Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
So Met.
dusk arising said:
Oh how true i love it! North coast of your lovely county is covered in trees as in your picture. (Would have been nice to see one of those dramatic Cornish skies behind it).
\"with ironized knuckles and scars pummeled black\" amazing!
definately going into my favourites.
September 6th, 2017 05:57
dusk arising said:
Oh how true i love it! North coast of your lovely county is covered in trees as in your picture. (Would have been nice to see one of those dramatic Cornish skies behind it).
\"with ironized knuckles and scars pummeled black\" amazing!
definately going into my favourites.
September 6th, 2017 05:57
Breaking Through.
FredPeyer said:
Another Fay-esque poem, wonderfully written! Love that last line.
September 5th, 2017 12:00
FredPeyer said:
Another Fay-esque poem, wonderfully written! Love that last line.
September 5th, 2017 12:00
Breaking Through.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ lovely sentiments ~ To Understand as to be Understood ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN. Please check COLORS ....... Thanks B.
September 5th, 2017 05:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ lovely sentiments ~ To Understand as to be Understood ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN. Please check COLORS ....... Thanks B.
September 5th, 2017 05:52
She-Fever.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you describe so beautifully that big ocean I am all surrounded by. We have a saying here: Never turn your back to the ocean!
September 4th, 2017 14:20
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you describe so beautifully that big ocean I am all surrounded by. We have a saying here: Never turn your back to the ocean!
September 4th, 2017 14:20
Ticking Away.
FredPeyer said:
I would love to wake up like that every morning! Beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay!
September 4th, 2017 13:29
FredPeyer said:
I would love to wake up like that every morning! Beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay!
September 4th, 2017 13:29
She-Fever.
Michael Edwards said:
This truly evokes the sights and sounds of the sea - a superb write Fay.
September 4th, 2017 08:07
Michael Edwards said:
This truly evokes the sights and sounds of the sea - a superb write Fay.
September 4th, 2017 08:07
She-Fever.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAITH ~ I\'m booked on a Cruise and your poem has scared me. I was brought up in Liverpool and now live on the East Coast and all the Rivers & lakes & Seas & Oceans are my Friends ~ But as your beautiful Poem says ~ NOT to be flirted with and NEVER to be trifled with ! I agree She is a SAVAGE ~ Mistress ~ Actress ~ Dancer ~ Sweetheart ~ Jailer ! I have courted Ladies like that so I am forewarned ! Yours as ever BRIAN
September 4th, 2017 05:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAITH ~ I\'m booked on a Cruise and your poem has scared me. I was brought up in Liverpool and now live on the East Coast and all the Rivers & lakes & Seas & Oceans are my Friends ~ But as your beautiful Poem says ~ NOT to be flirted with and NEVER to be trifled with ! I agree She is a SAVAGE ~ Mistress ~ Actress ~ Dancer ~ Sweetheart ~ Jailer ! I have courted Ladies like that so I am forewarned ! Yours as ever BRIAN
September 4th, 2017 05:48
Ticking Away.
Louis Gibbs said:
The transition from dream-world to this world is momentarily confusing to me. It is like trying to remember a role I have undertaken, what scene it is, and what lines I should know as I step on stage. My belief that This is the dream world is reinforced. Your fine poem explores the transition very well, Fay!
September 3rd, 2017 10:40
Louis Gibbs said:
The transition from dream-world to this world is momentarily confusing to me. It is like trying to remember a role I have undertaken, what scene it is, and what lines I should know as I step on stage. My belief that This is the dream world is reinforced. Your fine poem explores the transition very well, Fay!
September 3rd, 2017 10:40
Ticking Away.
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew September was that eloquent! All that, and before we\'ve even got out of bed. Lovely write Fay.
September 3rd, 2017 08:45
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew September was that eloquent! All that, and before we\'ve even got out of bed. Lovely write Fay.
September 3rd, 2017 08:45
Ticking Away.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
My alarm clock is built within me, for as long as I can remember I have been up about 6.00am and if I don\'t wake until 6.30 I feel that half the day has gone.
September 3rd, 2017 06:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
My alarm clock is built within me, for as long as I can remember I have been up about 6.00am and if I don\'t wake until 6.30 I feel that half the day has gone.
September 3rd, 2017 06:27
Lost.
malubotelho said:
This is stunning beautiful Fay. You are not less than a fantastic writer and your poetry can not be better. Thanks for this beauty. I felt myself like a river. Lovely reading.
September 2nd, 2017 14:47
malubotelho said:
This is stunning beautiful Fay. You are not less than a fantastic writer and your poetry can not be better. Thanks for this beauty. I felt myself like a river. Lovely reading.
