Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
FERTILITY.
Suresh said:
Like seasons in nature are seasons in life.
Your poetic words show how slow and steady achieves strong growth
June 25th, 2019 13:26
Suresh said:
Like seasons in nature are seasons in life.
Your poetic words show how slow and steady achieves strong growth
June 25th, 2019 13:26
FERTILITY.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. In some woods they clear branches, grass, etc, but we can still trip over roots. Can\'t dig them up. Trees will fall down! Though some of them look as if they may fall anyway.
June 25th, 2019 06:31
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. In some woods they clear branches, grass, etc, but we can still trip over roots. Can\'t dig them up. Trees will fall down! Though some of them look as if they may fall anyway.
June 25th, 2019 06:31
FERTILITY.
Neville said:
the soil holds many secrets and sow she must to coin a phrase
the miracle of fertility being but one of them.. and where would we be without it...... A joy to read Fay.... Neville
June 25th, 2019 05:21
Neville said:
the soil holds many secrets and sow she must to coin a phrase
the miracle of fertility being but one of them.. and where would we be without it...... A joy to read Fay.... Neville
June 25th, 2019 05:21
FERTILITY.
dusk arising said:
Oh that you were my Biology teacher all those years ago! Maybe i would have become a great composer \"the symphony of the seedling\" being my masterpiece and upon interview i would tell \"I owe it all to the inspiration of Ms Fay whose poetic love of the natural world shone the light of creation into our young souls\".
Sadly it wasn\'t to be. But your poetic love of the natural world shines regularly upon us.
June 25th, 2019 03:53
dusk arising said:
Oh that you were my Biology teacher all those years ago! Maybe i would have become a great composer \"the symphony of the seedling\" being my masterpiece and upon interview i would tell \"I owe it all to the inspiration of Ms Fay whose poetic love of the natural world shone the light of creation into our young souls\".
Sadly it wasn\'t to be. But your poetic love of the natural world shines regularly upon us.
June 25th, 2019 03:53
UNWRAPPED.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
You are the gift who keeps on giving to her readers! Unwrapping your poems IS like drinking champagne and indulging in ‘darkly decadent chocolates’! An EXQUISITE read indeed!
~Laura~
June 25th, 2019 02:26
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
You are the gift who keeps on giving to her readers! Unwrapping your poems IS like drinking champagne and indulging in ‘darkly decadent chocolates’! An EXQUISITE read indeed!
~Laura~
June 25th, 2019 02:26
UNWRAPPED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
Reading poems that she writes,
Full of passion,
Captured from her heart and soul,
Put into these words
So we can dream of love.
June 25th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
Reading poems that she writes,
Full of passion,
Captured from her heart and soul,
Put into these words
So we can dream of love.
June 25th, 2019 00:56
UNWRAPPED.
marijoy said:
Your poem brought honeymoon to my memory. Beautiful and sweet. Thanks
June 24th, 2019 18:27
marijoy said:
Your poem brought honeymoon to my memory. Beautiful and sweet. Thanks
June 24th, 2019 18:27
UNWRAPPED.
dusk arising said:
Lots of loving wrote this today... it shines out. Beautiful times recounted.
June 24th, 2019 07:48
dusk arising said:
Lots of loving wrote this today... it shines out. Beautiful times recounted.
June 24th, 2019 07:48
UNWRAPPED.
Neville said:
Filled to overflowing with fond recollections many of us would be happy to share ... indeed, more than..
Neville
June 24th, 2019 04:18
Neville said:
Filled to overflowing with fond recollections many of us would be happy to share ... indeed, more than..
Neville
June 24th, 2019 04:18
UNWRAPPED.
Michael Edwards said:
Just love this one - full of joyous memories - very uplifting.
June 24th, 2019 03:18
Michael Edwards said:
Just love this one - full of joyous memories - very uplifting.
June 24th, 2019 03:18
After A Sip.
Neville said:
after a sip... even grey days can seem blue... tis the main reason I imbibe ....
June 23rd, 2019 12:08
Neville said:
after a sip... even grey days can seem blue... tis the main reason I imbibe ....
June 23rd, 2019 12:08
Youth\'s blood.
