Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WINDING DOWN.
Neville said:
these are some of the most memorable words I have enjoyed in quite some time.. reading them was like being there and true.... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:02
Neville said:
these are some of the most memorable words I have enjoyed in quite some time.. reading them was like being there and true.... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:02
WINDING DOWN.
dusk arising said:
Lovely romantic lines of rural life as was and continues. Yes dusk is a magical time which encourages we cease our toil and as my nom de plume suggests, dusk seems to grow in the shadows, arising from the ground whilst the sky remains lit from the fallen star.
Such atmosphere you create with your snoring collies and welcoming aromas.
May 8th, 2019 03:24
dusk arising said:
Lovely romantic lines of rural life as was and continues. Yes dusk is a magical time which encourages we cease our toil and as my nom de plume suggests, dusk seems to grow in the shadows, arising from the ground whilst the sky remains lit from the fallen star.
Such atmosphere you create with your snoring collies and welcoming aromas.
May 8th, 2019 03:24
WINDING DOWN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, another look back into our past as did dusk arising\'s \'new world\'.
Days of yore were so wonderful even with all the hard work needed in those times.
Can I have a three minute boiled egg please Fay.
May 8th, 2019 03:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, another look back into our past as did dusk arising\'s \'new world\'.
Days of yore were so wonderful even with all the hard work needed in those times.
Can I have a three minute boiled egg please Fay.
May 8th, 2019 03:19
TASTEFUL.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful era, we like art deco and have three of these types of artwork on our mantelpiece, only cheap ones I might add just reproductions of the real thing.
May 8th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful era, we like art deco and have three of these types of artwork on our mantelpiece, only cheap ones I might add just reproductions of the real thing.
May 8th, 2019 00:54
TASTEFUL.
dusk arising said:
At home? Don\'t you hear the beach calling.
All those bodies beautiful displayed in scant bathing apparel... and the not so beautiful of lifes survivors. Each a beauty within.
Aren\'t we poets lucky to be able to express our minds beauty as we do.
Just as well our beauty has many forms... mine\'s a hideous contrivance mind you. And such a contrast to the lovely picture you paint today.
May 7th, 2019 16:49
dusk arising said:
At home? Don\'t you hear the beach calling.
All those bodies beautiful displayed in scant bathing apparel... and the not so beautiful of lifes survivors. Each a beauty within.
Aren\'t we poets lucky to be able to express our minds beauty as we do.
Just as well our beauty has many forms... mine\'s a hideous contrivance mind you. And such a contrast to the lovely picture you paint today.
May 7th, 2019 16:49
Victorious.
Suresh said:
Love is and will always be the elixir, and the beauty is that it is priceless and free
Nice ode to love
May 7th, 2019 11:22
Suresh said:
Love is and will always be the elixir, and the beauty is that it is priceless and free
Nice ode to love
May 7th, 2019 11:22
TASTEFUL.
Suresh said:
If I breathed life into her, will she be mine - OHHHH! say yes!
Be careful what you wish for, for then you\'ll have to blow more than many lifetime of pensions HA! HA!
Fun read, indeed
May 7th, 2019 10:22
Suresh said:
If I breathed life into her, will she be mine - OHHHH! say yes!
Be careful what you wish for, for then you\'ll have to blow more than many lifetime of pensions HA! HA!
Fun read, indeed
May 7th, 2019 10:22
TASTEFUL.
moordykspot2 said:
What a great read. A dream girl and I fall in love. You my friend have becomec so quickly a firm favourite for me. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:38
moordykspot2 said:
What a great read. A dream girl and I fall in love. You my friend have becomec so quickly a firm favourite for me. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:38
TASTEFUL.
orchidee said:
Is she based a on a real, and feisty, lass?! That one you wrote about before? heehee.
May 7th, 2019 08:04
orchidee said:
Is she based a on a real, and feisty, lass?! That one you wrote about before? heehee.
May 7th, 2019 08:04
TASTEFUL.
Neville said:
This is erotica superbly dedicated to erotica.... both a winner and a keeper in my book.. Your marvelous description makes me want to go blow me pension on such a bronze.... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:07
Neville said:
This is erotica superbly dedicated to erotica.... both a winner and a keeper in my book.. Your marvelous description makes me want to go blow me pension on such a bronze.... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:07
SPIN-BACK
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a tragic accident but becoming all too common these days when speed is the way people deem necessary.