September 2nd, 2017 14:47
Lost.
FredPeyer said:
While the photo is certainly beautiful, your poem doesn\'t need it. It is so visual, so beautifully written, my imagination went into overdrive!
Thank you Fay, definitely a favorite!
September 2nd, 2017 13:19
FredPeyer said:
While the photo is certainly beautiful, your poem doesn\'t need it. It is so visual, so beautifully written, my imagination went into overdrive!
Thank you Fay, definitely a favorite!
September 2nd, 2017 13:19
Lost.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In my Youth i spent many years Fell Walking in Snowdonia and The English Lake District. I encountered many many BROOKS in my travels ~ some just inches wide ~ at source ~ others only forded with trepidation ! Loved the photo and the first verse ~ BUT ~ The shape and pace and nostalgia of verse 2 ~ made me weep in humble recollection ~ AMEN ! Love you FAY for always taking us a verse further with your elegant Odes ! Yours as ever ~ in appreciation ~ BRIAN
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In my Youth i spent many years Fell Walking in Snowdonia and The English Lake District. I encountered many many BROOKS in my travels ~ some just inches wide ~ at source ~ others only forded with trepidation ! Loved the photo and the first verse ~ BUT ~ The shape and pace and nostalgia of verse 2 ~ made me weep in humble recollection ~ AMEN ! Love you FAY for always taking us a verse further with your elegant Odes ! Yours as ever ~ in appreciation ~ BRIAN
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
Lost.
Louis Gibbs said:
Life\'s journey ... from the innocence and exploration of childhood, through the formational years of adolescence, to the complete indoctrination of adulthood ... and what is lost in the process. Beautifully expressed, and a favorite, Fay!
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Life\'s journey ... from the innocence and exploration of childhood, through the formational years of adolescence, to the complete indoctrination of adulthood ... and what is lost in the process. Beautifully expressed, and a favorite, Fay!
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
Lost.
dusk arising said:
This is so beautiful faye. Just so uplifting. I love your plain everyday english writing like this (hope you dont mind me calling it that) compared to your metaphor poetry where i stray off the path. But this piece is outstanding - so very good. It will take pride of place at the top of my favourites.
September 2nd, 2017 05:40
dusk arising said:
This is so beautiful faye. Just so uplifting. I love your plain everyday english writing like this (hope you dont mind me calling it that) compared to your metaphor poetry where i stray off the path. But this piece is outstanding - so very good. It will take pride of place at the top of my favourites.
September 2nd, 2017 05:40
Lost.
Michael Edwards said:
I am so jealous - this is just the sort of poem I like to write - brilliant as always Fay.
September 2nd, 2017 04:44
Michael Edwards said:
I am so jealous - this is just the sort of poem I like to write - brilliant as always Fay.
September 2nd, 2017 04:44
Year\'s Yield.
Heather T said:
Be-whiskering! That\'s a wonderment in itself. I\'m a sucker for the peerless language in all of your works.
September 1st, 2017 21:39
Heather T said:
Be-whiskering! That\'s a wonderment in itself. I\'m a sucker for the peerless language in all of your works.
September 1st, 2017 21:39
Year\'s Yield.
sue.evans said:
Beautiful language and paints an age of by gone years - lovely 😊
September 1st, 2017 13:23
sue.evans said:
Beautiful language and paints an age of by gone years - lovely 😊
September 1st, 2017 13:23
Year\'s Yield.
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Fay for a beautiful poem. I had a garden, flowers, and apple trees when living in Montreal.
Now, while we do have seasons, there is not much difference between them. Sometimes I miss the incredible colors of the maple trees in fall.
September 1st, 2017 12:28
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Fay for a beautiful poem. I had a garden, flowers, and apple trees when living in Montreal.
Now, while we do have seasons, there is not much difference between them. Sometimes I miss the incredible colors of the maple trees in fall.
September 1st, 2017 12:28
Year\'s Yield.
Sefrin said:
This is absolutely beautiful, Fay! I have much esteem for you and your work.
September 1st, 2017 10:01
Sefrin said:
This is absolutely beautiful, Fay! I have much esteem for you and your work.
September 1st, 2017 10:01
Year\'s Yield.
Michael Edwards said:
I love the garden - but it needs continual work to keep it in shape - current work - trimming back ivy. You can\'t beat a good cottage garden , Great write Fay
September 1st, 2017 09:16
Michael Edwards said:
I love the garden - but it needs continual work to keep it in shape - current work - trimming back ivy. You can\'t beat a good cottage garden , Great write Fay
September 1st, 2017 09:16
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