Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SWEETNESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FAY ! Even @ 31 & 36 we can relate to this as we are still in the First Flush of True Love. In these last few precious days every scent & every savour of each other is butterscotch - caramel - mint - cherry lips - treacle - chocolate - by the end of this trip we will have eaten each other. We have NEVER EVER felt like this about anyone else before : IT MUST BE LOVE ! We know you will understand FAY because you write from experience : AMEN. In S Island BRIAN assures me there will be many many secret & precious places for us to share our LOVE and we are still discovering each other : AMEN Love the PICTURE FAY : That really is US : AMEN
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love in the Spirit ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 22nd, 2019 05:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FAY ! Even @ 31 & 36 we can relate to this as we are still in the First Flush of True Love. In these last few precious days every scent & every savour of each other is butterscotch - caramel - mint - cherry lips - treacle - chocolate - by the end of this trip we will have eaten each other. We have NEVER EVER felt like this about anyone else before : IT MUST BE LOVE ! We know you will understand FAY because you write from experience : AMEN. In S Island BRIAN assures me there will be many many secret & precious places for us to share our LOVE and we are still discovering each other : AMEN Love the PICTURE FAY : That really is US : AMEN
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love in the Spirit ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 22nd, 2019 05:41
SWEETNESS.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'m gonna eat all that tasty stuff!
April 22nd, 2019 05:40
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'m gonna eat all that tasty stuff!
April 22nd, 2019 05:40
SWEETNESS.
dusk arising said:
Your eye sees more than the casual viewer methinks.
The candied excitement, thrill and magic of love and romance beside the oceans edge radiate through your words today.
April 22nd, 2019 03:21
dusk arising said:
Your eye sees more than the casual viewer methinks.
The candied excitement, thrill and magic of love and romance beside the oceans edge radiate through your words today.
April 22nd, 2019 03:21
AS FORETOLD.
Suresh said:
Recounting the events so many times told, in your own prose. A solemn and awakening write
April 21st, 2019 13:04
Suresh said:
Recounting the events so many times told, in your own prose. A solemn and awakening write
April 21st, 2019 13:04
AS FORETOLD.
dusk arising said:
The story of Jesus taught to us all as children re-told in condensed and meaningful mode. Compassion, awe and the quality of forgiveness shine through in your telling.
April 21st, 2019 03:58
dusk arising said:
The story of Jesus taught to us all as children re-told in condensed and meaningful mode. Compassion, awe and the quality of forgiveness shine through in your telling.
April 21st, 2019 03:58
AS FORETOLD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A BLESSED EASTER FAY ~ This is awesome an immaculate poem in tribute to our LORD & SAVIOUR JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN It needs no mundane style & subject analysis from US ~ just THANK YOU ~ AMEN !
Blessings & love in the Spirit ~ Love the visual too !
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN (9pm NZ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 21st, 2019 03:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A BLESSED EASTER FAY ~ This is awesome an immaculate poem in tribute to our LORD & SAVIOUR JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN It needs no mundane style & subject analysis from US ~ just THANK YOU ~ AMEN !
Blessings & love in the Spirit ~ Love the visual too !
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN (9pm NZ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 21st, 2019 03:07
December Sky
Neville said:
what a delightful dedication to my most favourite time of day.. N
April 19th, 2019 03:21
Neville said:
what a delightful dedication to my most favourite time of day.. N
April 19th, 2019 03:21
LETTING GO.
MendedFences27 said:
\"Letting go\" of love is painful beyond description. We are left with an enormous vacancy in life, as though standing on the precipice of the Grand Canyon.
Beautifully penned. It captures the heartbreak and flood of emotion, that follows. Where does one go from there? Loved your poem. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2019 18:52
MendedFences27 said:
\"Letting go\" of love is painful beyond description. We are left with an enormous vacancy in life, as though standing on the precipice of the Grand Canyon.
Beautifully penned. It captures the heartbreak and flood of emotion, that follows. Where does one go from there? Loved your poem. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2019 18:52
LETTING GO.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
“Letting Go”...is painful!
Time does not heal wounds and/or pain! The span of time might lessen the pain until a birthday and/or an anniversary comes along...and then full force we feel that pain again! We learn to cope with it but never “Letting Go” of it!
