Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
What Happened ?
orchidee said:
Now that\'s a very eloquent mist that settled over your area! We\'ll probably have heatwave in December or something! doh!
September 10th, 2017 09:28
orchidee said:
Now that\'s a very eloquent mist that settled over your area! We\'ll probably have heatwave in December or something! doh!
September 10th, 2017 09:28
What Happened ?
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I reckon I gave up ages ago on weather forecasts. Some trashier newspapers said heatwave of 30C for a month in the UK. There\'s been none at all this month at that temperature.
September 10th, 2017 09:27
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I reckon I gave up ages ago on weather forecasts. Some trashier newspapers said heatwave of 30C for a month in the UK. There\'s been none at all this month at that temperature.
September 10th, 2017 09:27
What Happened ?
dusk arising said:
Ahhhh brit weather eh? No wonder its our favourite conversation piece.
What wonderful words you have joined here to convey this, quite beautiful.
September 10th, 2017 07:33
dusk arising said:
Ahhhh brit weather eh? No wonder its our favourite conversation piece.
What wonderful words you have joined here to convey this, quite beautiful.
September 10th, 2017 07:33
Enchantment..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Memories are made of This ! I loved the final doublet
Summers ago fragrant wealth
Perfumed homeliness with cherished memories
We can all relate to that and \"homeliness\" is such an evocative word. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
September 9th, 2017 13:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Memories are made of This ! I loved the final doublet
Summers ago fragrant wealth
Perfumed homeliness with cherished memories
We can all relate to that and \"homeliness\" is such an evocative word. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
September 9th, 2017 13:18
Enchantment..
Louis Gibbs said:
If only all the world\'s young could enjoy their childhood. We are a long way from that scenario, it would appear. Lovely reflective poem, Fay!
September 9th, 2017 08:09
Louis Gibbs said:
If only all the world\'s young could enjoy their childhood. We are a long way from that scenario, it would appear. Lovely reflective poem, Fay!
September 9th, 2017 08:09
She-Fever.
WL Schuett said:
Your writing is very lyrical Faye I\'m enjoying your poems
September 9th, 2017 07:41
WL Schuett said:
Your writing is very lyrical Faye I\'m enjoying your poems
September 9th, 2017 07:41
Enchantment..
WL Schuett said:
This lovely Faye , beautifully written and conveted
September 9th, 2017 07:17
WL Schuett said:
This lovely Faye , beautifully written and conveted
September 9th, 2017 07:17
Water-Attuned.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Now you reminded me of another type of singing - sea shanties! I\'m gonna sing them too. Probably all day! Arrgghh! lol.
September 8th, 2017 13:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Now you reminded me of another type of singing - sea shanties! I\'m gonna sing them too. Probably all day! Arrgghh! lol.
September 8th, 2017 13:53
Water-Attuned.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, the sea is hard to tame but its problems can be heard in the wonderful shanties that abound.
September 8th, 2017 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, the sea is hard to tame but its problems can be heard in the wonderful shanties that abound.
September 8th, 2017 08:08
Water-Attuned.
Michael Edwards said:
I found this quite moving - a great tribute to those who brave the seas.
September 8th, 2017 08:07
Michael Edwards said:
I found this quite moving - a great tribute to those who brave the seas.
September 8th, 2017 08:07
Water-Attuned.
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! I am used to the great lakes (they can get quite wicked too) but those that go out to sea and must face her temper \"deserve our praise\" as you said so well. A pleasure to read!
September 8th, 2017 07:04
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! I am used to the great lakes (they can get quite wicked too) but those that go out to sea and must face her temper \"deserve our praise\" as you said so well. A pleasure to read!
September 8th, 2017 07:04
Back Then.
FredPeyer said:
Faye, only you could write about memories that beautifully!
Great poem!
September 7th, 2017 19:16
FredPeyer said:
Faye, only you could write about memories that beautifully!
Great poem!
September 7th, 2017 19:16
Back Then.
dusk arising said:
Beautiful oh to live those bygone days again eh? lovely writing, lovely emotion Fay.
September 7th, 2017 18:52
dusk arising said:
Beautiful oh to live those bygone days again eh? lovely writing, lovely emotion Fay.
September 7th, 2017 18:52
Back Then.
Michael Edwards said:
Fizzing, bubbling language and a great result
September 7th, 2017 11:28
Michael Edwards said:
Fizzing, bubbling language and a great result
September 7th, 2017 11:28
Back Then.
orchidee said:
All that happened. Never knew there was so much time gone by, for all that! That\'s a lot of stuff happened \'then\'! A fine write Fay.
September 7th, 2017 08:08
orchidee said:
All that happened. Never knew there was so much time gone by, for all that! That\'s a lot of stuff happened \'then\'! A fine write Fay.
September 7th, 2017 08:08
So Met.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY \"I know that I will never see ~ anything as awesome as a TREE ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
September 6th, 2017 17:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY \"I know that I will never see ~ anything as awesome as a TREE ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
September 6th, 2017 17:23
So Met.
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:
Great write. All plants have the will to survive. Without thought there is no will to survive. Thank you.
September 6th, 2017 14:20
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:
Great write. All plants have the will to survive. Without thought there is no will to survive. Thank you.
September 6th, 2017 14:20
So Met.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, not only do you write beautifully, the meaning in this poem goes much deeper than the roots of that tree!
September 6th, 2017 11:15
FredPeyer said:
Fay, not only do you write beautifully, the meaning in this poem goes much deeper than the roots of that tree!
September 6th, 2017 11:15
So Met.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I got not many moors around \'ere! Lots of houses, shops, roads, etc. That any use?!
September 6th, 2017 08:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I got not many moors around \'ere! Lots of houses, shops, roads, etc. That any use?!
September 6th, 2017 08:50
So Met.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful writ Fay. When we used to walk in the Yorkshire Dales we would frequently see lone trees like this
September 6th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful writ Fay. When we used to walk in the Yorkshire Dales we would frequently see lone trees like this
September 6th, 2017 08:01
So Met.
Louis Gibbs said:
Trees are nothing short of engineering marvels, the way that an invisible system of roots can offset the tremendous pressure encountered by wind, and the lean of the tree itself! I marvel at the huge oaks here on the Alabama coast that stay firmly rooted in spite of leaning at up to forty-five degree angles, not to mention surviving occasional hurricanes.
They are an inspiration of survival to humanity, indeed. A well-poemed tribute, Fay.
September 6th, 2017 06:15
Louis Gibbs said:
Trees are nothing short of engineering marvels, the way that an invisible system of roots can offset the tremendous pressure encountered by wind, and the lean of the tree itself! I marvel at the huge oaks here on the Alabama coast that stay firmly rooted in spite of leaning at up to forty-five degree angles, not to mention surviving occasional hurricanes.
They are an inspiration of survival to humanity, indeed. A well-poemed tribute, Fay.
September 6th, 2017 06:15
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