Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LETTING GO.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
“Letting Go”...is painful!
Time does not heal wounds and/or pain! The span of time might lessen the pain until a birthday and/or an anniversary comes along...and then full force we feel that pain again! We learn to cope with it but never “Letting Go” of it!
A sensitive and beautiful write!
~Laura~
April 18th, 2019 17:21
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
“Letting Go”...is painful!
Time does not heal wounds and/or pain! The span of time might lessen the pain until a birthday and/or an anniversary comes along...and then full force we feel that pain again! We learn to cope with it but never “Letting Go” of it!
A sensitive and beautiful write!
~Laura~
April 18th, 2019 17:21
LETTING GO.
SerenWise said:
Beautiful, so simple and meaningful. Nicely written :)
April 18th, 2019 14:40
SerenWise said:
Beautiful, so simple and meaningful. Nicely written :)
April 18th, 2019 14:40
LETTING GO.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : Love the sentiment in this Poem and the Picture is ME ! Sitting in the WINDOW waiting for my BIG BEAR to Fly in ! SATURDAY it will all come TRUE ! Since I met BRIAN I have known the ECSTASY of LOVE for the first time in my LIFE ! But it also makes SEPARATION : AGONY and should anything happen to BRIAN : Inside I know I would DIE TOO ! Love the POEM !
GOODBYE IS THE HARDEST WORD !
Blessings & Love in all you do !
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 18th, 2019 06:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : Love the sentiment in this Poem and the Picture is ME ! Sitting in the WINDOW waiting for my BIG BEAR to Fly in ! SATURDAY it will all come TRUE ! Since I met BRIAN I have known the ECSTASY of LOVE for the first time in my LIFE ! But it also makes SEPARATION : AGONY and should anything happen to BRIAN : Inside I know I would DIE TOO ! Love the POEM !
GOODBYE IS THE HARDEST WORD !
Blessings & Love in all you do !
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 18th, 2019 06:45
LETTING GO.
dusk arising said:
Words cannot convey agonies nor ecstacy when felt first hand. The reader has to fill the spaces from their own experiece. As your words show.
For me \'the immeasurable flood\' is always topped with a reflection. Whereas the flood has depth of pain, the reflection is of equally tall mountains of pleasure scaled within the relationship. In this way I preserve a positive view of things passed.
April 18th, 2019 05:31
dusk arising said:
Words cannot convey agonies nor ecstacy when felt first hand. The reader has to fill the spaces from their own experiece. As your words show.
For me \'the immeasurable flood\' is always topped with a reflection. Whereas the flood has depth of pain, the reflection is of equally tall mountains of pleasure scaled within the relationship. In this way I preserve a positive view of things passed.
April 18th, 2019 05:31
LETTING GO.
Lorna said:
Forever letting go but never quite completely...............
April 18th, 2019 04:48
Lorna said:
Forever letting go but never quite completely...............
April 18th, 2019 04:48
LETTING GO.
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully said it is unmeasurable! Thank you for sharing this
Much peace and love
April 18th, 2019 03:00
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully said it is unmeasurable! Thank you for sharing this
Much peace and love
April 18th, 2019 03:00
LETTING GO.
Neville said:
Extremely moving, heartfelt and true
Perfectly poemed say\'s I who for one, has been there too..... Neville
April 18th, 2019 00:49
Neville said:
Extremely moving, heartfelt and true
Perfectly poemed say\'s I who for one, has been there too..... Neville
April 18th, 2019 00:49
LETTING GO.
Suresh said:
Goodbyes are always hard, is it because out of sight leads to out of mind?
April 18th, 2019 00:47
Suresh said:
Goodbyes are always hard, is it because out of sight leads to out of mind?
April 18th, 2019 00:47
WRAITHS
Goldfinch60 said:
Those whispers are so enlightening for those who listen.
April 18th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Those whispers are so enlightening for those who listen.
April 18th, 2019 00:22
WRAITHS
moordykspot2 said:
Super Write, I walk in some fields late at night and love the Bats. frisky and quick of movement but cause no disturbance to the peace I have come to enjoy. Another fine poem My Lady Fay Thankyou
April 17th, 2019 16:04
moordykspot2 said:
Super Write, I walk in some fields late at night and love the Bats. frisky and quick of movement but cause no disturbance to the peace I have come to enjoy. Another fine poem My Lady Fay Thankyou
April 17th, 2019 16:04
WRAITHS
Suresh said:
Nature has so much more to teach us - and one example is your subject here.
Schools of fish, or flocks of birds, bats and insects, in thousands and many times more, dance in a rythm that\'s awe inspiring.
Nice homage to bats, Fay
April 17th, 2019 11:39
Suresh said:
Nature has so much more to teach us - and one example is your subject here.
Schools of fish, or flocks of birds, bats and insects, in thousands and many times more, dance in a rythm that\'s awe inspiring.
Nice homage to bats, Fay
April 17th, 2019 11:39
WRAITHS
dusk arising said:
You certainly capture the speed and agility of these night sky dancers here Fay.
I had the delight of one entering my living room and entertaining me for a couple of minutes one summers nite many moons ago before it sounded its way back out to feast upon the moths gathered beneath the portico outside my window.
You describe something i have never seen though, that movie scene of a \'crowd\' of bats streaming across the skies. I only saw few at a time.
Once again your writing took me there.
