Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Undressed.
FredPeyer said:
And such a beautiful thing is your writing, Fay!
September 15th, 2017 11:54
FredPeyer said:
And such a beautiful thing is your writing, Fay!
September 15th, 2017 11:54
Undressed.
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing as always Fay.
Sweet like a sea shell. 🐚
September 15th, 2017 08:33
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing as always Fay.
Sweet like a sea shell. 🐚
September 15th, 2017 08:33
Something Greater.
WL Schuett said:
Love related most blissfully, well done
September 14th, 2017 19:20
WL Schuett said:
Love related most blissfully, well done
September 14th, 2017 19:20
Something Greater.
Christina8 said:
I love the language that you use in this poem. But it\'s a poem so relatable because I know it so well. Superb job on this!!
September 14th, 2017 17:48
Christina8 said:
I love the language that you use in this poem. But it\'s a poem so relatable because I know it so well. Superb job on this!!
September 14th, 2017 17:48
Something Greater.
Louis Gibbs said:
The abandonment in late-blooming love makes possible attaining unforgettable new heights in soul\'s satisfaction. Well told in this beauty, Fay!
September 14th, 2017 08:14
Louis Gibbs said:
The abandonment in late-blooming love makes possible attaining unforgettable new heights in soul\'s satisfaction. Well told in this beauty, Fay!
September 14th, 2017 08:14
Something Greater.
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way use the language in your work - word associations etc that can only come from a great poetic mind
September 14th, 2017 03:58
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way use the language in your work - word associations etc that can only come from a great poetic mind
September 14th, 2017 03:58
Something Greater.
FredPeyer said:
And with this poem, Fay, you stole our admiration!
September 14th, 2017 03:52
FredPeyer said:
And with this poem, Fay, you stole our admiration!
September 14th, 2017 03:52
How Many.
FredPeyer said:
A wonderful depiction of waiting, longing, and love, but also of heartache and worries.
September 13th, 2017 11:28
FredPeyer said:
A wonderful depiction of waiting, longing, and love, but also of heartache and worries.
September 13th, 2017 11:28
How Many.
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Anxious wife awaiting the return of her mate from danger\' ... a theme so often replayed by wives of soldiers as well as those of fishermen. Well portrayed, Fay!
September 13th, 2017 09:47
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Anxious wife awaiting the return of her mate from danger\' ... a theme so often replayed by wives of soldiers as well as those of fishermen. Well portrayed, Fay!
September 13th, 2017 09:47
How Many.
WL Schuett said:
A picture in my head , a woman on a widows walk overlooking the ocean waiting ....
September 13th, 2017 09:15
WL Schuett said:
A picture in my head , a woman on a widows walk overlooking the ocean waiting ....
September 13th, 2017 09:15
How Many.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY an elegant poem dripping wit sea water nostalgia. In the N E we say \"The Boats cummin\' in\" A Friend of mine (based on the East Coast) works for the \"Mission to Deep Sea Fishermen\" and entitles his Talk (for WI\'s etc) \"The Price of Fish & Chips\" because sometimes the Boats don\'t come back in. The Deep Sea Fishermen of the UK and their families face a lot of heartache and hardship so you and I can enjoy a mega battered hake at Harry Ramsden\'s (Yorkshire) or at your local F & C Restaurant and Takeaway. Your poem really sets the scene ~ thank you. Last time Andy spoke at Church we passed his hat and sent him back to Lowestoft with £300 ~ AMEN I have a loose change box in my flat for ANDY !. Yours as ever BRIAN. SANTI & I have another collaboration \"Seasons of Love\" ~ please visit ~ Thanks ~ Love S & B
September 13th, 2017 05:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY an elegant poem dripping wit sea water nostalgia. In the N E we say \"The Boats cummin\' in\" A Friend of mine (based on the East Coast) works for the \"Mission to Deep Sea Fishermen\" and entitles his Talk (for WI\'s etc) \"The Price of Fish & Chips\" because sometimes the Boats don\'t come back in. The Deep Sea Fishermen of the UK and their families face a lot of heartache and hardship so you and I can enjoy a mega battered hake at Harry Ramsden\'s (Yorkshire) or at your local F & C Restaurant and Takeaway. Your poem really sets the scene ~ thank you. Last time Andy spoke at Church we passed his hat and sent him back to Lowestoft with £300 ~ AMEN I have a loose change box in my flat for ANDY !. Yours as ever BRIAN. SANTI & I have another collaboration \"Seasons of Love\" ~ please visit ~ Thanks ~ Love S & B
September 13th, 2017 05:17
Attack.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Fay! Sounds like a peregrine falcon, my favorite bird!
