Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Thinnest Divide.
Michael Edwards said:
This is so visually compelling - a special write Fay
September 18th, 2017 03:46
Michael Edwards said:
This is so visually compelling - a special write Fay
September 18th, 2017 03:46
MORE THAN.
dusk arising said:
WOW Fay that is tremendous! Held me breathless as i read it thru (cept i had to drag in air tbh) on edge of my chair because it was a thriller! I think it was your use of \'and more than that\' created a pace, a tension. I love it and it goes straight to my favourites. Thank you.
September 17th, 2017 16:29
dusk arising said:
WOW Fay that is tremendous! Held me breathless as i read it thru (cept i had to drag in air tbh) on edge of my chair because it was a thriller! I think it was your use of \'and more than that\' created a pace, a tension. I love it and it goes straight to my favourites. Thank you.
September 17th, 2017 16:29
MORE THAN.
WL Schuett said:
I like this writing just kept going could hardly catch a breath .... nice
September 17th, 2017 13:00
WL Schuett said:
I like this writing just kept going could hardly catch a breath .... nice
September 17th, 2017 13:00
MORE THAN.
orchidee said:
The first thing God said? The first thing I probably said was \'Got another sherry?\' heehee. A fine write Fay.
September 17th, 2017 07:10
orchidee said:
The first thing God said? The first thing I probably said was \'Got another sherry?\' heehee. A fine write Fay.
September 17th, 2017 07:10
MORE THAN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Beautiful ! GOD said let there be Light and there was Light ~ AMEN ! I never take the SUN (and its spectrum R O Y G B I V) or the MOON for granted ! They are what makes the SOLAR SYSTM so special and Planet earth so unique. Thanks for a wonderful Eulogy to Light ~ AMEN ! I love you FAY because every day you make MPS a very special site ~ You are altogether LOVELY ~ BRIAN Love the Cornish Sunrise ~ awesome !
September 17th, 2017 03:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Beautiful ! GOD said let there be Light and there was Light ~ AMEN ! I never take the SUN (and its spectrum R O Y G B I V) or the MOON for granted ! They are what makes the SOLAR SYSTM so special and Planet earth so unique. Thanks for a wonderful Eulogy to Light ~ AMEN ! I love you FAY because every day you make MPS a very special site ~ You are altogether LOVELY ~ BRIAN Love the Cornish Sunrise ~ awesome !
September 17th, 2017 03:52
Chance Changes.
rrodriguez said:
I like this line \"we form opportunities from which to carve.\" Awesome motivation poem.
September 16th, 2017 16:28
rrodriguez said:
I like this line \"we form opportunities from which to carve.\" Awesome motivation poem.
September 16th, 2017 16:28
Chance Changes.
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a powerful quote and a super poem to go with it.
September 16th, 2017 10:14
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a powerful quote and a super poem to go with it.
September 16th, 2017 10:14
Chance Changes.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for Sharing & Caring FAY ~ What you say is true we can turn any situation for GOOD or ILL ~ I\'m an OPTIMIST so always say \"Every Cloud has a Silver Lining \" but my PESSIMISTIC Colleague (and we all have them !) turns round and says Yes so a priori \"Ever Silver Lining must have a Cloud !\" It\'s all a question of attitude ! Yours as ever BRIAN
September 16th, 2017 08:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for Sharing & Caring FAY ~ What you say is true we can turn any situation for GOOD or ILL ~ I\'m an OPTIMIST so always say \"Every Cloud has a Silver Lining \" but my PESSIMISTIC Colleague (and we all have them !) turns round and says Yes so a priori \"Ever Silver Lining must have a Cloud !\" It\'s all a question of attitude ! Yours as ever BRIAN
September 16th, 2017 08:55
Undressed.
dusk arising said:
Loved these lines
\"your glistening retains measured
pace with the breakers in restless
dance of sheer abandon\"
wonderful creations we take for granted until you show us their beauty in abandonment.
September 15th, 2017 18:02
dusk arising said:
Loved these lines
\"your glistening retains measured
pace with the breakers in restless
dance of sheer abandon\"
wonderful creations we take for granted until you show us their beauty in abandonment.
September 15th, 2017 18:02
Undressed.
FredPeyer said:
And such a beautiful thing is your writing, Fay!
September 15th, 2017 11:54
FredPeyer said:
And such a beautiful thing is your writing, Fay!
September 15th, 2017 11:54
Undressed.
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing as always Fay.
Sweet like a sea shell. 🐚
September 15th, 2017 08:33
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing as always Fay.
Sweet like a sea shell. 🐚
September 15th, 2017 08:33
Something Greater.
WL Schuett said:
Love related most blissfully, well done
September 14th, 2017 19:20
WL Schuett said:
Love related most blissfully, well done
September 14th, 2017 19:20
Something Greater.
Christina8 said:
I love the language that you use in this poem. But it\'s a poem so relatable because I know it so well. Superb job on this!!
September 14th, 2017 17:48
Christina8 said:
I love the language that you use in this poem. But it\'s a poem so relatable because I know it so well. Superb job on this!!
September 14th, 2017 17:48
Something Greater.
Louis Gibbs said:
The abandonment in late-blooming love makes possible attaining unforgettable new heights in soul\'s satisfaction. Well told in this beauty, Fay!
September 14th, 2017 08:14
Louis Gibbs said:
The abandonment in late-blooming love makes possible attaining unforgettable new heights in soul\'s satisfaction. Well told in this beauty, Fay!
September 14th, 2017 08:14
Something Greater.
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way use the language in your work - word associations etc that can only come from a great poetic mind
September 14th, 2017 03:58
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way use the language in your work - word associations etc that can only come from a great poetic mind
September 14th, 2017 03:58
Something Greater.
FredPeyer said:
And with this poem, Fay, you stole our admiration!
September 14th, 2017 03:52
FredPeyer said:
And with this poem, Fay, you stole our admiration!
September 14th, 2017 03:52
How Many.
FredPeyer said:
A wonderful depiction of waiting, longing, and love, but also of heartache and worries.
September 13th, 2017 11:28
FredPeyer said:
A wonderful depiction of waiting, longing, and love, but also of heartache and worries.
September 13th, 2017 11:28
How Many.
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Anxious wife awaiting the return of her mate from danger\' ... a theme so often replayed by wives of soldiers as well as those of fishermen. Well portrayed, Fay!
September 13th, 2017 09:47
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Anxious wife awaiting the return of her mate from danger\' ... a theme so often replayed by wives of soldiers as well as those of fishermen. Well portrayed, Fay!
September 13th, 2017 09:47
How Many.
WL Schuett said:
A picture in my head , a woman on a widows walk overlooking the ocean waiting ....
September 13th, 2017 09:15
WL Schuett said:
A picture in my head , a woman on a widows walk overlooking the ocean waiting ....
September 13th, 2017 09:15
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