Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Lovescape.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, so I\'m not the only one who swoons! Great write again Fay.
August 26th, 2017 08:11
orchidee said:
Oh lol, so I\'m not the only one who swoons! Great write again Fay.
August 26th, 2017 08:11
Lovescape.
Louis Gibbs said:
A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic piece, this one, Fay. Kudos!
August 26th, 2017 07:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic piece, this one, Fay. Kudos!
August 26th, 2017 07:28
Lovescape.
Michael Edwards said:
moth-soft, needs rack, ---- superb language as always Fay
August 26th, 2017 04:44
Michael Edwards said:
moth-soft, needs rack, ---- superb language as always Fay
August 26th, 2017 04:44
Lovescape.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh FAY you have really touched my HEART with this beautiful symbiotic Painting & Poem ! I\'m a bit old fashioned in my choice of LADIES and you have painted & pencilled my ideal. Thank you for a perfect ODE to enlighten my Weekend ~ We have a Flower Festival in our local Anglican Church today ~ always Victorian and always uplifting. Your poem will enhance my Joy ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ thanks B.
August 26th, 2017 04:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh FAY you have really touched my HEART with this beautiful symbiotic Painting & Poem ! I\'m a bit old fashioned in my choice of LADIES and you have painted & pencilled my ideal. Thank you for a perfect ODE to enlighten my Weekend ~ We have a Flower Festival in our local Anglican Church today ~ always Victorian and always uplifting. Your poem will enhance my Joy ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ thanks B.
August 26th, 2017 04:22
Lovescape.
FredPeyer said:
Sounds like something Victorian to my uneducated Yankee ears!
Great writing again, Fay!
August 26th, 2017 03:49
FredPeyer said:
Sounds like something Victorian to my uneducated Yankee ears!
Great writing again, Fay!
August 26th, 2017 03:49
The Undisturbed.
malubotelho said:
Whispers seep inward........from each tree and bird
to alter the psyche.
You spoke to me with these words. It is what I feel in relation to nature. It alters my psyche.
August 25th, 2017 13:03
malubotelho said:
Whispers seep inward........from each tree and bird
to alter the psyche.
You spoke to me with these words. It is what I feel in relation to nature. It alters my psyche.
August 25th, 2017 13:03
The Undisturbed.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is just so good. Love the poem, the structure.
And it works! I was so de-stressed by the time I finished reading, I nearly fell asleep! :-)
August 25th, 2017 12:18
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is just so good. Love the poem, the structure.
And it works! I was so de-stressed by the time I finished reading, I nearly fell asleep! :-)
August 25th, 2017 12:18
The Undisturbed.
WriteBeLight said:
I like Edward\'s question. You do love nature and all of its glory. So well done.
August 25th, 2017 08:07
WriteBeLight said:
I like Edward\'s question. You do love nature and all of its glory. So well done.
August 25th, 2017 08:07
The Undisturbed.
Goldfinch60 said:
With Nature is a great place to be to become calm in life. Good write Fay.
August 25th, 2017 07:42
Goldfinch60 said:
With Nature is a great place to be to become calm in life. Good write Fay.
August 25th, 2017 07:42
The Undisturbed.
Louis Gibbs said:
The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant piece, indeed, Fay!
August 25th, 2017 07:14
Louis Gibbs said:
The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant piece, indeed, Fay!
August 25th, 2017 07:14
The Undisturbed.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there where e filial saplings stretch and reach beneath the forest’s canopy - great picture painted Fay.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there where e filial saplings stretch and reach beneath the forest’s canopy - great picture painted Fay.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
The Undisturbed.
dusk arising said:
I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my mind. Lovely writing here.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
dusk arising said:
I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my mind. Lovely writing here.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
The Undisturbed.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Fay, there\'s just something about you and nature.. You seem to go hand in hand! Hey! No, you couldn\'t be HER, could you? Mother Nature Herself?
August 25th, 2017 04:15
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Fay, there\'s just something about you and nature.. You seem to go hand in hand! Hey! No, you couldn\'t be HER, could you? Mother Nature Herself?
August 25th, 2017 04:15
Questions.
dusk arising said:
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic intent.. Beautifully written.
