Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Read Rightly.
malubotelho said:
I bet if they had to fight war as they used to fight long time ago, with the king riding up front of the troops they would never start a war now. But the cowards can hide themselves behind inocente people and after they think there is victory. It is a shame. Thanks Fay for stepping out of your delicate field of flowers and write this.
August 22nd, 2017 14:53
malubotelho said:
I bet if they had to fight war as they used to fight long time ago, with the king riding up front of the troops they would never start a war now. But the cowards can hide themselves behind inocente people and after they think there is victory. It is a shame. Thanks Fay for stepping out of your delicate field of flowers and write this.
August 22nd, 2017 14:53
Read Rightly.
burning-embers said:
So much spilled blood wasted and ruined lifes and for what? What was gained or lost other than the saintlyness of those who stopped it. Excellent writing on our ongoing self inflicted plague.
August 22nd, 2017 14:13
burning-embers said:
So much spilled blood wasted and ruined lifes and for what? What was gained or lost other than the saintlyness of those who stopped it. Excellent writing on our ongoing self inflicted plague.
August 22nd, 2017 14:13
Read Rightly.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re the only species (a minority of humans?) that kills our fellow beings just for the sake of it surely, or because of being caught up in the conflict. Wild animals, etc need to kill for food. That we can understand.
August 22nd, 2017 08:37
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re the only species (a minority of humans?) that kills our fellow beings just for the sake of it surely, or because of being caught up in the conflict. Wild animals, etc need to kill for food. That we can understand.
August 22nd, 2017 08:37
Read Rightly.
Louis Gibbs said:
The need for conflict has always been an integral element in the plot of the reality we create and share. Is it time for a new paradigm, a revision in the story of man?
It would require a monumental shift in the awareness of our species.There are encouraging signs in the new ones coming in ... we shall see.
August 22nd, 2017 08:14
Louis Gibbs said:
The need for conflict has always been an integral element in the plot of the reality we create and share. Is it time for a new paradigm, a revision in the story of man?
It would require a monumental shift in the awareness of our species.There are encouraging signs in the new ones coming in ... we shall see.
August 22nd, 2017 08:14
Read Rightly.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, if only they who cause the wars just sorted it out themselves without involving all the innocent people they send to fight wars for their own egotism.
August 22nd, 2017 08:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, if only they who cause the wars just sorted it out themselves without involving all the innocent people they send to fight wars for their own egotism.
August 22nd, 2017 08:04
Read Rightly.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ By conviction I am a Pacifist and will state my case and take my stand should I ever be conscripted ! Members of my extended Family suffered for their stance as Pacifists in WW1. I WW2 they were drafted into non~ combatant services (medical etc). The old lie is still prevalent today \"Dulce et Decorum est ~ por Patria Mori\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 07:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ By conviction I am a Pacifist and will state my case and take my stand should I ever be conscripted ! Members of my extended Family suffered for their stance as Pacifists in WW1. I WW2 they were drafted into non~ combatant services (medical etc). The old lie is still prevalent today \"Dulce et Decorum est ~ por Patria Mori\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 07:25
Read Rightly.
FredPeyer said:
War sucks! But you said it much more eloquently!
August 22nd, 2017 04:18
FredPeyer said:
War sucks! But you said it much more eloquently!
August 22nd, 2017 04:18
Read Rightly.
Michael Edwards said:
A moving work well captured - thanks for posting Fay
August 22nd, 2017 03:43
Michael Edwards said:
A moving work well captured - thanks for posting Fay
August 22nd, 2017 03:43
Read Rightly.
Frank Prem said:
So rare for a right reading Fay. We can but hope.
August 22nd, 2017 02:47
Frank Prem said:
So rare for a right reading Fay. We can but hope.
August 22nd, 2017 02:47
Chance.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your Poem FAY and it is a perfect reflection of the DAWNING of New Love ! And a perfect picture of a Couple ~ Lost in each others LOVE. We all from time to time try o express the wonder and intimacy of LOVE, However like trying to write about the Total Eclipse of Brother Sun by Sister Moon ~ \"It\'s better Felt than Telt\" so it is with LOVE ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 18:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your Poem FAY and it is a perfect reflection of the DAWNING of New Love ! And a perfect picture of a Couple ~ Lost in each others LOVE. We all from time to time try o express the wonder and intimacy of LOVE, However like trying to write about the Total Eclipse of Brother Sun by Sister Moon ~ \"It\'s better Felt than Telt\" so it is with LOVE ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 18:14
Chance.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, love the subject and love how you say it! Beautiful!
