Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



That Tree.
Pintu Mahakul said:

There was no tree like this. The height of tree sincerely reflects hopes and it is very memorable. This is Sagely magnificent. It is withstood for many decades here. It takes every seasonal gale. An amazing poem with nice image and imagery is shared here.

January 27th, 2017 23:40

That Tree.
janetaylor said:

gorgeous words woven with insight and grace. i love trees!

January 27th, 2017 16:30

That Tree.
Augustus said:

Metaphor for many things. But for me with love I trees I\'ll suffice with the oak. Here in Louisiana we have a saying, it takes a hundred years for them to grow and another hundred to die. Near our coast we have lost many due erosion and saltwater intrusion. Love the poem.

January 27th, 2017 12:56

That Tree.
WriteBeLight said:

I love the poem and picture. Very nice Fay!

January 27th, 2017 09:50

That Tree.
Tony36 said:

Awesome write, living on a farm I am surrounded by trees, of every shape and size. I love them all

January 27th, 2017 09:31

That Tree.
Meggie Gultiano said:

you wrote this with sadness, but it is beautifully written with a heart. I can feel each word.Love it

January 27th, 2017 09:18

That Tree.
Michael Edwards said:

Just lovely Fay - some great lines - I have about a tree somewhere - must dig it out and post it.

January 27th, 2017 05:16

Caught.
Michael Edwards said:

I found myself gathering speed as I read it - a sure sign of a great write.

January 26th, 2017 10:05

Caught.
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written poem

January 26th, 2017 09:35

Blackrock.
Augustus said:

\"Granite takes no answering back\". Love that line. Like the blackness of the rock and the darkness of the message make the poem cohesive.

January 25th, 2017 18:47

Asking.
janetaylor said:

fay you have truly touched my heart ~ the ending stuns and leaves one pondering why. lovely, beautiful words .

January 25th, 2017 16:46

Blackrock.
RAJ NANDY said:

Fay, you have painted a beautiful canvas here with the power of your poetic words! - Raj, New Delhi

January 25th, 2017 12:18

Blackrock.
Michael Edwards said:

I think I\'ve said it before, but I do love your use of the language - especially so in this elegant poem

January 25th, 2017 06:04

Blackrock.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FAY for sharing an elegant poem with a warning message. There are many rocky (and iceberg) dangers in the Sea often hidden but always sinister ! It\'s the same with LIFE there are many hidden rocks and pitfalls ~ which we should all avoid !

January 25th, 2017 05:59

Asking.
RAJ NANDY said:

A great reflective poem Fay! You had been the leading poet of that disbanded Swedish poetry site - \'Poetfreak.com\' for the last 6 years now! Though I had met you earlier in \'Poemhunter.com\' initially. This site will benefit from your postings no doubt! God bless! - Raj, New Delhi, 24th Jan 2017

January 25th, 2017 02:33

Effaced.
Augustus said:

Yes, the title and the last line. Lots of wear on this old rock as well.

January 24th, 2017 22:48

Effaced.
janetaylor said:

a bold a mighty pen has written a masterpiece again! fabulous fay! i love the depth and meaning of this piece ~ and i adore that it has a masculine flair.

January 24th, 2017 18:14

Effaced.
LAWLESS said:

Amazing depiction of how time passes and what history and its artifacts can teach us. Looking forward to many more of your insights.

January 24th, 2017 18:13

Effaced.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

January 24th, 2017 17:03

Effaced.
Michael Edwards said:

Fay - you\'ve done it again - thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

January 24th, 2017 16:07

It Maybe.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

reads like a great play !

January 23rd, 2017 22:51

It Maybe.
Augustus said:

Women along the costal waters can relate. Well done.

January 23rd, 2017 17:31

It Maybe.
Tony36 said:

Beautifully written and expressed

January 23rd, 2017 13:57

It Maybe.
Michael Edwards said:

Another corker Fay - some great word associations.

January 23rd, 2017 11:13

It Maybe.
WriteBeLight said:

Wonderful Fay!

January 23rd, 2017 11:09

It Maybe.
janetaylor said:

this is magnificent fay. i love it when you write with thee and thy. it is absolutely elegant. your words flow beautifully with the feelings of waiting for love\'s return.

January 23rd, 2017 11:04

Magical Hush.
Dford1 said:

What a beautiful dance!

January 22nd, 2017 10:59

Magical Hush.
tadpole said:

Hello FAY, made it at last and glad I did too or else I would have missed your magic poem.

January 22nd, 2017 10:56

Magical Hush.
Christina8 said:

An amazing poem that I enjoyed reading. Goes with image well. Awesome!

January 21st, 2017 19:36

Magical Hush.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

two beautiful images,the poem and the photo

January 21st, 2017 16:18



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