Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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Suresh said:
A moment of thrill, left blood spilled, that your poetic words displayed for us to see.
May 6th, 2019 12:04
Suresh said:
A moment of thrill, left blood spilled, that your poetic words displayed for us to see.
May 6th, 2019 12:04
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Brycycle said:
A tragic situation written with so much meaning, and well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:42
Brycycle said:
A tragic situation written with so much meaning, and well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:42
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Michael Edwards said:
So sad, so poignant - a tragic read so well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:03
Michael Edwards said:
So sad, so poignant - a tragic read so well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:03
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Lorna said:
It must have been a fast end from the violence of the car splitting in half.... something in me thinks that they were having a very exhilarating \"rush\" of excitement driving that fast......... and then nothing..... so as long as they didn\'t kill anyone else, they went to Valhalla having some fun. We\'re all here for such a short time - life is pretty meaningless really and death is a friend. You certainly caught the shock of the survivor.
May 6th, 2019 05:22
Lorna said:
It must have been a fast end from the violence of the car splitting in half.... something in me thinks that they were having a very exhilarating \"rush\" of excitement driving that fast......... and then nothing..... so as long as they didn\'t kill anyone else, they went to Valhalla having some fun. We\'re all here for such a short time - life is pretty meaningless really and death is a friend. You certainly caught the shock of the survivor.
May 6th, 2019 05:22
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Neville said:
so very sad.. but I imagine this is precisely how it happens and all too often..... a tragic moment captured so well...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 04:48
Neville said:
so very sad.. but I imagine this is precisely how it happens and all too often..... a tragic moment captured so well...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 04:48
Ready.
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me... perfectly poemed too I might add and likewise deserving of more views and recognition.... I sincerely hope this kick starts the same..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 04:09
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me... perfectly poemed too I might add and likewise deserving of more views and recognition.... I sincerely hope this kick starts the same..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 04:09
That Tree.
Neville said:
I understand precisely why you felt compelled to write about the specimen oak that features throughout its own dedication here... perfectly poemed now for eternity.... N
May 4th, 2019 04:13
Neville said:
I understand precisely why you felt compelled to write about the specimen oak that features throughout its own dedication here... perfectly poemed now for eternity.... N
May 4th, 2019 04:13
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Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain has now lifted and the light is there to shine on your life.
May 4th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain has now lifted and the light is there to shine on your life.
May 4th, 2019 00:22
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ As a Young Lady on the treshold of Life & Love I am in the position of one who has kept emotions and *favours* fettered and out of bounds. However with BRIAN (especially in the confines of a Camper Van !) some (but not all) of those fetters are beginning to fall ! I was raised a strict Catholic and mainly attended All Girls Schools and worked in a Profession which had a lot of Females ! When I started courting and ones sensual experience progressed and Boys asked me about progressing to the next stage my answer was always NO ! Fortunately they were Gentlemen : we didn\'t get drunk : and no one forced themselves on me and I never dated older or married MEN !
Therefore I remained to some extent innocent. I knew what to do : but never did it. I was a good role model for *Our Lady* ! However when I met Brian : I said YES even before HE asked ! I read somewhere that TRUE LOVE surrenders without coercion because it is its nature to submit ! Im sharing this with YOU because your POEM really made me think ! What was it about Brian that just made my fetters (of which I was very very proud) : just fall away a few Months after we met : AMEN That is my interpretation : OK My innocence was not taken from ME : I surended it voluntarilly to TRUE LOVE : AMEN !
Blessings & Love
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 3rd, 2019 16:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ As a Young Lady on the treshold of Life & Love I am in the position of one who has kept emotions and *favours* fettered and out of bounds. However with BRIAN (especially in the confines of a Camper Van !) some (but not all) of those fetters are beginning to fall ! I was raised a strict Catholic and mainly attended All Girls Schools and worked in a Profession which had a lot of Females ! When I started courting and ones sensual experience progressed and Boys asked me about progressing to the next stage my answer was always NO ! Fortunately they were Gentlemen : we didn\'t get drunk : and no one forced themselves on me and I never dated older or married MEN !