August 24th, 2017 16:20
dusk arising said:
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic intent.. Beautifully written.
August 24th, 2017 16:20
Questions.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this poem is brilliantly written, an emotional powerhouse, with a subject we all have to deal with sooner or later. Fay-tastic!
August 24th, 2017 13:18
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this poem is brilliantly written, an emotional powerhouse, with a subject we all have to deal with sooner or later. Fay-tastic!
August 24th, 2017 13:18
Questions.
Christina8 said:
Love this poem! Very descriptive and full of emotion. Wonderful!
August 24th, 2017 11:02
Christina8 said:
Love this poem! Very descriptive and full of emotion. Wonderful!
August 24th, 2017 11:02
Questions.
malubotelho said:
You can speak of anything in the same delicate way. You are a soft lady Fay. Again I repeat: I just love to read you. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2017 09:34
malubotelho said:
You can speak of anything in the same delicate way. You are a soft lady Fay. Again I repeat: I just love to read you. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2017 09:34
Questions.
orchidee said:
You walloweth not, Brian! It\'s not \'any old rubbish\' on \'ere, ya know!
August 24th, 2017 08:52
orchidee said:
You walloweth not, Brian! It\'s not \'any old rubbish\' on \'ere, ya know!
August 24th, 2017 08:52
Questions.
orchidee said:
Yes, good symbiosis - if I knew what it was exactly?! heehee. Good write Fay. The poem and picture covey a sort of claustrophobic atmosphere, even though the pic is a wide outdoor scene.
August 24th, 2017 08:51
orchidee said:
Yes, good symbiosis - if I knew what it was exactly?! heehee. Good write Fay. The poem and picture covey a sort of claustrophobic atmosphere, even though the pic is a wide outdoor scene.
August 24th, 2017 08:51
Questions.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Those \"nows\" can be so very fleeting.\" .
August 24th, 2017 08:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Those \"nows\" can be so very fleeting.\" .
August 24th, 2017 08:05
Questions.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful lament of lost love, Fay. Nothing is more crushing to the spirit, and your poem portrays the effect well. I admire you for taking the risk of \"late-love\".
August 24th, 2017 07:35
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful lament of lost love, Fay. Nothing is more crushing to the spirit, and your poem portrays the effect well. I admire you for taking the risk of \"late-love\".
August 24th, 2017 07:35
Questions.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL symbiosis of Picture & Poem which is a FAY hallmark. While I wallow in my own odd-odes ~ I think \"Surely FAY can\'t raise the MPS Bar again !\" but you have ! Now I no longer question it but see each of you daily offerings as a \"Masterclass in Perfection\". This is no exception ~ it made me cry but I love it and You too ! Further analysis is superfluous ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 24th, 2017 04:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL symbiosis of Picture & Poem which is a FAY hallmark. While I wallow in my own odd-odes ~ I think \"Surely FAY can\'t raise the MPS Bar again !\" but you have ! Now I no longer question it but see each of you daily offerings as a \"Masterclass in Perfection\". This is no exception ~ it made me cry but I love it and You too ! Further analysis is superfluous ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 24th, 2017 04:25
In Sequence.
malubotelho said:
Always beautiful Fay, can not miss one. Just lovely.
August 23rd, 2017 13:54
malubotelho said:
Always beautiful Fay, can not miss one. Just lovely.
August 23rd, 2017 13:54
In Sequence.
FredPeyer said:
Fay you know how to make a sunrise very, very special!
August 23rd, 2017 04:10
FredPeyer said:
Fay you know how to make a sunrise very, very special!
August 23rd, 2017 04:10
In Sequence.
Michael Edwards said:
Every word so significant and not a word wasted or a word too many - superb write Fay
August 23rd, 2017 03:45
Michael Edwards said:
Every word so significant and not a word wasted or a word too many - superb write Fay
August 23rd, 2017 03:45
Read Rightly.
Sefrin said:
Such powerful words. This is an absolute masterpiece of a poem.
August 22nd, 2017 19:12
Sefrin said:
Such powerful words. This is an absolute masterpiece of a poem.
August 22nd, 2017 19:12
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