Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
MAGICAL.
SerenWise said:
Gorgeous words and use of metaphor, I think everyone who has been in a bluebell woodland has felt this sense of peace and tranquility. Very nice write :)
April 15th, 2019 14:39
SerenWise said:
Gorgeous words and use of metaphor, I think everyone who has been in a bluebell woodland has felt this sense of peace and tranquility. Very nice write :)
April 15th, 2019 14:39
MAGICAL.
moordykspot2 said:
What a fine write. I love these sort of poems and you my friend are so very thorough in your coverage of the subject matter. Really enjoy my reading of your work. Thank you
April 15th, 2019 06:38
moordykspot2 said:
What a fine write. I love these sort of poems and you my friend are so very thorough in your coverage of the subject matter. Really enjoy my reading of your work. Thank you
April 15th, 2019 06:38
I Day.
Neville said:
It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know that, dont you.... I can understand entirely where you found your inspiration Fay.. I am convinced you have some of the best coastline anywhere on the planet and you certainly did it and gentle erotica justice the day you posted here...... Neville
April 15th, 2019 05:40
Neville said:
It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know that, dont you.... I can understand entirely where you found your inspiration Fay.. I am convinced you have some of the best coastline anywhere on the planet and you certainly did it and gentle erotica justice the day you posted here...... Neville
April 15th, 2019 05:40
MAGICAL.
Neville said:
a magical image to accompany your most magical of \'Magical\'..
I swear I could smell the sunlight the moss and the ferns... N
April 15th, 2019 03:31
Neville said:
a magical image to accompany your most magical of \'Magical\'..
I swear I could smell the sunlight the moss and the ferns... N
April 15th, 2019 03:31
MAGICAL.
Michael Edwards said:
The verse doesn\'t try to portray it - it does portray it - beautiful write and I\'m now minded to visit our local bluebell woods - we are lucky in that we have several round here.
April 15th, 2019 02:57
Michael Edwards said:
The verse doesn\'t try to portray it - it does portray it - beautiful write and I\'m now minded to visit our local bluebell woods - we are lucky in that we have several round here.
April 15th, 2019 02:57
MAGICAL.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. We can\'t walk through ha small bluebell wood now. It\'s overgrown! But there are patches of bluebells in a larger wood to enjoy.
April 15th, 2019 02:55
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. We can\'t walk through ha small bluebell wood now. It\'s overgrown! But there are patches of bluebells in a larger wood to enjoy.
April 15th, 2019 02:55
MAGICAL.
dusk arising said:
\'Stillness breeds awe\' and quiet yes, does become lush.
Slowly re-reading you i feel every piece of this and how everything you decribe refreshes and repairs.
Early mornings amidst those bluebells in your picture (are they here so early this year) seems a lifetime ago..... i must repair to the woods.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
dusk arising said:
\'Stillness breeds awe\' and quiet yes, does become lush.
Slowly re-reading you i feel every piece of this and how everything you decribe refreshes and repairs.
Early mornings amidst those bluebells in your picture (are they here so early this year) seems a lifetime ago..... i must repair to the woods.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
MAGICAL.
kevin browne said:
Nicely written, Fay Slimm. Your arrangement of wording is stunningly designed. From start to finish I enjoyed every word. Thank you for a good start to the day.
April 15th, 2019 02:17
kevin browne said:
Nicely written, Fay Slimm. Your arrangement of wording is stunningly designed. From start to finish I enjoyed every word. Thank you for a good start to the day.
April 15th, 2019 02:17
MIXTURES.
dusk arising said:
Wow! Now i can look in the mirror and begin to think i DO fit into the scheme of things after all.
April 15th, 2019 00:20
dusk arising said:
Wow! Now i can look in the mirror and begin to think i DO fit into the scheme of things after all.
April 15th, 2019 00:20
MIXTURES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb colourful write Fay. A kaleidoscope of words.
April 15th, 2019 00:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb colourful write Fay. A kaleidoscope of words.
April 15th, 2019 00:02
MIXTURES.
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically, perhaps Mixture is what will save the World. - A great write Fay, eye opening, to many things. If one opens one\'s mind to the variations of Nature, perhaps the fear of difference will disappear. Wouldn\'t that be wonderful. Thanks for the inspiration. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:45
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically, perhaps Mixture is what will save the World. - A great write Fay, eye opening, to many things. If one opens one\'s mind to the variations of Nature, perhaps the fear of difference will disappear. Wouldn\'t that be wonderful. Thanks for the inspiration. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:45
MIXTURES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ FOR A VERY ZIG-ZAGGYPOEM ~ The fragmented style (15 verses ?) is dictated by the context ! Loved the pictures you chose ~ the Peacoks Eye ~ Went to a Wedding recently and there was a Peacock (many selfies) especially when he fully unfurled his TAIL for the Peahens (All Essex Girls !) Loved the BADGE in praise of Dappled Things.
