Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Conceding.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. You do realise that those holes in the galaxy showing light through them are the holes in Heaven\'s floor.
August 29th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. You do realise that those holes in the galaxy showing light through them are the holes in Heaven\'s floor.
August 29th, 2017 00:51
Conceding.
malubotelho said:
I believe that this is about surrendering ourselves to destiny. Finally understanding that we should not fight life and its beauty. Awesome writing and imagenery as always Fay.
August 28th, 2017 20:57
malubotelho said:
I believe that this is about surrendering ourselves to destiny. Finally understanding that we should not fight life and its beauty. Awesome writing and imagenery as always Fay.
August 28th, 2017 20:57
Conceding.
Louis Gibbs said:
Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a night sky ... what could be more calming indeed. Tends to put our inconsequential problems in perspective. So well described in your poem, Fay!
August 28th, 2017 08:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a night sky ... what could be more calming indeed. Tends to put our inconsequential problems in perspective. So well described in your poem, Fay!
August 28th, 2017 08:30
Conceding.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FAY ~ Conceding to Destiny ~ is the only answer to lifting our prevailing mood. However like you I find lying \"al freso\" and contemplating the developing Night Sky does lift the Spirits. Love your metaphor and the woodcut ~ classic ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FAY ~ Conceding to Destiny ~ is the only answer to lifting our prevailing mood. However like you I find lying \"al freso\" and contemplating the developing Night Sky does lift the Spirits. Love your metaphor and the woodcut ~ classic ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:18
Conceding.
dusk arising said:
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ? Both so similarly intertwined in our imagination. Enjoyed reading and thinking it thru several times.
August 28th, 2017 04:09
dusk arising said:
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ? Both so similarly intertwined in our imagination. Enjoyed reading and thinking it thru several times.
August 28th, 2017 04:09
Omens.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL FAY ~ Photographic (The Future\'s Orange !) and Poetic perfection ! We can never be master Wordsmith\'s like you but reading (and reciting) your elegant odes always lifts me on to higher linguistic ground. When i\'m pondering a linguistic choice ~ I often think \"Which word would Fay choose ?\" The quality of tomorrow is determined by our attitude as we awake ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 09:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL FAY ~ Photographic (The Future\'s Orange !) and Poetic perfection ! We can never be master Wordsmith\'s like you but reading (and reciting) your elegant odes always lifts me on to higher linguistic ground. When i\'m pondering a linguistic choice ~ I often think \"Which word would Fay choose ?\" The quality of tomorrow is determined by our attitude as we awake ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 09:28
Omens.
malubotelho said:
Nothing left to be said but I still can repeat that you surprise me each and every day with your poetry. You are fantastic Fay. You don\'t know how I\'m pleased to be here writing poetry with one master like you. It is a blessing.
August 27th, 2017 08:34
malubotelho said:
Nothing left to be said but I still can repeat that you surprise me each and every day with your poetry. You are fantastic Fay. You don\'t know how I\'m pleased to be here writing poetry with one master like you. It is a blessing.
August 27th, 2017 08:34
Lovescape.
malubotelho said:
Me too will have to break it so I can understand. I always use my intuition when reading poems and need to search the words to understand. I\'ve felt the eroticism here and as always I love your poetry.
August 26th, 2017 15:53
malubotelho said:
Me too will have to break it so I can understand. I always use my intuition when reading poems and need to search the words to understand. I\'ve felt the eroticism here and as always I love your poetry.
August 26th, 2017 15:53
Lovescape.
dusk arising said:
Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism into pictures Antonio might create with his sensuous words. Worlds apart in style both make me smile. Yeah forsooth thou hast raised upon mine countenance the disgrace of a smile!
August 26th, 2017 12:31
dusk arising said:
Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism into pictures Antonio might create with his sensuous words. Worlds apart in style both make me smile. Yeah forsooth thou hast raised upon mine countenance the disgrace of a smile!
August 26th, 2017 12:31
Lovescape.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, so I\'m not the only one who swoons! Great write again Fay.
August 26th, 2017 08:11
orchidee said:
Oh lol, so I\'m not the only one who swoons! Great write again Fay.
August 26th, 2017 08:11
Lovescape.
Louis Gibbs said:
A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic piece, this one, Fay. Kudos!
