Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
UNWRAPPED.
Suresh said:
You lived, what I only dreamt of.
Thnx for stoking my dreams expressed so eloquently.
May 1st, 2019 11:13
Suresh said:
You lived, what I only dreamt of.
Thnx for stoking my dreams expressed so eloquently.
May 1st, 2019 11:13
UNWRAPPED.
dusk arising said:
Exquisite. Oh that memories should all have such sweetness, untainted by reality.
May 1st, 2019 06:31
dusk arising said:
Exquisite. Oh that memories should all have such sweetness, untainted by reality.
May 1st, 2019 06:31
UNWRAPPED.
Neville said:
you have a great imagination Fay... and a fine pen..... this is a superb poem in a genre I can relate to and lose myself in..... Neville
May 1st, 2019 04:15
Neville said:
you have a great imagination Fay... and a fine pen..... this is a superb poem in a genre I can relate to and lose myself in..... Neville
May 1st, 2019 04:15
UNWRAPPED.
orchidee said:
Glad they had fun. Glad some one(s) had fun! Fido won\'t let me have fun. I will put him out the back yard a while, then let me hair down! lol.
May 1st, 2019 04:06
orchidee said:
Glad they had fun. Glad some one(s) had fun! Fido won\'t let me have fun. I will put him out the back yard a while, then let me hair down! lol.
May 1st, 2019 04:06
WILD.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful write! I love the painting! The first time you posted this painting, it fascinated me! Seeing it again, has had the same effect it had the first time! I think she’s quietly provoking her thinking...thinking of what she should write on that blank page...or perhaps she is reading what she was provoked to write on that page which is no longer blank!
I wonder if that painting inspired you to write your sensuous poem!
Excellent!
~Laura~
April 30th, 2019 17:04
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful write! I love the painting! The first time you posted this painting, it fascinated me! Seeing it again, has had the same effect it had the first time! I think she’s quietly provoking her thinking...thinking of what she should write on that blank page...or perhaps she is reading what she was provoked to write on that page which is no longer blank!
I wonder if that painting inspired you to write your sensuous poem!
Excellent!
~Laura~
April 30th, 2019 17:04
WILD.
dusk arising said:
The pictured lady awaits fate. Wild the smile inside.
April 30th, 2019 13:38
dusk arising said:
The pictured lady awaits fate. Wild the smile inside.
April 30th, 2019 13:38
WILD.
Netashi said:
Very wild very explicit and very well written. keep up the good work.
- T
April 30th, 2019 12:26
Netashi said:
Very wild very explicit and very well written. keep up the good work.
- T
April 30th, 2019 12:26
FREEING .
Poetic Dan said:
Eye.. booty be the best kind of treasure for you can sail the seas, just looking for it!
Great stuff
April 30th, 2019 11:22
Poetic Dan said:
Eye.. booty be the best kind of treasure for you can sail the seas, just looking for it!
Great stuff
April 30th, 2019 11:22
WILD.
Suresh said:
I imagine her thinking which words to use, keep it exotic or erotic.
Beautiful piece indeed
April 30th, 2019 10:38
Suresh said:
I imagine her thinking which words to use, keep it exotic or erotic.
Beautiful piece indeed
April 30th, 2019 10:38
WILD.
moordykspot2 said:
Another one Politely phrased but full if raw emotion and induces thoughts that perhaps should not be induced. Entrantress/ Seductress Both.Young Fay you are a marvell. Thank you
April 30th, 2019 06:05
moordykspot2 said:
Another one Politely phrased but full if raw emotion and induces thoughts that perhaps should not be induced. Entrantress/ Seductress Both.Young Fay you are a marvell. Thank you
April 30th, 2019 06:05
WILD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for a very sensuous Love Poem ! It all came true for BRIAN & I this week : snuggled up in our Love Nest (Camper Van !) You must be reading my THOUGHTS !
Blessings & Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
April 30th, 2019 04:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for a very sensuous Love Poem ! It all came true for BRIAN & I this week : snuggled up in our Love Nest (Camper Van !) You must be reading my THOUGHTS !
Blessings & Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
April 30th, 2019 04:02
WILD.
Neville said:
wild indeed and long may she remain both wild and free, but found here today on the border between romance and erotica.... Neville
April 30th, 2019 03:23
Neville said:
wild indeed and long may she remain both wild and free, but found here today on the border between romance and erotica.... Neville
April 30th, 2019 03:23
WILD.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
It\'s good to let go sometimes I agree
Go WILD
April 30th, 2019 03:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
It\'s good to let go sometimes I agree
Go WILD
April 30th, 2019 03:23
His Star.
Neville said:
there is something a little bit special here Fay... well writ would be an understatement....
April 30th, 2019 03:07
Neville said:
there is something a little bit special here Fay... well writ would be an understatement....