A sensitive and beautiful write!
~Laura~
April 18th, 2019 17:21
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
“Letting Go”...is painful!
Time does not heal wounds and/or pain! The span of time might lessen the pain until a birthday and/or an anniversary comes along...and then full force we feel that pain again! We learn to cope with it but never “Letting Go” of it!
A sensitive and beautiful write!
~Laura~
April 18th, 2019 17:21
LETTING GO.
SerenWise said:
Beautiful, so simple and meaningful. Nicely written :)
April 18th, 2019 14:40
SerenWise said:
Beautiful, so simple and meaningful. Nicely written :)
April 18th, 2019 14:40
LETTING GO.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : Love the sentiment in this Poem and the Picture is ME ! Sitting in the WINDOW waiting for my BIG BEAR to Fly in ! SATURDAY it will all come TRUE ! Since I met BRIAN I have known the ECSTASY of LOVE for the first time in my LIFE ! But it also makes SEPARATION : AGONY and should anything happen to BRIAN : Inside I know I would DIE TOO ! Love the POEM !
GOODBYE IS THE HARDEST WORD !
Blessings & Love in all you do !
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 18th, 2019 06:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : Love the sentiment in this Poem and the Picture is ME ! Sitting in the WINDOW waiting for my BIG BEAR to Fly in ! SATURDAY it will all come TRUE ! Since I met BRIAN I have known the ECSTASY of LOVE for the first time in my LIFE ! But it also makes SEPARATION : AGONY and should anything happen to BRIAN : Inside I know I would DIE TOO ! Love the POEM !
GOODBYE IS THE HARDEST WORD !
Blessings & Love in all you do !
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 18th, 2019 06:45
LETTING GO.
dusk arising said:
Words cannot convey agonies nor ecstacy when felt first hand. The reader has to fill the spaces from their own experiece. As your words show.
For me \'the immeasurable flood\' is always topped with a reflection. Whereas the flood has depth of pain, the reflection is of equally tall mountains of pleasure scaled within the relationship. In this way I preserve a positive view of things passed.
April 18th, 2019 05:31
dusk arising said:
Words cannot convey agonies nor ecstacy when felt first hand. The reader has to fill the spaces from their own experiece. As your words show.
For me \'the immeasurable flood\' is always topped with a reflection. Whereas the flood has depth of pain, the reflection is of equally tall mountains of pleasure scaled within the relationship. In this way I preserve a positive view of things passed.
April 18th, 2019 05:31
LETTING GO.
Lorna said:
Forever letting go but never quite completely...............
April 18th, 2019 04:48
Lorna said:
Forever letting go but never quite completely...............
April 18th, 2019 04:48
LETTING GO.
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully said it is unmeasurable! Thank you for sharing this
Much peace and love
April 18th, 2019 03:00
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully said it is unmeasurable! Thank you for sharing this
Much peace and love
April 18th, 2019 03:00
LETTING GO.
Neville said:
Extremely moving, heartfelt and true
Perfectly poemed say\'s I who for one, has been there too..... Neville
April 18th, 2019 00:49
Neville said:
Extremely moving, heartfelt and true
Perfectly poemed say\'s I who for one, has been there too..... Neville
April 18th, 2019 00:49
LETTING GO.
Suresh said:
Goodbyes are always hard, is it because out of sight leads to out of mind?
April 18th, 2019 00:47
Suresh said:
Goodbyes are always hard, is it because out of sight leads to out of mind?
April 18th, 2019 00:47
WRAITHS
Goldfinch60 said:
Those whispers are so enlightening for those who listen.
April 18th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Those whispers are so enlightening for those who listen.
April 18th, 2019 00:22
WRAITHS
moordykspot2 said:
Super Write, I walk in some fields late at night and love the Bats. frisky and quick of movement but cause no disturbance to the peace I have come to enjoy. Another fine poem My Lady Fay Thankyou
April 17th, 2019 16:04
moordykspot2 said:
Super Write, I walk in some fields late at night and love the Bats. frisky and quick of movement but cause no disturbance to the peace I have come to enjoy. Another fine poem My Lady Fay Thankyou
April 17th, 2019 16:04
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