Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
COMBUSTION.
Suresh said:
Now I know the ingredients I was missing, lust, desire and sensuality,
No wonder I was incombustible
May 31st, 2019 18:34
Suresh said:
Now I know the ingredients I was missing, lust, desire and sensuality,
No wonder I was incombustible
May 31st, 2019 18:34
COMBUSTION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! 8:30am (SAT) in NZ a lovely bright AUTUMN DAY : Ideal for htting the Shops with Ruth (She is such a Blessing to ME !) and a Lazy Lunch on the Waterfront ! BRIAN (Bless his Heart) id going to have to drag me screaming from here in OCTOBER !
What are you on FAY ? You latest POEMS have all been as HOT as late Spring ! But this one *COMBUSTION* has a TALE in the STING ! *MINUS LOVE* I think one reason why technically BRIAN & I are still SINGLE @ 31 & 35 is because we have never practised GRATUITOUS LOVE ! I\'ll massage your BACK if you massage mine etc etc ! In our BOOK if we *Make Love* without being in Love we are just *Sounding Brass & a Tinkling Cymbal* : AMEN ! It is indeed just Resigned Sensualty ! Make believe YOU love ME one more TIME ! BRIAN & I are Truely in Love : which is
d why (although its very painful) we can remain FAITHFUL 11,500 miles apart : AMEN
Blessings & Love in all you do
Yos as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 31st, 2019 14:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! 8:30am (SAT) in NZ a lovely bright AUTUMN DAY : Ideal for htting the Shops with Ruth (She is such a Blessing to ME !) and a Lazy Lunch on the Waterfront ! BRIAN (Bless his Heart) id going to have to drag me screaming from here in OCTOBER !
What are you on FAY ? You latest POEMS have all been as HOT as late Spring ! But this one *COMBUSTION* has a TALE in the STING ! *MINUS LOVE* I think one reason why technically BRIAN & I are still SINGLE @ 31 & 35 is because we have never practised GRATUITOUS LOVE ! I\'ll massage your BACK if you massage mine etc etc ! In our BOOK if we *Make Love* without being in Love we are just *Sounding Brass & a Tinkling Cymbal* : AMEN ! It is indeed just Resigned Sensualty ! Make believe YOU love ME one more TIME ! BRIAN & I are Truely in Love : which is
d why (although its very painful) we can remain FAITHFUL 11,500 miles apart : AMEN
Blessings & Love in all you do
Yos as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 31st, 2019 14:56
COMBUSTION.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
‘COMBUSTION ‘ indeed!
You’ve ignited your page
with an excellent write...
which I enjoyed reading!
One caveat...
Beware of Circe’s Cup!😉
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 10:23
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
‘COMBUSTION ‘ indeed!
You’ve ignited your page
with an excellent write...
which I enjoyed reading!
One caveat...
Beware of Circe’s Cup!😉
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 10:23
THE VISION.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write and an incredibly vivid vision. I love the picture of the otter!
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 08:46
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write and an incredibly vivid vision. I love the picture of the otter!
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 08:46
COMBUSTION.
Neville said:
cleverly crafted, erogenously erotic, superbly sensual and terribly true... Neville
May 31st, 2019 04:39
Neville said:
cleverly crafted, erogenously erotic, superbly sensual and terribly true... Neville
May 31st, 2019 04:39
COMBUSTION.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Remove the love remove the heart
To tare a tear is torn apart
Sweet and sensitive as always Fay
BRAVO
May 31st, 2019 04:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Remove the love remove the heart
To tare a tear is torn apart
Sweet and sensitive as always Fay
BRAVO
May 31st, 2019 04:23
WHISPERS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Fay, I saw \'dawns waking yawns\" as I do most days.
May 31st, 2019 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Fay, I saw \'dawns waking yawns\" as I do most days.
May 31st, 2019 01:30
WHISPERS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : I know its MIDNIGHT for YOU : but its 12 noon (Friday) here and my next Clinic is not til 2pm ! So I have minute to grab a BITE and respond to your lovely POEM (mega busy !) DAWN is exceptional in Auckland (surrounded by Blue Sea) each one is different but equally beautiful. I love all the references to LOVE in each STANZA : Its not *18* its Sweet Sixteen (just 15 years ago for ME !)