August 21st, 2017 16:16
FredPeyer said:
Fay, love the subject and love how you say it! Beautiful!
August 21st, 2017 16:16
Together.
FredPeyer said:
Now if only everybody in this world would subscribe to your mantra!
Beautifully written, great subject.
August 21st, 2017 15:32
FredPeyer said:
Now if only everybody in this world would subscribe to your mantra!
Beautifully written, great subject.
August 21st, 2017 15:32
Chance.
burning-embers said:
Destiny\'s chance for romance. Marvelous thought. Really enjoyed this.
August 21st, 2017 12:07
burning-embers said:
Destiny\'s chance for romance. Marvelous thought. Really enjoyed this.
August 21st, 2017 12:07
Chance.
malubotelho said:
Beautiful your poem about love encountered at late age. I\'m here living it in reality. It is beautiful indeed.
August 21st, 2017 10:23
malubotelho said:
Beautiful your poem about love encountered at late age. I\'m here living it in reality. It is beautiful indeed.
August 21st, 2017 10:23
Chance.
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. The layout gives pauses after each line. I don\'t pause at times - just waffle on a thousand words (well, almost!). heehee.
August 21st, 2017 08:09
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. The layout gives pauses after each line. I don\'t pause at times - just waffle on a thousand words (well, almost!). heehee.
August 21st, 2017 08:09
Chance.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful description of the rekindling of love\'s fire at advanced age, Fay. It strikes a chord ... loved it!
August 21st, 2017 07:01
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful description of the rekindling of love\'s fire at advanced age, Fay. It strikes a chord ... loved it!
August 21st, 2017 07:01
Together.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The Hippies had it right. \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\"
August 21st, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The Hippies had it right. \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\"
August 21st, 2017 01:00
Together.
myself and me said:
Together, let\'s make this world a paradise to live.
An effective medicine for the current disease spreading around the world.
Thank you.
August 20th, 2017 22:10
myself and me said:
Together, let\'s make this world a paradise to live.
An effective medicine for the current disease spreading around the world.
Thank you.
August 20th, 2017 22:10
Together.
malubotelho said:
This is a beautiful thought Fay. If at least 50% of the humanity would think like that we could save the planet and our race.
August 20th, 2017 12:22
malubotelho said:
This is a beautiful thought Fay. If at least 50% of the humanity would think like that we could save the planet and our race.
August 20th, 2017 12:22
Together.
Michael Edwards said:
coming-togetherness - the way forward for us all but does everyone work to this end - sadly not and selfishness rules in many hearts - did enjoy the read Fay.
August 20th, 2017 08:35
Michael Edwards said:
coming-togetherness - the way forward for us all but does everyone work to this end - sadly not and selfishness rules in many hearts - did enjoy the read Fay.
August 20th, 2017 08:35
Together.
rrodriguez said:
Wow! To be me & to be you, then to be ❤. This is the way to be. Lovef it!
August 20th, 2017 06:56
rrodriguez said:
Wow! To be me & to be you, then to be ❤. This is the way to be. Lovef it!
August 20th, 2017 06:56
Together.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for reminding us of the importance of Friends & family ! When we form a group of Caring Individuals like MPS ~ The WHOLE is always greater than the Sum of the Parts ! Love the visual ~ the Power to light the bulb is generated by the combined energy of those who encircle it ~ AMEN Sunday Love ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for reminding us of the importance of Friends & family ! When we form a group of Caring Individuals like MPS ~ The WHOLE is always greater than the Sum of the Parts ! Love the visual ~ the Power to light the bulb is generated by the combined energy of those who encircle it ~ AMEN Sunday Love ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 03:30
Who Dares.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Otters are starting to flourish one more and that is great to see.
August 20th, 2017 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Otters are starting to flourish one more and that is great to see.
August 20th, 2017 00:27
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