Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Year\'s Yield.
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing like a garden to gauge the seasons for us. Enjoyed this fine write, Fay.
September 1st, 2017 05:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing like a garden to gauge the seasons for us. Enjoyed this fine write, Fay.
September 1st, 2017 05:45
Year\'s Yield.
Frank Prem said:
Into the new season with you Fay! It\'s my turn for green and growing times.
September 1st, 2017 05:22
Frank Prem said:
Into the new season with you Fay! It\'s my turn for green and growing times.
September 1st, 2017 05:22
Changes.
poetboy123 said:
Wow! Incredible imagery painting a wondrous picture!
August 31st, 2017 09:34
poetboy123 said:
Wow! Incredible imagery painting a wondrous picture!
August 31st, 2017 09:34
Changes.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you just put beautiful words to the kind of sunsets we are privileged to see here.
August 31st, 2017 04:05
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you just put beautiful words to the kind of sunsets we are privileged to see here.
August 31st, 2017 04:05
Frenzy.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Blackbirds are wonderfu to watch and be with.
August 31st, 2017 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Blackbirds are wonderfu to watch and be with.
August 31st, 2017 01:38
Changes.
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love the words you use. Just right !!!! Beautifully written
August 31st, 2017 01:27
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love the words you use. Just right !!!! Beautifully written
August 31st, 2017 01:27
Changes.
Michael Edwards said:
\'And dusts her lunar flakes\' - brilliant phrases in this super work.
August 31st, 2017 01:13
Michael Edwards said:
\'And dusts her lunar flakes\' - brilliant phrases in this super work.
August 31st, 2017 01:13
Frenzy.
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Faye. And the last line has me giggling, i never would have thought of using diligence to describe the work of mother nature. The more i think about it, especially human nature, that word is tickling me silly. An extremely enjoyable read but slap
me because for all the wrong reasons.
August 30th, 2017 17:20
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Faye. And the last line has me giggling, i never would have thought of using diligence to describe the work of mother nature. The more i think about it, especially human nature, that word is tickling me silly. An extremely enjoyable read but slap
me because for all the wrong reasons.
August 30th, 2017 17:20
Frenzy.
Louis Gibbs said:
An elegant expression of the natural rhythm of nature, Fay. Well observed and reported!
August 30th, 2017 11:30
Louis Gibbs said:
An elegant expression of the natural rhythm of nature, Fay. Well observed and reported!
August 30th, 2017 11:30
Enmeshed.
malubotelho said:
Another delicate intricate web like work Fay. So adorable reading. Thanks
August 29th, 2017 16:45
malubotelho said:
Another delicate intricate web like work Fay. So adorable reading. Thanks
August 29th, 2017 16:45
Enmeshed.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay. Like the last two lines. They could apply to our lives as well!
August 29th, 2017 11:38
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay. Like the last two lines. They could apply to our lives as well!
August 29th, 2017 11:38
Enmeshed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about n absolutely stunning site in autumn.
August 29th, 2017 07:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about n absolutely stunning site in autumn.
August 29th, 2017 07:37
Enmeshed.
Louis Gibbs said:
Some of the world\'s greatest engineers, indeed, and I speak as an engineer. A fine tribute to these clever creatures, Fay!
August 29th, 2017 07:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Some of the world\'s greatest engineers, indeed, and I speak as an engineer. A fine tribute to these clever creatures, Fay!
August 29th, 2017 07:02
Enmeshed.
Michael Edwards said:
These are fascinating creatures often much aligned and irrationally disliked (strange that we admire lions but dislike spiders - no real rationality) but you\'ve done them proud Fay.
August 29th, 2017 05:31
Michael Edwards said:
These are fascinating creatures often much aligned and irrationally disliked (strange that we admire lions but dislike spiders - no real rationality) but you\'ve done them proud Fay.
