Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LILY.
Neville said:
the world needs more of these fancies ... poor Lily .. but what about the Roses, the Violets & Pansies.... there y\'are a nice little bit o horti culture............... Neville
June 4th, 2019 05:03
Neville said:
the world needs more of these fancies ... poor Lily .. but what about the Roses, the Violets & Pansies.... there y\'are a nice little bit o horti culture............... Neville
June 4th, 2019 05:03
LILY.
dusk arising said:
Now THERE is an expression of love for an often overlooked beauty. What a wonderful thought, to take a poorly, struggling plant and offer it a new life, a new chance to be what it was conceived to be.
Lovely thoughts behind this piece Fay.
Van Gogh came to mind. He painted sunflowers several times during his illness and recovery. If you notice, most of the paintings contain sunflowers in a very poor condition.
June 4th, 2019 04:30
dusk arising said:
Now THERE is an expression of love for an often overlooked beauty. What a wonderful thought, to take a poorly, struggling plant and offer it a new life, a new chance to be what it was conceived to be.
Lovely thoughts behind this piece Fay.
Van Gogh came to mind. He painted sunflowers several times during his illness and recovery. If you notice, most of the paintings contain sunflowers in a very poor condition.
June 4th, 2019 04:30
HAUTEUR..
SerenWise said:
Fantastic ode to an amazing creature, well written as always
June 3rd, 2019 18:53
SerenWise said:
Fantastic ode to an amazing creature, well written as always
June 3rd, 2019 18:53
HAUTEUR..
Neville said:
it would be selling this magnificent creature short to suggest it was a great predator.... the mighty Peregrine Falcon, lord of the skies and the ultimate hunter for sure..... very nicely poemed Fay..... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 04:23
Neville said:
it would be selling this magnificent creature short to suggest it was a great predator.... the mighty Peregrine Falcon, lord of the skies and the ultimate hunter for sure..... very nicely poemed Fay..... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 04:23
HAUTEUR..
dusk arising said:
Indeed a Steely piece for this feared hunter. I have seen sparrow hawks being pestered by a crowd of lesser birds to scare them away but never the superb falcon hawk.
I have been looked in the eye by a falcon as he flew along a road in the opposite direction to my driving... that won\'t leave me... an important second\'s glance as on he/she swept to prepare the hunt.
They are such purposeful creatures and so are your words today, nothing cute or cuddly, quite the opposite.
June 3rd, 2019 02:24
dusk arising said:
Indeed a Steely piece for this feared hunter. I have seen sparrow hawks being pestered by a crowd of lesser birds to scare them away but never the superb falcon hawk.
I have been looked in the eye by a falcon as he flew along a road in the opposite direction to my driving... that won\'t leave me... an important second\'s glance as on he/she swept to prepare the hunt.
They are such purposeful creatures and so are your words today, nothing cute or cuddly, quite the opposite.
June 3rd, 2019 02:24
HAUTEUR..
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful bird, the fastest creature in the world, I have seen them in flight but never seen them capture there prey as I have with sparrowhawks, sea eagles and kestrels.
Good tribute to a wonderful bird.
June 3rd, 2019 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful bird, the fastest creature in the world, I have seen them in flight but never seen them capture there prey as I have with sparrowhawks, sea eagles and kestrels.
Good tribute to a wonderful bird.
June 3rd, 2019 02:17
White Nectar.
Neville said:
what absolute insights you have shared with your readers Fay... and get this.. I can vouch for almost every word, but only since last Saturday when I was invited to try my hand at milking a cow on my neighbours farm.... tis not as easy as one might think.. is it... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 05:46
Neville said:
what absolute insights you have shared with your readers Fay... and get this.. I can vouch for almost every word, but only since last Saturday when I was invited to try my hand at milking a cow on my neighbours farm.... tis not as easy as one might think.. is it... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 05:46
Still Climbing.
Neville said:
how very true Fay.. and you have so very elegantly and eloquently emphasised the point here...
Neville
June 2nd, 2019 04:53
Neville said:
how very true Fay.. and you have so very elegantly and eloquently emphasised the point here...
Neville
June 2nd, 2019 04:53
Nectar.
Neville said:
A poets poem without a doubt, and not only that... anyone with good taste would surely fall in love with these words, once read.... Maybe even one of my fave Fay writes....... Neville
June 1st, 2019 04:19
Neville said:
A poets poem without a doubt, and not only that... anyone with good taste would surely fall in love with these words, once read.... Maybe even one of my fave Fay writes....... Neville
June 1st, 2019 04:19
COMBUSTION.