May 7th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a tragic accident but becoming all too common these days when speed is the way people deem necessary.
May 7th, 2019 00:16
First Love.
Neville said:
this is more than just a poem.. this is a series of moments captured that even in our autumn years shall bring a fresh smile upon the faces of many men...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 16:57
Neville said:
this is more than just a poem.. this is a series of moments captured that even in our autumn years shall bring a fresh smile upon the faces of many men...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 16:57
SPIN-BACK
moordykspot2 said:
Tragedy Fay Phrased in a poignant way Lost my Sister in a car crash So I can relate to your sentiments. These poems are neccessary if they can even pull one person up short. Bless you my friend.
May 6th, 2019 15:41
moordykspot2 said:
Tragedy Fay Phrased in a poignant way Lost my Sister in a car crash So I can relate to your sentiments. These poems are neccessary if they can even pull one person up short. Bless you my friend.
May 6th, 2019 15:41
SPIN-BACK
MendedFences27 said:
Taking speed from the car puts life into its inhabitants. When will people realize that there are safe speeds and reckless speeds?
Thanks Fay for bringing this tragic event to poetic fruition. I think your poem may serve to highlight the world-wide problem of auto safety.
- Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 15:10
MendedFences27 said:
Taking speed from the car puts life into its inhabitants. When will people realize that there are safe speeds and reckless speeds?
Thanks Fay for bringing this tragic event to poetic fruition. I think your poem may serve to highlight the world-wide problem of auto safety.
- Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 15:10
SPIN-BACK
Suresh said:
A moment of thrill, left blood spilled, that your poetic words displayed for us to see.
May 6th, 2019 12:04
Suresh said:
A moment of thrill, left blood spilled, that your poetic words displayed for us to see.
May 6th, 2019 12:04
SPIN-BACK
Brycycle said:
A tragic situation written with so much meaning, and well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:42
Brycycle said:
A tragic situation written with so much meaning, and well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:42
SPIN-BACK
Michael Edwards said:
So sad, so poignant - a tragic read so well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:03
Michael Edwards said:
So sad, so poignant - a tragic read so well expressed.
May 6th, 2019 08:03
SPIN-BACK
Lorna said:
It must have been a fast end from the violence of the car splitting in half.... something in me thinks that they were having a very exhilarating \"rush\" of excitement driving that fast......... and then nothing..... so as long as they didn\'t kill anyone else, they went to Valhalla having some fun. We\'re all here for such a short time - life is pretty meaningless really and death is a friend. You certainly caught the shock of the survivor.
May 6th, 2019 05:22
Lorna said:
It must have been a fast end from the violence of the car splitting in half.... something in me thinks that they were having a very exhilarating \"rush\" of excitement driving that fast......... and then nothing..... so as long as they didn\'t kill anyone else, they went to Valhalla having some fun. We\'re all here for such a short time - life is pretty meaningless really and death is a friend. You certainly caught the shock of the survivor.
May 6th, 2019 05:22
SPIN-BACK
Neville said:
so very sad.. but I imagine this is precisely how it happens and all too often..... a tragic moment captured so well...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 04:48
Neville said:
so very sad.. but I imagine this is precisely how it happens and all too often..... a tragic moment captured so well...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 04:48
Ready.
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me... perfectly poemed too I might add and likewise deserving of more views and recognition.... I sincerely hope this kick starts the same..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 04:09
Neville said:
makes perfect sense to me... perfectly poemed too I might add and likewise deserving of more views and recognition.... I sincerely hope this kick starts the same..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 04:09
That Tree.
Neville said:
I understand precisely why you felt compelled to write about the specimen oak that features throughout its own dedication here... perfectly poemed now for eternity.... N
May 4th, 2019 04:13
Neville said:
I understand precisely why you felt compelled to write about the specimen oak that features throughout its own dedication here... perfectly poemed now for eternity.... N
May 4th, 2019 04:13
UNFETTERED.
Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain has now lifted and the light is there to shine on your life.
May 4th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain has now lifted and the light is there to shine on your life.
May 4th, 2019 00:22
UNFETTERED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ As a Young Lady on the treshold of Life & Love I am in the position of one who has kept emotions and *favours* fettered and out of bounds. However with BRIAN (especially in the confines of a Camper Van !) some (but not all) of those fetters are beginning to fall ! I was raised a strict Catholic and mainly attended All Girls Schools and worked in a Profession which had a lot of Females ! When I started courting and ones sensual experience progressed and Boys asked me about progressing to the next stage my answer was always NO ! Fortunately they were Gentlemen : we didn\'t get drunk : and no one forced themselves on me and I never dated older or married MEN !
