Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Ticking Away.
Louis Gibbs said:
The transition from dream-world to this world is momentarily confusing to me. It is like trying to remember a role I have undertaken, what scene it is, and what lines I should know as I step on stage. My belief that This is the dream world is reinforced. Your fine poem explores the transition very well, Fay!
September 3rd, 2017 10:40
Louis Gibbs said:
The transition from dream-world to this world is momentarily confusing to me. It is like trying to remember a role I have undertaken, what scene it is, and what lines I should know as I step on stage. My belief that This is the dream world is reinforced. Your fine poem explores the transition very well, Fay!
September 3rd, 2017 10:40
Ticking Away.
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew September was that eloquent! All that, and before we\'ve even got out of bed. Lovely write Fay.
September 3rd, 2017 08:45
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew September was that eloquent! All that, and before we\'ve even got out of bed. Lovely write Fay.
September 3rd, 2017 08:45
Ticking Away.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
My alarm clock is built within me, for as long as I can remember I have been up about 6.00am and if I don\'t wake until 6.30 I feel that half the day has gone.
September 3rd, 2017 06:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
My alarm clock is built within me, for as long as I can remember I have been up about 6.00am and if I don\'t wake until 6.30 I feel that half the day has gone.
September 3rd, 2017 06:27
Ticking Away.
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful poem Fay. You make rising to the surface so elegant. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 04:14
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful poem Fay. You make rising to the surface so elegant. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 04:14
Lost.
malubotelho said:
This is stunning beautiful Fay. You are not less than a fantastic writer and your poetry can not be better. Thanks for this beauty. I felt myself like a river. Lovely reading.
September 2nd, 2017 14:47
malubotelho said:
This is stunning beautiful Fay. You are not less than a fantastic writer and your poetry can not be better. Thanks for this beauty. I felt myself like a river. Lovely reading.
September 2nd, 2017 14:47
Lost.
FredPeyer said:
While the photo is certainly beautiful, your poem doesn\'t need it. It is so visual, so beautifully written, my imagination went into overdrive!
Thank you Fay, definitely a favorite!
September 2nd, 2017 13:19
FredPeyer said:
While the photo is certainly beautiful, your poem doesn\'t need it. It is so visual, so beautifully written, my imagination went into overdrive!
Thank you Fay, definitely a favorite!
September 2nd, 2017 13:19
Lost.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In my Youth i spent many years Fell Walking in Snowdonia and The English Lake District. I encountered many many BROOKS in my travels ~ some just inches wide ~ at source ~ others only forded with trepidation ! Loved the photo and the first verse ~ BUT ~ The shape and pace and nostalgia of verse 2 ~ made me weep in humble recollection ~ AMEN ! Love you FAY for always taking us a verse further with your elegant Odes ! Yours as ever ~ in appreciation ~ BRIAN
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In my Youth i spent many years Fell Walking in Snowdonia and The English Lake District. I encountered many many BROOKS in my travels ~ some just inches wide ~ at source ~ others only forded with trepidation ! Loved the photo and the first verse ~ BUT ~ The shape and pace and nostalgia of verse 2 ~ made me weep in humble recollection ~ AMEN ! Love you FAY for always taking us a verse further with your elegant Odes ! Yours as ever ~ in appreciation ~ BRIAN
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
Lost.
Louis Gibbs said:
Life\'s journey ... from the innocence and exploration of childhood, through the formational years of adolescence, to the complete indoctrination of adulthood ... and what is lost in the process. Beautifully expressed, and a favorite, Fay!
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Life\'s journey ... from the innocence and exploration of childhood, through the formational years of adolescence, to the complete indoctrination of adulthood ... and what is lost in the process. Beautifully expressed, and a favorite, Fay!
September 2nd, 2017 09:05
Lost.
dusk arising said:
This is so beautiful faye. Just so uplifting. I love your plain everyday english writing like this (hope you dont mind me calling it that) compared to your metaphor poetry where i stray off the path. But this piece is outstanding - so very good. It will take pride of place at the top of my favourites.
September 2nd, 2017 05:40
dusk arising said:
This is so beautiful faye. Just so uplifting. I love your plain everyday english writing like this (hope you dont mind me calling it that) compared to your metaphor poetry where i stray off the path. But this piece is outstanding - so very good. It will take pride of place at the top of my favourites.
