Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LIT.
Neville said:
Wow indeed,
this is amazing in its own write and made even more so by the image that accompanies these passionate words throughout, until that most perfect conclusion..... Neville
April 10th, 2019 04:19
Neville said:
Wow indeed,
this is amazing in its own write and made even more so by the image that accompanies these passionate words throughout, until that most perfect conclusion..... Neville
April 10th, 2019 04:19
GEMS.
Suresh said:
Sitting by the window, watching the rain fall. And then, following the path of a single drop gliding down the window pane - envisioning all that you so poetically framed
April 9th, 2019 23:33
Suresh said:
Sitting by the window, watching the rain fall. And then, following the path of a single drop gliding down the window pane - envisioning all that you so poetically framed
April 9th, 2019 23:33
GEMS.
dusk arising said:
Delightful little raindrops. Oh where were they when i was literally soaked to the skin last night called out to attend a gas installation. HUGE mental shift created by you here as i appreciate the beauty of each of these little gems which overpowered me last night.
Revoking a soaking.
April 9th, 2019 07:14
dusk arising said:
Delightful little raindrops. Oh where were they when i was literally soaked to the skin last night called out to attend a gas installation. HUGE mental shift created by you here as i appreciate the beauty of each of these little gems which overpowered me last night.
Revoking a soaking.
April 9th, 2019 07:14
GEMS.
Neville said:
As sure as God made little green apples, this must rate among the very top sparkly little gems here @ MPS..... N
April 9th, 2019 04:43
Neville said:
As sure as God made little green apples, this must rate among the very top sparkly little gems here @ MPS..... N
April 9th, 2019 04:43
GEMS.
kevin browne said:
Ah, I see you are jewelled with rainbows. A good place to be I guess. What a little gem here you have written. Nice to wake up to.
April 9th, 2019 02:25
kevin browne said:
Ah, I see you are jewelled with rainbows. A good place to be I guess. What a little gem here you have written. Nice to wake up to.
April 9th, 2019 02:25
ILL-SENT
dusk arising said:
I get the feeling that you have in mind a family or person who has been affected by this land loss. Indeed, huge financial loss, of life changing proportion too.
Amire the way you use words which convey the relentless power of the seas.
April 8th, 2019 11:56
dusk arising said:
I get the feeling that you have in mind a family or person who has been affected by this land loss. Indeed, huge financial loss, of life changing proportion too.
Amire the way you use words which convey the relentless power of the seas.
April 8th, 2019 11:56
ILL-SENT
Suresh said:
The Brothers, Wind and Water, are in the news everyday, and not in a good way.
Yes, a fine write indeed
April 8th, 2019 11:49
Suresh said:
The Brothers, Wind and Water, are in the news everyday, and not in a good way.
Yes, a fine write indeed
April 8th, 2019 11:49
ILL-SENT
Neville said:
Pon my very word, how these words do ring true... Only the other day a massive landslide showered and crushed where I had walked only a few days before, below the cliffs of West Bay... You capture not only the might of the wind and storm and waves, but the devastation that these may leave in their wake....... Neville
April 8th, 2019 04:17
Neville said:
Pon my very word, how these words do ring true... Only the other day a massive landslide showered and crushed where I had walked only a few days before, below the cliffs of West Bay... You capture not only the might of the wind and storm and waves, but the devastation that these may leave in their wake....... Neville
April 8th, 2019 04:17
ILL-SENT
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed another fine write about a terrible problem.
April 8th, 2019 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed another fine write about a terrible problem.
April 8th, 2019 02:30
ILL-SENT
orchidee said:
You know them more than some of us, being near the coast. A fine write Fay.
April 8th, 2019 02:07
orchidee said:
You know them more than some of us, being near the coast. A fine write Fay.
April 8th, 2019 02:07
HITHER.
Neville said:
This is so fine.. nay tis grande and I feel so flirtesth with and verrily .. absolutely to die for...A great write as always, but just a little special methinks x
April 7th, 2019 06:07
Neville said:
This is so fine.. nay tis grande and I feel so flirtesth with and verrily .. absolutely to die for...A great write as always, but just a little special methinks x
April 7th, 2019 06:07
HITHER.
orchidee said:
Doh! Woof, woof, woof! Quiet Fido. Too much ardour, he says! heehee. I dunno if I\'m hither or thither, or on foot or horse-back, with all this ardour!
April 6th, 2019 07:05
orchidee said:
Doh! Woof, woof, woof! Quiet Fido. Too much ardour, he says! heehee. I dunno if I\'m hither or thither, or on foot or horse-back, with all this ardour!
April 6th, 2019 07:05
HITHER.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m currently reading \'Tess of The d\'Urbervilles - (think I\'ve spelt that right)and this reminds me so much of some of the scenes - it\'s a very naive story by today\'s standards but the English is so so good - pity there doesn\'t appear to be any modern writers up to Hardy\'s standards. Which brings me back to this - you should be writing books - your use of the language is par excellence!
April 6th, 2019 05:20
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m currently reading \'Tess of The d\'Urbervilles - (think I\'ve spelt that right)and this reminds me so much of some of the scenes - it\'s a very naive story by today\'s standards but the English is so so good - pity there doesn\'t appear to be any modern writers up to Hardy\'s standards. Which brings me back to this - you should be writing books - your use of the language is par excellence!
