Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Advancing.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUMMER ~ AUTUMN ~ WINTER ~ The Seasons move so so quickly at this time of Year. Let us embrace Autumn (as you did your Apples !) while the weather i still clement enough to to WALK ! You cant experience Autumn from a car window ! Thanks for caring FAY and sharing another perfect PICTURE \'N POEM to enhance our Day ! Yours as ever BRIAN !
October 1st, 2017 03:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUMMER ~ AUTUMN ~ WINTER ~ The Seasons move so so quickly at this time of Year. Let us embrace Autumn (as you did your Apples !) while the weather i still clement enough to to WALK ! You cant experience Autumn from a car window ! Thanks for caring FAY and sharing another perfect PICTURE \'N POEM to enhance our Day ! Yours as ever BRIAN !
October 1st, 2017 03:54
Such Covert.
kevin browne said:
yes, Fay Slimm, a beautifully worded and crafted love message that touches us all. I, for one, love it dearly.
September 30th, 2017 14:54
kevin browne said:
yes, Fay Slimm, a beautifully worded and crafted love message that touches us all. I, for one, love it dearly.
September 30th, 2017 14:54
Such Covert.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sweet words of love,lovely image
September 30th, 2017 13:15
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sweet words of love,lovely image
September 30th, 2017 13:15
Such Covert.
FredPeyer said:
You do have a beautiful way with words, Fay! And the price paid for these clandestine trysts is always very high.
September 30th, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
You do have a beautiful way with words, Fay! And the price paid for these clandestine trysts is always very high.
September 30th, 2017 12:14
Such Covert.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the magic and the price of a clandestine affair, Fay!
September 30th, 2017 10:10
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the magic and the price of a clandestine affair, Fay!
September 30th, 2017 10:10
Such Covert.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Of course, I never experience it - I swoon before I get anywhere! heehee.
September 30th, 2017 08:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Of course, I never experience it - I swoon before I get anywhere! heehee.
September 30th, 2017 08:46
Such Covert.
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful message - thanks for this one Fay
September 30th, 2017 04:10
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful message - thanks for this one Fay
September 30th, 2017 04:10
Such Covert.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ In my experience (not personal of course ?) there is always a Hugh Price to pay for COVERT LOVE. So often the ultimate lasting PAIN far outweighs the transient PLEASURE. Thanks again for guiding our feet to walk a wholesome Path ~ Your faithfully BRIAN
September 30th, 2017 03:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ In my experience (not personal of course ?) there is always a Hugh Price to pay for COVERT LOVE. So often the ultimate lasting PAIN far outweighs the transient PLEASURE. Thanks again for guiding our feet to walk a wholesome Path ~ Your faithfully BRIAN
September 30th, 2017 03:00
Extravagance.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUCH AN AUTUMN IT IS INDEED ~ FAY ! Due to the abundance of Sun & Rain ~ AUTUMN came early S E England as well ! Wild blackberries in August and more Apples in my MUM\'s GARDEN than we can use. Polished packaged and sold ~ 50p for 3 ~ at the College Pensioners Club to raise funds for the McMillan Nurses ! Love the Poem and its Autumn Joy and I fell in Love with the Picture ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
September 29th, 2017 17:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUCH AN AUTUMN IT IS INDEED ~ FAY ! Due to the abundance of Sun & Rain ~ AUTUMN came early S E England as well ! Wild blackberries in August and more Apples in my MUM\'s GARDEN than we can use. Polished packaged and sold ~ 50p for 3 ~ at the College Pensioners Club to raise funds for the McMillan Nurses ! Love the Poem and its Autumn Joy and I fell in Love with the Picture ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
September 29th, 2017 17:51
Extravagance.
Louis Gibbs said:
A mouth-watering portrayal of my favorite season, Fay, when my spirit comes alive! Love it.
September 29th, 2017 11:13
Louis Gibbs said:
A mouth-watering portrayal of my favorite season, Fay, when my spirit comes alive! Love it.
September 29th, 2017 11:13
Extravagance.
malubotelho said:
Another gift in the form of words. Your poem took me to my childhood in the farms in Brazil. We had the seasons and Autumn was so beautiful with the fruits smelling great everywhere. And yes, we had abundance of fresh food. A lot of work too. Thanks for bringing me those memories.
September 29th, 2017 08:19
malubotelho said:
Another gift in the form of words. Your poem took me to my childhood in the farms in Brazil. We had the seasons and Autumn was so beautiful with the fruits smelling great everywhere. And yes, we had abundance of fresh food. A lot of work too. Thanks for bringing me those memories.
September 29th, 2017 08:19
Extravagance.
Michael Edwards said:
A mellow-fruitfulness of a write - great piece Fay.
September 29th, 2017 03:49
Michael Edwards said:
A mellow-fruitfulness of a write - great piece Fay.
September 29th, 2017 03:49
Extravagance.
FredPeyer said:
Your lovely poem just proves that harvest time is the best time of the year!
