Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Enticing.
Louis Gibbs said:
Challenging in its fullness to comprehend completely upon initial review, but appreciation grows with each read. You have a gift, Fay ... thanks for sharing it!
August 12th, 2017 07:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Challenging in its fullness to comprehend completely upon initial review, but appreciation grows with each read. You have a gift, Fay ... thanks for sharing it!
August 12th, 2017 07:43
Enticing.
Michael Edwards said:
In fact lots of lovely lines - love nights shawl and the idea of day\'s entrance - great read.
August 12th, 2017 04:26
Michael Edwards said:
In fact lots of lovely lines - love nights shawl and the idea of day\'s entrance - great read.
August 12th, 2017 04:26
Interference.
malubotelho said:
Oh! This is so cute. How much I love the little creatures. They have God\'s appearance.
August 11th, 2017 16:56
malubotelho said:
Oh! This is so cute. How much I love the little creatures. They have God\'s appearance.
August 11th, 2017 16:56
Interference.
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them in my mind\'s eye - great write fay
August 11th, 2017 14:25
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them in my mind\'s eye - great write fay
August 11th, 2017 14:25
Interference.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful depiction of fish. I see it and feel it through your words.
August 11th, 2017 12:09
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful depiction of fish. I see it and feel it through your words.
August 11th, 2017 12:09
Abundance.
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t think I ever saw a nicer write about August than this one, Fay. Beautifully penned!
August 11th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t think I ever saw a nicer write about August than this one, Fay. Beautifully penned!
August 11th, 2017 11:34
Abundance.
WriteBeLight said:
Nicely done Fay. August is not my favorite month, but after reading this I reconsider :)
August 10th, 2017 12:08
WriteBeLight said:
Nicely done Fay. August is not my favorite month, but after reading this I reconsider :)
August 10th, 2017 12:08
Abundance.
malubotelho said:
Your poem took me back to my childhood in Brazil living in the farms with my family. Was so beautiful to see the corn fields. The coffee beans are so sweet when ripe. I loved to jump on the cotton balls at the shed. Thanks for taking me to lovely memories. Great sweet poem for abundance.
August 10th, 2017 10:35
malubotelho said:
Your poem took me back to my childhood in Brazil living in the farms with my family. Was so beautiful to see the corn fields. The coffee beans are so sweet when ripe. I loved to jump on the cotton balls at the shed. Thanks for taking me to lovely memories. Great sweet poem for abundance.
August 10th, 2017 10:35
Abundance.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AUGUST ~ Come she must
But when she comes
A Harvest ripe she brings
And all of Nature sings ! AMEN
Thanks FAY ~ A lovely Month ~ A lovely Picture and Poem ~ From a lovely Lady ! There are so so many layers to this Poem ~ that I see a new nuance each time I read it ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ! I invite you to taste my Minestrone & a Glass of Chianti Classico ~ B.
August 10th, 2017 03:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AUGUST ~ Come she must
But when she comes
A Harvest ripe she brings
And all of Nature sings ! AMEN
Thanks FAY ~ A lovely Month ~ A lovely Picture and Poem ~ From a lovely Lady ! There are so so many layers to this Poem ~ that I see a new nuance each time I read it ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ! I invite you to taste my Minestrone & a Glass of Chianti Classico ~ B.
August 10th, 2017 03:18
Undiluted.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay. May the light always be with you.
August 10th, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay. May the light always be with you.
August 10th, 2017 00:22
Undiluted.
malubotelho said:
Dear Fay, you so well describe what we most of the time don\'t recognize and let it take over us. Is that thing that sometimes bother us so much and for no specific reason. We are very luck if we can catch it in the beginning before it causes us destruction. Thanks for this marvelous writing.
August 9th, 2017 16:08
malubotelho said:
Dear Fay, you so well describe what we most of the time don\'t recognize and let it take over us. Is that thing that sometimes bother us so much and for no specific reason. We are very luck if we can catch it in the beginning before it causes us destruction. Thanks for this marvelous writing.
August 9th, 2017 16:08
Undiluted.
Louis Gibbs said:
The mind can become a beast to be mastered. So well described in this exquisite rendition, Fay! Nothing like \"Hours of relentless quiet\" to sort things out, is there.
August 9th, 2017 05:16
Louis Gibbs said:
The mind can become a beast to be mastered. So well described in this exquisite rendition, Fay! Nothing like \"Hours of relentless quiet\" to sort things out, is there.
August 9th, 2017 05:16
After Today.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Fay! Again, inspiration! I, for the first time in my life, have real bluebirds that are nesting by my home! Not the mean Bluejay, but real, true Bluebirds!!!
August 8th, 2017 11:46
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Fay! Again, inspiration! I, for the first time in my life, have real bluebirds that are nesting by my home! Not the mean Bluejay, but real, true Bluebirds!!!
August 8th, 2017 11:46
So Much.
malubotelho said:
Much appreciated another beauty from you Fay. Your mind is a beautiful garden where flourishes beautiful poetry.
August 8th, 2017 08:46
malubotelho said:
Much appreciated another beauty from you Fay. Your mind is a beautiful garden where flourishes beautiful poetry.
August 8th, 2017 08:46
So Much.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully structured, lovely poem, Fay! I love and admire the way you have shaped it. So satisfying to the eye, Kudos on this one!
August 8th, 2017 08:14
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully structured, lovely poem, Fay! I love and admire the way you have shaped it. So satisfying to the eye, Kudos on this one!
August 8th, 2017 08:14
So Much.
WriteBeLight said:
I love flowers, especially Sunflowers. Very bright, fresh and cheery work Fay!
August 8th, 2017 08:00
WriteBeLight said:
I love flowers, especially Sunflowers. Very bright, fresh and cheery work Fay!
August 8th, 2017 08:00
So Much.
Michael Edwards said:
Indeed there is so much beauty around us - well reflected in this poem of delight.
August 8th, 2017 05:12
Michael Edwards said:
Indeed there is so much beauty around us - well reflected in this poem of delight.
August 8th, 2017 05:12
So Much.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Poem FAY ~ for a Tuesday morning ! In an English Country Garden ~ We are nearer God\'s Heart than anywhere else on Earth. Love all the Beautiful County Gardens in the English S W Country ~ You are blest with SUN (and RAIN !) so everything in the S W English Country Garden is lovely ! Love the visual and the lovely quote ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 04:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Poem FAY ~ for a Tuesday morning ! In an English Country Garden ~ We are nearer God\'s Heart than anywhere else on Earth. Love all the Beautiful County Gardens in the English S W Country ~ You are blest with SUN (and RAIN !) so everything in the S W English Country Garden is lovely ! Love the visual and the lovely quote ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 04:23
Hats Off.
whisperingquill said:
Wow, it was like I was walking with you
So descriptive excellent weaving
August 7th, 2017 20:10
whisperingquill said:
Wow, it was like I was walking with you
So descriptive excellent weaving
August 7th, 2017 20:10
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