Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Paint\'s Heat.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute beautifully framed, Fay ... most pleasantly and concisely structured!
October 5th, 2017 05:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute beautifully framed, Fay ... most pleasantly and concisely structured!
October 5th, 2017 05:09
Paint\'s Heat.
Michael Edwards said:
A real tribute to Van Gough (pronounced Goff !! ) super work for such a great artist.
October 5th, 2017 04:40
Michael Edwards said:
A real tribute to Van Gough (pronounced Goff !! ) super work for such a great artist.
October 5th, 2017 04:40
Paint\'s Heat.
Accidental Poet said:
And a very worthy tribute to Vincent and his beautiful painting it is Fay. ; )
October 5th, 2017 03:57
Accidental Poet said:
And a very worthy tribute to Vincent and his beautiful painting it is Fay. ; )
October 5th, 2017 03:57
October\' s Intent.
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good write Fay, October does have its beauty, the yellow, golden and orange of the countryside is wondrous.
October 5th, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good write Fay, October does have its beauty, the yellow, golden and orange of the countryside is wondrous.
October 5th, 2017 00:43
October\' s Intent.
MendedFences27 said:
A lovely write about the turning of the season. One of my favorite times of year, not too hot, not too cold. Leaves are only partially turned, not in full Autumn color. I do miss the longer days of Summer though. I liked how you personified October, or at least gave it voice.Another nice write Fay. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2017 20:01
MendedFences27 said:
A lovely write about the turning of the season. One of my favorite times of year, not too hot, not too cold. Leaves are only partially turned, not in full Autumn color. I do miss the longer days of Summer though. I liked how you personified October, or at least gave it voice.Another nice write Fay. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2017 20:01
October\' s Intent.
Louis Gibbs said:
Fine tribute to my favorite month, Fay. Beautifully written!
October 4th, 2017 09:56
Louis Gibbs said:
Fine tribute to my favorite month, Fay. Beautifully written!
October 4th, 2017 09:56
October\' s Intent.
Michael Edwards said:
Certainly was readworthy Fay as always.
October 4th, 2017 09:56
Michael Edwards said:
Certainly was readworthy Fay as always.
October 4th, 2017 09:56
October\' s Intent.
orchidee said:
And yet some plants in our greenhouse are still producing more buds! Some flowers still going in the garden too. But know what you mean with the changing seasons in this fine write. No use asking me about gardening - I water the weeds too!
October 4th, 2017 03:00
orchidee said:
And yet some plants in our greenhouse are still producing more buds! Some flowers still going in the garden too. But know what you mean with the changing seasons in this fine write. No use asking me about gardening - I water the weeds too!
October 4th, 2017 03:00
Summers Ago.
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully written, Fay, it brought up memories of a skinny dipping night so many years ago! Love it!
October 3rd, 2017 11:28
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully written, Fay, it brought up memories of a skinny dipping night so many years ago! Love it!
October 3rd, 2017 11:28
Summers Ago.
kevin browne said:
This lovely and warm with such a poignant touch. I love this.
October 3rd, 2017 08:57
kevin browne said:
This lovely and warm with such a poignant touch. I love this.
October 3rd, 2017 08:57
Summers Ago.
Louis Gibbs said:
Truly a beauty, expressed in the finest tradition of classic poetry, Fay. You should repost this one periodically!
October 3rd, 2017 06:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Truly a beauty, expressed in the finest tradition of classic poetry, Fay. You should repost this one periodically!
October 3rd, 2017 06:49
Summers Ago.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ This made me cry for all those bereaved ~ who face Winter alone. Some of my friends have lost their Life Partner this year and seem to be sadder as Summer Ends and Autumn & Winter blow in. You have an awesome MUSE FAY and she just seems to guide you into a Wonderful Ode that is relavent to us All ! Love You for being You ~ BRIAN. Pleases check our Purrrrfect Pets ~ Thanks CHRISTINA & BRIAN XX
October 3rd, 2017 04:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ This made me cry for all those bereaved ~ who face Winter alone. Some of my friends have lost their Life Partner this year and seem to be sadder as Summer Ends and Autumn & Winter blow in. You have an awesome MUSE FAY and she just seems to guide you into a Wonderful Ode that is relavent to us All ! Love You for being You ~ BRIAN. Pleases check our Purrrrfect Pets ~ Thanks CHRISTINA & BRIAN XX
October 3rd, 2017 04:17
Wells of Summer.