Neville said:
I kinda stumbled on these words... and between you and me... I\'m glad I did.... a fine and fitting tribute to those fine young men who made the ultimate sacrifice and who shall never be forgot...... Neville
June 23rd, 2019 12:04
Neville said:
I kinda stumbled on these words... and between you and me... I\'m glad I did.... a fine and fitting tribute to those fine young men who made the ultimate sacrifice and who shall never be forgot...... Neville
June 23rd, 2019 12:04
VIBES.
Suresh said:
Truly intense poetry indeed - a classroom subject of discussion
June 22nd, 2019 08:13
Suresh said:
Truly intense poetry indeed - a classroom subject of discussion
June 22nd, 2019 08:13
VIBES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, listening to nature passed is one of the things I do as I walk beside My river.
June 21st, 2019 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, listening to nature passed is one of the things I do as I walk beside My river.
June 21st, 2019 03:00
VIBES.
Neville said:
Your \'Vibes\' Fay is awe inspiring and made me shudder, for more reasons than might meet the eye... you touch on things here that I have been toying with myself in the last several days..... Neville
June 21st, 2019 01:41
Neville said:
Your \'Vibes\' Fay is awe inspiring and made me shudder, for more reasons than might meet the eye... you touch on things here that I have been toying with myself in the last several days..... Neville
June 21st, 2019 01:41
Victorious.
Neville said:
you got it in a nutshell here Fay.. it always wins in the end...... N
June 21st, 2019 01:24
Neville said:
you got it in a nutshell here Fay.. it always wins in the end...... N
June 21st, 2019 01:24
Bubble Magic.
Neville said:
the splendid sphere depicted here fragile and true
captured for eternity in words both iridescent and almost indescribabubble ....
I have a witches ball hanging in my study eerily similar in size and hue.. how strange is that.. N
June 20th, 2019 16:28
Neville said:
the splendid sphere depicted here fragile and true
captured for eternity in words both iridescent and almost indescribabubble ....
I have a witches ball hanging in my study eerily similar in size and hue.. how strange is that.. N
June 20th, 2019 16:28
SEDUCTION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA HERE ! Its nearly NOON (Saturday) Ive just had BRUNCH and getting ready for a SAIL 16C = 61F not bad for two weeks into WINTER ! Love the sub-tropical CLIMATE here ! Brian left this one for me to reply to : He loved it ! In esence I agree with You FAY : It is the Ladies who are the SEDUCERS and the MEN who are SEDUCED ! Females were created with many more *Tokens of Passion* to offer than mere MEN ! The WINE of our Passion is RED : like VINTAGE RIOJA : and it does both MAKE & BREAK MAN ! One taste at the Fountain of our LOVE and they are Slaves to our PASSION for EVER & A DAY : AMEN ! Thanks for sharing : I love SEXTETS with an abcabc Rhyme Pattern : flowing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 14th, 2019 18:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA HERE ! Its nearly NOON (Saturday) Ive just had BRUNCH and getting ready for a SAIL 16C = 61F not bad for two weeks into WINTER ! Love the sub-tropical CLIMATE here ! Brian left this one for me to reply to : He loved it ! In esence I agree with You FAY : It is the Ladies who are the SEDUCERS and the MEN who are SEDUCED ! Females were created with many more *Tokens of Passion* to offer than mere MEN ! The WINE of our Passion is RED : like VINTAGE RIOJA : and it does both MAKE & BREAK MAN ! One taste at the Fountain of our LOVE and they are Slaves to our PASSION for EVER & A DAY : AMEN ! Thanks for sharing : I love SEXTETS with an abcabc Rhyme Pattern : flowing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 14th, 2019 18:05
SEDUCTION.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ESCAPE!!! are you mad???
Wonderful write AGAIN! Fay
Love the SSSsssaucey SSsssnake!
June 14th, 2019 12:48
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ESCAPE!!! are you mad???
Wonderful write AGAIN! Fay
Love the SSSsssaucey SSsssnake!
June 14th, 2019 12:48
SEDUCTION.
Neville said:
ah\' the lure and the grip of a satin boa....... intoxicating.. in a fun kinda way..... delicious & then some.... Neville
June 14th, 2019 05:15
Neville said:
ah\' the lure and the grip of a satin boa....... intoxicating.. in a fun kinda way..... delicious & then some.... Neville
June 14th, 2019 05:15
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