Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Seize Now.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
tHANKS fay Thanks FAY ~ love the form of this Poem and the SEVEN one line epithets and piquancy to the triplets. Taken together thy form a very enigmatic ODE !
SEIZE NOW !
Which turn on the many
Either for or against
And let love have its head
If real fees unsteady
Over falsehood\'s regret
So naught left to repent
From none other than Heaven.
Thanks for Sharing another Gem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 21st, 2017 05:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
tHANKS fay Thanks FAY ~ love the form of this Poem and the SEVEN one line epithets and piquancy to the triplets. Taken together thy form a very enigmatic ODE !
SEIZE NOW !
Which turn on the many
Either for or against
And let love have its head
If real fees unsteady
Over falsehood\'s regret
So naught left to repent
From none other than Heaven.
Thanks for Sharing another Gem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 21st, 2017 05:07
Seize Now.
Michael Edwards said:
Fred\'s right = carpe diem indeed - super stuff Fay.
September 21st, 2017 03:21
Michael Edwards said:
Fred\'s right = carpe diem indeed - super stuff Fay.
September 21st, 2017 03:21
Becoming Other.
dusk arising said:
You allowed me to recall the morning i was out looking for mushrooms and at some distance watched a fox eyeing me warily.... he/she trotted off into nearby woodland (a spinney we called it in nottinghamshire) leaving me to sit on a log in drizzling rain, my minds eye following the fox (now \'her\' in my minds eye) back to her den and cubs. Lovely poem Fay.
September 20th, 2017 17:41
dusk arising said:
You allowed me to recall the morning i was out looking for mushrooms and at some distance watched a fox eyeing me warily.... he/she trotted off into nearby woodland (a spinney we called it in nottinghamshire) leaving me to sit on a log in drizzling rain, my minds eye following the fox (now \'her\' in my minds eye) back to her den and cubs. Lovely poem Fay.
September 20th, 2017 17:41
Becoming Other.
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on tapping into the \'oneness\' of all living things, Fay, and the consciousness of all things in the material world.
September 20th, 2017 14:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on tapping into the \'oneness\' of all living things, Fay, and the consciousness of all things in the material world.
September 20th, 2017 14:29
Becoming Other.
malubotelho said:
Fay, what a delightful reading. It is so beautiful the way you reveal the innocent enlightened child that lives inside you. I\'m in awe with so much beauty. Thanks
September 20th, 2017 10:54
malubotelho said:
Fay, what a delightful reading. It is so beautiful the way you reveal the innocent enlightened child that lives inside you. I\'m in awe with so much beauty. Thanks
September 20th, 2017 10:54
Becoming Other.
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem Fay! I agree with Fred in that it\'s a very insightful poem on a subject that not too many of us think about. Great job!
September 20th, 2017 10:43
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem Fay! I agree with Fred in that it\'s a very insightful poem on a subject that not too many of us think about. Great job!
September 20th, 2017 10:43
Becoming Other.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Or would you rather be a CAT ?\"
I know we don\'t believe in reincarnation as Animals FAY but I love the basic philosophy in your POEM ~ that we should (and could ?) have more empathy with the whole of the Animal & Plant Kingdom ! As a child we always had lots of CATS and was I curled up with POLLY or was she curled up with me ? We do pamper Cats because they are so so independent & regal. If I could come back as an animal I would be a Tabby Cat in a loving home and a Family with just GIRLS ~ PARDISE ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN Purrrrrrrrr !
September 20th, 2017 05:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Or would you rather be a CAT ?\"
I know we don\'t believe in reincarnation as Animals FAY but I love the basic philosophy in your POEM ~ that we should (and could ?) have more empathy with the whole of the Animal & Plant Kingdom ! As a child we always had lots of CATS and was I curled up with POLLY or was she curled up with me ? We do pamper Cats because they are so so independent & regal. If I could come back as an animal I would be a Tabby Cat in a loving home and a Family with just GIRLS ~ PARDISE ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN Purrrrrrrrr !
September 20th, 2017 05:00
Becoming Other.
Accidental Poet said:
Quite often I\'ve contemplated the thoughts of animals for what they could be thinking. Your compelling words and photograph show trust between two life forms willing to accept one another. I love this and thank you Fay. ; )
September 20th, 2017 04:14
Accidental Poet said:
Quite often I\'ve contemplated the thoughts of animals for what they could be thinking. Your compelling words and photograph show trust between two life forms willing to accept one another. I love this and thank you Fay. ; )
September 20th, 2017 04:14
Becoming Other.
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Fay for a very insightful poem on a subject not too many of us think about.
September 20th, 2017 03:35
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Fay for a very insightful poem on a subject not too many of us think about.
September 20th, 2017 03:35
Becoming Other.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I can\'t bear any animal experiments, not even mice. They are not really timid, nor insignificant because they are small. We had some as pets. They are feisty, may give you a nip if you tease them etc. Not really \'wee timorous beasties\'. Well, they are small though.
September 20th, 2017 03:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I can\'t bear any animal experiments, not even mice. They are not really timid, nor insignificant because they are small. We had some as pets. They are feisty, may give you a nip if you tease them etc. Not really \'wee timorous beasties\'. Well, they are small though.
September 20th, 2017 03:05
Becoming Other.
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'enlightened\' life of nature is wonderful to share as is this wonderful write.
September 20th, 2017 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'enlightened\' life of nature is wonderful to share as is this wonderful write.