I\'ve been talking about VOCABULARY in my Language Poem and \"MIXTURES\" is a feast ! God in His Creation is a master of design and camelflage Yiou highlight the use of freckles - prisms - tessalation (good word) - checks - variegating - flushes - irridescence - pattern - striation - patches - harlequin - pibald - brindled - irradiation - kaleidescope - mosaic - speckles - polychrome - rainbows - tricoloured - marbled -banded - spotted - sprinkled - veined - tattooed - grizzled & dappled ! 28 different words to touch the hem of Moher Natures HAUTE COURTURE ! Even in FASHION we are only thinking Gods thoughts after HIM ~ What a Wonderful World ! Thanks for sharing so so elegantly wordwise !
Blessings & Love
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
April 14th, 2019 12:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ FOR A VERY ZIG-ZAGGYPOEM ~ The fragmented style (15 verses ?) is dictated by the context ! Loved the pictures you chose ~ the Peacoks Eye ~ Went to a Wedding recently and there was a Peacock (many selfies) especially when he fully unfurled his TAIL for the Peahens (All Essex Girls !) Loved the BADGE in praise of Dappled Things.
I\'ve been talking about VOCABULARY in my Language Poem and \"MIXTURES\" is a feast ! God in His Creation is a master of design and camelflage Yiou highlight the use of freckles - prisms - tessalation (good word) - checks - variegating - flushes - irridescence - pattern - striation - patches - harlequin - pibald - brindled - irradiation - kaleidescope - mosaic - speckles - polychrome - rainbows - tricoloured - marbled -banded - spotted - sprinkled - veined - tattooed - grizzled & dappled ! 28 different words to touch the hem of Moher Natures HAUTE COURTURE ! Even in FASHION we are only thinking Gods thoughts after HIM ~ What a Wonderful World ! Thanks for sharing so so elegantly wordwise !
Blessings & Love
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
April 14th, 2019 12:33
MIXTURES.
Suresh said:
What nature creates, man replicates
We are still learning natures mystery and awesomeness every day.
Good write Fay
April 14th, 2019 11:56
Suresh said:
What nature creates, man replicates
We are still learning natures mystery and awesomeness every day.
Good write Fay
April 14th, 2019 11:56
MIXTURES.
moordykspot2 said:
I enjoyed this one. Set me thinking how much more I must open my eyes and mind This planet offers great gifts often overlooked and not appreciated. Reading your work is an education Thank you
April 14th, 2019 08:31
moordykspot2 said:
I enjoyed this one. Set me thinking how much more I must open my eyes and mind This planet offers great gifts often overlooked and not appreciated. Reading your work is an education Thank you
April 14th, 2019 08:31
MIXTURES.
Michael Edwards said:
Nothing mixed up about this - great write Fay.
April 14th, 2019 08:14
Michael Edwards said:
Nothing mixed up about this - great write Fay.
April 14th, 2019 08:14
MIXTURES.
Neville said:
a most marvelous and fuzz free poem of great and unadulterated clarity.. N
April 14th, 2019 04:23
Neville said:
a most marvelous and fuzz free poem of great and unadulterated clarity.. N
April 14th, 2019 04:23
DEPARTURE.
MendedFences27 said:
\"Departure,\" flocks of birds leaving to migrate to better surroundings. It\'s enough to make one jealous of their freedom. Your poem conveys concern and appreciation of our feathered friends. I liked \"flapping thrum of wing beats.\" It captured the sensation to a \"T.\" Lovely poem Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2019 15:00
MendedFences27 said:
\"Departure,\" flocks of birds leaving to migrate to better surroundings. It\'s enough to make one jealous of their freedom. Your poem conveys concern and appreciation of our feathered friends. I liked \"flapping thrum of wing beats.\" It captured the sensation to a \"T.\" Lovely poem Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2019 15:00
DEPARTURE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love the picture ~ very nostalgic of Birds in Flight ! Migrating Birdsare a lovely sight for those priviledged to live on the Coast ~ and an equally lovely Poem ! I saw many Sea Birds on my trip to the S E Coast but not many migrating ~ except the Migrating SAND MARTINS from AFRICA ~ whose nesting holes were covered by netting ~ now removed !
Your poem describles elegantly the nostalgia of the THE LAST GLIMPSE of the departing GEESE ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Peace in the Spirit
Love BRIAN & ANGELA (5:30am still in Bed !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 12th, 2019 11:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love the picture ~ very nostalgic of Birds in Flight ! Migrating Birdsare a lovely sight for those priviledged to live on the Coast ~ and an equally lovely Poem ! I saw many Sea Birds on my trip to the S E Coast but not many migrating ~ except the Migrating SAND MARTINS from AFRICA ~ whose nesting holes were covered by netting ~ now removed !