Therefore I remained to some extent innocent. I knew what to do : but never did it. I was a good role model for *Our Lady* ! However when I met Brian : I said YES even before HE asked ! I read somewhere that TRUE LOVE surrenders without coercion because it is its nature to submit ! Im sharing this with YOU because your POEM really made me think ! What was it about Brian that just made my fetters (of which I was very very proud) : just fall away a few Months after we met : AMEN That is my interpretation : OK My innocence was not taken from ME : I surended it voluntarilly to TRUE LOVE : AMEN !
Blessings & Love
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 3rd, 2019 16:29
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Neville said:
apologies for my late response my friend... I have visited these words several times already today.. it would be far too easy just to congratulate you for another very fine poem ... however, I feel it was only fitting to try and rise to the challenge and consider each metaphor in succession.... having now done so.... I think it is reasonable to suggest that your poem \'Unfettered\' might be seen and interpreted in several quite different ways... there is of course the feeling of liberation when one has been deliberating over something for a long period of time and finally decides to go for it... the oh what the hell kind of attitude.. there is also the almost undefinable lightness and freedom that one might experience on being set free... from a relationship, or confinement of any kind.. and the blindingly bright and uncluttered joy of being enlightened, either in the true Buddhist sense or of discovering something of great magnitude...... there are a further two that spring to mind also.. but whatever the case... this is an impressive write and if I have happened to untangle the inspiration behind these words... our secret will be safe with me.... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:16
Neville said:
apologies for my late response my friend... I have visited these words several times already today.. it would be far too easy just to congratulate you for another very fine poem ... however, I feel it was only fitting to try and rise to the challenge and consider each metaphor in succession.... having now done so.... I think it is reasonable to suggest that your poem \'Unfettered\' might be seen and interpreted in several quite different ways... there is of course the feeling of liberation when one has been deliberating over something for a long period of time and finally decides to go for it... the oh what the hell kind of attitude.. there is also the almost undefinable lightness and freedom that one might experience on being set free... from a relationship, or confinement of any kind.. and the blindingly bright and uncluttered joy of being enlightened, either in the true Buddhist sense or of discovering something of great magnitude...... there are a further two that spring to mind also.. but whatever the case... this is an impressive write and if I have happened to untangle the inspiration behind these words... our secret will be safe with me.... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:16
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moordykspot2 said:
A change of thinking in a very positive vein and now you will say YES I hope somebody asks the right question. My usual now admiring thanks to You for another fine verse
May 3rd, 2019 05:16
moordykspot2 said:
A change of thinking in a very positive vein and now you will say YES I hope somebody asks the right question. My usual now admiring thanks to You for another fine verse
May 3rd, 2019 05:16
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh! cry \"Freedom\"
Gave me goosebumos Fay this si very uplifting
Thanks for the post
Ona dry day this gives hope appreciated
May 3rd, 2019 04:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh! cry \"Freedom\"
Gave me goosebumos Fay this si very uplifting
Thanks for the post
Ona dry day this gives hope appreciated
May 3rd, 2019 04:27
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orchidee said:
I might swoon if I work out all the metaphors! lol. Is this the same lass as the other day? If it is, she\'s a busy gal, to be sure. She got no time to settle down for her Horlicks every evening! lol.
May 3rd, 2019 03:58
orchidee said:
I might swoon if I work out all the metaphors! lol. Is this the same lass as the other day? If it is, she\'s a busy gal, to be sure. She got no time to settle down for her Horlicks every evening! lol.
May 3rd, 2019 03:58
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moordykspot2 said:
Natures gifts covered with some super phrase work Reading your work Fay always gives me a new outlook on the subject matter you choose. It really is a most enjoyable learning experience. Thank you
May 2nd, 2019 14:02
moordykspot2 said:
Natures gifts covered with some super phrase work Reading your work Fay always gives me a new outlook on the subject matter you choose. It really is a most enjoyable learning experience. Thank you
May 2nd, 2019 14:02
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ This is a masterpiece in both Structure & Substance ! Line 1 3 5 are monosyllabic & environmental ~ They are amplified by longer lines (2 4 6). Line 7 (bisyllabic) poses a Question ~ Yet what ~ Whay tho\' ~ But what ! Line 8 questions the ardour in Lines (2 4 6) in each verse. Methinks the responses in Lines 8 are those of a Female regretting that the flowery words (2 4 6) did not lead to amorous acts ! In my experience Ladies take time to warm up (emotionally) but when they do the Libido of thoughtless Men has begun to wane ? With ANGELA I try to move at her pace ~ VIRGOS (which I am !) are very understanding LOVERS !
