Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
THE VISION.
dusk arising said:
I recall the last time i took a plunge several ladies seemed to take pleasure in those moments too.... judging by their raucus laughter.
You lucky person seeing this creature at home in its element. Thank you for sharing with us.
May 28th, 2019 03:57
dusk arising said:
I recall the last time i took a plunge several ladies seemed to take pleasure in those moments too.... judging by their raucus laughter.
You lucky person seeing this creature at home in its element. Thank you for sharing with us.
May 28th, 2019 03:57
THE VISION.
kevin browne said:
Ah, bless. it looked there for a moment for you and the otter shall have a lasting love affair. Such a smooth talker are these elusive animals and to have this for my first read of the morning has left me feeling I wan\'t an otter as a pet. Your devotion and love for the wilderness you desire have been totally rewarded within the life of an otters world. Love this, Fay Slimm. Thank you.
May 28th, 2019 03:55
kevin browne said:
Ah, bless. it looked there for a moment for you and the otter shall have a lasting love affair. Such a smooth talker are these elusive animals and to have this for my first read of the morning has left me feeling I wan\'t an otter as a pet. Your devotion and love for the wilderness you desire have been totally rewarded within the life of an otters world. Love this, Fay Slimm. Thank you.
May 28th, 2019 03:55
LUSH.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay.
I do hope it is the tempranillo grape to produce my Rioja.
May 28th, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay.
I do hope it is the tempranillo grape to produce my Rioja.
May 28th, 2019 00:58
LUSH.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ahhhh FAY ! ANGELA HERE. *Wine which gladdens the Heart of Man & liberates the Heart of WOMAN !* And it all begins with GRAPES a very seansupous FRUIT ! *Orbs of pure AMETHYST and *Globes of VELVET* ! As you know my PAPA is a VINTNER and an Importer of RIOJA into the UK and an EXPORTER all over the WORLD ! He is visiting ME in Auckland next week (with MAMA) and he has already sent several cases of RIOJA by sea which I have stored in BOND @ the Docks Customns Warehouse. He is visiting some Vineyards in North island and conducting Tastings with local cheeses etc. I have acted as His Agent ~ thats one role Daughters can play for their Parents ~ Oiling the Wheels ! KIWIS like RIOJA and it complements the flavour of Lamb especially the Rose ! The wines my PAPA will demonstrate in NZ will cost (retail) about £(GB) 10 to 25 ~ with a discount of 25% for a case of SIX BOTTLES. It holds its own favourably with NZ Wines which are almost as expensive in NZ as they are in the UK. Like RIOJA they are always of high quality ~ so export of European Wines to NZ requires a lot of Diplomacy ~ PAPA is very Charming ! BRIAN & I both loved your Excellent Mouth Watering Picture & Sumptuous Poem in favour of the GRAPE ~ AMEN ! BRIAN wanted me to post the comment !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 27th, 2019 17:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ahhhh FAY ! ANGELA HERE. *Wine which gladdens the Heart of Man & liberates the Heart of WOMAN !* And it all begins with GRAPES a very seansupous FRUIT ! *Orbs of pure AMETHYST and *Globes of VELVET* ! As you know my PAPA is a VINTNER and an Importer of RIOJA into the UK and an EXPORTER all over the WORLD ! He is visiting ME in Auckland next week (with MAMA) and he has already sent several cases of RIOJA by sea which I have stored in BOND @ the Docks Customns Warehouse. He is visiting some Vineyards in North island and conducting Tastings with local cheeses etc. I have acted as His Agent ~ thats one role Daughters can play for their Parents ~ Oiling the Wheels ! KIWIS like RIOJA and it complements the flavour of Lamb especially the Rose ! The wines my PAPA will demonstrate in NZ will cost (retail) about £(GB) 10 to 25 ~ with a discount of 25% for a case of SIX BOTTLES. It holds its own favourably with NZ Wines which are almost as expensive in NZ as they are in the UK. Like RIOJA they are always of high quality ~ so export of European Wines to NZ requires a lot of Diplomacy ~ PAPA is very Charming ! BRIAN & I both loved your Excellent Mouth Watering Picture & Sumptuous Poem in favour of the GRAPE ~ AMEN ! BRIAN wanted me to post the comment !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 27th, 2019 17:22
Forsaken.
