Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
UNFETTERED.
orchidee said:
I might swoon if I work out all the metaphors! lol. Is this the same lass as the other day? If it is, she\'s a busy gal, to be sure. She got no time to settle down for her Horlicks every evening! lol.
May 3rd, 2019 03:58
orchidee said:
I might swoon if I work out all the metaphors! lol. Is this the same lass as the other day? If it is, she\'s a busy gal, to be sure. She got no time to settle down for her Horlicks every evening! lol.
May 3rd, 2019 03:58
WHAT WORTH.
moordykspot2 said:
Natures gifts covered with some super phrase work Reading your work Fay always gives me a new outlook on the subject matter you choose. It really is a most enjoyable learning experience. Thank you
May 2nd, 2019 14:02
moordykspot2 said:
Natures gifts covered with some super phrase work Reading your work Fay always gives me a new outlook on the subject matter you choose. It really is a most enjoyable learning experience. Thank you
May 2nd, 2019 14:02
WHAT WORTH.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ This is a masterpiece in both Structure & Substance ! Line 1 3 5 are monosyllabic & environmental ~ They are amplified by longer lines (2 4 6). Line 7 (bisyllabic) poses a Question ~ Yet what ~ Whay tho\' ~ But what ! Line 8 questions the ardour in Lines (2 4 6) in each verse. Methinks the responses in Lines 8 are those of a Female regretting that the flowery words (2 4 6) did not lead to amorous acts ! In my experience Ladies take time to warm up (emotionally) but when they do the Libido of thoughtless Men has begun to wane ? With ANGELA I try to move at her pace ~ VIRGOS (which I am !) are very understanding LOVERS !
Blessings & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 13:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ This is a masterpiece in both Structure & Substance ! Line 1 3 5 are monosyllabic & environmental ~ They are amplified by longer lines (2 4 6). Line 7 (bisyllabic) poses a Question ~ Yet what ~ Whay tho\' ~ But what ! Line 8 questions the ardour in Lines (2 4 6) in each verse. Methinks the responses in Lines 8 are those of a Female regretting that the flowery words (2 4 6) did not lead to amorous acts ! In my experience Ladies take time to warm up (emotionally) but when they do the Libido of thoughtless Men has begun to wane ? With ANGELA I try to move at her pace ~ VIRGOS (which I am !) are very understanding LOVERS !
Blessings & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 13:41
WHAT WORTH.
Suresh said:
Most appreciated this poetry,merit ten in the form of yester
May 2nd, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
Most appreciated this poetry,merit ten in the form of yester
May 2nd, 2019 10:45
WHAT WORTH.
MendedFences27 said:
But what
wisdom sprouteth from thy pen if we not read thee?
Enlightening tidbits of knowledge and widom, well penned and greatly appreciated. A lovely write. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 10:03
MendedFences27 said:
But what
wisdom sprouteth from thy pen if we not read thee?
Enlightening tidbits of knowledge and widom, well penned and greatly appreciated. A lovely write. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 10:03
WHAT WORTH.
SerenWise said:
Another beautiful piece, lovely archaic language and descriptive metaphor
May 2nd, 2019 06:20
SerenWise said:
Another beautiful piece, lovely archaic language and descriptive metaphor
May 2nd, 2019 06:20
WHAT WORTH.
Neville said:
extremely well constructed and appealing whatever way one looks at it ....
I used to holiday at my friends place in the villa overlooking the bay in La Spezia where Shelley drowned ..... N
May 2nd, 2019 05:01
Neville said:
extremely well constructed and appealing whatever way one looks at it ....
I used to holiday at my friends place in the villa overlooking the bay in La Spezia where Shelley drowned ..... N
May 2nd, 2019 05:01
UNWRAPPED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
Was reading your words
Flowing from your heart
Onto the page of your life
To be read by my eyes
And reaching my heart.
May 2nd, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
Was reading your words
Flowing from your heart
Onto the page of your life
To be read by my eyes
And reaching my heart.
May 2nd, 2019 00:14
UNWRAPPED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing another wonderful Poem ! For ANGELA & I ~ HAPPINESS is our Shared Love ~ PAST : PRESENT : FUTURE ! Weve been more HAPPY in the last Ten Days of TOGETHERNESS thanwe have ever been !
V 1. PAST We love memories of passion in a Four Poster with Curtains !
V 2. PRESENT Champagne & Sweet Coffee
V 3. Skinny Dipping and a Soapy massage !
V 4. FUTURE Unwrapping Love ~ layer by layer ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY ~ Love in the Spirit
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing another wonderful Poem ! For ANGELA & I ~ HAPPINESS is our Shared Love ~ PAST : PRESENT : FUTURE ! Weve been more HAPPY in the last Ten Days of TOGETHERNESS thanwe have ever been !
V 1. PAST We love memories of passion in a Four Poster with Curtains !
V 2. PRESENT Champagne & Sweet Coffee
V 3. Skinny Dipping and a Soapy massage !
