Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LOOKING.
dusk arising said:
Beauty in accepting the simple as it is. We complicated beings so over-complicate the world all around us. Defining, analysing, \'improving\' and messing with it rather than accepting we are in it. A harmonious simple existence with what is all around - it\'s just there for the taking.
An appreciation of a moments acceptance.
May 9th, 2019 15:48
dusk arising said:
Beauty in accepting the simple as it is. We complicated beings so over-complicate the world all around us. Defining, analysing, \'improving\' and messing with it rather than accepting we are in it. A harmonious simple existence with what is all around - it\'s just there for the taking.
An appreciation of a moments acceptance.
May 9th, 2019 15:48
LOOKING.
Michael Edwards said:
Still waiting for the first flush here in mid-England - great work Fay
May 9th, 2019 13:09
Michael Edwards said:
Still waiting for the first flush here in mid-England - great work Fay
May 9th, 2019 13:09
LOOKING.
moordykspot2 said:
A nother special poem featuring as subject matter a special flower. There is a variety \"Deep Secret\" which as well as a brilliant display carries a great scent. A top class variety as is your Poerty my friend Thank you
May 9th, 2019 12:19
moordykspot2 said:
A nother special poem featuring as subject matter a special flower. There is a variety \"Deep Secret\" which as well as a brilliant display carries a great scent. A top class variety as is your Poerty my friend Thank you
May 9th, 2019 12:19
LOOKING.
Suresh said:
Yesterday while visiting a house I own, I saw all the rose bushes in full bloom - hundreds of flowers blooming - a truly awe inspiring sight
I paused to smell the roses
Thnx Fay
May 9th, 2019 10:52
Suresh said:
Yesterday while visiting a house I own, I saw all the rose bushes in full bloom - hundreds of flowers blooming - a truly awe inspiring sight
I paused to smell the roses
Thnx Fay
May 9th, 2019 10:52
LOOKING.
siranswerer said:
Reminds me of the classics, but with modern vocab.
Nice.
May 9th, 2019 10:44
siranswerer said:
Reminds me of the classics, but with modern vocab.
Nice.
May 9th, 2019 10:44
TASTEFUL.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
SOMETIMES FAY @ An auction we are captivated by a Painting or a Sculpture of a sensuous LADY ! Such as you describe. She triggers something in our memory of Younger Carefree days ! WE MUST HAVE HER ! I didn\'t set my limit in POUNDS but the limit set itself for me (Brian doesnt like me attending auctions !). When it was exceeded (it was a Painting) I knew I could not possess her : BUT I felt she had possessed me. So I was satisfied ! Memories of an Art Auction in Essex. Sadly my limit was £50 it was sold for £250 !
Blessings & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 8th, 2019 16:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
SOMETIMES FAY @ An auction we are captivated by a Painting or a Sculpture of a sensuous LADY ! Such as you describe. She triggers something in our memory of Younger Carefree days ! WE MUST HAVE HER ! I didn\'t set my limit in POUNDS but the limit set itself for me (Brian doesnt like me attending auctions !). When it was exceeded (it was a Painting) I knew I could not possess her : BUT I felt she had possessed me. So I was satisfied ! Memories of an Art Auction in Essex. Sadly my limit was £50 it was sold for £250 !
Blessings & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 8th, 2019 16:33
WINDING DOWN.
moordykspot2 said:
I loved thus one young Fay. Joining this site has given me so much pleasure Your poems are up with the best of them. This one paints a true terrific picture I can relate to. To have a rare talent my friend I am so thankful I can view you work. Thankyou
May 8th, 2019 11:32
moordykspot2 said:
I loved thus one young Fay. Joining this site has given me so much pleasure Your poems are up with the best of them. This one paints a true terrific picture I can relate to. To have a rare talent my friend I am so thankful I can view you work. Thankyou
May 8th, 2019 11:32
WINDING DOWN.
Suresh said:
In farms around the globe, this image you have so elaborately versed, is still repeated everyday.
Maybe the dusk is appreciated more, because of toiling day.
May 8th, 2019 10:48
Suresh said:
In farms around the globe, this image you have so elaborately versed, is still repeated everyday.
Maybe the dusk is appreciated more, because of toiling day.
