Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WRAITHS
Suresh said:
Nature has so much more to teach us - and one example is your subject here.
Schools of fish, or flocks of birds, bats and insects, in thousands and many times more, dance in a rythm that\'s awe inspiring.
Nice homage to bats, Fay
April 17th, 2019 11:39
Suresh said:
Nature has so much more to teach us - and one example is your subject here.
Schools of fish, or flocks of birds, bats and insects, in thousands and many times more, dance in a rythm that\'s awe inspiring.
Nice homage to bats, Fay
April 17th, 2019 11:39
WRAITHS
dusk arising said:
You certainly capture the speed and agility of these night sky dancers here Fay.
I had the delight of one entering my living room and entertaining me for a couple of minutes one summers nite many moons ago before it sounded its way back out to feast upon the moths gathered beneath the portico outside my window.
You describe something i have never seen though, that movie scene of a \'crowd\' of bats streaming across the skies. I only saw few at a time.
Once again your writing took me there.
April 17th, 2019 06:47
dusk arising said:
You certainly capture the speed and agility of these night sky dancers here Fay.
I had the delight of one entering my living room and entertaining me for a couple of minutes one summers nite many moons ago before it sounded its way back out to feast upon the moths gathered beneath the portico outside my window.
You describe something i have never seen though, that movie scene of a \'crowd\' of bats streaming across the skies. I only saw few at a time.
Once again your writing took me there.
April 17th, 2019 06:47
WRAITHS
Neville said:
what images these words do conjour...
so much nature captured in a patch of sky..... N
April 17th, 2019 04:24
Neville said:
what images these words do conjour...
so much nature captured in a patch of sky..... N
April 17th, 2019 04:24
WRAITHS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : I love BATS ! We have a lot in NZ in the caves ! I love the fact that they navigate by RADAR and not sight ! In BAT CAVES Ive never had a BAT in my hair : although I do wear a Hat with a LAMP ! Love the PHOTO and the POEM !
Your poem captures: Their rapid vapid movement : Their shadowy wraithness (apt word !) : Their feeding and sudden exit ! Another gem from FAY ! Please check my HOSPITALS POEM : Thanks
Blessings & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 17th, 2019 03:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : I love BATS ! We have a lot in NZ in the caves ! I love the fact that they navigate by RADAR and not sight ! In BAT CAVES Ive never had a BAT in my hair : although I do wear a Hat with a LAMP ! Love the PHOTO and the POEM !
Your poem captures: Their rapid vapid movement : Their shadowy wraithness (apt word !) : Their feeding and sudden exit ! Another gem from FAY ! Please check my HOSPITALS POEM : Thanks
Blessings & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 17th, 2019 03:16
SOLUTIONS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ for sharing an elegant LOVE POEM ! When BRIAN and I became engaged it was a first for both us because : for the first time we felt our mutual love was strong enough for commitment and subsequent Marriage ! Being apart has been difficult but the rings we wear (Brians is a signet ring with A🧡B on it !) have shown to the World that we (in the Modern Parlance) are : AN ITEM !
V 1. TRUE LOVE is Constant & Content and never fails !
V 2. LOVE wihout TRUST is ephemeral
V 3. TRUE LOVE should never be taken for granted : AMEN !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 16th, 2019 12:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ for sharing an elegant LOVE POEM ! When BRIAN and I became engaged it was a first for both us because : for the first time we felt our mutual love was strong enough for commitment and subsequent Marriage ! Being apart has been difficult but the rings we wear (Brians is a signet ring with A🧡B on it !) have shown to the World that we (in the Modern Parlance) are : AN ITEM !
V 1. TRUE LOVE is Constant & Content and never fails !
V 2. LOVE wihout TRUST is ephemeral
V 3. TRUE LOVE should never be taken for granted : AMEN !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 16th, 2019 12:58
SOLUTIONS.
Suresh said:
Love is a challenge at best
True Love is a wandering dream
Nice post Fay
April 16th, 2019 11:29
Suresh said:
Love is a challenge at best
True Love is a wandering dream
Nice post Fay
April 16th, 2019 11:29
Never Again.
Neville said:
You got it nailed down and wrapped in a poem Fay... When its gone, its gone and even tho there may be close approximations... each day is quite simply unique ........... N
April 16th, 2019 10:14
Neville said:
You got it nailed down and wrapped in a poem Fay... When its gone, its gone and even tho there may be close approximations... each day is quite simply unique ........... N
April 16th, 2019 10:14
SOLUTIONS.