September 2nd, 2017 05:40
Lost.
Michael Edwards said:
I am so jealous - this is just the sort of poem I like to write - brilliant as always Fay.
September 2nd, 2017 04:44
Michael Edwards said:
I am so jealous - this is just the sort of poem I like to write - brilliant as always Fay.
September 2nd, 2017 04:44
Year\'s Yield.
Heather T said:
Be-whiskering! That\'s a wonderment in itself. I\'m a sucker for the peerless language in all of your works.
September 1st, 2017 21:39
Heather T said:
Be-whiskering! That\'s a wonderment in itself. I\'m a sucker for the peerless language in all of your works.
September 1st, 2017 21:39
Year\'s Yield.
sue.evans said:
Beautiful language and paints an age of by gone years - lovely 😊
September 1st, 2017 13:23
sue.evans said:
Beautiful language and paints an age of by gone years - lovely 😊
September 1st, 2017 13:23
Year\'s Yield.
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Fay for a beautiful poem. I had a garden, flowers, and apple trees when living in Montreal.
Now, while we do have seasons, there is not much difference between them. Sometimes I miss the incredible colors of the maple trees in fall.
September 1st, 2017 12:28
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Fay for a beautiful poem. I had a garden, flowers, and apple trees when living in Montreal.
Now, while we do have seasons, there is not much difference between them. Sometimes I miss the incredible colors of the maple trees in fall.
September 1st, 2017 12:28
Year\'s Yield.
Sefrin said:
This is absolutely beautiful, Fay! I have much esteem for you and your work.
September 1st, 2017 10:01
Sefrin said:
This is absolutely beautiful, Fay! I have much esteem for you and your work.
September 1st, 2017 10:01
Year\'s Yield.
Michael Edwards said:
I love the garden - but it needs continual work to keep it in shape - current work - trimming back ivy. You can\'t beat a good cottage garden , Great write Fay
September 1st, 2017 09:16
Michael Edwards said:
I love the garden - but it needs continual work to keep it in shape - current work - trimming back ivy. You can\'t beat a good cottage garden , Great write Fay
September 1st, 2017 09:16
Year\'s Yield.
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing like a garden to gauge the seasons for us. Enjoyed this fine write, Fay.
September 1st, 2017 05:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing like a garden to gauge the seasons for us. Enjoyed this fine write, Fay.
September 1st, 2017 05:45
Year\'s Yield.
Frank Prem said:
Into the new season with you Fay! It\'s my turn for green and growing times.
September 1st, 2017 05:22
Frank Prem said:
Into the new season with you Fay! It\'s my turn for green and growing times.
September 1st, 2017 05:22
Changes.
poetboy123 said:
Wow! Incredible imagery painting a wondrous picture!
August 31st, 2017 09:34
poetboy123 said:
Wow! Incredible imagery painting a wondrous picture!
August 31st, 2017 09:34
Changes.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you just put beautiful words to the kind of sunsets we are privileged to see here.
August 31st, 2017 04:05
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you just put beautiful words to the kind of sunsets we are privileged to see here.
August 31st, 2017 04:05
Frenzy.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Blackbirds are wonderfu to watch and be with.
August 31st, 2017 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Blackbirds are wonderfu to watch and be with.
August 31st, 2017 01:38
Changes.
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love the words you use. Just right !!!! Beautifully written
August 31st, 2017 01:27
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love the words you use. Just right !!!! Beautifully written
August 31st, 2017 01:27
Changes.
Michael Edwards said:
\'And dusts her lunar flakes\' - brilliant phrases in this super work.
August 31st, 2017 01:13
Michael Edwards said:
\'And dusts her lunar flakes\' - brilliant phrases in this super work.
August 31st, 2017 01:13
Frenzy.
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Faye. And the last line has me giggling, i never would have thought of using diligence to describe the work of mother nature. The more i think about it, especially human nature, that word is tickling me silly. An extremely enjoyable read but slap
me because for all the wrong reasons.
August 30th, 2017 17:20
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Faye. And the last line has me giggling, i never would have thought of using diligence to describe the work of mother nature. The more i think about it, especially human nature, that word is tickling me silly. An extremely enjoyable read but slap
me because for all the wrong reasons.
August 30th, 2017 17:20
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