September 12th, 2017 11:33
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Fay! Sounds like a peregrine falcon, my favorite bird!
September 12th, 2017 11:33
Attack.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, nature can appear to be cruel but hawks kill to feed and not for fun like Homo sapiens.
September 12th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, nature can appear to be cruel but hawks kill to feed and not for fun like Homo sapiens.
September 12th, 2017 08:06
Winter-Clad.
dusk arising said:
Tell me a tale, tell me. Oh you told this so well.... winter was here in all its stark crispness, frost in my whiskers and exhaled breath-mists, headlamps on frost, gloves and duffle coats (remember those). Call me a romantic but the pictures your words brought to mind. Thank you, very very enjoyable. Goes into my favourites.
September 11th, 2017 16:34
dusk arising said:
Tell me a tale, tell me. Oh you told this so well.... winter was here in all its stark crispness, frost in my whiskers and exhaled breath-mists, headlamps on frost, gloves and duffle coats (remember those). Call me a romantic but the pictures your words brought to mind. Thank you, very very enjoyable. Goes into my favourites.
September 11th, 2017 16:34
Winter-Clad.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As yiu know FAY I am a SHAPE / FORM POET ! Presenting verses as Regular Rectangular Blocks of pure poetry is impossible ~ but you did it ~ gently and without fuss ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ because you are FAY ! They reminded me of Blocks of Commercial Ice ~ so they perfectly complemented the subject. Autumn is perfect time to contemplate the harshness of a Cornish winter ! The real work begins when all the Visitors have gone Home. I am familiar with the Winter hardships faced by English Lakeland Sheep farmers ~ and your lovely poem \"Rang a Distant Bell !\" Thanks for another gem ~ Yours as ever BRIAN,
September 11th, 2017 13:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As yiu know FAY I am a SHAPE / FORM POET ! Presenting verses as Regular Rectangular Blocks of pure poetry is impossible ~ but you did it ~ gently and without fuss ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ because you are FAY ! They reminded me of Blocks of Commercial Ice ~ so they perfectly complemented the subject. Autumn is perfect time to contemplate the harshness of a Cornish winter ! The real work begins when all the Visitors have gone Home. I am familiar with the Winter hardships faced by English Lakeland Sheep farmers ~ and your lovely poem \"Rang a Distant Bell !\" Thanks for another gem ~ Yours as ever BRIAN,
September 11th, 2017 13:15
Winter-Clad.
FredPeyer said:
Faye, this is one of the finest descriptions of winter I ever read!
September 11th, 2017 11:52
FredPeyer said:
Faye, this is one of the finest descriptions of winter I ever read!
September 11th, 2017 11:52
Winter-Clad.
WL Schuett said:
Voice of experience shining through, well related ... fine writing
September 11th, 2017 11:26
WL Schuett said:
Voice of experience shining through, well related ... fine writing
September 11th, 2017 11:26
Winter-Clad.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem reminds me of growing up in Chicago. These physical embodiments are certainly resilient, as is our survival instinct.
A \'chilling\' season and man\'s will so well depicted, Fay!
September 11th, 2017 09:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem reminds me of growing up in Chicago. These physical embodiments are certainly resilient, as is our survival instinct.
A \'chilling\' season and man\'s will so well depicted, Fay!
September 11th, 2017 09:47
Winter-Clad.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Brrr, don\'t tell me of it just yet. lol. It\'s not Autumn yet, so me diary says!
September 11th, 2017 08:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Brrr, don\'t tell me of it just yet. lol. It\'s not Autumn yet, so me diary says!
September 11th, 2017 08:13
Winter-Clad.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. May the light that come with the snow always shine upon you.
September 11th, 2017 08:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. May the light that come with the snow always shine upon you.
September 11th, 2017 08:05
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