Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
MIXTURES.
Michael Edwards said:
Nothing mixed up about this - great write Fay.
April 14th, 2019 08:14
Michael Edwards said:
Nothing mixed up about this - great write Fay.
April 14th, 2019 08:14
MIXTURES.
Neville said:
a most marvelous and fuzz free poem of great and unadulterated clarity.. N
April 14th, 2019 04:23
Neville said:
a most marvelous and fuzz free poem of great and unadulterated clarity.. N
April 14th, 2019 04:23
DEPARTURE.
MendedFences27 said:
\"Departure,\" flocks of birds leaving to migrate to better surroundings. It\'s enough to make one jealous of their freedom. Your poem conveys concern and appreciation of our feathered friends. I liked \"flapping thrum of wing beats.\" It captured the sensation to a \"T.\" Lovely poem Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2019 15:00
MendedFences27 said:
\"Departure,\" flocks of birds leaving to migrate to better surroundings. It\'s enough to make one jealous of their freedom. Your poem conveys concern and appreciation of our feathered friends. I liked \"flapping thrum of wing beats.\" It captured the sensation to a \"T.\" Lovely poem Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2019 15:00
DEPARTURE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love the picture ~ very nostalgic of Birds in Flight ! Migrating Birdsare a lovely sight for those priviledged to live on the Coast ~ and an equally lovely Poem ! I saw many Sea Birds on my trip to the S E Coast but not many migrating ~ except the Migrating SAND MARTINS from AFRICA ~ whose nesting holes were covered by netting ~ now removed !
Your poem describles elegantly the nostalgia of the THE LAST GLIMPSE of the departing GEESE ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Peace in the Spirit
Love BRIAN & ANGELA (5:30am still in Bed !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 12th, 2019 11:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love the picture ~ very nostalgic of Birds in Flight ! Migrating Birdsare a lovely sight for those priviledged to live on the Coast ~ and an equally lovely Poem ! I saw many Sea Birds on my trip to the S E Coast but not many migrating ~ except the Migrating SAND MARTINS from AFRICA ~ whose nesting holes were covered by netting ~ now removed !
Your poem describles elegantly the nostalgia of the THE LAST GLIMPSE of the departing GEESE ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Peace in the Spirit
Love BRIAN & ANGELA (5:30am still in Bed !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 12th, 2019 11:31
DEPARTURE.
Suresh said:
Beautifully imprinting your words to go with the image.
April 12th, 2019 11:20
Suresh said:
Beautifully imprinting your words to go with the image.
April 12th, 2019 11:20
DEPARTURE.
dusk arising said:
A part of life\'s cycle, leaving leadened skies and sulking horizon with the inbuilt knowledge of better times awaiting at journeys end. Though saddening for our winters heart and regretful thoughts that we may never see them again.
But they are back Fay, any day now they\'ll be here to light the days and squawk at your dawn\'s delight.
I for one look forward to reading about that from you.
April 12th, 2019 11:02
dusk arising said:
A part of life\'s cycle, leaving leadened skies and sulking horizon with the inbuilt knowledge of better times awaiting at journeys end. Though saddening for our winters heart and regretful thoughts that we may never see them again.
But they are back Fay, any day now they\'ll be here to light the days and squawk at your dawn\'s delight.
I for one look forward to reading about that from you.
April 12th, 2019 11:02
DEPARTURE.
Neville said:
This is so darn good, it makes one want to fly.... very atmospheric and with more than fifty shades of grey springing to mind as I watch and take stock of those pewter skies where skeins do fly.... I was reminded of Daphne Du Maurier\'s Rebecca and her mackerel sky... Neville
April 12th, 2019 05:29
Neville said:
This is so darn good, it makes one want to fly.... very atmospheric and with more than fifty shades of grey springing to mind as I watch and take stock of those pewter skies where skeins do fly.... I was reminded of Daphne Du Maurier\'s Rebecca and her mackerel sky... Neville
April 12th, 2019 05:29
DEPARTURE.
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, enjoyed reading while listening to them in the sun. As if they was thanking you too!
April 12th, 2019 05:28
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, enjoyed reading while listening to them in the sun. As if they was thanking you too!
April 12th, 2019 05:28
DEPARTURE.
moordykspot2 said:
Lovely words my friend superbly phrased. Emotions fully understood thankyou
April 12th, 2019 05:17
moordykspot2 said:
Lovely words my friend superbly phrased. Emotions fully understood thankyou
April 12th, 2019 05:17
DEPARTURE.
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them and hear them - fine write dear Fay
April 12th, 2019 04:36
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them and hear them - fine write dear Fay
April 12th, 2019 04:36
DEPARTURE.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I saw a whole load of pigeons taking off together recently.
April 12th, 2019 02:37
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I saw a whole load of pigeons taking off together recently.
April 12th, 2019 02:37
DEPARTURE.
Goldfinch60 said:
May those birds be forever in your soul Fay. Great write.
April 12th, 2019 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May those birds be forever in your soul Fay. Great write.
April 12th, 2019 02:34
NEWNESS..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY : Love the picture FAY : Newness of Life in the grass green leaves & Newness of Love in a fingertip touch ! Brian is still on his Field Trip on Coastal Erosion : the Norfolk Council put up nets to prevent erosion and the RSPB made them take it down because it blocked the nesting sites for the Terns !
I have spent most of my 30 Springs in the UK and the UK S[pring can be very tantilising especially when Brian is growing Veggies and trying to beat the Frost ! Some days like WINTER : Some like SUMMER & Some even like SPRING ! : Flowers in the Meadow BUT it is all part of Tomorrows REGENERATION !