Suresh said:
Now I know the ingredients I was missing, lust, desire and sensuality,
No wonder I was incombustible
May 31st, 2019 18:34
Suresh said:
Now I know the ingredients I was missing, lust, desire and sensuality,
No wonder I was incombustible
May 31st, 2019 18:34
COMBUSTION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! 8:30am (SAT) in NZ a lovely bright AUTUMN DAY : Ideal for htting the Shops with Ruth (She is such a Blessing to ME !) and a Lazy Lunch on the Waterfront ! BRIAN (Bless his Heart) id going to have to drag me screaming from here in OCTOBER !
What are you on FAY ? You latest POEMS have all been as HOT as late Spring ! But this one *COMBUSTION* has a TALE in the STING ! *MINUS LOVE* I think one reason why technically BRIAN & I are still SINGLE @ 31 & 35 is because we have never practised GRATUITOUS LOVE ! I\'ll massage your BACK if you massage mine etc etc ! In our BOOK if we *Make Love* without being in Love we are just *Sounding Brass & a Tinkling Cymbal* : AMEN ! It is indeed just Resigned Sensualty ! Make believe YOU love ME one more TIME ! BRIAN & I are Truely in Love : which is
d why (although its very painful) we can remain FAITHFUL 11,500 miles apart : AMEN
Blessings & Love in all you do
Yos as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 31st, 2019 14:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! 8:30am (SAT) in NZ a lovely bright AUTUMN DAY : Ideal for htting the Shops with Ruth (She is such a Blessing to ME !) and a Lazy Lunch on the Waterfront ! BRIAN (Bless his Heart) id going to have to drag me screaming from here in OCTOBER !
What are you on FAY ? You latest POEMS have all been as HOT as late Spring ! But this one *COMBUSTION* has a TALE in the STING ! *MINUS LOVE* I think one reason why technically BRIAN & I are still SINGLE @ 31 & 35 is because we have never practised GRATUITOUS LOVE ! I\'ll massage your BACK if you massage mine etc etc ! In our BOOK if we *Make Love* without being in Love we are just *Sounding Brass & a Tinkling Cymbal* : AMEN ! It is indeed just Resigned Sensualty ! Make believe YOU love ME one more TIME ! BRIAN & I are Truely in Love : which is
d why (although its very painful) we can remain FAITHFUL 11,500 miles apart : AMEN
Blessings & Love in all you do
Yos as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 31st, 2019 14:56
COMBUSTION.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
‘COMBUSTION ‘ indeed!
You’ve ignited your page
with an excellent write...
which I enjoyed reading!
One caveat...
Beware of Circe’s Cup!😉
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 10:23
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
‘COMBUSTION ‘ indeed!
You’ve ignited your page
with an excellent write...
which I enjoyed reading!
One caveat...
Beware of Circe’s Cup!😉
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 10:23
THE VISION.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write and an incredibly vivid vision. I love the picture of the otter!
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 08:46
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write and an incredibly vivid vision. I love the picture of the otter!
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 08:46
COMBUSTION.
Neville said:
cleverly crafted, erogenously erotic, superbly sensual and terribly true... Neville
May 31st, 2019 04:39
Neville said:
cleverly crafted, erogenously erotic, superbly sensual and terribly true... Neville
May 31st, 2019 04:39
COMBUSTION.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Remove the love remove the heart
To tare a tear is torn apart
Sweet and sensitive as always Fay
BRAVO
May 31st, 2019 04:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Remove the love remove the heart
To tare a tear is torn apart
Sweet and sensitive as always Fay
BRAVO
May 31st, 2019 04:23
WHISPERS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Fay, I saw \'dawns waking yawns\" as I do most days.
May 31st, 2019 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Fay, I saw \'dawns waking yawns\" as I do most days.
May 31st, 2019 01:30
WHISPERS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : I know its MIDNIGHT for YOU : but its 12 noon (Friday) here and my next Clinic is not til 2pm ! So I have minute to grab a BITE and respond to your lovely POEM (mega busy !) DAWN is exceptional in Auckland (surrounded by Blue Sea) each one is different but equally beautiful. I love all the references to LOVE in each STANZA : Its not *18* its Sweet Sixteen (just 15 years ago for ME !)