September 29th, 2017 03:02
FredPeyer said:
Your lovely poem just proves that harvest time is the best time of the year!
September 29th, 2017 03:02
Extravagance.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful fruit filled write. I can remember gathering blackberries and plums in autumn - wonderful times.
September 29th, 2017 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful fruit filled write. I can remember gathering blackberries and plums in autumn - wonderful times.
September 29th, 2017 02:26
Souls Know.
dusk arising said:
Beautiful words again Fay. Seems your writing is chiming loud with me of late. For once again ths goes into my favourites. You\'re quite an amazing poet.
September 28th, 2017 17:57
dusk arising said:
Beautiful words again Fay. Seems your writing is chiming loud with me of late. For once again ths goes into my favourites. You\'re quite an amazing poet.
September 28th, 2017 17:57
Souls Know.
malubotelho said:
A gratifying piece of love Fay. Kind and delicious read. Thanks for this.
September 28th, 2017 13:13
malubotelho said:
A gratifying piece of love Fay. Kind and delicious read. Thanks for this.
September 28th, 2017 13:13
Souls Know.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Souls know\" says it all, and could stand alone as an epic poem of love. The rest of your poem is just the icing on a delicious cake, Fay!
September 28th, 2017 09:07
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Souls know\" says it all, and could stand alone as an epic poem of love. The rest of your poem is just the icing on a delicious cake, Fay!
September 28th, 2017 09:07
Souls Know.
WL Schuett said:
Very very good poem nice writing as poetic as it gets
September 28th, 2017 09:01
WL Schuett said:
Very very good poem nice writing as poetic as it gets
September 28th, 2017 09:01
Souls Know.
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! \"defying barriers of culture or race...\" was a great way to start this poem. It just personally struck me. And then the ending \"made them one single flame..\" truly defined what it means to have true love and togetherness. One of my favorites from you, Fay!
September 28th, 2017 07:11
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! \"defying barriers of culture or race...\" was a great way to start this poem. It just personally struck me. And then the ending \"made them one single flame..\" truly defined what it means to have true love and togetherness. One of my favorites from you, Fay!
September 28th, 2017 07:11
Souls Know.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Wonderful uplifting thoughts for a Stressful Thursday Morning (First Academic Board of the New Term !) ~ I L Y ! TRUE LOVE ~ Like that between Angels & I ~ enables one to face the toughest assignments with a Smile. Please pray for William & Kate and Harry & Meghan as they represent the UK all over the World ~ but with love in their Hearts ! Pray also for the success of the Invictus Games in TORONTO which is a great outpouring of love by the Partners of the Wounded Veterans ~ LET THEIR BE LOVE~ LOVE CHANGES ALL THINGS ~ AMEN ! Love in the Spirit ~ BRIAN Your poem has lifted my Spirit to Paradise !
September 28th, 2017 01:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Wonderful uplifting thoughts for a Stressful Thursday Morning (First Academic Board of the New Term !) ~ I L Y ! TRUE LOVE ~ Like that between Angels & I ~ enables one to face the toughest assignments with a Smile. Please pray for William & Kate and Harry & Meghan as they represent the UK all over the World ~ but with love in their Hearts ! Pray also for the success of the Invictus Games in TORONTO which is a great outpouring of love by the Partners of the Wounded Veterans ~ LET THEIR BE LOVE~ LOVE CHANGES ALL THINGS ~ AMEN ! Love in the Spirit ~ BRIAN Your poem has lifted my Spirit to Paradise !
September 28th, 2017 01:47
Souls Know.
Michael Edwards said:
Just read Santita\'s posting - must be the day for feel-good - great write Fay.
September 28th, 2017 01:43
Michael Edwards said:
Just read Santita\'s posting - must be the day for feel-good - great write Fay.
September 28th, 2017 01:43
Souls Know.
Poetic Dan said:
Your words felt like a gigantic hug, thank you Fay a perfect read in the morning to set a day of love!
September 28th, 2017 01:39
Poetic Dan said:
Your words felt like a gigantic hug, thank you Fay a perfect read in the morning to set a day of love!
September 28th, 2017 01:39
Souls Know.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the souls fuse into one with all true lovers.
September 28th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the souls fuse into one with all true lovers.
September 28th, 2017 01:30
Souls Know.
FredPeyer said:
Fay you have such an incredible way with words! I do look forward every day to read your newest poem. Have no idea how you do it!
\'Souls know when they become fused identity\' = an incredible, beautiful way of saying I love you.
Great, great writing!
September 28th, 2017 01:13
FredPeyer said:
Fay you have such an incredible way with words! I do look forward every day to read your newest poem. Have no idea how you do it!
\'Souls know when they become fused identity\' = an incredible, beautiful way of saying I love you.
Great, great writing!
September 28th, 2017 01:13
A Something.
WL Schuett said:
Very beautiful Fay , love a little birdwatching myself
September 27th, 2017 16:38
WL Schuett said:
Very beautiful Fay , love a little birdwatching myself
September 27th, 2017 16:38
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