August 29th, 2017 05:31
Conceding.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. You do realise that those holes in the galaxy showing light through them are the holes in Heaven\'s floor.
August 29th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. You do realise that those holes in the galaxy showing light through them are the holes in Heaven\'s floor.
August 29th, 2017 00:51
Conceding.
malubotelho said:
I believe that this is about surrendering ourselves to destiny. Finally understanding that we should not fight life and its beauty. Awesome writing and imagenery as always Fay.
August 28th, 2017 20:57
malubotelho said:
I believe that this is about surrendering ourselves to destiny. Finally understanding that we should not fight life and its beauty. Awesome writing and imagenery as always Fay.
August 28th, 2017 20:57
Conceding.
Louis Gibbs said:
Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a night sky ... what could be more calming indeed. Tends to put our inconsequential problems in perspective. So well described in your poem, Fay!
August 28th, 2017 08:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a night sky ... what could be more calming indeed. Tends to put our inconsequential problems in perspective. So well described in your poem, Fay!
August 28th, 2017 08:30
Conceding.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FAY ~ Conceding to Destiny ~ is the only answer to lifting our prevailing mood. However like you I find lying \"al freso\" and contemplating the developing Night Sky does lift the Spirits. Love your metaphor and the woodcut ~ classic ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FAY ~ Conceding to Destiny ~ is the only answer to lifting our prevailing mood. However like you I find lying \"al freso\" and contemplating the developing Night Sky does lift the Spirits. Love your metaphor and the woodcut ~ classic ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:18
Conceding.
dusk arising said:
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ? Both so similarly intertwined in our imagination. Enjoyed reading and thinking it thru several times.
August 28th, 2017 04:09
dusk arising said:
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ? Both so similarly intertwined in our imagination. Enjoyed reading and thinking it thru several times.
August 28th, 2017 04:09
Omens.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL FAY ~ Photographic (The Future\'s Orange !) and Poetic perfection ! We can never be master Wordsmith\'s like you but reading (and reciting) your elegant odes always lifts me on to higher linguistic ground. When i\'m pondering a linguistic choice ~ I often think \"Which word would Fay choose ?\" The quality of tomorrow is determined by our attitude as we awake ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 09:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL FAY ~ Photographic (The Future\'s Orange !) and Poetic perfection ! We can never be master Wordsmith\'s like you but reading (and reciting) your elegant odes always lifts me on to higher linguistic ground. When i\'m pondering a linguistic choice ~ I often think \"Which word would Fay choose ?\" The quality of tomorrow is determined by our attitude as we awake ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 09:28
Omens.
malubotelho said:
Nothing left to be said but I still can repeat that you surprise me each and every day with your poetry. You are fantastic Fay. You don\'t know how I\'m pleased to be here writing poetry with one master like you. It is a blessing.
August 27th, 2017 08:34
malubotelho said:
Nothing left to be said but I still can repeat that you surprise me each and every day with your poetry. You are fantastic Fay. You don\'t know how I\'m pleased to be here writing poetry with one master like you. It is a blessing.
August 27th, 2017 08:34
Lovescape.
malubotelho said:
Me too will have to break it so I can understand. I always use my intuition when reading poems and need to search the words to understand. I\'ve felt the eroticism here and as always I love your poetry.
August 26th, 2017 15:53
malubotelho said:
Me too will have to break it so I can understand. I always use my intuition when reading poems and need to search the words to understand. I\'ve felt the eroticism here and as always I love your poetry.
August 26th, 2017 15:53
Lovescape.
dusk arising said:
Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism into pictures Antonio might create with his sensuous words. Worlds apart in style both make me smile. Yeah forsooth thou hast raised upon mine countenance the disgrace of a smile!
August 26th, 2017 12:31
dusk arising said:
Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism into pictures Antonio might create with his sensuous words. Worlds apart in style both make me smile. Yeah forsooth thou hast raised upon mine countenance the disgrace of a smile!
August 26th, 2017 12:31
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