1. Lusty Dreams to herald the show
2. Dawns fervour banishes Dark Night
3. FOREPLAY a Ladies pleasure in any context !
4. Glint of the first ardour of SUNRISE : AWESOME
5. Ready - Willing (& Able) : YES Sweetness & Light
6. The radient rise of LOVE : in each New Day !
7. DARKNESS is banished - AGAIN : And DAWN sits
at SUNS DOOR ~ ready & waiting to be KISSED ~ AMEN !
I a meaningful way ~ each verse reminded me of each DAWNING in our CAMPER VAN trip round SOUTH ISLAND ! When I woke to the Sunrise (each morning) My beloved BRIAN was really there (not a Dream !) right beside Me ! For us (on that trip) *Love in the Morning* made each day even more Special ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY : about Young love - In the Dawning of the Morning : AMEN. Memories are made of THIS ! Love the Picture of *The Golden Nymph of the Dawn !*
Blessings abundant & Peace & Love
Yours as always - ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Thanks FAY ~ A HEART for each loving STANZA !
May 30th, 2019 18:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : I know its MIDNIGHT for YOU : but its 12 noon (Friday) here and my next Clinic is not til 2pm ! So I have minute to grab a BITE and respond to your lovely POEM (mega busy !) DAWN is exceptional in Auckland (surrounded by Blue Sea) each one is different but equally beautiful. I love all the references to LOVE in each STANZA : Its not *18* its Sweet Sixteen (just 15 years ago for ME !)
1. Lusty Dreams to herald the show
2. Dawns fervour banishes Dark Night
3. FOREPLAY a Ladies pleasure in any context !
4. Glint of the first ardour of SUNRISE : AWESOME
5. Ready - Willing (& Able) : YES Sweetness & Light
6. The radient rise of LOVE : in each New Day !
7. DARKNESS is banished - AGAIN : And DAWN sits
at SUNS DOOR ~ ready & waiting to be KISSED ~ AMEN !
I a meaningful way ~ each verse reminded me of each DAWNING in our CAMPER VAN trip round SOUTH ISLAND ! When I woke to the Sunrise (each morning) My beloved BRIAN was really there (not a Dream !) right beside Me ! For us (on that trip) *Love in the Morning* made each day even more Special ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY : about Young love - In the Dawning of the Morning : AMEN. Memories are made of THIS ! Love the Picture of *The Golden Nymph of the Dawn !*
Blessings abundant & Peace & Love
Yours as always - ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Thanks FAY ~ A HEART for each loving STANZA !
May 30th, 2019 18:29
Together.
Neville said:
if we all give peace a chance.. there is a chance for peace... the togetherness is the crucial ingredient ... nice thought .. I live in hope.... N
May 30th, 2019 16:44
Neville said:
if we all give peace a chance.. there is a chance for peace... the togetherness is the crucial ingredient ... nice thought .. I live in hope.... N
May 30th, 2019 16:44
WHISPERS.
Suresh said:
I spoke of dusk, you speak of dawn-ing
One speaks of sleep, another wakes up yawning
A lovely read indeed
May 30th, 2019 12:03
Suresh said:
I spoke of dusk, you speak of dawn-ing
One speaks of sleep, another wakes up yawning
A lovely read indeed
May 30th, 2019 12:03
WHISPERS.
dusk arising said:
This is Fay at her finest. You are marvellous with the dawn. It\'s almost as if you have made it yours in your writing. Truly, dawn before us, from your hands, shows us your appreciation of something beautiful.
Favourites bound....
May 30th, 2019 09:47
dusk arising said:
This is Fay at her finest. You are marvellous with the dawn. It\'s almost as if you have made it yours in your writing. Truly, dawn before us, from your hands, shows us your appreciation of something beautiful.
Favourites bound....
May 30th, 2019 09:47
WHISPERS.
SerenWise said:
Lovely write, a beautiful tribute to the wonder of nature
May 30th, 2019 08:36
SerenWise said:
Lovely write, a beautiful tribute to the wonder of nature
May 30th, 2019 08:36
WHISPERS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna be gloomy - the Sun (last stanza). Only about 3 weeks before it starts getting dark again. Oops, wishing the year away!
May 30th, 2019 04:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna be gloomy - the Sun (last stanza). Only about 3 weeks before it starts getting dark again. Oops, wishing the year away!
May 30th, 2019 04:43
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