Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
No More..
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write showing the sadness and horror that war can bring to all. Will we ever learn?
September 24th, 2017 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write showing the sadness and horror that war can bring to all. Will we ever learn?
September 24th, 2017 00:31
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FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem made me think of how this world would look like if war did not exist!
September 23rd, 2017 18:06
FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem made me think of how this world would look like if war did not exist!
September 23rd, 2017 18:06
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Christina8 said:
Outstanding write, Fay! In America we face two leaders that both say nuclear war is an option. We\'re already fighting a war that has lagged on since 9/11 and now face more. A sad write. I wish your last line were true!
September 23rd, 2017 12:57
Christina8 said:
Outstanding write, Fay! In America we face two leaders that both say nuclear war is an option. We\'re already fighting a war that has lagged on since 9/11 and now face more. A sad write. I wish your last line were true!
September 23rd, 2017 12:57
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dusk arising said:
And today we see two nations leaders posturing... ready to commit young lives to death in their name.
God is love, love is everywhere, love is everything. What can we do?
September 23rd, 2017 09:48
dusk arising said:
And today we see two nations leaders posturing... ready to commit young lives to death in their name.
God is love, love is everywhere, love is everything. What can we do?
September 23rd, 2017 09:48
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malubotelho said:
They say war is necessary but do me it is created by the authorities to serve money purpose. The soldiers and the population are victims without understanding it. Great poem as always Fay. Always love to read your so well composed writings.
September 23rd, 2017 09:36
malubotelho said:
They say war is necessary but do me it is created by the authorities to serve money purpose. The soldiers and the population are victims without understanding it. Great poem as always Fay. Always love to read your so well composed writings.
September 23rd, 2017 09:36
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Louis Gibbs said:
War is the definition of madness ... yet it remains the favorite pastime of men throughout history. Go figure!
Your poem captures the insanity of it beautifully, Fay!
September 23rd, 2017 08:23
Louis Gibbs said:
War is the definition of madness ... yet it remains the favorite pastime of men throughout history. Go figure!
Your poem captures the insanity of it beautifully, Fay!
September 23rd, 2017 08:23
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orchidee said:
Good write Fay. We\'re the only species that do it. I\'m looking into it a bit more, in a short study series, and poems to follow!
September 23rd, 2017 05:26
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. We\'re the only species that do it. I\'m looking into it a bit more, in a short study series, and poems to follow!
September 23rd, 2017 05:26
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Your Poem fils me with despiar FAY about the futility of WAR. I am a PACIFIST buI am trained in FIRST AID (For Field Trips) so I am registered as a Non~combatant Field Medic to save livs not destroy them ! Thank for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN Please check ~ Say it with Flowers ~ You will love its fragrance ! Thanks B
September 23rd, 2017 05:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Your Poem fils me with despiar FAY about the futility of WAR. I am a PACIFIST buI am trained in FIRST AID (For Field Trips) so I am registered as a Non~combatant Field Medic to save livs not destroy them ! Thank for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN Please check ~ Say it with Flowers ~ You will love its fragrance ! Thanks B
September 23rd, 2017 05:19
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Accidental Poet said:
A sad but great write Fay. War is the work of the devil and steals the sanity of soldiers on both sides.
September 23rd, 2017 03:44
Accidental Poet said:
A sad but great write Fay. War is the work of the devil and steals the sanity of soldiers on both sides.
September 23rd, 2017 03:44
First Love.
Michael Edwards said:
Found it and glad I did - great write as always Fay
September 23rd, 2017 02:50
Michael Edwards said:
Found it and glad I did - great write as always Fay
September 23rd, 2017 02:50
First Love.
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid tribute to, and portrait of, first love, Fay ... the inauguration into life\'s rich journey ... discovering \"other\"! Love this one.
September 22nd, 2017 11:13
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid tribute to, and portrait of, first love, Fay ... the inauguration into life\'s rich journey ... discovering \"other\"! Love this one.
September 22nd, 2017 11:13
First Love.
Christina8 said:
Perfect depiction of young love at it\'s finest! Beautifully written as always. :-) Loved the picture too!
September 22nd, 2017 10:04
Christina8 said:
Perfect depiction of young love at it\'s finest! Beautifully written as always. :-) Loved the picture too!
September 22nd, 2017 10:04
First Love.
malubotelho said:
Fay, you truly have the gift and the talent to write poems. Such a wonderful lovely reading. Stunning.
September 22nd, 2017 09:30
malubotelho said:
Fay, you truly have the gift and the talent to write poems. Such a wonderful lovely reading. Stunning.
