Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
A Something.
Louis Gibbs said:
A graceful tribute to this small creature of nature, Fay. Well done, as usual.
September 27th, 2017 14:01
Louis Gibbs said:
A graceful tribute to this small creature of nature, Fay. Well done, as usual.
September 27th, 2017 14:01
A Something.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, only you can make this birdsong encounter sound like a hymn!
September 27th, 2017 11:30
FredPeyer said:
Fay, only you can make this birdsong encounter sound like a hymn!
September 27th, 2017 11:30
A Something.
Michael Edwards said:
Love it and \'bluebell sky\' is inspired.
September 27th, 2017 08:30
Michael Edwards said:
Love it and \'bluebell sky\' is inspired.
September 27th, 2017 08:30
A Something.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ O to be in Cornwall now that Autumn\'s here ! We are all up Early today enjoying a walk and the Spring Chorus ~ Alas I have to leave for work soon (8:30 am). Love the Poem and the Picture ~ perfection ! Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my GHAZAL ~ some verses are a bit risque so early in the morning but its a \"15\" not an \"18\" ~ Thanks B.
September 27th, 2017 01:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ O to be in Cornwall now that Autumn\'s here ! We are all up Early today enjoying a walk and the Spring Chorus ~ Alas I have to leave for work soon (8:30 am). Love the Poem and the Picture ~ perfection ! Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my GHAZAL ~ some verses are a bit risque so early in the morning but its a \"15\" not an \"18\" ~ Thanks B.
September 27th, 2017 01:28
A Something.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem about a beautiful bird which is the smallest bird in the UK.
September 27th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem about a beautiful bird which is the smallest bird in the UK.
September 27th, 2017 01:13
Turbulence.
malubotelho said:
Wonderful writing Fay. The ocean makes me feel very small with is grandiose mass. I love to sit at the beach and listen to it. Such an enchanting melody. Thanks for this vivid imaginary.
September 26th, 2017 15:01
malubotelho said:
Wonderful writing Fay. The ocean makes me feel very small with is grandiose mass. I love to sit at the beach and listen to it. Such an enchanting melody. Thanks for this vivid imaginary.
September 26th, 2017 15:01
Turbulence.
FredPeyer said:
After this poem Fay, every time I will be standing at the ocean\'s edge, I will think of you!
September 26th, 2017 11:55
FredPeyer said:
After this poem Fay, every time I will be standing at the ocean\'s edge, I will think of you!
September 26th, 2017 11:55
Turbulence.
WL Schuett said:
Took me there it\'s all I could ask , well done
September 26th, 2017 09:25
WL Schuett said:
Took me there it\'s all I could ask , well done
September 26th, 2017 09:25
Turbulence.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Her efforts to rise are heightened with effort of swelling. breaths inflate her skin to swollen balloons. We also see thinly super burst. With timely pitch she gives roar. Waves explode with ferocious sound and this amazes mind with turbulence and submarine pounding . Brilliant perception of sea is very well described in this poem. We get reality of sea while reading this. This is definitely an excellent drafting.
September 26th, 2017 08:21
Pintu Mahakul said:
Her efforts to rise are heightened with effort of swelling. breaths inflate her skin to swollen balloons. We also see thinly super burst. With timely pitch she gives roar. Waves explode with ferocious sound and this amazes mind with turbulence and submarine pounding . Brilliant perception of sea is very well described in this poem. We get reality of sea while reading this. This is definitely an excellent drafting.
September 26th, 2017 08:21
Turbulence.
Goldfinch60 said:
I was by that sea Fay. Thank you for taking me there.
September 26th, 2017 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I was by that sea Fay. Thank you for taking me there.
September 26th, 2017 08:07
Turbulence.
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterfully constructed piece composed of powerful imagery! Visually, as well as message-wise, this one is a beauty, Fay!
September 26th, 2017 07:56
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterfully constructed piece composed of powerful imagery! Visually, as well as message-wise, this one is a beauty, Fay!
September 26th, 2017 07:56
Turbulence.
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written, so descriptive I feel like I\'m there. Splendid work!
September 26th, 2017 07:21
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written, so descriptive I feel like I\'m there. Splendid work!
September 26th, 2017 07:21
Turbulence.
Michael Edwards said:
I can see it, I can hear it, I can smell it, a super work Fay
September 26th, 2017 07:04
Michael Edwards said:
I can see it, I can hear it, I can smell it, a super work Fay
September 26th, 2017 07:04
Not Yet..
dusk arising said:
Beautiful and really moving. Into my favourites.
September 25th, 2017 17:50
dusk arising said:
Beautiful and really moving. Into my favourites.
September 25th, 2017 17:50
Not Yet..