Neville said:
this needed to be writ Fay and I am so glad you writ it .... N
May 27th, 2019 06:47
Neville said:
this needed to be writ Fay and I am so glad you writ it .... N
May 27th, 2019 06:47
LUSH.
Neville said:
a remarkable dedication to the mighty grape & then some...cheers, N
May 27th, 2019 06:29
Neville said:
a remarkable dedication to the mighty grape & then some...cheers, N
May 27th, 2019 06:29
LUSH.
dusk arising said:
You\'re so well aquainted with vinyards Fay. Now they do say that the vine benefits from acts of love amidst its trains. What secrets are missing from your fine words today, your hints of orbs and globes, blushes and \'swollen in wait\' ..... oh such wine to sate ones thirst.
Such things will lead to a full-bodied Cornish delight, well rounded with more than a hint of fruitiness.
May 27th, 2019 06:05
dusk arising said:
You\'re so well aquainted with vinyards Fay. Now they do say that the vine benefits from acts of love amidst its trains. What secrets are missing from your fine words today, your hints of orbs and globes, blushes and \'swollen in wait\' ..... oh such wine to sate ones thirst.
Such things will lead to a full-bodied Cornish delight, well rounded with more than a hint of fruitiness.
May 27th, 2019 06:05
WALK EASY.
seeker123 said:
\"Smooth is a path which, if not distored, produces past truths unaltered\"
Wow I love that line it is so simple yet so complex that it packs a punch when read!
May 26th, 2019 10:23
seeker123 said:
\"Smooth is a path which, if not distored, produces past truths unaltered\"
Wow I love that line it is so simple yet so complex that it packs a punch when read!
May 26th, 2019 10:23
Live Silver.
Neville said:
the perfect title drew me in and once in, I was held fast till the very end... I swear my new beard glistens silver with sea sprayed salt...... top marks for this one my friend.... Neville
May 26th, 2019 05:03
Neville said:
the perfect title drew me in and once in, I was held fast till the very end... I swear my new beard glistens silver with sea sprayed salt...... top marks for this one my friend.... Neville
May 26th, 2019 05:03
Changeling.
Neville said:
you cant get much more magical than this.. not with words anyway.... made me feel quite Spritely so ya did.. Neville
May 25th, 2019 05:36
Neville said:
you cant get much more magical than this.. not with words anyway.... made me feel quite Spritely so ya did.. Neville
May 25th, 2019 05:36
WALK EASY.
Goldfinch60 said:
That gold and the gems are all along memories path, the dross can always be excluded from those memories.
Good write Fay.
May 24th, 2019 23:47
Goldfinch60 said:
That gold and the gems are all along memories path, the dross can always be excluded from those memories.
Good write Fay.
May 24th, 2019 23:47
WALK EASY.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MEMORIES ARE MADE OF THIS !
Thanks for this FAY : ANGELA here ! I only have 31 years and BRIAN 35 but in RETROSPECT it is enough ! I agree that it is better to dwell on pleasant memories and that negative ones should be frozen out of our sub-conscience. Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 9am Saturday here : Sailing later : Nice Autumn Day !
May 24th, 2019 15:19
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MEMORIES ARE MADE OF THIS !
Thanks for this FAY : ANGELA here ! I only have 31 years and BRIAN 35 but in RETROSPECT it is enough ! I agree that it is better to dwell on pleasant memories and that negative ones should be frozen out of our sub-conscience. Thanks for caring & sharing !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Love
Yours as always ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 9am Saturday here : Sailing later : Nice Autumn Day !
May 24th, 2019 15:19
WALK EASY.
dusk arising said:
Looking back it is easy to see the failures for they came as a shock to the system and are truly eventful. But not necessarily meaningful. If instead we were to think of the positives which played their part then the whole episode becomes more meaningful and, if we take the positives forward into our lives, more reassuring and rewarding.