Neville said:
an interesting quote indeed...
and a fine bedfellow to accompany your splendid and concise instruction manual on how to find the answers to love and stuff like that..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 08:51
Neville said:
an interesting quote indeed...
and a fine bedfellow to accompany your splendid and concise instruction manual on how to find the answers to love and stuff like that..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 08:51
SOLUTIONS.
moordykspot2 said:
A Love never understood it. I have been very lucky though.Good poem Good Advice from a Superb Writer. Thank you
April 16th, 2019 06:06
moordykspot2 said:
A Love never understood it. I have been very lucky though.Good poem Good Advice from a Superb Writer. Thank you
April 16th, 2019 06:06
SOLUTIONS.
dusk arising said:
Hmm that elusive two way bargain. A duet in perfect harmony and support. It\'s out there somewhere.
If only someone would remove this blindfold.
April 16th, 2019 04:53
dusk arising said:
Hmm that elusive two way bargain. A duet in perfect harmony and support. It\'s out there somewhere.
If only someone would remove this blindfold.
April 16th, 2019 04:53
UNSATED.
Neville said:
You surely must have been there to write something so emotive... One can only hope that time lives up to its reputation. a great post... Neville
April 16th, 2019 03:14
Neville said:
You surely must have been there to write something so emotive... One can only hope that time lives up to its reputation. a great post... Neville
April 16th, 2019 03:14
MAGICAL.
Suresh said:
We just had a poppy blossom her and it was so majestic, that many just parked their cars by the roadside and got out to stroll.
It caused an enormous traffic problem for many days.
Loved your words
April 15th, 2019 14:56
Suresh said:
We just had a poppy blossom her and it was so majestic, that many just parked their cars by the roadside and got out to stroll.
It caused an enormous traffic problem for many days.
Loved your words
April 15th, 2019 14:56
MAGICAL.
SerenWise said:
Gorgeous words and use of metaphor, I think everyone who has been in a bluebell woodland has felt this sense of peace and tranquility. Very nice write :)
April 15th, 2019 14:39
SerenWise said:
Gorgeous words and use of metaphor, I think everyone who has been in a bluebell woodland has felt this sense of peace and tranquility. Very nice write :)
April 15th, 2019 14:39
MAGICAL.
moordykspot2 said:
What a fine write. I love these sort of poems and you my friend are so very thorough in your coverage of the subject matter. Really enjoy my reading of your work. Thank you
April 15th, 2019 06:38
moordykspot2 said:
What a fine write. I love these sort of poems and you my friend are so very thorough in your coverage of the subject matter. Really enjoy my reading of your work. Thank you
April 15th, 2019 06:38
I Day.
Neville said:
It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know that, dont you.... I can understand entirely where you found your inspiration Fay.. I am convinced you have some of the best coastline anywhere on the planet and you certainly did it and gentle erotica justice the day you posted here...... Neville
April 15th, 2019 05:40
Neville said:
It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know that, dont you.... I can understand entirely where you found your inspiration Fay.. I am convinced you have some of the best coastline anywhere on the planet and you certainly did it and gentle erotica justice the day you posted here...... Neville
April 15th, 2019 05:40
MAGICAL.
Neville said:
a magical image to accompany your most magical of \'Magical\'..
I swear I could smell the sunlight the moss and the ferns... N
April 15th, 2019 03:31
Neville said:
a magical image to accompany your most magical of \'Magical\'..
I swear I could smell the sunlight the moss and the ferns... N
April 15th, 2019 03:31
MAGICAL.
Michael Edwards said:
The verse doesn\'t try to portray it - it does portray it - beautiful write and I\'m now minded to visit our local bluebell woods - we are lucky in that we have several round here.
April 15th, 2019 02:57
Michael Edwards said:
The verse doesn\'t try to portray it - it does portray it - beautiful write and I\'m now minded to visit our local bluebell woods - we are lucky in that we have several round here.
April 15th, 2019 02:57
MAGICAL.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. We can\'t walk through ha small bluebell wood now. It\'s overgrown! But there are patches of bluebells in a larger wood to enjoy.
April 15th, 2019 02:55
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. We can\'t walk through ha small bluebell wood now. It\'s overgrown! But there are patches of bluebells in a larger wood to enjoy.
April 15th, 2019 02:55
MAGICAL.
dusk arising said:
\'Stillness breeds awe\' and quiet yes, does become lush.
Slowly re-reading you i feel every piece of this and how everything you decribe refreshes and repairs.
Early mornings amidst those bluebells in your picture (are they here so early this year) seems a lifetime ago..... i must repair to the woods.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
dusk arising said:
\'Stillness breeds awe\' and quiet yes, does become lush.
Slowly re-reading you i feel every piece of this and how everything you decribe refreshes and repairs.
