Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WHISPERINGS.
Suresh said:
As you said, a fun cartoon, but ten times more amusing poem.
Thnx for cheering us all up
April 4th, 2019 11:51
Suresh said:
As you said, a fun cartoon, but ten times more amusing poem.
Thnx for cheering us all up
April 4th, 2019 11:51
WHISPERINGS.
dusk arising said:
Oh such a tender trap.
This must be how it feels to be a drug addict or alcoholic too.
April 4th, 2019 06:40
dusk arising said:
Oh such a tender trap.
This must be how it feels to be a drug addict or alcoholic too.
April 4th, 2019 06:40
WHISPERINGS.
Neville said:
Now who could possibly refuse such an offering... Tongue in cheek maybe.. but my, oh\' my how well you do tongue in cheek..... N
April 4th, 2019 04:15
Neville said:
Now who could possibly refuse such an offering... Tongue in cheek maybe.. but my, oh\' my how well you do tongue in cheek..... N
April 4th, 2019 04:15
WHISPERINGS.
orchidee said:
Woof! Oh no, you\'ve set Fido off. He saw \'amorous\'. A reading dog. Oh yes! heehee.
April 4th, 2019 04:07
orchidee said:
Woof! Oh no, you\'ve set Fido off. He saw \'amorous\'. A reading dog. Oh yes! heehee.
April 4th, 2019 04:07
TORN.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I felt so much from this, I\'m not sure what else to say.
It Just what I needed
Thank you in so many ways!
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:59
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I felt so much from this, I\'m not sure what else to say.
It Just what I needed
Thank you in so many ways!
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:59
TORN.
Neville said:
A delightful find this fine sunny mane .. despite a hint of chill... it would seem we have been thinking along similar lines... and who yet knows what our tomorrows may bring.... Neville
April 3rd, 2019 03:57
Neville said:
A delightful find this fine sunny mane .. despite a hint of chill... it would seem we have been thinking along similar lines... and who yet knows what our tomorrows may bring.... Neville
April 3rd, 2019 03:57
SOLO-CHILL.
dusk arising said:
The drawing in of the evening can bring sadness and lead us to reflect upon happier \'together\' times.
Your words have encouraged me to reflect upon such times but i\'m too positive to go on a downer. My reflections are upon joyous times I have been so lucky to have had as a part of my existence. I try to encourage this way of looking back in others who i see suffering a loss.
On the other hand, some are simply susceptible to loneliness. Having been a solitary soul for many years i am lucky again not to feel that way.
See what your choices of subject do to me? Or is it the way you present them that gets under my skin and draws reaction? The latter of course,
April 2nd, 2019 12:54
dusk arising said:
The drawing in of the evening can bring sadness and lead us to reflect upon happier \'together\' times.
Your words have encouraged me to reflect upon such times but i\'m too positive to go on a downer. My reflections are upon joyous times I have been so lucky to have had as a part of my existence. I try to encourage this way of looking back in others who i see suffering a loss.
On the other hand, some are simply susceptible to loneliness. Having been a solitary soul for many years i am lucky again not to feel that way.
See what your choices of subject do to me? Or is it the way you present them that gets under my skin and draws reaction? The latter of course,
April 2nd, 2019 12:54
SOLO-CHILL.
MendedFences27 said:
Great write Fay. I loved \"widowed shoreline.\" Very imaginative, and it sets up the tone of the poem. Brilliant.
The connection between widows and the sea , the massive loneliness of the ocean, the loss of the Sun over its horizon all add intensity to this phrase and the entire poem. Just a great poem Fay. A favorite for me. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2019 11:55
MendedFences27 said:
Great write Fay. I loved \"widowed shoreline.\" Very imaginative, and it sets up the tone of the poem. Brilliant.
The connection between widows and the sea , the massive loneliness of the ocean, the loss of the Sun over its horizon all add intensity to this phrase and the entire poem. Just a great poem Fay. A favorite for me. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2019 11:55
SOLO-CHILL.