April 17th, 2019 06:47
dusk arising said:
You certainly capture the speed and agility of these night sky dancers here Fay.
I had the delight of one entering my living room and entertaining me for a couple of minutes one summers nite many moons ago before it sounded its way back out to feast upon the moths gathered beneath the portico outside my window.
You describe something i have never seen though, that movie scene of a \'crowd\' of bats streaming across the skies. I only saw few at a time.
Once again your writing took me there.
April 17th, 2019 06:47
WRAITHS
Neville said:
what images these words do conjour...
so much nature captured in a patch of sky..... N
April 17th, 2019 04:24
Neville said:
what images these words do conjour...
so much nature captured in a patch of sky..... N
April 17th, 2019 04:24
WRAITHS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : I love BATS ! We have a lot in NZ in the caves ! I love the fact that they navigate by RADAR and not sight ! In BAT CAVES Ive never had a BAT in my hair : although I do wear a Hat with a LAMP ! Love the PHOTO and the POEM !
Your poem captures: Their rapid vapid movement : Their shadowy wraithness (apt word !) : Their feeding and sudden exit ! Another gem from FAY ! Please check my HOSPITALS POEM : Thanks
Blessings & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 17th, 2019 03:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : I love BATS ! We have a lot in NZ in the caves ! I love the fact that they navigate by RADAR and not sight ! In BAT CAVES Ive never had a BAT in my hair : although I do wear a Hat with a LAMP ! Love the PHOTO and the POEM !
Your poem captures: Their rapid vapid movement : Their shadowy wraithness (apt word !) : Their feeding and sudden exit ! Another gem from FAY ! Please check my HOSPITALS POEM : Thanks
Blessings & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 17th, 2019 03:16
SOLUTIONS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ for sharing an elegant LOVE POEM ! When BRIAN and I became engaged it was a first for both us because : for the first time we felt our mutual love was strong enough for commitment and subsequent Marriage ! Being apart has been difficult but the rings we wear (Brians is a signet ring with A🧡B on it !) have shown to the World that we (in the Modern Parlance) are : AN ITEM !
V 1. TRUE LOVE is Constant & Content and never fails !
V 2. LOVE wihout TRUST is ephemeral
V 3. TRUE LOVE should never be taken for granted : AMEN !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 16th, 2019 12:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ for sharing an elegant LOVE POEM ! When BRIAN and I became engaged it was a first for both us because : for the first time we felt our mutual love was strong enough for commitment and subsequent Marriage ! Being apart has been difficult but the rings we wear (Brians is a signet ring with A🧡B on it !) have shown to the World that we (in the Modern Parlance) are : AN ITEM !
V 1. TRUE LOVE is Constant & Content and never fails !
V 2. LOVE wihout TRUST is ephemeral
V 3. TRUE LOVE should never be taken for granted : AMEN !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 16th, 2019 12:58
SOLUTIONS.
Suresh said:
Love is a challenge at best
True Love is a wandering dream
Nice post Fay
April 16th, 2019 11:29
Suresh said:
Love is a challenge at best
True Love is a wandering dream
Nice post Fay
April 16th, 2019 11:29
Never Again.
Neville said:
You got it nailed down and wrapped in a poem Fay... When its gone, its gone and even tho there may be close approximations... each day is quite simply unique ........... N
April 16th, 2019 10:14
Neville said:
You got it nailed down and wrapped in a poem Fay... When its gone, its gone and even tho there may be close approximations... each day is quite simply unique ........... N
April 16th, 2019 10:14
SOLUTIONS.
Neville said:
an interesting quote indeed...
and a fine bedfellow to accompany your splendid and concise instruction manual on how to find the answers to love and stuff like that..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 08:51
Neville said:
an interesting quote indeed...
and a fine bedfellow to accompany your splendid and concise instruction manual on how to find the answers to love and stuff like that..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 08:51
SOLUTIONS.
moordykspot2 said:
A Love never understood it. I have been very lucky though.Good poem Good Advice from a Superb Writer. Thank you
April 16th, 2019 06:06
moordykspot2 said:
A Love never understood it. I have been very lucky though.Good poem Good Advice from a Superb Writer. Thank you
April 16th, 2019 06:06
SOLUTIONS.
dusk arising said:
Hmm that elusive two way bargain. A duet in perfect harmony and support. It\'s out there somewhere.
If only someone would remove this blindfold.
April 16th, 2019 04:53
dusk arising said:
Hmm that elusive two way bargain. A duet in perfect harmony and support. It\'s out there somewhere.
If only someone would remove this blindfold.
April 16th, 2019 04:53
UNSATED.
Neville said:
You surely must have been there to write something so emotive... One can only hope that time lives up to its reputation. a great post... Neville
April 16th, 2019 03:14
Neville said:
You surely must have been there to write something so emotive... One can only hope that time lives up to its reputation. a great post... Neville
April 16th, 2019 03:14
MAGICAL.
Suresh said:
We just had a poppy blossom her and it was so majestic, that many just parked their cars by the roadside and got out to stroll.
It caused an enormous traffic problem for many days.
Loved your words
April 15th, 2019 14:56
Suresh said:
We just had a poppy blossom her and it was so majestic, that many just parked their cars by the roadside and got out to stroll.
It caused an enormous traffic problem for many days.
Loved your words
April 15th, 2019 14:56
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