Blessings & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 13:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ This is a masterpiece in both Structure & Substance ! Line 1 3 5 are monosyllabic & environmental ~ They are amplified by longer lines (2 4 6). Line 7 (bisyllabic) poses a Question ~ Yet what ~ Whay tho\' ~ But what ! Line 8 questions the ardour in Lines (2 4 6) in each verse. Methinks the responses in Lines 8 are those of a Female regretting that the flowery words (2 4 6) did not lead to amorous acts ! In my experience Ladies take time to warm up (emotionally) but when they do the Libido of thoughtless Men has begun to wane ? With ANGELA I try to move at her pace ~ VIRGOS (which I am !) are very understanding LOVERS !
Blessings & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 13:41
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Suresh said:
Most appreciated this poetry,merit ten in the form of yester
May 2nd, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
Most appreciated this poetry,merit ten in the form of yester
May 2nd, 2019 10:45
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MendedFences27 said:
But what
wisdom sprouteth from thy pen if we not read thee?
Enlightening tidbits of knowledge and widom, well penned and greatly appreciated. A lovely write. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 10:03
MendedFences27 said:
But what
wisdom sprouteth from thy pen if we not read thee?
Enlightening tidbits of knowledge and widom, well penned and greatly appreciated. A lovely write. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 10:03
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SerenWise said:
Another beautiful piece, lovely archaic language and descriptive metaphor
May 2nd, 2019 06:20
SerenWise said:
Another beautiful piece, lovely archaic language and descriptive metaphor
May 2nd, 2019 06:20
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Neville said:
extremely well constructed and appealing whatever way one looks at it ....
I used to holiday at my friends place in the villa overlooking the bay in La Spezia where Shelley drowned ..... N
May 2nd, 2019 05:01
Neville said:
extremely well constructed and appealing whatever way one looks at it ....
I used to holiday at my friends place in the villa overlooking the bay in La Spezia where Shelley drowned ..... N
May 2nd, 2019 05:01
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Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
Was reading your words
Flowing from your heart
Onto the page of your life
To be read by my eyes
And reaching my heart.
May 2nd, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
Was reading your words
Flowing from your heart
Onto the page of your life
To be read by my eyes
And reaching my heart.
May 2nd, 2019 00:14
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing another wonderful Poem ! For ANGELA & I ~ HAPPINESS is our Shared Love ~ PAST : PRESENT : FUTURE ! Weve been more HAPPY in the last Ten Days of TOGETHERNESS thanwe have ever been !
V 1. PAST We love memories of passion in a Four Poster with Curtains !
V 2. PRESENT Champagne & Sweet Coffee
V 3. Skinny Dipping and a Soapy massage !
V 4. FUTURE Unwrapping Love ~ layer by layer ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY ~ Love in the Spirit
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing another wonderful Poem ! For ANGELA & I ~ HAPPINESS is our Shared Love ~ PAST : PRESENT : FUTURE ! Weve been more HAPPY in the last Ten Days of TOGETHERNESS thanwe have ever been !
V 1. PAST We love memories of passion in a Four Poster with Curtains !
V 2. PRESENT Champagne & Sweet Coffee
V 3. Skinny Dipping and a Soapy massage !
V 4. FUTURE Unwrapping Love ~ layer by layer ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY ~ Love in the Spirit
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:30
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moordykspot2 said:
Marvellous I loved \"Happiness\" fille me full of joy with a bit of wishful thinking thrown in. You my friend have that rare talent of lifting people into the world you paint so wonderfully with you words, Thank you
May 1st, 2019 14:26
moordykspot2 said:
Marvellous I loved \"Happiness\" fille me full of joy with a bit of wishful thinking thrown in. You my friend have that rare talent of lifting people into the world you paint so wonderfully with you words, Thank you
May 1st, 2019 14:26
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MendedFences27 said:
Ah, there\'s nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave something out. What a great stirring (not coffee) piece of poetry. \"The gems of rapture\" come only as time stands still, so very rare are they. Beautifully written. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 1st, 2019 13:13
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, there\'s nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave something out. What a great stirring (not coffee) piece of poetry. \"The gems of rapture\" come only as time stands still, so very rare are they. Beautifully written. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 1st, 2019 13:13
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