April 6th, 2019 05:20
HITHER.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture : Lovely poem ! I can empathise : I lie each night waiting for My Brian and hoping mr Ardour lasts till Easter ! He\'s going along the Eroded Coast next week : I hope & pray he doesn\'t stray too far to the EDGE ! Thanks for sharing
Blessings and a peaceful weekend : its nearly 10pm here
Love & Joy : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 6th, 2019 03:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture : Lovely poem ! I can empathise : I lie each night waiting for My Brian and hoping mr Ardour lasts till Easter ! He\'s going along the Eroded Coast next week : I hope & pray he doesn\'t stray too far to the EDGE ! Thanks for sharing
Blessings and a peaceful weekend : its nearly 10pm here
Love & Joy : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 6th, 2019 03:45
SOUNDS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love BARNOWLS a Friend raised one from a BABY and we could aobersve it close up ! In the Winter lots of Country Creatures move into Towns for Food & Shelter (Foxes ~ Birds ~ Rodents etc !). Love Vs 2 & 3 ~ He haunts a deserted Baronial Hall and gets a MOUSE takeaway ! Owls are always a bit spooky and verse 4 reflects that ~ Im glad |J K Rowling introduced an Owl into H Potter !
This Poem is a perfect 4 4 4 2 Sonnet ~ Perfect Mode for the Message !
Love ~ Joy & Peace
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 18:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love BARNOWLS a Friend raised one from a BABY and we could aobersve it close up ! In the Winter lots of Country Creatures move into Towns for Food & Shelter (Foxes ~ Birds ~ Rodents etc !). Love Vs 2 & 3 ~ He haunts a deserted Baronial Hall and gets a MOUSE takeaway ! Owls are always a bit spooky and verse 4 reflects that ~ Im glad |J K Rowling introduced an Owl into H Potter !
This Poem is a perfect 4 4 4 2 Sonnet ~ Perfect Mode for the Message !
Love ~ Joy & Peace
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 18:10
WHISPERINGS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ You really crossed the Rubicon with this one !
V 1. Real experience of Bliss !
V 2. Foreplay always begins with words
V 3. LIBIDO released from the Mind into the Body !
V 4. Words accompany Desire
V 5. All our senses are involved in LOVE !
V 6/7 WE Men are always open to suggestion !
Blessings ~ Peace & Joy in all things
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 14:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ You really crossed the Rubicon with this one !
V 1. Real experience of Bliss !
V 2. Foreplay always begins with words
V 3. LIBIDO released from the Mind into the Body !
V 4. Words accompany Desire
V 5. All our senses are involved in LOVE !
V 6/7 WE Men are always open to suggestion !
Blessings ~ Peace & Joy in all things
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 14:30
SOUNDS.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your super write reminded me of the last time I saw an owl. It was at the Healesville Sanctuary in Australia! An experience of a lifetime!
~Laura~
🦉
April 5th, 2019 10:52
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your super write reminded me of the last time I saw an owl. It was at the Healesville Sanctuary in Australia! An experience of a lifetime!
~Laura~
🦉
April 5th, 2019 10:52
SOUNDS.
dusk arising said:
Yes those beauties hunt easily over our lit up motorways etc nowadays.
Oh to be rural tho and allowed the luxury of burning coal again.
One wonders if, back at home, Mrs Rat is thinking \"where\'s my Fred gotten too. He should have been home hours ago\".
If one of ours was plucked from above in the night we would miss them for a lifetime but.... does Mrs Rat miss Fred in the same way?
A real \'Hoot\' of writing from you today Fay.
April 5th, 2019 08:53
dusk arising said:
Yes those beauties hunt easily over our lit up motorways etc nowadays.
Oh to be rural tho and allowed the luxury of burning coal again.
One wonders if, back at home, Mrs Rat is thinking \"where\'s my Fred gotten too. He should have been home hours ago\".
If one of ours was plucked from above in the night we would miss them for a lifetime but.... does Mrs Rat miss Fred in the same way?
A real \'Hoot\' of writing from you today Fay.
April 5th, 2019 08:53
SOUNDS.
Poetic Dan said:
Owl—standingly done I must say!
Thank you so much you\'re magical Fay!
April 5th, 2019 07:10
Poetic Dan said:
Owl—standingly done I must say!
Thank you so much you\'re magical Fay!
April 5th, 2019 07:10
SOUNDS.
Michael Edwards said:
An absolutely wonderful descriptive piece - a real top read.
April 5th, 2019 06:11
Michael Edwards said:
An absolutely wonderful descriptive piece - a real top read.
April 5th, 2019 06:11
SOUNDS.
Neville said:
Cor... or should one say hoot, on occasions such as this.... How atmospheric can ya get.... I love the way you describe the owls new hunting ground on this particular night, I was not expecting that.. I close my eyes and can see those silk clad dancers, in candelabra light...... The owls around my neck of the woods are particularly vocal at the moment.. lovely..... Neville
April 5th, 2019 03:39
Neville said:
Cor... or should one say hoot, on occasions such as this.... How atmospheric can ya get.... I love the way you describe the owls new hunting ground on this particular night, I was not expecting that.. I close my eyes and can see those silk clad dancers, in candelabra light...... The owls around my neck of the woods are particularly vocal at the moment.. lovely..... Neville
April 5th, 2019 03:39
SOUNDS.
Suresh said:
Lays in ruin, what man once kept
Playground for nature, what he left
Enjoyed it Fay
April 5th, 2019 02:39
Suresh said:
Lays in ruin, what man once kept
Playground for nature, what he left
Enjoyed it Fay
April 5th, 2019 02:39
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