V 4. FUTURE Unwrapping Love ~ layer by layer ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY ~ Love in the Spirit
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:30
UNWRAPPED.
moordykspot2 said:
Marvellous I loved \"Happiness\" fille me full of joy with a bit of wishful thinking thrown in. You my friend have that rare talent of lifting people into the world you paint so wonderfully with you words, Thank you
May 1st, 2019 14:26
moordykspot2 said:
Marvellous I loved \"Happiness\" fille me full of joy with a bit of wishful thinking thrown in. You my friend have that rare talent of lifting people into the world you paint so wonderfully with you words, Thank you
May 1st, 2019 14:26
UNWRAPPED.
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, there\'s nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave something out. What a great stirring (not coffee) piece of poetry. \"The gems of rapture\" come only as time stands still, so very rare are they. Beautifully written. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 1st, 2019 13:13
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, there\'s nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave something out. What a great stirring (not coffee) piece of poetry. \"The gems of rapture\" come only as time stands still, so very rare are they. Beautifully written. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 1st, 2019 13:13
UNWRAPPED.
Suresh said:
You lived, what I only dreamt of.
Thnx for stoking my dreams expressed so eloquently.
May 1st, 2019 11:13
Suresh said:
You lived, what I only dreamt of.
Thnx for stoking my dreams expressed so eloquently.
May 1st, 2019 11:13
UNWRAPPED.
dusk arising said:
Exquisite. Oh that memories should all have such sweetness, untainted by reality.
May 1st, 2019 06:31
dusk arising said:
Exquisite. Oh that memories should all have such sweetness, untainted by reality.
May 1st, 2019 06:31
UNWRAPPED.
Neville said:
you have a great imagination Fay... and a fine pen..... this is a superb poem in a genre I can relate to and lose myself in..... Neville
May 1st, 2019 04:15
Neville said:
you have a great imagination Fay... and a fine pen..... this is a superb poem in a genre I can relate to and lose myself in..... Neville
May 1st, 2019 04:15
UNWRAPPED.
orchidee said:
Glad they had fun. Glad some one(s) had fun! Fido won\'t let me have fun. I will put him out the back yard a while, then let me hair down! lol.
May 1st, 2019 04:06
orchidee said:
Glad they had fun. Glad some one(s) had fun! Fido won\'t let me have fun. I will put him out the back yard a while, then let me hair down! lol.
May 1st, 2019 04:06
WILD.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful write! I love the painting! The first time you posted this painting, it fascinated me! Seeing it again, has had the same effect it had the first time! I think she’s quietly provoking her thinking...thinking of what she should write on that blank page...or perhaps she is reading what she was provoked to write on that page which is no longer blank!
I wonder if that painting inspired you to write your sensuous poem!
Excellent!
~Laura~
April 30th, 2019 17:04
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful write! I love the painting! The first time you posted this painting, it fascinated me! Seeing it again, has had the same effect it had the first time! I think she’s quietly provoking her thinking...thinking of what she should write on that blank page...or perhaps she is reading what she was provoked to write on that page which is no longer blank!
I wonder if that painting inspired you to write your sensuous poem!
Excellent!
~Laura~
April 30th, 2019 17:04
WILD.
dusk arising said:
The pictured lady awaits fate. Wild the smile inside.
April 30th, 2019 13:38
dusk arising said:
The pictured lady awaits fate. Wild the smile inside.
April 30th, 2019 13:38
WILD.
Netashi said:
Very wild very explicit and very well written. keep up the good work.
- T
April 30th, 2019 12:26
Netashi said:
Very wild very explicit and very well written. keep up the good work.
- T
April 30th, 2019 12:26
FREEING .
Poetic Dan said:
Eye.. booty be the best kind of treasure for you can sail the seas, just looking for it!
Great stuff
April 30th, 2019 11:22
Poetic Dan said:
Eye.. booty be the best kind of treasure for you can sail the seas, just looking for it!
Great stuff
April 30th, 2019 11:22
WILD.
Suresh said:
I imagine her thinking which words to use, keep it exotic or erotic.
Beautiful piece indeed
April 30th, 2019 10:38
Suresh said:
I imagine her thinking which words to use, keep it exotic or erotic.
Beautiful piece indeed
April 30th, 2019 10:38
WILD.
moordykspot2 said:
Another one Politely phrased but full if raw emotion and induces thoughts that perhaps should not be induced. Entrantress/ Seductress Both.Young Fay you are a marvell. Thank you
April 30th, 2019 06:05
moordykspot2 said:
Another one Politely phrased but full if raw emotion and induces thoughts that perhaps should not be induced. Entrantress/ Seductress Both.Young Fay you are a marvell. Thank you
April 30th, 2019 06:05
WILD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for a very sensuous Love Poem ! It all came true for BRIAN & I this week : snuggled up in our Love Nest (Camper Van !) You must be reading my THOUGHTS !
Blessings & Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
April 30th, 2019 04:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for a very sensuous Love Poem ! It all came true for BRIAN & I this week : snuggled up in our Love Nest (Camper Van !) You must be reading my THOUGHTS !
Blessings & Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
April 30th, 2019 04:02
WILD.
Neville said:
wild indeed and long may she remain both wild and free, but found here today on the border between romance and erotica.... Neville
April 30th, 2019 03:23
Neville said:
wild indeed and long may she remain both wild and free, but found here today on the border between romance and erotica.... Neville
April 30th, 2019 03:23
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