Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



BEING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Beautiful FAY : Thanks for sharing : Godliness with Contentment is great gain. Nature does not have to strive to achieve that ~ WE DO !
Blessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 24th, 2019 05:26

BEING.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words, we all must be ourselves but show our own life\'s beauty to others.

April 24th, 2019 03:10

BEING.
Neville said:

every now and then. all one needs to have a really good day is to find the truth poemed thus.... Neville

April 24th, 2019 02:15

BEING.
orchidee said:

I being liking this poem Fay - terrible grammar there! lol.

April 24th, 2019 01:51

EVENTS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful Fay, that composure will lead you to your dreams.

April 24th, 2019 00:15

EVENTS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Yes indeed FAY ~ Life is indeed a journey laced with uncertainty. Angela & I have both faced sorrow and defeat at times and survived. However at the moment Life & Love are smiling on us ~ in both the Journey we are undertaking in the next few days ~ but also the immediate & distant future. We never know what a day may bring forth. We rely on a PRAYER and a PROMISE ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring and sharing !
Blessings and Love in the SPIRIT
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 23rd, 2019 18:04

EVENTS.
moordykspot2 said:

Marvellous write transporting me into another world.So love my read Thank you

April 23rd, 2019 13:59

EVENTS.
Suresh said:

As you move on, Fay, if possible take me along as well



April 23rd, 2019 11:15

EVENTS.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay. I want that liquidity before going to bed - me Horlicks, probably, as I\'m centuries old, so I say! lol.

April 23rd, 2019 04:03

EVENTS.
Neville said:

you could probably hear my deep sigh from where you are Fay... tis lovely and true... N

April 23rd, 2019 03:59

SWEETNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:

I see all those goodies, both treats and words that go together so well Fay.

April 22nd, 2019 13:54

SWEETNESS.
Mundo said:

Nice sweet created pen. Thank you for sharing.

April 22nd, 2019 13:40

SWEETNESS.
SerenWise said:

Beautiful use of language and metaphor, nicely done

April 22nd, 2019 12:39

SWEETNESS.
Suresh said:

Me think ANGELA & BRIAN are living your poem.

Lovely write

April 22nd, 2019 10:59

SWEETNESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FAY ! Even @ 31 & 36 we can relate to this as we are still in the First Flush of True Love. In these last few precious days every scent & every savour of each other is butterscotch - caramel - mint - cherry lips - treacle - chocolate - by the end of this trip we will have eaten each other. We have NEVER EVER felt like this about anyone else before : IT MUST BE LOVE ! We know you will understand FAY because you write from experience : AMEN. In S Island BRIAN assures me there will be many many secret & precious places for us to share our LOVE and we are still discovering each other : AMEN Love the PICTURE FAY : That really is US : AMEN
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love in the Spirit ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 22nd, 2019 05:41

SWEETNESS.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay. I\'m gonna eat all that tasty stuff!

April 22nd, 2019 05:40

SWEETNESS.
Neville said:

sinfully sweet & then some...

April 22nd, 2019 04:51

SWEETNESS.
Michael Edwards said:

Super write Fay. I see expanding waistlines.

April 22nd, 2019 03:39

SWEETNESS.
dusk arising said:

Your eye sees more than the casual viewer methinks.

The candied excitement, thrill and magic of love and romance beside the oceans edge radiate through your words today.

April 22nd, 2019 03:21

AS FORETOLD.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Fay.

April 22nd, 2019 00:08

AS FORETOLD.
Suresh said:

Recounting the events so many times told, in your own prose. A solemn and awakening write

April 21st, 2019 13:04

AS FORETOLD.
dusk arising said:

The story of Jesus taught to us all as children re-told in condensed and meaningful mode. Compassion, awe and the quality of forgiveness shine through in your telling.

April 21st, 2019 03:58

AS FORETOLD.
Neville said:

a spiritual tale told timely and true..... N

April 21st, 2019 03:34

AS FORETOLD.
Poetic Dan said:

Interesting read!

April 21st, 2019 03:12

AS FORETOLD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

A BLESSED EASTER FAY ~ This is awesome an immaculate poem in tribute to our LORD & SAVIOUR JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN It needs no mundane style & subject analysis from US ~ just THANK YOU ~ AMEN !
Blessings & love in the Spirit ~ Love the visual too !
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN (9pm NZ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 21st, 2019 03:07

AS FORETOLD.
Michael Edwards said:

Some read, some write- a great work Fay

April 21st, 2019 01:56

AS FORETOLD.
orchidee said:

An eloquent write Fay.

April 21st, 2019 01:33

In Transit.
Neville said:

magical & true...

April 20th, 2019 11:31

December Sky
Neville said:

what a delightful dedication to my most favourite time of day.. N

April 19th, 2019 03:21

LETTING GO.
MendedFences27 said:

\"Letting go\" of love is painful beyond description. We are left with an enormous vacancy in life, as though standing on the precipice of the Grand Canyon.
Beautifully penned. It captures the heartbreak and flood of emotion, that follows. Where does one go from there? Loved your poem. - Phil A.

April 18th, 2019 18:52



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