Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
In The Making.
MendedFences27 said:
An artist or an artisan, whichever they are called, their work can be compared to music. You give them a voice here, their tools are surely their instruments, their performances, however, linger in forms not like a recording, but more tangible, and are never lost into the wind. You have built a remarkable piece, a song whose voice is dynamic and full of beauty. I enjoyed every sliver of it. Bravo! - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 11:26
MendedFences27 said:
An artist or an artisan, whichever they are called, their work can be compared to music. You give them a voice here, their tools are surely their instruments, their performances, however, linger in forms not like a recording, but more tangible, and are never lost into the wind. You have built a remarkable piece, a song whose voice is dynamic and full of beauty. I enjoyed every sliver of it. Bravo! - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 11:26
In The Making.
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Fay, I even had the smell of freshly cut wood in my nose when reading it. I love to work with wood, but unfortunately whenever I build something it usually comes out at least a little bit crooked, or off-kilter.
October 13th, 2017 11:24
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Fay, I even had the smell of freshly cut wood in my nose when reading it. I love to work with wood, but unfortunately whenever I build something it usually comes out at least a little bit crooked, or off-kilter.
October 13th, 2017 11:24
In The Making.
Louis Gibbs said:
As a once-wood worker, I can hear the music of which you speak in this masterful piece, Fay. Speaks to my soul too, as AP states. Another wonderful piece from your magic pen! Kudos.
October 13th, 2017 09:35
Louis Gibbs said:
As a once-wood worker, I can hear the music of which you speak in this masterful piece, Fay. Speaks to my soul too, as AP states. Another wonderful piece from your magic pen! Kudos.
October 13th, 2017 09:35
In The Making.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful start to the symphony of craftmanship.
October 13th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful start to the symphony of craftmanship.
October 13th, 2017 08:06
In The Making.
Accidental Poet said:
Oh Fay, you\'re speaking to my soul here, as I love woodgrain when finely sanded and stained. The craftsmanship you speak of here in your poem is deservingly described by your own craftsmanship of poetic word. This poem is a masterpiece in the making. ; )
October 13th, 2017 03:54
Accidental Poet said:
Oh Fay, you\'re speaking to my soul here, as I love woodgrain when finely sanded and stained. The craftsmanship you speak of here in your poem is deservingly described by your own craftsmanship of poetic word. This poem is a masterpiece in the making. ; )
October 13th, 2017 03:54
Dark Delight.
Mugsdaddy said:
Certainly sounds like a fond memory, thanks for sharing.
Mugsdaddy
October 12th, 2017 10:13
Mugsdaddy said:
Certainly sounds like a fond memory, thanks for sharing.
Mugsdaddy
October 12th, 2017 10:13
Dark Delight.
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you had a pleasant youth, there by the sea? Lovely reflective poem, Fay!
October 12th, 2017 08:10
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you had a pleasant youth, there by the sea? Lovely reflective poem, Fay!
October 12th, 2017 08:10
Dark Delight.
Christina8 said:
Absolutely wonderful! Nostalgic! The picture and the poem together were fantastic!!
October 12th, 2017 05:31
Christina8 said:
Absolutely wonderful! Nostalgic! The picture and the poem together were fantastic!!
October 12th, 2017 05:31
Dark Delight.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, my comment has only two words:
Simply beautiful!
October 12th, 2017 03:49
FredPeyer said:
Fay, my comment has only two words:
Simply beautiful!
October 12th, 2017 03:49
This Too.
lasergraph said:
WOW, very heartfelt. I am left speechless. That doesn\'t happen often.
October 11th, 2017 15:16
lasergraph said:
WOW, very heartfelt. I am left speechless. That doesn\'t happen often.
October 11th, 2017 15:16
This Too.
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on the strength and insight you have gained around loss, Fay! Indeed, we will meet them again, and again, I believe.
October 11th, 2017 09:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on the strength and insight you have gained around loss, Fay! Indeed, we will meet them again, and again, I believe.
October 11th, 2017 09:03
This Too.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your love go on towards eternity.
October 11th, 2017 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your love go on towards eternity.
October 11th, 2017 08:08
This Too.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and so heartwarming for such a tough subject. Thanks for sharing, Fay!
October 11th, 2017 05:13
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and so heartwarming for such a tough subject. Thanks for sharing, Fay!
October 11th, 2017 05:13
This Too.
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Fred, very touching write Fay. My condolences to you and family if someone close to you has passed on.
October 11th, 2017 04:00
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Fred, very touching write Fay. My condolences to you and family if someone close to you has passed on.
October 11th, 2017 04:00
This Too.
FredPeyer said:
I really don\'t know what to say, Fay!
Your poems don\'t only touch the readers heart, they worm right into it.
October 11th, 2017 03:26
FredPeyer said:
I really don\'t know what to say, Fay!
Your poems don\'t only touch the readers heart, they worm right into it.
October 11th, 2017 03:26
Playing At Love.
MendedFences27 said:
So true, Fay. Unintended yet spoken love can be hurtful, destructive, and vicious. I can only offer that I\'ve seen this between a couple, both plating at the same game. Interesting to watch the interplay and explosive ending. It seems time exposes every weakness. Great write. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2017 13:53
MendedFences27 said:
So true, Fay. Unintended yet spoken love can be hurtful, destructive, and vicious. I can only offer that I\'ve seen this between a couple, both plating at the same game. Interesting to watch the interplay and explosive ending. It seems time exposes every weakness. Great write. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2017 13:53
Playing At Love.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love this poem, which seems to be a little bit different from your usual writing style, but is equally exquisite.
Something that came to my mind when reading it is that kids learn through play. Maybe the same is true for love? We start out playing at love and learn before finding that true and lasting love. Just a thought!
October 10th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love this poem, which seems to be a little bit different from your usual writing style, but is equally exquisite.
Something that came to my mind when reading it is that kids learn through play. Maybe the same is true for love? We start out playing at love and learn before finding that true and lasting love. Just a thought!
October 10th, 2017 11:34
Playing At Love.
Louis Gibbs said:
Good advice, to the young just entering the arena of love especially. Well written and formed poet wisdom, Fay!
October 10th, 2017 10:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Good advice, to the young just entering the arena of love especially. Well written and formed poet wisdom, Fay!
October 10th, 2017 10:02
Playing At Love.
malubotelho said:
Great writing and a reminder. Don’t play with love. Love can be playfull but not played off.
October 10th, 2017 08:57
malubotelho said:
Great writing and a reminder. Don’t play with love. Love can be playfull but not played off.
October 10th, 2017 08:57
Artful.
FredPeyer said:
So many people are afraid of spiders. I just hope that your beautiful poem takes some of that fear away. They (the spiders) and your poem are awesome!
October 9th, 2017 12:32
FredPeyer said:
So many people are afraid of spiders. I just hope that your beautiful poem takes some of that fear away. They (the spiders) and your poem are awesome!
October 9th, 2017 12:32
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