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you captured the feelings, the emotions perfectly. Great choice of words too. A very beautiful poem!
September 25th, 2017 16:56
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you captured the feelings, the emotions perfectly. Great choice of words too. A very beautiful poem!
September 25th, 2017 16:56
Not Yet..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Memories are indeed made of this. Your Memories of your Beloved Partner are very very dear to You and also become dear to us as you have the grace to share them ~ THANK YOU. Yours as ever ~ BRIAN I love the pathos in the visual ~ thank you ~ B.
September 25th, 2017 16:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Memories are indeed made of this. Your Memories of your Beloved Partner are very very dear to You and also become dear to us as you have the grace to share them ~ THANK YOU. Yours as ever ~ BRIAN I love the pathos in the visual ~ thank you ~ B.
September 25th, 2017 16:51
Addiction.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I think you are the only person on this planet who can turn sunrise and sunset into a passionate love affair! Great writing.
September 25th, 2017 11:11
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I think you are the only person on this planet who can turn sunrise and sunset into a passionate love affair! Great writing.
September 25th, 2017 11:11
Not Yet..
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write Fay, but sad. I would\'ve used \"evocative\" but it\'s been used twice! Full of emotion! Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2017 06:59
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write Fay, but sad. I would\'ve used \"evocative\" but it\'s been used twice! Full of emotion! Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2017 06:59
Not Yet..
Michael Edwards said:
So evocative of the thoughts and feelings of someone in this position - great stuff Fay
September 25th, 2017 03:05
Michael Edwards said:
So evocative of the thoughts and feelings of someone in this position - great stuff Fay
September 25th, 2017 03:05
Addiction.
malubotelho said:
So beautiful Fay. Another gift from your poetic heart. Thanks.
September 24th, 2017 16:19
malubotelho said:
So beautiful Fay. Another gift from your poetic heart. Thanks.
September 24th, 2017 16:19
Addiction.
Christina8 said:
Such a gorgeous write about sunset and sunrise. Wonderful metaphors leap off the screen. Such a great read. Thanks for sharing!
September 24th, 2017 13:06
Christina8 said:
Such a gorgeous write about sunset and sunrise. Wonderful metaphors leap off the screen. Such a great read. Thanks for sharing!
September 24th, 2017 13:06
Addiction.
Louis Gibbs said:
Reminds me of how my young grandson saw the night as he would say, \"Dark came\" ... as though it were a separate entity rather than absence of light.
This metaphor is a beauty, as usual, Fay!
September 24th, 2017 10:15
Louis Gibbs said:
Reminds me of how my young grandson saw the night as he would say, \"Dark came\" ... as though it were a separate entity rather than absence of light.
This metaphor is a beauty, as usual, Fay!
September 24th, 2017 10:15
Addiction.
Accidental Poet said:
Sunrise & sunset, God\'s gift to us all. Awesome write Fay. Like the rays of sunlight, you\'ve cast inspiration on us all. Thank you. ; )
September 24th, 2017 08:05
Accidental Poet said:
Sunrise & sunset, God\'s gift to us all. Awesome write Fay. Like the rays of sunlight, you\'ve cast inspiration on us all. Thank you. ; )
September 24th, 2017 08:05
Addiction.
dusk arising said:
Oh fay... sheer delight in reading your piece today. You\'ve done it yet again! \"yet addiction knows time will fly to next flicker of chance for joy to tie them again\"
I feel inspired to watch every dawning and dusk to full night - you know i shan\'t but you do remind me of the beauty we all ignore in our wonderful existence here on earth. Goes into my favourites... top of the list if i can so keep it. Lovely, thank you.
September 24th, 2017 03:31
dusk arising said:
Oh fay... sheer delight in reading your piece today. You\'ve done it yet again! \"yet addiction knows time will fly to next flicker of chance for joy to tie them again\"
I feel inspired to watch every dawning and dusk to full night - you know i shan\'t but you do remind me of the beauty we all ignore in our wonderful existence here on earth. Goes into my favourites... top of the list if i can so keep it. Lovely, thank you.
September 24th, 2017 03:31
Addiction.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUNRISE ~ SUNSET always awesome and always unique. Thanks for caring Fay ~ Lovely simile of two lovers embracing ! NOW i will blush at Sunset & Sunrise ! Love you for being you and sharing such \"delicious\" poems every day ~ BRIAN
September 24th, 2017 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUNRISE ~ SUNSET always awesome and always unique. Thanks for caring Fay ~ Lovely simile of two lovers embracing ! NOW i will blush at Sunset & Sunrise ! Love you for being you and sharing such \"delicious\" poems every day ~ BRIAN
September 24th, 2017 03:30
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