Gosh, thats my preacher bit over.
I enjoyed unravelling this, your final verse gave me inspiration.
May 24th, 2019 07:31
dusk arising said:
Looking back it is easy to see the failures for they came as a shock to the system and are truly eventful. But not necessarily meaningful. If instead we were to think of the positives which played their part then the whole episode becomes more meaningful and, if we take the positives forward into our lives, more reassuring and rewarding.
Gosh, thats my preacher bit over.
I enjoyed unravelling this, your final verse gave me inspiration.
May 24th, 2019 07:31
WALK EASY.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write fay
when there is more behind us than in front Memory lane looks more appealing
May 24th, 2019 04:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write fay
when there is more behind us than in front Memory lane looks more appealing
May 24th, 2019 04:41
WALK EASY.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem! It has reminded me to...
‘dig deeper and keep only gems of happiness’...
Beautifully said and I shall do that!
~Laura~🌻
May 24th, 2019 04:34
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem! It has reminded me to...
‘dig deeper and keep only gems of happiness’...
Beautifully said and I shall do that!
~Laura~🌻
May 24th, 2019 04:34
WALK EASY.
Neville said:
beautifully composed , but do I detect a hint of sadness or regret, along the road well traveled ...... Neville
May 24th, 2019 03:41
Neville said:
beautifully composed , but do I detect a hint of sadness or regret, along the road well traveled ...... Neville
May 24th, 2019 03:41
WALK EASY.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'ll take a walk. It may take some time with memories, seeing as I\'m millions of years old, so I say. Well, my middle name is \'Fossil\', so...!
May 24th, 2019 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'ll take a walk. It may take some time with memories, seeing as I\'m millions of years old, so I say. Well, my middle name is \'Fossil\', so...!
May 24th, 2019 03:11
ALLURE.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, the sea is so strong and yet it can produce all emotions within itself and within oneself.
May 24th, 2019 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, the sea is so strong and yet it can produce all emotions within itself and within oneself.
May 24th, 2019 00:42
ALLURE.
SerenWise said:
Very sensual write tinged with power and beauty, like the sea herself!
May 23rd, 2019 13:24
SerenWise said:
Very sensual write tinged with power and beauty, like the sea herself!
May 23rd, 2019 13:24
ALLURE.
Suresh said:
Whether crashing against the rocky shoreline or lapping the sandy beaches the sea can show either her mighty rage or her gentle side, but nobody can write about it as eloquently as you.
May 23rd, 2019 09:47
Suresh said:
Whether crashing against the rocky shoreline or lapping the sandy beaches the sea can show either her mighty rage or her gentle side, but nobody can write about it as eloquently as you.
May 23rd, 2019 09:47
ALLURE.
dusk arising said:
The immense power of a rough sea meeting a varied coastline is a wonderous sight not easily forgotten. The noise generated is like an anger spoken.
Your words took me right back to my most recent sight of such splendor which was on the south wales coast.
May 23rd, 2019 04:19
dusk arising said:
The immense power of a rough sea meeting a varied coastline is a wonderous sight not easily forgotten. The noise generated is like an anger spoken.
Your words took me right back to my most recent sight of such splendor which was on the south wales coast.
May 23rd, 2019 04:19
ALLURE.
Neville said:
one would be hard pressed, and I aint talkin apples to portray the sea in all its majesty and might any more seductively than you have here ... nor its sinister but compelling undertones and currents...... Nice one Fay..... Neville
May 23rd, 2019 04:11
Neville said:
one would be hard pressed, and I aint talkin apples to portray the sea in all its majesty and might any more seductively than you have here ... nor its sinister but compelling undertones and currents...... Nice one Fay..... Neville
May 23rd, 2019 04:11
FLASHES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Fay, I enjoy watchinbg swallows over lakes when they fly just above water level and dip their beaks into the water to drink.
May 23rd, 2019 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Fay, I enjoy watchinbg swallows over lakes when they fly just above water level and dip their beaks into the water to drink.
May 23rd, 2019 00:05
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