April 30th, 2019 03:07
SIGNS.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is top mptch Fay I enjoyed the form and the flow
Well done again!
April 29th, 2019 17:18
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is top mptch Fay I enjoyed the form and the flow
Well done again!
April 29th, 2019 17:18
SIGNS.
Suresh said:
If constant, difficult to measure loves account, need commotion to the emotions for true appreciation.
Your write is full of emotions
April 29th, 2019 14:37
Suresh said:
If constant, difficult to measure loves account, need commotion to the emotions for true appreciation.
Your write is full of emotions
April 29th, 2019 14:37
SIGNS.
moordykspot2 said:
Oh My word I fine take on Love a most powerful emotion. I have been lucky enough to find it and it has enriched what I already thought was a good life. Thank you for all your words that are becoming available to me my friend
April 29th, 2019 14:02
moordykspot2 said:
Oh My word I fine take on Love a most powerful emotion. I have been lucky enough to find it and it has enriched what I already thought was a good life. Thank you for all your words that are becoming available to me my friend
April 29th, 2019 14:02
SIGNS.
MendedFences27 said:
The ebb and flow of romantic inclinations eloquently expressed: warm and tender in Springtime, cold and severe in Winter.To reap or to sow matters not, Love is the essential intent. A great poem Fay. So well constructed. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 29th, 2019 11:06
MendedFences27 said:
The ebb and flow of romantic inclinations eloquently expressed: warm and tender in Springtime, cold and severe in Winter.To reap or to sow matters not, Love is the essential intent. A great poem Fay. So well constructed. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 29th, 2019 11:06
SIGNS.
SerenWise said:
Another very emotive write, you have such a way with words - true poetry!
April 29th, 2019 06:42
SerenWise said:
Another very emotive write, you have such a way with words - true poetry!
April 29th, 2019 06:42
SIGNS.
dusk arising said:
Spring is in the air and in your words. Hope, faith and renewal.
Now if that picture is of you a couple of years back... did the woodworm in those planks get into your hip? I do worry about things like this you know.
You do find a wonderful way with words creating such an emotional picture.
April 29th, 2019 06:39
dusk arising said:
Spring is in the air and in your words. Hope, faith and renewal.
Now if that picture is of you a couple of years back... did the woodworm in those planks get into your hip? I do worry about things like this you know.
You do find a wonderful way with words creating such an emotional picture.
April 29th, 2019 06:39
SIGNS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ! In the last 15 years Brian & I have experiences both the ecstasy & agony of Love shared & Love spurned : BUT: since I met Brian it has only been Sweetness & Light ! Brian took a risk leaving me (in my Prime) alone (except for Ruth !) in a beautiful Country full of Beautiful Men and Brian in a College full of Beautiful Ladies. But in both our cases Our Love was much much stronger that TEMPTATION and on this intimate trip we have rewarded each other for our TRUE LOVE FIDELITY ~ AMEN. When Brian flies back to ESSEX on Friday I will die emotionally until OCTOBER when He returns to take me to be with HIM forever & ever AMEN ! You are a LADY FAY so you understand my sentiments. As a MAN ~ Brian is more than I could ask or even think !
Blessings & LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 29th, 2019 05:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ! In the last 15 years Brian & I have experiences both the ecstasy & agony of Love shared & Love spurned : BUT: since I met Brian it has only been Sweetness & Light ! Brian took a risk leaving me (in my Prime) alone (except for Ruth !) in a beautiful Country full of Beautiful Men and Brian in a College full of Beautiful Ladies. But in both our cases Our Love was much much stronger that TEMPTATION and on this intimate trip we have rewarded each other for our TRUE LOVE FIDELITY ~ AMEN. When Brian flies back to ESSEX on Friday I will die emotionally until OCTOBER when He returns to take me to be with HIM forever & ever AMEN ! You are a LADY FAY so you understand my sentiments. As a MAN ~ Brian is more than I could ask or even think !
Blessings & LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 29th, 2019 05:58
SIGNS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Pity it started me singing (lol)!. The old(ish) song with that line \'Come love me again\'. Annie\'s Song by John Denver, 1974.
Yes, it seems Summery when in love; Wintry when having lost it. Aww.
April 29th, 2019 04:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Pity it started me singing (lol)!. The old(ish) song with that line \'Come love me again\'. Annie\'s Song by John Denver, 1974.
Yes, it seems Summery when in love; Wintry when having lost it. Aww.
April 29th, 2019 04:00
SIGNS.
Neville said:
it seems we have an established mutual appreciation society in the making ... this is delightful Fay.... Neville
April 29th, 2019 03:43
Neville said:
it seems we have an established mutual appreciation society in the making ... this is delightful Fay.... Neville
April 29th, 2019 03:43
FREEING .
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. You/we would always give our riches for loves wonder.
April 29th, 2019 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. You/we would always give our riches for loves wonder.
April 29th, 2019 00:12
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