May 8th, 2019 10:48
WINDING DOWN.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very Rural Idyll ! When I was a child I spent some time on a very rural Farm in Angelsy N Wales. Itwas just as you Pictured & Described it. Lines of laundry ~ Cats ~ Home baked bread ~ Owls & the Welsh GFather Clock ~ Fresh eggs and Home churned cream ~ Dogs & tired Sheep & New born Lambs ~ A 24 hour Day ~ EVERY DAY ! I guess nearly 30 years later ~ things are very different in many Farms ! Mind YOU our Friends ~ who are the Sons & Daughters of Farmers would seek no other Way of Life ~ and the Girls all marry Farmers ! Some seek to be Vets and some Managers & Ecologists & Environmentalists etc. But all within the Sphere of FOOD PRODUCTION & LAND MANAGEMENT !
Blessings & Love
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 8th, 2019 09:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very Rural Idyll ! When I was a child I spent some time on a very rural Farm in Angelsy N Wales. Itwas just as you Pictured & Described it. Lines of laundry ~ Cats ~ Home baked bread ~ Owls & the Welsh GFather Clock ~ Fresh eggs and Home churned cream ~ Dogs & tired Sheep & New born Lambs ~ A 24 hour Day ~ EVERY DAY ! I guess nearly 30 years later ~ things are very different in many Farms ! Mind YOU our Friends ~ who are the Sons & Daughters of Farmers would seek no other Way of Life ~ and the Girls all marry Farmers ! Some seek to be Vets and some Managers & Ecologists & Environmentalists etc. But all within the Sphere of FOOD PRODUCTION & LAND MANAGEMENT !
Blessings & Love
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 8th, 2019 09:52
WINDING DOWN.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very Rural Idyll ! When I was a child I spent some time on a very rural Farm in Angelsy N Wales. Itwas just as you Pictured & Described it. Lines of laundry ~ Cats ~ Home baked bread ~ Owls & the Welsh GFather Clock ~ Fresh eggs and Home churned cream ~ Dogs & tired Sheep & New born Lambs ~ A 24 hour Day ~ EVERY DAY ! I guess nearly 30 years later ~ things are very different in many Farms ! Mind YOU our Friends ~ who are the Sons & Daughters of Farmers would seek no other Way of Life ~ and the Girls all marry Farmers ! Some seek to be Vets and some Managers & Ecologists & Environmentalists etc. But all within the Sphere of FOOD PRODUCTION & LAND MANAGEMENT !
Blessings & Love
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 8th, 2019 09:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very Rural Idyll ! When I was a child I spent some time on a very rural Farm in Angelsy N Wales. Itwas just as you Pictured & Described it. Lines of laundry ~ Cats ~ Home baked bread ~ Owls & the Welsh GFather Clock ~ Fresh eggs and Home churned cream ~ Dogs & tired Sheep & New born Lambs ~ A 24 hour Day ~ EVERY DAY ! I guess nearly 30 years later ~ things are very different in many Farms ! Mind YOU our Friends ~ who are the Sons & Daughters of Farmers would seek no other Way of Life ~ and the Girls all marry Farmers ! Some seek to be Vets and some Managers & Ecologists & Environmentalists etc. But all within the Sphere of FOOD PRODUCTION & LAND MANAGEMENT !
Blessings & Love
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 8th, 2019 09:52
WINDING DOWN.
Neville said:
these are some of the most memorable words I have enjoyed in quite some time.. reading them was like being there and true.... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:02
Neville said:
these are some of the most memorable words I have enjoyed in quite some time.. reading them was like being there and true.... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:02
WINDING DOWN.
dusk arising said:
Lovely romantic lines of rural life as was and continues. Yes dusk is a magical time which encourages we cease our toil and as my nom de plume suggests, dusk seems to grow in the shadows, arising from the ground whilst the sky remains lit from the fallen star.
Such atmosphere you create with your snoring collies and welcoming aromas.
May 8th, 2019 03:24
dusk arising said:
Lovely romantic lines of rural life as was and continues. Yes dusk is a magical time which encourages we cease our toil and as my nom de plume suggests, dusk seems to grow in the shadows, arising from the ground whilst the sky remains lit from the fallen star.
Such atmosphere you create with your snoring collies and welcoming aromas.
May 8th, 2019 03:24
WINDING DOWN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, another look back into our past as did dusk arising\'s \'new world\'.
Days of yore were so wonderful even with all the hard work needed in those times.
Can I have a three minute boiled egg please Fay.
May 8th, 2019 03:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, another look back into our past as did dusk arising\'s \'new world\'.
Days of yore were so wonderful even with all the hard work needed in those times.
Can I have a three minute boiled egg please Fay.