September 22nd, 2017 09:30
First Love.
lasergraph said:
Great description of a youthful first love. I could see it unfold and perhaps a glimpse of my own memories. .
September 22nd, 2017 08:42
lasergraph said:
Great description of a youthful first love. I could see it unfold and perhaps a glimpse of my own memories. .
September 22nd, 2017 08:42
First Love.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, first love starts so innocently.
September 22nd, 2017 07:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, first love starts so innocently.
September 22nd, 2017 07:51
First Love.
Mugsdaddy said:
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it. You women know what you do to us even when it seems innocent.
\"Oh, is my hair a mess\"
\"Oops, my nipple slipped out\"
\"I\'m not wearing perfume today \"
You know, You know,
Mugs
September 22nd, 2017 07:41
Mugsdaddy said:
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it. You women know what you do to us even when it seems innocent.
\"Oh, is my hair a mess\"
\"Oops, my nipple slipped out\"
\"I\'m not wearing perfume today \"
You know, You know,
Mugs
September 22nd, 2017 07:41
First Love.
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely gorgeous, Fay! You depicted first love in a beautiful and tender way.
September 22nd, 2017 04:21
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely gorgeous, Fay! You depicted first love in a beautiful and tender way.
September 22nd, 2017 04:21
First Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You painted a perfect picture FAY from your sensuous Memory box ! I remember it well SADIE was Sweet 16 and I was 17 (half a lifetime away). Your elegant Poem brought her into sharp focus and a tear to my eye ! A HUG for you for being so perceptive on a FRIDAY MORNING ~ BRIAN Please check my OXYMORONS ~ thanks B. Loved the picture ~ perfect !
September 22nd, 2017 02:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You painted a perfect picture FAY from your sensuous Memory box ! I remember it well SADIE was Sweet 16 and I was 17 (half a lifetime away). Your elegant Poem brought her into sharp focus and a tear to my eye ! A HUG for you for being so perceptive on a FRIDAY MORNING ~ BRIAN Please check my OXYMORONS ~ thanks B. Loved the picture ~ perfect !
September 22nd, 2017 02:56
Seize Now.
dusk arising said:
Whatever heaven means to the individual. Some seems to want to claim their understanding is the only truth and why? because they have faith that it is so.....
September 21st, 2017 17:16
dusk arising said:
Whatever heaven means to the individual. Some seems to want to claim their understanding is the only truth and why? because they have faith that it is so.....
September 21st, 2017 17:16
Seize Now.
malubotelho said:
Great write queen of the poets. Fay, awesome as always. This is what we need to do. Learn from the past and not get stuck there. Seize now. Well said.
September 21st, 2017 16:22
malubotelho said:
Great write queen of the poets. Fay, awesome as always. This is what we need to do. Learn from the past and not get stuck there. Seize now. Well said.
September 21st, 2017 16:22
Seize Now.
Louis Gibbs said:
Our past as \"a learning curve\" ... so well captured herein, Fay. Kudos!
September 21st, 2017 08:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Our past as \"a learning curve\" ... so well captured herein, Fay. Kudos!
September 21st, 2017 08:32
Seize Now.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, each moment of every day is special, cease them all.
September 21st, 2017 07:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, each moment of every day is special, cease them all.
September 21st, 2017 07:59
Seize Now.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I would say Carpe-Wotsit too. I thought it was a fish at first! (carp). lol.
September 21st, 2017 06:57
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I would say Carpe-Wotsit too. I thought it was a fish at first! (carp). lol.
September 21st, 2017 06:57
Seize Now.
Seeker said:
The \"we make kings from deceit\" is a brilliant stanza. Well done!!
September 21st, 2017 05:19
Seeker said:
The \"we make kings from deceit\" is a brilliant stanza. Well done!!
September 21st, 2017 05:19
Seize Now.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ love the form of this Poem and the SEVEN one line epithets add piquancy to the triplets. Taken together thy form a very enigmatic ODE !
SEIZE NOW !
Which turn on the many
Either for or against
And let love have its head
If real fees unsteady
Over falsehood\'s regret
So naught left to repent
From none other than Heaven.
Thanks for Sharing another Gem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 21st, 2017 05:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ love the form of this Poem and the SEVEN one line epithets add piquancy to the triplets. Taken together thy form a very enigmatic ODE !
SEIZE NOW !
Which turn on the many
Either for or against
And let love have its head
If real fees unsteady
Over falsehood\'s regret
So naught left to repent
From none other than Heaven.
Thanks for Sharing another Gem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 21st, 2017 05:07
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