Neville said:
An emotionally charged lament if ever there was.. a dirge played along some wild and windswept shoreline immediately springs to mind.... a sadness lingers after the initial read... N
April 2nd, 2019 04:47
Neville said:
An emotionally charged lament if ever there was.. a dirge played along some wild and windswept shoreline immediately springs to mind.... a sadness lingers after the initial read... N
April 2nd, 2019 04:47
SOLO-CHILL.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR THIS FAY : Angela here 9pm in Auckland : chance to catch up on MPS ~ I\'m posting my poem soon ! Love the picture can I use it ? It pictures me waiting on the Auckland BEACH waiting : waiting for Brians Plane to come in (it takes weeks for the Boat !) Love the pathos in your Poem. Brian & I are Bereavment Councellors in the Church especially for the under 40s who had been bereaved. It is hard to lose your Partner at any age but even worse when you are Young. Brian and I are qualified Councellors for our Work. The worst situation is suicide because the bereaved ones always blame themselves. What your poem illustrates is : However beautiful the surroundings and the weather : the loss NEVER goes away. Thank you it inspires Brian & I to cherish each other more each day while we have each other. I am sitting on the Shore waiting : but I KNOW BRIAN WILL BE WITH ME on Saturday 20th APRIL : AMEN
Thank you for awakening our senses
Blessings & love in the Spirit
Your ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 2nd, 2019 03:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR THIS FAY : Angela here 9pm in Auckland : chance to catch up on MPS ~ I\'m posting my poem soon ! Love the picture can I use it ? It pictures me waiting on the Auckland BEACH waiting : waiting for Brians Plane to come in (it takes weeks for the Boat !) Love the pathos in your Poem. Brian & I are Bereavment Councellors in the Church especially for the under 40s who had been bereaved. It is hard to lose your Partner at any age but even worse when you are Young. Brian and I are qualified Councellors for our Work. The worst situation is suicide because the bereaved ones always blame themselves. What your poem illustrates is : However beautiful the surroundings and the weather : the loss NEVER goes away. Thank you it inspires Brian & I to cherish each other more each day while we have each other. I am sitting on the Shore waiting : but I KNOW BRIAN WILL BE WITH ME on Saturday 20th APRIL : AMEN
Thank you for awakening our senses
Blessings & love in the Spirit
Your ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 2nd, 2019 03:16
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Its 8am Tuesday in NZ ! As BREEZE you seem to be in a very mischievious mood which I like ! Yoou have morphed into a Naughty Schoolgirl. Thirteen negative appelations onlucky for those in its Path.
Shuffling Leaves : Scuttling Boats ; Scattering Clouds
Smokey Fumes : Shutters Banging : Scary Creakings
Stirring Rooks : Storming Roofs : Stripping Trees
Storming Cliffs : Savaging Power Boats : Sun Superceded
Spring Surrended ! There is a lot of intentional alliteration here !
The \"S\" sound mimics the soughing of the BREEZE !
You set the Poetic Bar very high FAY enabling us to learn & enjoy but never to emulate !
Blessings and LOVE in the SPIRIT
Your Good Friend ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our FUSION on COLOURS : Thanks A & B !
April 1st, 2019 14:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Its 8am Tuesday in NZ ! As BREEZE you seem to be in a very mischievious mood which I like ! Yoou have morphed into a Naughty Schoolgirl. Thirteen negative appelations onlucky for those in its Path.
Shuffling Leaves : Scuttling Boats ; Scattering Clouds
Smokey Fumes : Shutters Banging : Scary Creakings
Stirring Rooks : Storming Roofs : Stripping Trees
Storming Cliffs : Savaging Power Boats : Sun Superceded
Spring Surrended ! There is a lot of intentional alliteration here !
The \"S\" sound mimics the soughing of the BREEZE !
You set the Poetic Bar very high FAY enabling us to learn & enjoy but never to emulate !
Blessings and LOVE in the SPIRIT
Your Good Friend ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our FUSION on COLOURS : Thanks A & B !
April 1st, 2019 14:33
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
Nafis Light said:
Somehow, the poem reminds me of a poem created by a poet in a video game I played before. It was a beautiful poem about time and skies.
April 1st, 2019 09:18
Nafis Light said:
Somehow, the poem reminds me of a poem created by a poet in a video game I played before. It was a beautiful poem about time and skies.
April 1st, 2019 09:18
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
dusk arising said:
I know you .. you are the one who stole my hat, you made me cry as a six year old stealing my kite and casting it into the boiling sea. I\'m not sure but i think you ganged up with the electric storm and had my fences down last year too.
On the other hand.. You kept my flag flying and give \'change\' a healthy ride.
All in all, having you around is a breeze in itself.
Really enjoyable fun read from you today.
April 1st, 2019 06:03
dusk arising said:
I know you .. you are the one who stole my hat, you made me cry as a six year old stealing my kite and casting it into the boiling sea. I\'m not sure but i think you ganged up with the electric storm and had my fences down last year too.
On the other hand.. You kept my flag flying and give \'change\' a healthy ride.
All in all, having you around is a breeze in itself.
Really enjoyable fun read from you today.
April 1st, 2019 06:03
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
Neville said:
These words leave this reader breathless.. crammed full of appropriate blustery observations and then some..
Yes, and as part of a now eagerly awaited series, shall I imagine spill across April and be responsible for creating an abundance of smiles... Neville
April 1st, 2019 05:10
Neville said:
These words leave this reader breathless.. crammed full of appropriate blustery observations and then some..
Yes, and as part of a now eagerly awaited series, shall I imagine spill across April and be responsible for creating an abundance of smiles... Neville
April 1st, 2019 05:10
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Nafis Light said:
Somehow it is perfect it its essence.
The picture adds beauty.
With Love and Laughter,
J44
March 31st, 2019 09:11
Nafis Light said:
Somehow it is perfect it its essence.
The picture adds beauty.
With Love and Laughter,
J44
March 31st, 2019 09:11
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
A stunning write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 05:32
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
A stunning write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 05:32
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