Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



WILD.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Excellent Fay
It\'s good to let go sometimes I agree
Go WILD

April 30th, 2019 03:23

WILD.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. She\'s a wild lass!

April 30th, 2019 03:13

His Star.
Neville said:

there is something a little bit special here Fay... well writ would be an understatement....

April 30th, 2019 03:07

SIGNS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words will draw love to you Fay.

April 30th, 2019 00:11

SIGNS.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

This is top mptch Fay I enjoyed the form and the flow

Well done again!

April 29th, 2019 17:18

SIGNS.
Suresh said:

If constant, difficult to measure loves account, need commotion to the emotions for true appreciation.

Your write is full of emotions

April 29th, 2019 14:37

SIGNS.
moordykspot2 said:

Oh My word I fine take on Love a most powerful emotion. I have been lucky enough to find it and it has enriched what I already thought was a good life. Thank you for all your words that are becoming available to me my friend

April 29th, 2019 14:02

SIGNS.
MendedFences27 said:

The ebb and flow of romantic inclinations eloquently expressed: warm and tender in Springtime, cold and severe in Winter.To reap or to sow matters not, Love is the essential intent. A great poem Fay. So well constructed. Loved it. - Phil A.

April 29th, 2019 11:06

SIGNS.
SerenWise said:

Another very emotive write, you have such a way with words - true poetry!

April 29th, 2019 06:42

SIGNS.
dusk arising said:

Spring is in the air and in your words. Hope, faith and renewal.

Now if that picture is of you a couple of years back... did the woodworm in those planks get into your hip? I do worry about things like this you know.

You do find a wonderful way with words creating such an emotional picture.

April 29th, 2019 06:39

SIGNS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ! In the last 15 years Brian & I have experiences both the ecstasy & agony of Love shared & Love spurned : BUT: since I met Brian it has only been Sweetness & Light ! Brian took a risk leaving me (in my Prime) alone (except for Ruth !) in a beautiful Country full of Beautiful Men and Brian in a College full of Beautiful Ladies. But in both our cases Our Love was much much stronger that TEMPTATION and on this intimate trip we have rewarded each other for our TRUE LOVE FIDELITY ~ AMEN. When Brian flies back to ESSEX on Friday I will die emotionally until OCTOBER when He returns to take me to be with HIM forever & ever AMEN ! You are a LADY FAY so you understand my sentiments. As a MAN ~ Brian is more than I could ask or even think !
Blessings & LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡


April 29th, 2019 05:58

SIGNS.
Michael Edwards said:

And add my vote - super work.

April 29th, 2019 05:12

SIGNS.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. Pity it started me singing (lol)!. The old(ish) song with that line \'Come love me again\'. Annie\'s Song by John Denver, 1974.
Yes, it seems Summery when in love; Wintry when having lost it. Aww.

April 29th, 2019 04:00

SIGNS.
Neville said:

it seems we have an established mutual appreciation society in the making ... this is delightful Fay.... Neville

April 29th, 2019 03:43

FREEING .
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. You/we would always give our riches for loves wonder.

April 29th, 2019 00:12

FREEING .
SerenWise said:

Beautifully written, I love the use of language!

April 28th, 2019 22:37

LUSTY TIMES.
moordykspot2 said:

Great image my friend reminds me of Jersey long ago. No more to be said. Ho Hum Thank you

April 28th, 2019 15:07

FREEING .
moordykspot2 said:

Another enjoyable Write and read my friend health and strength worth mor than any riches you so aptly describe. Thank you

April 28th, 2019 14:23

FREEING .
MendedFences27 said:

Better to be free than to possess. I loved this little thought provoker. Someone said, something like, \"Doing without possessions is essential to happiness.\" Yeah, lets all throw away our silly possessions. Great write, Fay. - Phil A. _


April 28th, 2019 13:27

FREEING .
dusk arising said:

Wanton, absolute wanton from you today.
Leaves me breathlessly begging ... ...more please!

(laughing at tepo\'s comment here)

April 28th, 2019 10:55

FREEING .
Suresh said:

Would I!
Yes!
No!
Yes!
No!

See what you have gone and done

April 28th, 2019 09:49

FREEING .
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

A million time yes... Wonderful Fay well done

April 28th, 2019 05:17

FREEING .
Neville said:

much more than a whimsey Fay.. this is a little gem in its own write and perfectly set upon this page ... N

April 28th, 2019 04:05

FREEING .
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

April 28th, 2019 04:04

FREEING .
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! My sentiments exactly about my beloved BRIAN ! I have been in Heaven this last week ! Love the picture IT WAS ME : waiting on the Auckland Shore for *BRIANS Boat to come in* Im so so pleased the waitings over (for two halcyon weeks !) and He has promised to come to take me HOME (to Essex : Lovely County !) in OCTOBER !
Blessings and Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 28th, 2019 03:27

LUSTY TIMES.
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times are wonderful, the memories will last forever.

April 28th, 2019 00:34

LUSTY TIMES.
Suresh said:

Dared to be caught, in open sight

April 27th, 2019 10:34

LUSTY TIMES.
orchidee said:

Bit chilly for it at the mo, in the gales, but the couple are keen! Fido, me (non-existent!) dog, won\'t let me know what \'lusty\' is, nor words like \'ardour. He\'s like a dull wet weekend! lol.
I will put him out the back garden, so he won\'t see me write a lusty-themed poem!

April 27th, 2019 10:03

Asking.
Neville said:

so very dad & more than.. N

April 27th, 2019 06:16

LUSTY TIMES.
Neville said:

when less say\'s more, this has got the lot and it shouts it out.... lovely N

April 27th, 2019 03:40



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