Therefore I remained to some extent innocent. I knew what to do : but never did it. I was a good role model for *Our Lady* ! However when I met Brian : I said YES even before HE asked ! I read somewhere that TRUE LOVE surrenders without coercion because it is its nature to submit ! Im sharing this with YOU because your POEM really made me think ! What was it about Brian that just made my fetters (of which I was very very proud) : just fall away a few Months after we met : AMEN That is my interpretation : OK My innocence was not taken from ME : I surended it voluntarilly to TRUE LOVE : AMEN !
Blessings & Love
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 3rd, 2019 16:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ As a Young Lady on the treshold of Life & Love I am in the position of one who has kept emotions and *favours* fettered and out of bounds. However with BRIAN (especially in the confines of a Camper Van !) some (but not all) of those fetters are beginning to fall ! I was raised a strict Catholic and mainly attended All Girls Schools and worked in a Profession which had a lot of Females ! When I started courting and ones sensual experience progressed and Boys asked me about progressing to the next stage my answer was always NO ! Fortunately they were Gentlemen : we didn\'t get drunk : and no one forced themselves on me and I never dated older or married MEN !
Therefore I remained to some extent innocent. I knew what to do : but never did it. I was a good role model for *Our Lady* ! However when I met Brian : I said YES even before HE asked ! I read somewhere that TRUE LOVE surrenders without coercion because it is its nature to submit ! Im sharing this with YOU because your POEM really made me think ! What was it about Brian that just made my fetters (of which I was very very proud) : just fall away a few Months after we met : AMEN That is my interpretation : OK My innocence was not taken from ME : I surended it voluntarilly to TRUE LOVE : AMEN !
Blessings & Love
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 3rd, 2019 16:29
UNFETTERED.
Neville said:
apologies for my late response my friend... I have visited these words several times already today.. it would be far too easy just to congratulate you for another very fine poem ... however, I feel it was only fitting to try and rise to the challenge and consider each metaphor in succession.... having now done so.... I think it is reasonable to suggest that your poem \'Unfettered\' might be seen and interpreted in several quite different ways... there is of course the feeling of liberation when one has been deliberating over something for a long period of time and finally decides to go for it... the oh what the hell kind of attitude.. there is also the almost undefinable lightness and freedom that one might experience on being set free... from a relationship, or confinement of any kind.. and the blindingly bright and uncluttered joy of being enlightened, either in the true Buddhist sense or of discovering something of great magnitude...... there are a further two that spring to mind also.. but whatever the case... this is an impressive write and if I have happened to untangle the inspiration behind these words... our secret will be safe with me.... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:16
Neville said:
apologies for my late response my friend... I have visited these words several times already today.. it would be far too easy just to congratulate you for another very fine poem ... however, I feel it was only fitting to try and rise to the challenge and consider each metaphor in succession.... having now done so.... I think it is reasonable to suggest that your poem \'Unfettered\' might be seen and interpreted in several quite different ways... there is of course the feeling of liberation when one has been deliberating over something for a long period of time and finally decides to go for it... the oh what the hell kind of attitude.. there is also the almost undefinable lightness and freedom that one might experience on being set free... from a relationship, or confinement of any kind.. and the blindingly bright and uncluttered joy of being enlightened, either in the true Buddhist sense or of discovering something of great magnitude...... there are a further two that spring to mind also.. but whatever the case... this is an impressive write and if I have happened to untangle the inspiration behind these words... our secret will be safe with me.... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:16
UNFETTERED.
moordykspot2 said:
A change of thinking in a very positive vein and now you will say YES I hope somebody asks the right question. My usual now admiring thanks to You for another fine verse
May 3rd, 2019 05:16
moordykspot2 said:
A change of thinking in a very positive vein and now you will say YES I hope somebody asks the right question. My usual now admiring thanks to You for another fine verse
May 3rd, 2019 05:16
UNFETTERED.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh! cry \"Freedom\"
Gave me goosebumos Fay this si very uplifting
Thanks for the post
Ona dry day this gives hope appreciated
May 3rd, 2019 04:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh! cry \"Freedom\"
Gave me goosebumos Fay this si very uplifting
Thanks for the post
Ona dry day this gives hope appreciated
May 3rd, 2019 04:27
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