Early mornings amidst those bluebells in your picture (are they here so early this year) seems a lifetime ago..... i must repair to the woods.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
MAGICAL.
kevin browne said:
Nicely written, Fay Slimm. Your arrangement of wording is stunningly designed. From start to finish I enjoyed every word. Thank you for a good start to the day.
April 15th, 2019 02:17
kevin browne said:
Nicely written, Fay Slimm. Your arrangement of wording is stunningly designed. From start to finish I enjoyed every word. Thank you for a good start to the day.
April 15th, 2019 02:17
MIXTURES.
dusk arising said:
Wow! Now i can look in the mirror and begin to think i DO fit into the scheme of things after all.
April 15th, 2019 00:20
dusk arising said:
Wow! Now i can look in the mirror and begin to think i DO fit into the scheme of things after all.
April 15th, 2019 00:20
MIXTURES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb colourful write Fay. A kaleidoscope of words.
April 15th, 2019 00:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb colourful write Fay. A kaleidoscope of words.
April 15th, 2019 00:02
MIXTURES.
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically, perhaps Mixture is what will save the World. - A great write Fay, eye opening, to many things. If one opens one\'s mind to the variations of Nature, perhaps the fear of difference will disappear. Wouldn\'t that be wonderful. Thanks for the inspiration. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:45
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically, perhaps Mixture is what will save the World. - A great write Fay, eye opening, to many things. If one opens one\'s mind to the variations of Nature, perhaps the fear of difference will disappear. Wouldn\'t that be wonderful. Thanks for the inspiration. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:45
MIXTURES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ FOR A VERY ZIG-ZAGGYPOEM ~ The fragmented style (15 verses ?) is dictated by the context ! Loved the pictures you chose ~ the Peacoks Eye ~ Went to a Wedding recently and there was a Peacock (many selfies) especially when he fully unfurled his TAIL for the Peahens (All Essex Girls !) Loved the BADGE in praise of Dappled Things.
I\'ve been talking about VOCABULARY in my Language Poem and \"MIXTURES\" is a feast ! God in His Creation is a master of design and camelflage Yiou highlight the use of freckles - prisms - tessalation (good word) - checks - variegating - flushes - irridescence - pattern - striation - patches - harlequin - pibald - brindled - irradiation - kaleidescope - mosaic - speckles - polychrome - rainbows - tricoloured - marbled -banded - spotted - sprinkled - veined - tattooed - grizzled & dappled ! 28 different words to touch the hem of Moher Natures HAUTE COURTURE ! Even in FASHION we are only thinking Gods thoughts after HIM ~ What a Wonderful World ! Thanks for sharing so so elegantly wordwise !
Blessings & Love
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
April 14th, 2019 12:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ FOR A VERY ZIG-ZAGGYPOEM ~ The fragmented style (15 verses ?) is dictated by the context ! Loved the pictures you chose ~ the Peacoks Eye ~ Went to a Wedding recently and there was a Peacock (many selfies) especially when he fully unfurled his TAIL for the Peahens (All Essex Girls !) Loved the BADGE in praise of Dappled Things.
I\'ve been talking about VOCABULARY in my Language Poem and \"MIXTURES\" is a feast ! God in His Creation is a master of design and camelflage Yiou highlight the use of freckles - prisms - tessalation (good word) - checks - variegating - flushes - irridescence - pattern - striation - patches - harlequin - pibald - brindled - irradiation - kaleidescope - mosaic - speckles - polychrome - rainbows - tricoloured - marbled -banded - spotted - sprinkled - veined - tattooed - grizzled & dappled ! 28 different words to touch the hem of Moher Natures HAUTE COURTURE ! Even in FASHION we are only thinking Gods thoughts after HIM ~ What a Wonderful World ! Thanks for sharing so so elegantly wordwise !
Blessings & Love
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
April 14th, 2019 12:33
MIXTURES.
Suresh said:
What nature creates, man replicates
We are still learning natures mystery and awesomeness every day.
Good write Fay
April 14th, 2019 11:56
Suresh said:
What nature creates, man replicates
We are still learning natures mystery and awesomeness every day.
Good write Fay
April 14th, 2019 11:56
MIXTURES.
moordykspot2 said:
I enjoyed this one. Set me thinking how much more I must open my eyes and mind This planet offers great gifts often overlooked and not appreciated. Reading your work is an education Thank you
April 14th, 2019 08:31
moordykspot2 said:
I enjoyed this one. Set me thinking how much more I must open my eyes and mind This planet offers great gifts often overlooked and not appreciated. Reading your work is an education Thank you
April 14th, 2019 08:31
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