September 20th, 2017 02:53
Stalled.
malubotelho said:
I think the later love found in life is deeper than the love that life choose for us. Later love is rather chosen by us. We can decide to be alone but we choose to love and romance again.
September 19th, 2017 20:18
malubotelho said:
I think the later love found in life is deeper than the love that life choose for us. Later love is rather chosen by us. We can decide to be alone but we choose to love and romance again.
September 19th, 2017 20:18
Stalled.
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed for all is ready for the roaring fire of passionate love..... bring forth the spark .... and glory in the warmth.
Lovely writing Fay. Really felt this one deep inside. Into my favourites.
September 19th, 2017 19:08
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed for all is ready for the roaring fire of passionate love..... bring forth the spark .... and glory in the warmth.
Lovely writing Fay. Really felt this one deep inside. Into my favourites.
September 19th, 2017 19:08
Stalled.
FredPeyer said:
Yes Fay, it shall!! Beautiful lead up to these last two lines!
September 19th, 2017 12:05
FredPeyer said:
Yes Fay, it shall!! Beautiful lead up to these last two lines!
September 19th, 2017 12:05
Stalled.
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem full of yearning. Very beautiful, Fay!
September 19th, 2017 09:52
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem full of yearning. Very beautiful, Fay!
September 19th, 2017 09:52
Stalled.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very nostalgic and full of yearning innuendo ~ it made me cry for your lost love. You know how much I love you FAY ~ but alas from a distance ~ I trust it helps ! Your Friend as ever BRIAN Please sample my RICE PEAS \'N CHICK ~ Before STEVE consumes the lot ~ thanks BRIAN
September 19th, 2017 03:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very nostalgic and full of yearning innuendo ~ it made me cry for your lost love. You know how much I love you FAY ~ but alas from a distance ~ I trust it helps ! Your Friend as ever BRIAN Please sample my RICE PEAS \'N CHICK ~ Before STEVE consumes the lot ~ thanks BRIAN
September 19th, 2017 03:53
Thinnest Divide.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful description of Mans relationship with the Piscatorial Domain ! I can\'t have CAT etc in my Flat but I do have Tropical Fish and the Yellow and Blue Tangs are my favourite. We are terrestrial Animals so we can scuba dive ~ but we can never be a FISH ! We can hang glide ~ but we can never be a BIRD ! Love the Poem & the Picture Thanks for caring ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 18th, 2017 18:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful description of Mans relationship with the Piscatorial Domain ! I can\'t have CAT etc in my Flat but I do have Tropical Fish and the Yellow and Blue Tangs are my favourite. We are terrestrial Animals so we can scuba dive ~ but we can never be a FISH ! We can hang glide ~ but we can never be a BIRD ! Love the Poem & the Picture Thanks for caring ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 18th, 2017 18:28
Thinnest Divide.
dusk arising said:
Go on Fay... dive in... you know you want to! Swim with those fishes gal... let the mermaid in your soul flip free... give my love to Coral if you see her.
Nice one, made me smile.
September 18th, 2017 13:07
dusk arising said:
Go on Fay... dive in... you know you want to! Swim with those fishes gal... let the mermaid in your soul flip free... give my love to Coral if you see her.
Nice one, made me smile.
September 18th, 2017 13:07
Thinnest Divide.
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Fay, and as far as I read it, a great metaphor of us reaching out but not quite reaching it.
September 18th, 2017 13:04
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Fay, and as far as I read it, a great metaphor of us reaching out but not quite reaching it.
September 18th, 2017 13:04
Thinnest Divide.
malubotelho said:
Very cute writing and picture Fay. So adorable little fish 🐟
September 18th, 2017 12:52
malubotelho said:
Very cute writing and picture Fay. So adorable little fish 🐟
September 18th, 2017 12:52
Thinnest Divide.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I tried joining a fish without any air tank for 24 hours. It didn\'t work out for me somehow. Hmm. Strange that! lol.
September 18th, 2017 08:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I tried joining a fish without any air tank for 24 hours. It didn\'t work out for me somehow. Hmm. Strange that! lol.
September 18th, 2017 08:27
Thinnest Divide.
Michael Edwards said:
This is so visually compelling - a special write Fay
September 18th, 2017 03:46
Michael Edwards said:
This is so visually compelling - a special write Fay
September 18th, 2017 03:46
MORE THAN.
dusk arising said:
WOW Fay that is tremendous! Held me breathless as i read it thru (cept i had to drag in air tbh) on edge of my chair because it was a thriller! I think it was your use of \'and more than that\' created a pace, a tension. I love it and it goes straight to my favourites. Thank you.
September 17th, 2017 16:29
dusk arising said:
WOW Fay that is tremendous! Held me breathless as i read it thru (cept i had to drag in air tbh) on edge of my chair because it was a thriller! I think it was your use of \'and more than that\' created a pace, a tension. I love it and it goes straight to my favourites. Thank you.
September 17th, 2017 16:29
MORE THAN.
WL Schuett said:
I like this writing just kept going could hardly catch a breath .... nice
September 17th, 2017 13:00
WL Schuett said:
I like this writing just kept going could hardly catch a breath .... nice
September 17th, 2017 13:00
MORE THAN.
orchidee said:
The first thing God said? The first thing I probably said was \'Got another sherry?\' heehee. A fine write Fay.
September 17th, 2017 07:10
orchidee said:
The first thing God said? The first thing I probably said was \'Got another sherry?\' heehee. A fine write Fay.
September 17th, 2017 07:10
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