1. Lusty Dreams to herald the show
2. Dawns fervour banishes Dark Night
3. FOREPLAY a Ladies pleasure in any context !
4. Glint of the first ardour of SUNRISE : AWESOME
5. Ready - Willing (& Able) : YES Sweetness & Light
6. The radient rise of LOVE : in each New Day !
7. DARKNESS is banished - AGAIN : And DAWN sits
at SUNS DOOR ~ ready & waiting to be KISSED ~ AMEN !
I a meaningful way ~ each verse reminded me of each DAWNING in our CAMPER VAN trip round SOUTH ISLAND ! When I woke to the Sunrise (each morning) My beloved BRIAN was really there (not a Dream !) right beside Me ! For us (on that trip) *Love in the Morning* made each day even more Special ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY : about Young love - In the Dawning of the Morning : AMEN. Memories are made of THIS ! Love the Picture of *The Golden Nymph of the Dawn !*
Blessings abundant & Peace & Love
Yours as always - ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Thanks FAY ~ A HEART for each loving STANZA !
May 30th, 2019 18:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : I know its MIDNIGHT for YOU : but its 12 noon (Friday) here and my next Clinic is not til 2pm ! So I have minute to grab a BITE and respond to your lovely POEM (mega busy !) DAWN is exceptional in Auckland (surrounded by Blue Sea) each one is different but equally beautiful. I love all the references to LOVE in each STANZA : Its not *18* its Sweet Sixteen (just 15 years ago for ME !)
1. Lusty Dreams to herald the show
2. Dawns fervour banishes Dark Night
3. FOREPLAY a Ladies pleasure in any context !
4. Glint of the first ardour of SUNRISE : AWESOME
5. Ready - Willing (& Able) : YES Sweetness & Light
6. The radient rise of LOVE : in each New Day !
7. DARKNESS is banished - AGAIN : And DAWN sits
at SUNS DOOR ~ ready & waiting to be KISSED ~ AMEN !
I a meaningful way ~ each verse reminded me of each DAWNING in our CAMPER VAN trip round SOUTH ISLAND ! When I woke to the Sunrise (each morning) My beloved BRIAN was really there (not a Dream !) right beside Me ! For us (on that trip) *Love in the Morning* made each day even more Special ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY : about Young love - In the Dawning of the Morning : AMEN. Memories are made of THIS ! Love the Picture of *The Golden Nymph of the Dawn !*
Blessings abundant & Peace & Love
Yours as always - ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Thanks FAY ~ A HEART for each loving STANZA !
May 30th, 2019 18:29
Together.
Neville said:
if we all give peace a chance.. there is a chance for peace... the togetherness is the crucial ingredient ... nice thought .. I live in hope.... N
May 30th, 2019 16:44
Neville said:
if we all give peace a chance.. there is a chance for peace... the togetherness is the crucial ingredient ... nice thought .. I live in hope.... N
May 30th, 2019 16:44
WHISPERS.
Suresh said:
I spoke of dusk, you speak of dawn-ing
One speaks of sleep, another wakes up yawning
A lovely read indeed
May 30th, 2019 12:03
Suresh said:
I spoke of dusk, you speak of dawn-ing
One speaks of sleep, another wakes up yawning
A lovely read indeed
May 30th, 2019 12:03
WHISPERS.
dusk arising said:
This is Fay at her finest. You are marvellous with the dawn. It\'s almost as if you have made it yours in your writing. Truly, dawn before us, from your hands, shows us your appreciation of something beautiful.
Favourites bound....
May 30th, 2019 09:47
dusk arising said:
This is Fay at her finest. You are marvellous with the dawn. It\'s almost as if you have made it yours in your writing. Truly, dawn before us, from your hands, shows us your appreciation of something beautiful.
Favourites bound....
May 30th, 2019 09:47
WHISPERS.
SerenWise said:
Lovely write, a beautiful tribute to the wonder of nature
May 30th, 2019 08:36
SerenWise said:
Lovely write, a beautiful tribute to the wonder of nature
May 30th, 2019 08:36
WHISPERS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna be gloomy - the Sun (last stanza). Only about 3 weeks before it starts getting dark again. Oops, wishing the year away!
May 30th, 2019 04:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna be gloomy - the Sun (last stanza). Only about 3 weeks before it starts getting dark again. Oops, wishing the year away!
May 30th, 2019 04:43
WHISPERS.
Neville said:
and who would mind waking up to this.... totally captivating in its entirety ..... Neville
ps... No one could possibly object..
May 30th, 2019 04:30
Neville said:
and who would mind waking up to this.... totally captivating in its entirety ..... Neville
ps... No one could possibly object..