Your poem describles elegantly the nostalgia of the THE LAST GLIMPSE of the departing GEESE ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Peace in the Spirit
Love BRIAN & ANGELA (5:30am still in Bed !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 12th, 2019 11:31
DEPARTURE.
Suresh said:
Beautifully imprinting your words to go with the image.
April 12th, 2019 11:20
Suresh said:
Beautifully imprinting your words to go with the image.
April 12th, 2019 11:20
DEPARTURE.
dusk arising said:
A part of life\'s cycle, leaving leadened skies and sulking horizon with the inbuilt knowledge of better times awaiting at journeys end. Though saddening for our winters heart and regretful thoughts that we may never see them again.
But they are back Fay, any day now they\'ll be here to light the days and squawk at your dawn\'s delight.
I for one look forward to reading about that from you.
April 12th, 2019 11:02
dusk arising said:
A part of life\'s cycle, leaving leadened skies and sulking horizon with the inbuilt knowledge of better times awaiting at journeys end. Though saddening for our winters heart and regretful thoughts that we may never see them again.
But they are back Fay, any day now they\'ll be here to light the days and squawk at your dawn\'s delight.
I for one look forward to reading about that from you.
April 12th, 2019 11:02
DEPARTURE.
Neville said:
This is so darn good, it makes one want to fly.... very atmospheric and with more than fifty shades of grey springing to mind as I watch and take stock of those pewter skies where skeins do fly.... I was reminded of Daphne Du Maurier\'s Rebecca and her mackerel sky... Neville
April 12th, 2019 05:29
Neville said:
This is so darn good, it makes one want to fly.... very atmospheric and with more than fifty shades of grey springing to mind as I watch and take stock of those pewter skies where skeins do fly.... I was reminded of Daphne Du Maurier\'s Rebecca and her mackerel sky... Neville
April 12th, 2019 05:29
DEPARTURE.
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, enjoyed reading while listening to them in the sun. As if they was thanking you too!
April 12th, 2019 05:28
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, enjoyed reading while listening to them in the sun. As if they was thanking you too!
April 12th, 2019 05:28
DEPARTURE.
moordykspot2 said:
Lovely words my friend superbly phrased. Emotions fully understood thankyou
April 12th, 2019 05:17
moordykspot2 said:
Lovely words my friend superbly phrased. Emotions fully understood thankyou
April 12th, 2019 05:17
DEPARTURE.
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them and hear them - fine write dear Fay
April 12th, 2019 04:36
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them and hear them - fine write dear Fay
April 12th, 2019 04:36
DEPARTURE.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I saw a whole load of pigeons taking off together recently.
April 12th, 2019 02:37
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I saw a whole load of pigeons taking off together recently.
April 12th, 2019 02:37
DEPARTURE.
Goldfinch60 said:
May those birds be forever in your soul Fay. Great write.
April 12th, 2019 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May those birds be forever in your soul Fay. Great write.
April 12th, 2019 02:34
NEWNESS..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY : Love the picture FAY : Newness of Life in the grass green leaves & Newness of Love in a fingertip touch ! Brian is still on his Field Trip on Coastal Erosion : the Norfolk Council put up nets to prevent erosion and the RSPB made them take it down because it blocked the nesting sites for the Terns !
I have spent most of my 30 Springs in the UK and the UK S[pring can be very tantilising especially when Brian is growing Veggies and trying to beat the Frost ! Some days like WINTER : Some like SUMMER & Some even like SPRING ! : Flowers in the Meadow BUT it is all part of Tomorrows REGENERATION !
Leaves & Blossom on the Trees : Wild Flowers in the Meadow and Chicks & Lambs & Calves & Foals all proving that in the natural Annual Cycle : Summer & Harvest & Winter & Springtime will never cease ! Thanks for sharing & caring about Nature & All of US !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 11th, 2019 18:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY : Love the picture FAY : Newness of Life in the grass green leaves & Newness of Love in a fingertip touch ! Brian is still on his Field Trip on Coastal Erosion : the Norfolk Council put up nets to prevent erosion and the RSPB made them take it down because it blocked the nesting sites for the Terns !
I have spent most of my 30 Springs in the UK and the UK S[pring can be very tantilising especially when Brian is growing Veggies and trying to beat the Frost ! Some days like WINTER : Some like SUMMER & Some even like SPRING ! : Flowers in the Meadow BUT it is all part of Tomorrows REGENERATION !
Leaves & Blossom on the Trees : Wild Flowers in the Meadow and Chicks & Lambs & Calves & Foals all proving that in the natural Annual Cycle : Summer & Harvest & Winter & Springtime will never cease ! Thanks for sharing & caring about Nature & All of US !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 11th, 2019 18:00
NEWNESS..
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed, I mean, look what happened to the dinosaurs.
April 11th, 2019 16:10
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed, I mean, look what happened to the dinosaurs.
April 11th, 2019 16:10
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