Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Together.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The Hippies had it right. \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\"
August 21st, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The Hippies had it right. \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\"
August 21st, 2017 01:00
Together.
myself and me said:
Together, let\'s make this world a paradise to live.
An effective medicine for the current disease spreading around the world.
Thank you.
August 20th, 2017 22:10
myself and me said:
Together, let\'s make this world a paradise to live.
An effective medicine for the current disease spreading around the world.
Thank you.
August 20th, 2017 22:10
Together.
malubotelho said:
This is a beautiful thought Fay. If at least 50% of the humanity would think like that we could save the planet and our race.
August 20th, 2017 12:22
malubotelho said:
This is a beautiful thought Fay. If at least 50% of the humanity would think like that we could save the planet and our race.
August 20th, 2017 12:22
Together.
Michael Edwards said:
coming-togetherness - the way forward for us all but does everyone work to this end - sadly not and selfishness rules in many hearts - did enjoy the read Fay.
August 20th, 2017 08:35
Michael Edwards said:
coming-togetherness - the way forward for us all but does everyone work to this end - sadly not and selfishness rules in many hearts - did enjoy the read Fay.
August 20th, 2017 08:35
Together.
rrodriguez said:
Wow! To be me & to be you, then to be ❤. This is the way to be. Lovef it!
August 20th, 2017 06:56
rrodriguez said:
Wow! To be me & to be you, then to be ❤. This is the way to be. Lovef it!
August 20th, 2017 06:56
Together.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for reminding us of the importance of Friends & family ! When we form a group of Caring Individuals like MPS ~ The WHOLE is always greater than the Sum of the Parts ! Love the visual ~ the Power to light the bulb is generated by the combined energy of those who encircle it ~ AMEN Sunday Love ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for reminding us of the importance of Friends & family ! When we form a group of Caring Individuals like MPS ~ The WHOLE is always greater than the Sum of the Parts ! Love the visual ~ the Power to light the bulb is generated by the combined energy of those who encircle it ~ AMEN Sunday Love ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 03:30
Who Dares.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Otters are starting to flourish one more and that is great to see.
August 20th, 2017 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Otters are starting to flourish one more and that is great to see.
August 20th, 2017 00:27
Who Dares.
Nicholas Browning said:
This is quite nice. The last stanza gives a nice clean finish. Spot on.
August 19th, 2017 07:03
Nicholas Browning said:
This is quite nice. The last stanza gives a nice clean finish. Spot on.
August 19th, 2017 07:03
Losing You.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write again Fay, as Fred has sad that last stanza is superb.
August 19th, 2017 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write again Fay, as Fred has sad that last stanza is superb.
August 19th, 2017 00:05
Losing You.
myself and me said:
Are you writing this for me? This is my current situation.
So beautiful, so touching.
August 18th, 2017 19:50
myself and me said:
Are you writing this for me? This is my current situation.
So beautiful, so touching.
August 18th, 2017 19:50
Losing You.
malubotelho said:
You are always so delicate with your words. Straight to the heart. So lovely. Thanks
August 18th, 2017 19:48
malubotelho said:
You are always so delicate with your words. Straight to the heart. So lovely. Thanks
August 18th, 2017 19:48
Losing You.
Louis Gibbs said:
Oh wow ... this touching poem, so beautifully shaped, hits all the bases of content and form, Fay! A classic to be sure, and a favorite. Thanks for this perfect example for us all.
August 18th, 2017 09:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Oh wow ... this touching poem, so beautifully shaped, hits all the bases of content and form, Fay! A classic to be sure, and a favorite. Thanks for this perfect example for us all.
August 18th, 2017 09:39
Losing You.
Sefrin said:
Absolutely breathtaking! Your words have the ability to reach the very soul. Amazing read, Fay!
August 18th, 2017 09:13
Sefrin said:
Absolutely breathtaking! Your words have the ability to reach the very soul. Amazing read, Fay!
August 18th, 2017 09:13
Losing You.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I know your nostalgic Poems are difficult to write ~ but they have a unique beauty which i love ! It makes us all love you too with Poetic TLC ~ You jump off the page and into each o our hearts ~ You are lovely ! Love the Tree of Love and the melancholy visual ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 08:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I know your nostalgic Poems are difficult to write ~ but they have a unique beauty which i love ! It makes us all love you too with Poetic TLC ~ You jump off the page and into each o our hearts ~ You are lovely ! Love the Tree of Love and the melancholy visual ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 08:03
Losing You.
FredPeyer said:
Faye, this is so beautiful, so tender, I think only a writer with a lot of life experience could penn. The shape of the poem reminds me of a Christmas tree (stylistic). I love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza starting with \'Yet love...\" In my humble opinion, that stanza could stand by itself as a separate insightful poem.
August 18th, 2017 03:15
FredPeyer said:
Faye, this is so beautiful, so tender, I think only a writer with a lot of life experience could penn. The shape of the poem reminds me of a Christmas tree (stylistic). I love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza starting with \'Yet love...\" In my humble opinion, that stanza could stand by itself as a separate insightful poem.
August 18th, 2017 03:15
Show Me.
malubotelho said:
I\'ve trained all my life to love. Today I\'m an expert. For me love is comfort because it is simple. It is just so easy. Beautiful prayer Fay.
August 17th, 2017 12:04
malubotelho said:
I\'ve trained all my life to love. Today I\'m an expert. For me love is comfort because it is simple. It is just so easy. Beautiful prayer Fay.
August 17th, 2017 12:04
Show Me.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ the BIBLE teaches that \"A GENTLE answer defuses WRATH !\" I have found this to work in real life. When we bring the ATTITUDES expressed in the Nine Fruit of the Spirit (Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc) into real life situations then miracles do really happen ! Thanks for caring ~ yours as ever BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 07:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ the BIBLE teaches that \"A GENTLE answer defuses WRATH !\" I have found this to work in real life. When we bring the ATTITUDES expressed in the Nine Fruit of the Spirit (Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc) into real life situations then miracles do really happen ! Thanks for caring ~ yours as ever BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 07:49
Show Me.
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for this timely prayer which reflects your wisdom and beautiful heart, Fay. I share it with you deeply.
August 17th, 2017 07:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for this timely prayer which reflects your wisdom and beautiful heart, Fay. I share it with you deeply.
August 17th, 2017 07:35
Show Me.
Nicholas Browning said:
I agree with the others. This is most certainly shifted from your usual style. I like it. Love\'s way is something I would also like to learn, in due time of course. Best wishes, Fay.
August 17th, 2017 07:17
Nicholas Browning said:
I agree with the others. This is most certainly shifted from your usual style. I like it. Love\'s way is something I would also like to learn, in due time of course. Best wishes, Fay.
August 17th, 2017 07:17
Show Me.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay this is so good and different from your usual style of writing - I like it very much.
August 17th, 2017 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
Fay this is so good and different from your usual style of writing - I like it very much.
August 17th, 2017 06:13
Show Me.
burning-embers said:
Its all about love really isn\'t it. But learning to love and what love is takes a lifetime.
August 17th, 2017 05:10
burning-embers said:
Its all about love really isn\'t it. But learning to love and what love is takes a lifetime.
August 17th, 2017 05:10
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