May 30th, 2019 04:30
WHISPERS.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay I love this style and a fitting tribute to this beautiful morning.
The thought that this day is a whole life for some beings makes the dawn such a precious tantalising moment for them.
You captured this emotion with both hands and threw it out there like an Axinaea confusa flower
Thank you
May 30th, 2019 03:33
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay I love this style and a fitting tribute to this beautiful morning.
The thought that this day is a whole life for some beings makes the dawn such a precious tantalising moment for them.
You captured this emotion with both hands and threw it out there like an Axinaea confusa flower
Thank you
May 30th, 2019 03:33
SELFNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
That calmness can come over us all if we look at the flowers.
May 30th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That calmness can come over us all if we look at the flowers.
May 30th, 2019 00:20
SELFNESS.
Michael Edwards said:
Upright and sappy
And unassuming
flowers are happy
They’re always blooming.
May 29th, 2019 14:19
Michael Edwards said:
Upright and sappy
And unassuming
flowers are happy
They’re always blooming.
May 29th, 2019 14:19
SELFNESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I might talk to trees and flowers, but me feeling sorry for lamp-posts at night is going too far. I need another one of me pills! lol.
I shall be bringing the lamp-post indoors next, and tucking it up in bed. See the men in white coats arriving...…! I\'m in a poor state!
May 29th, 2019 11:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I might talk to trees and flowers, but me feeling sorry for lamp-posts at night is going too far. I need another one of me pills! lol.
I shall be bringing the lamp-post indoors next, and tucking it up in bed. See the men in white coats arriving...…! I\'m in a poor state!
May 29th, 2019 11:16
SELFNESS.
Suresh said:
Flowers are living organisms, and source of so much pleasure - sight, taste, touch and smell and sound that we humans can\'t hear.
Fragrant write indeed
May 29th, 2019 10:06
Suresh said:
Flowers are living organisms, and source of so much pleasure - sight, taste, touch and smell and sound that we humans can\'t hear.
Fragrant write indeed
May 29th, 2019 10:06
SELFNESS.
Poetic Dan said:
We are all truly one and connected to everything.
You always fill me with more wonder, thank you
May 29th, 2019 08:41
Poetic Dan said:
We are all truly one and connected to everything.
You always fill me with more wonder, thank you
May 29th, 2019 08:41
SELFNESS.
dusk arising said:
As i matured I began to see this in older folk and still do. I wonder if its visible in me?
May 29th, 2019 05:50
dusk arising said:
As i matured I began to see this in older folk and still do. I wonder if its visible in me?
May 29th, 2019 05:50
SELFNESS.
Neville said:
How could they not be happy, flowers have feelings too.....
Perfectly poemed my dear Fay.... Neville
May 29th, 2019 04:43
Neville said:
How could they not be happy, flowers have feelings too.....
Perfectly poemed my dear Fay.... Neville
May 29th, 2019 04:43
THE VISION.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful creature.
I have never seen an otter in the wild.We went to a place on Skye once that was the habitat of many otters and all we saw were seals and dolphins!
May 29th, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful creature.
I have never seen an otter in the wild.We went to a place on Skye once that was the habitat of many otters and all we saw were seals and dolphins!
May 29th, 2019 01:19
THE VISION.
Michael Edwards said:
A super write and like you, Fay, I am in awe of nature and all that it offers.
May 28th, 2019 11:56
Michael Edwards said:
A super write and like you, Fay, I am in awe of nature and all that it offers.
May 28th, 2019 11:56
THE VISION.
Suresh said:
Both the pic and the poetry reminded me of many a National Geographic episodes that have mesmerized me.
May 28th, 2019 10:52
Suresh said:
Both the pic and the poetry reminded me of many a National Geographic episodes that have mesmerized me.
May 28th, 2019 10:52
THE VISION.
Neville said:
I can understand why you wrote about this particular experience Fay.. I have seen these beauties in the wild on a couple of occasions and aint they summat to seriously behold.... I also had the pleasure of meeting Mr. Gavin Maxwell when I was but a nipper.... but that\'s another story.... Neville
May 28th, 2019 04:11
Neville said:
I can understand why you wrote about this particular experience Fay.. I have seen these beauties in the wild on a couple of occasions and aint they summat to seriously behold.... I also had the pleasure of meeting Mr. Gavin Maxwell when I was but a nipper.... but that\'s another story.... Neville
May 28th, 2019 04:11
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