape to produce my Rioja.
May 28th, 2019 00:58
LUSH.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ahhhh FAY ! ANGELA HERE. *Wine which gladdens the Heart of Man & liberates the Heart of WOMAN !* And it all begins with GRAPES a very seansupous FRUIT ! *Orbs of pure AMETHYST and *Globes of VELVET* ! As you know my PAPA is a VINTNER and an Importer of RIOJA into the UK and an EXPORTER all over the WORLD ! He is visiting ME in Auckland next week (with MAMA) and he has already sent several cases of RIOJA by sea which I have stored in BOND @ the Docks Customns Warehouse. He is visiting some Vineyards in North island and conducting Tastings with local cheeses etc. I have acted as His Agent ~ thats one role Daughters can play for their Parents ~ Oiling the Wheels ! KIWIS like RIOJA and it complements the flavour of Lamb especially the Rose ! The wines my PAPA will demonstrate in NZ will cost (retail) about £(GB) 10 to 25 ~ with a discount of 25% for a case of SIX BOTTLES. It holds its own favourably with NZ Wines which are almost as expensive in NZ as they are in the UK. Like RIOJA they are always of high quality ~ so export of European Wines to NZ requires a lot of Diplomacy ~ PAPA is very Charming ! BRIAN & I both loved your Excellent Mouth Watering Picture & Sumptuous Poem in favour of the GRAPE ~ AMEN ! BRIAN wanted me to post the comment !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 27th, 2019 17:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ahhhh FAY ! ANGELA HERE. *Wine which gladdens the Heart of Man & liberates the Heart of WOMAN !* And it all begins with GRAPES a very seansupous FRUIT ! *Orbs of pure AMETHYST and *Globes of VELVET* ! As you know my PAPA is a VINTNER and an Importer of RIOJA into the UK and an EXPORTER all over the WORLD ! He is visiting ME in Auckland next week (with MAMA) and he has already sent several cases of RIOJA by sea which I have stored in BOND @ the Docks Customns Warehouse. He is visiting some Vineyards in North island and conducting Tastings with local cheeses etc. I have acted as His Agent ~ thats one role Daughters can play for their Parents ~ Oiling the Wheels ! KIWIS like RIOJA and it complements the flavour of Lamb especially the Rose ! The wines my PAPA will demonstrate in NZ will cost (retail) about £(GB) 10 to 25 ~ with a discount of 25% for a case of SIX BOTTLES. It holds its own favourably with NZ Wines which are almost as expensive in NZ as they are in the UK. Like RIOJA they are always of high quality ~ so export of European Wines to NZ requires a lot of Diplomacy ~ PAPA is very Charming ! BRIAN & I both loved your Excellent Mouth Watering Picture & Sumptuous Poem in favour of the GRAPE ~ AMEN ! BRIAN wanted me to post the comment !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 27th, 2019 17:22
Forsaken.
Neville said:
this needed to be writ Fay and I am so glad you writ it .... N
May 27th, 2019 06:47
Neville said:
this needed to be writ Fay and I am so glad you writ it .... N
May 27th, 2019 06:47
LUSH.
Neville said:
a remarkable dedication to the mighty grape & then some...cheers, N
May 27th, 2019 06:29
Neville said:
a remarkable dedication to the mighty grape & then some...cheers, N
May 27th, 2019 06:29
LUSH.
dusk arising said:
You\'re so well aquainted with vinyards Fay. Now they do say that the vine benefits from acts of love amidst its trains. What secrets are missing from your fine words today, your hints of orbs and globes, blushes and \'swollen in wait\' ..... oh such wine to sate ones thirst.
Such things will lead to a full-bodied Cornish delight, well rounded with more than a hint of fruitiness.
May 27th, 2019 06:05
dusk arising said:
You\'re so well aquainted with vinyards Fay. Now they do say that the vine benefits from acts of love amidst its trains. What secrets are missing from your fine words today, your hints of orbs and globes, blushes and \'swollen in wait\' ..... oh such wine to sate ones thirst.
Such things will lead to a full-bodied Cornish delight, well rounded with more than a hint of fruitiness.
May 27th, 2019 06:05
WALK EASY.
seeker123 said:
\"Smooth is a path which, if not distored, produces past truths unaltered\"
Wow I love that line it is so simple yet so complex that it packs a punch when read!
May 26th, 2019 10:23
seeker123 said:
\"Smooth is a path which, if not distored, produces past truths unaltered\"
Wow I love that line it is so simple yet so complex that it packs a punch when read!
May 26th, 2019 10:23
Live Silver.
Neville said:
the perfect title drew me in and once in, I was held fast till the very end... I swear my new beard glistens silver with sea sprayed salt...... top marks for this one my friend.... Neville
May 26th, 2019 05:03
Neville said:
the perfect title drew me in and once in, I was held fast till the very end... I swear my new beard glistens silver with sea sprayed salt...... top marks for this one my friend.... Neville
May 26th, 2019 05:03
Changeling.
Neville said:
you cant get much more magical than this.. not with words anyway.... made me feel quite Spritely so ya did.. Neville
May 25th, 2019 05:36
Neville said:
you cant get much more magical than this.. not with words anyway.... made me feel quite Spritely so ya did.. Neville
May 25th, 2019 05:36
WALK EASY.
Goldfinch60 said:
That gold and the gems are all along memories path, the dross can always be excluded from those memories.
Good write Fay.
May 24th, 2019 23:47
Goldfinch60 said:
That gold and the gems are all along memories path, the dross can always be excluded from those memories.
Good write Fay.
May 24th, 2019 23:47
WALK EASY.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MEMORIES ARE MADE OF THIS !
Thanks for this FAY : ANGELA here ! I only have 31 years and BRIAN 35 but in RETROSPECT it is enough ! I agree that it is better to dwell on pleasant memories and that negative ones should be frozen out of our sub-conscience. Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 9am Saturday here : Sailing later : Nice Autumn Day !
May 24th, 2019 15:19
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MEMORIES ARE MADE OF THIS !
Thanks for this FAY : ANGELA here ! I only have 31 years and BRIAN 35 but in RETROSPECT it is enough ! I agree that it is better to dwell on pleasant memories and that negative ones should be frozen out of our sub-conscience. Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 9am Saturday here : Sailing later : Nice Autumn Day !
May 24th, 2019 15:19
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