May 8th, 2019 03:19
TASTEFUL.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful era, we like art deco and have three of these types of artwork on our mantelpiece, only cheap ones I might add just reproductions of the real thing.
May 8th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful era, we like art deco and have three of these types of artwork on our mantelpiece, only cheap ones I might add just reproductions of the real thing.
May 8th, 2019 00:54
TASTEFUL.
dusk arising said:
At home? Don\'t you hear the beach calling.
All those bodies beautiful displayed in scant bathing apparel... and the not so beautiful of lifes survivors. Each a beauty within.
Aren\'t we poets lucky to be able to express our minds beauty as we do.
Just as well our beauty has many forms... mine\'s a hideous contrivance mind you. And such a contrast to the lovely picture you paint today.
May 7th, 2019 16:49
dusk arising said:
At home? Don\'t you hear the beach calling.
All those bodies beautiful displayed in scant bathing apparel... and the not so beautiful of lifes survivors. Each a beauty within.
Aren\'t we poets lucky to be able to express our minds beauty as we do.
Just as well our beauty has many forms... mine\'s a hideous contrivance mind you. And such a contrast to the lovely picture you paint today.
May 7th, 2019 16:49
Victorious.
Suresh said:
Love is and will always be the elixir, and the beauty is that it is priceless and free
Nice ode to love
May 7th, 2019 11:22
Suresh said:
Love is and will always be the elixir, and the beauty is that it is priceless and free
Nice ode to love
May 7th, 2019 11:22
TASTEFUL.
Suresh said:
If I breathed life into her, will she be mine - OHHHH! say yes!
Be careful what you wish for, for then you\'ll have to blow more than many lifetime of pensions HA! HA!
Fun read, indeed
May 7th, 2019 10:22
Suresh said:
If I breathed life into her, will she be mine - OHHHH! say yes!
Be careful what you wish for, for then you\'ll have to blow more than many lifetime of pensions HA! HA!
Fun read, indeed
May 7th, 2019 10:22
TASTEFUL.
moordykspot2 said:
What a great read. A dream girl and I fall in love. You my friend have becomec so quickly a firm favourite for me. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:38
moordykspot2 said:
What a great read. A dream girl and I fall in love. You my friend have becomec so quickly a firm favourite for me. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:38
TASTEFUL.
orchidee said:
Is she based a on a real, and feisty, lass?! That one you wrote about before? heehee.
May 7th, 2019 08:04
orchidee said:
Is she based a on a real, and feisty, lass?! That one you wrote about before? heehee.
May 7th, 2019 08:04
TASTEFUL.
Neville said:
This is erotica superbly dedicated to erotica.... both a winner and a keeper in my book.. Your marvelous description makes me want to go blow me pension on such a bronze.... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:07
Neville said:
This is erotica superbly dedicated to erotica.... both a winner and a keeper in my book.. Your marvelous description makes me want to go blow me pension on such a bronze.... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:07
SPIN-BACK
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a tragic accident but becoming all too common these days when speed is the way people deem necessary.
May 7th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a tragic accident but becoming all too common these days when speed is the way people deem necessary.
May 7th, 2019 00:16
First Love.
Neville said:
this is more than just a poem.. this is a series of moments captured that even in our autumn years shall bring a fresh smile upon the faces of many men...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 16:57
Neville said:
this is more than just a poem.. this is a series of moments captured that even in our autumn years shall bring a fresh smile upon the faces of many men...... Neville
May 6th, 2019 16:57
SPIN-BACK
moordykspot2 said:
Tragedy Fay Phrased in a poignant way Lost my Sister in a car crash So I can relate to your sentiments. These poems are neccessary if they can even pull one person up short. Bless you my friend.
May 6th, 2019 15:41
moordykspot2 said:
Tragedy Fay Phrased in a poignant way Lost my Sister in a car crash So I can relate to your sentiments. These poems are neccessary if they can even pull one person up short. Bless you my friend.
May 6th, 2019 15:41
SPIN-BACK
MendedFences27 said:
Taking speed from the car puts life into its inhabitants. When will people realize that there are safe speeds and reckless speeds?
Thanks Fay for bringing this tragic event to poetic fruition. I think your poem may serve to highlight the world-wide problem of auto safety.
- Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 15:10
MendedFences27 said:
Taking speed from the car puts life into its inhabitants. When will people realize that there are safe speeds and reckless speeds?
Thanks Fay for bringing this tragic event to poetic fruition. I think your poem may serve to highlight the world-wide problem of auto safety.
- Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 15:10
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