August 26th, 2017 07:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic piece, this one, Fay. Kudos!
August 26th, 2017 07:28
Lovescape.
Michael Edwards said:
moth-soft, needs rack, ---- superb language as always Fay
August 26th, 2017 04:44
Michael Edwards said:
moth-soft, needs rack, ---- superb language as always Fay
August 26th, 2017 04:44
Lovescape.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh FAY you have really touched my HEART with this beautiful symbiotic Painting & Poem ! I\'m a bit old fashioned in my choice of LADIES and you have painted & pencilled my ideal. Thank you for a perfect ODE to enlighten my Weekend ~ We have a Flower Festival in our local Anglican Church today ~ always Victorian and always uplifting. Your poem will enhance my Joy ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ thanks B.
August 26th, 2017 04:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh FAY you have really touched my HEART with this beautiful symbiotic Painting & Poem ! I\'m a bit old fashioned in my choice of LADIES and you have painted & pencilled my ideal. Thank you for a perfect ODE to enlighten my Weekend ~ We have a Flower Festival in our local Anglican Church today ~ always Victorian and always uplifting. Your poem will enhance my Joy ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ thanks B.
August 26th, 2017 04:22
Lovescape.
FredPeyer said:
Sounds like something Victorian to my uneducated Yankee ears!
Great writing again, Fay!
August 26th, 2017 03:49
FredPeyer said:
Sounds like something Victorian to my uneducated Yankee ears!
Great writing again, Fay!
August 26th, 2017 03:49
The Undisturbed.
malubotelho said:
Whispers seep inward........from each tree and bird
to alter the psyche.
You spoke to me with these words. It is what I feel in relation to nature. It alters my psyche.
August 25th, 2017 13:03
malubotelho said:
Whispers seep inward........from each tree and bird
to alter the psyche.
You spoke to me with these words. It is what I feel in relation to nature. It alters my psyche.
August 25th, 2017 13:03
The Undisturbed.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is just so good. Love the poem, the structure.
And it works! I was so de-stressed by the time I finished reading, I nearly fell asleep! :-)
August 25th, 2017 12:18
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is just so good. Love the poem, the structure.
And it works! I was so de-stressed by the time I finished reading, I nearly fell asleep! :-)
August 25th, 2017 12:18
The Undisturbed.
WriteBeLight said:
I like Edward\'s question. You do love nature and all of its glory. So well done.
August 25th, 2017 08:07
WriteBeLight said:
I like Edward\'s question. You do love nature and all of its glory. So well done.
August 25th, 2017 08:07
The Undisturbed.
Goldfinch60 said:
With Nature is a great place to be to become calm in life. Good write Fay.
August 25th, 2017 07:42
Goldfinch60 said:
With Nature is a great place to be to become calm in life. Good write Fay.
August 25th, 2017 07:42
The Undisturbed.
Louis Gibbs said:
The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant piece, indeed, Fay!
August 25th, 2017 07:14
Louis Gibbs said:
The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant piece, indeed, Fay!
August 25th, 2017 07:14
The Undisturbed.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there where e filial saplings stretch and reach beneath the forest’s canopy - great picture painted Fay.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there where e filial saplings stretch and reach beneath the forest’s canopy - great picture painted Fay.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
The Undisturbed.
dusk arising said:
I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my mind. Lovely writing here.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
dusk arising said:
I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my mind. Lovely writing here.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
The Undisturbed.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Fay, there\'s just something about you and nature.. You seem to go hand in hand! Hey! No, you couldn\'t be HER, could you? Mother Nature Herself?
August 25th, 2017 04:15
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Fay, there\'s just something about you and nature.. You seem to go hand in hand! Hey! No, you couldn\'t be HER, could you? Mother Nature Herself?
August 25th, 2017 04:15
Questions.
dusk arising said:
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic intent.. Beautifully written.
August 24th, 2017 16:20
dusk arising said:
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic intent.. Beautifully written.
August 24th, 2017 16:20
Questions.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this poem is brilliantly written, an emotional powerhouse, with a subject we all have to deal with sooner or later. Fay-tastic!
August 24th, 2017 13:18
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this poem is brilliantly written, an emotional powerhouse, with a subject we all have to deal with sooner or later. Fay-tastic!
August 24th, 2017 13:18
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