Pintu Mahakul said:
From noon\'s hot glare shed\'s shade spills as morning path shines with hope and light. Commitment is noticed from busy time. During summer, wells sink more and become childish. Love\'s short lasted visions are amazingly noticed in summer wells but still we feel long essence of love from such brilliant and excellent poem shared here.
October 2nd, 2017 15:45
Pintu Mahakul said:
From noon\'s hot glare shed\'s shade spills as morning path shines with hope and light. Commitment is noticed from busy time. During summer, wells sink more and become childish. Love\'s short lasted visions are amazingly noticed in summer wells but still we feel long essence of love from such brilliant and excellent poem shared here.
October 2nd, 2017 15:45
Wells of Summer.
Louis Gibbs said:
Classically beautiful, Fay, as only you write!
October 2nd, 2017 12:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Classically beautiful, Fay, as only you write!
October 2nd, 2017 12:39
Wells of Summer.
Michael Edwards said:
You make me want to walk down that path - thanks Fay.
October 2nd, 2017 08:14
Michael Edwards said:
You make me want to walk down that path - thanks Fay.
October 2nd, 2017 08:14
Wells of Summer.
FredPeyer said:
Wells of summer, your choice of words is sublime, Fay. Great as usual!
October 2nd, 2017 04:40
FredPeyer said:
Wells of summer, your choice of words is sublime, Fay. Great as usual!
October 2nd, 2017 04:40
Wells of Summer.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ there is nothing like NOSTALGIA to brighten a dull Monday Morning on the SE Coast. Love the damp bleakness in the photo ! Yours as ever BRIAN. Please take a tip in my Hot Air Balloon ~ Thanks B.
October 2nd, 2017 04:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ there is nothing like NOSTALGIA to brighten a dull Monday Morning on the SE Coast. Love the damp bleakness in the photo ! Yours as ever BRIAN. Please take a tip in my Hot Air Balloon ~ Thanks B.
October 2nd, 2017 04:38
Wells of Summer.
Accidental Poet said:
WOW, my youth summed up in this amazing write. Thank you Fay. ; )
October 2nd, 2017 04:21
Accidental Poet said:
WOW, my youth summed up in this amazing write. Thank you Fay. ; )
October 2nd, 2017 04:21
Advancing.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write as usual Fay, my favourite time of the year.
October 2nd, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write as usual Fay, my favourite time of the year.
October 2nd, 2017 00:46
Advancing.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, another beautiful poem! Migrating birds are a sight to see. In Hawaii we are on the winter destinations side. More than twenty species of ducks, geese, and shorebirds migrate to Hawaii each winter. Among them is the Kolea or Pacific Golden Plover which migrates from Alaska to Hawaii every year, more than 4800 kilometers. And they are fast too, covering that distance in three to four days non-stop, since there is only ocean in-between.
October 1st, 2017 14:49
FredPeyer said:
Fay, another beautiful poem! Migrating birds are a sight to see. In Hawaii we are on the winter destinations side. More than twenty species of ducks, geese, and shorebirds migrate to Hawaii each winter. Among them is the Kolea or Pacific Golden Plover which migrates from Alaska to Hawaii every year, more than 4800 kilometers. And they are fast too, covering that distance in three to four days non-stop, since there is only ocean in-between.
October 1st, 2017 14:49
Advancing.
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a beaut Fay - the colours round here at the moment are just stunning.
October 1st, 2017 12:21
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a beaut Fay - the colours round here at the moment are just stunning.
October 1st, 2017 12:21
Advancing.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful form and content, this one. Love the attention to structure. Well done tribute to Autumn, Fay!
October 1st, 2017 11:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful form and content, this one. Love the attention to structure. Well done tribute to Autumn, Fay!
October 1st, 2017 11:05
Advancing.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Thanks Fay! Fall is my favorite time of year. You really expressed it in this write, and I immensely enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing your words!
October 1st, 2017 08:26
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Thanks Fay! Fall is my favorite time of year. You really expressed it in this write, and I immensely enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing your words!
October 1st, 2017 08:26
Advancing.
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful write Fay of the seasons advancement. My favorites of spring, summer I wish lasted longer. But I know the fall leads into winter and they have their purpose too. Thanks for sharing. ; )
October 1st, 2017 05:13
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful write Fay of the seasons advancement. My favorites of spring, summer I wish lasted longer. But I know the fall leads into winter and they have their purpose too. Thanks for sharing. ; )
October 1st, 2017 05:13
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