Leaves & Blossom on the Trees : Wild Flowers in the Meadow and Chicks & Lambs & Calves & Foals all proving that in the natural Annual Cycle : Summer & Harvest & Winter & Springtime will never cease ! Thanks for sharing & caring about Nature & All of US !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 11th, 2019 18:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY : Love the picture FAY : Newness of Life in the grass green leaves & Newness of Love in a fingertip touch ! Brian is still on his Field Trip on Coastal Erosion : the Norfolk Council put up nets to prevent erosion and the RSPB made them take it down because it blocked the nesting sites for the Terns !
I have spent most of my 30 Springs in the UK and the UK S[pring can be very tantilising especially when Brian is growing Veggies and trying to beat the Frost ! Some days like WINTER : Some like SUMMER & Some even like SPRING ! : Flowers in the Meadow BUT it is all part of Tomorrows REGENERATION !
Leaves & Blossom on the Trees : Wild Flowers in the Meadow and Chicks & Lambs & Calves & Foals all proving that in the natural Annual Cycle : Summer & Harvest & Winter & Springtime will never cease ! Thanks for sharing & caring about Nature & All of US !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 11th, 2019 18:00
NEWNESS..
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed, I mean, look what happened to the dinosaurs.
April 11th, 2019 16:10
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed, I mean, look what happened to the dinosaurs.
April 11th, 2019 16:10
NEWNESS..
Goldfinch60 said:
May that regeneration bring that peace, joy and love to us all.
April 11th, 2019 15:20
Goldfinch60 said:
May that regeneration bring that peace, joy and love to us all.
April 11th, 2019 15:20
NEWNESS..
Suresh said:
Regeneration, a product of the cold, preparing for a chance to blossom again.
Feel the Spring again and again
April 11th, 2019 12:28
Suresh said:
Regeneration, a product of the cold, preparing for a chance to blossom again.
Feel the Spring again and again
April 11th, 2019 12:28
NEWNESS..
moordykspot2 said:
Being able to provoke thought is a gift and talent. You have both in your writing. A real pleasure to be able to read your work. I look forward to it. Thank you
April 11th, 2019 11:39
moordykspot2 said:
Being able to provoke thought is a gift and talent. You have both in your writing. A real pleasure to be able to read your work. I look forward to it. Thank you
April 11th, 2019 11:39
NEWNESS..
Michael Edwards said:
The promise of a new beginning and the signs are now everywhere.
April 11th, 2019 04:27
Michael Edwards said:
The promise of a new beginning and the signs are now everywhere.
April 11th, 2019 04:27
NEWNESS..
Neville said:
Hot off the press and shining like a beacon to guide both lost and wandering pilgrims to safety in the arms of a new and nourishing season we know as spring.... a little delight for sure... a bit like me lol .... Neville
April 11th, 2019 04:26
Neville said:
Hot off the press and shining like a beacon to guide both lost and wandering pilgrims to safety in the arms of a new and nourishing season we know as spring.... a little delight for sure... a bit like me lol .... Neville
April 11th, 2019 04:26
NEWNESS..
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
You say, “...hopefully meaningful”...
I say, “...very meaningful”...
Many signs of New Beginnings are beginning to emerge! Such a wonderful feeling!
Thank you for penning and sharing your beautiful thoughts!
~Laura~
April 11th, 2019 04:19
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
You say, “...hopefully meaningful”...
I say, “...very meaningful”...
Many signs of New Beginnings are beginning to emerge! Such a wonderful feeling!
Thank you for penning and sharing your beautiful thoughts!
~Laura~
April 11th, 2019 04:19
LIT.
moordykspot2 said:
Takes me back to my first girlfriend To this day I am sure I was in love even at 14 Marvellous sentiment really enjoyed mt read thank you
April 10th, 2019 12:10
moordykspot2 said:
Takes me back to my first girlfriend To this day I am sure I was in love even at 14 Marvellous sentiment really enjoyed mt read thank you
April 10th, 2019 12:10
LIT.
Michael Edwards said:
Oh gosh - I\'m there - that night - what a superb write dear Fay - all I can add is ditto all the previous comments.
April 10th, 2019 11:08
Michael Edwards said:
Oh gosh - I\'m there - that night - what a superb write dear Fay - all I can add is ditto all the previous comments.
April 10th, 2019 11:08
LIT.
Suresh said:
True love is truly love, as portrayed in both the pic and the lit
April 10th, 2019 10:55
Suresh said:
True love is truly love, as portrayed in both the pic and the lit
April 10th, 2019 10:55
LIT.
dusk arising said:
What lurks behind the poetic genius whose daily masterpieces leave us trailing in hopeless awe. Well... who knows?.. certainly a lady of many talents and surprises.
What a joyous steamy romp of a blistering sensual love poem you give us today.
I have to say that your piece today gave me a Hieneken moment.... it reached the parts other poems cannot reach.
April 10th, 2019 09:26
dusk arising said:
What lurks behind the poetic genius whose daily masterpieces leave us trailing in hopeless awe. Well... who knows?.. certainly a lady of many talents and surprises.
What a joyous steamy romp of a blistering sensual love poem you give us today.
I have to say that your piece today gave me a Hieneken moment.... it reached the parts other poems cannot reach.
April 10th, 2019 09:26
GEMS.
moordykspot2 said:
Takes this new reader to another place. Really enjoyable so well composed Thank you
April 10th, 2019 05:49
moordykspot2 said:
Takes this new reader to another place. Really enjoyable so well composed Thank you
April 10th, 2019 05:49
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