Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Urges
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your beautifully executed poem has sprinted me to focus on ‘Spring’s attractions’ and abandon Winter’s blues.
Thank you for sharing your ever magical pen. 🤗
Laura🌻
March 23rd, 2022 15:28
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your beautifully executed poem has sprinted me to focus on ‘Spring’s attractions’ and abandon Winter’s blues.
Thank you for sharing your ever magical pen. 🤗
Laura🌻
March 23rd, 2022 15:28
Urges
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant write in the style that only you have mastered. As for urges - I\'m afraid my body and my mind are no longer in sync.
March 23rd, 2022 13:57
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant write in the style that only you have mastered. As for urges - I\'m afraid my body and my mind are no longer in sync.
March 23rd, 2022 13:57
Urges
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
The warmest Spring for 180 years, one paper says. I remember the one in 1842 so well.... I was there in person, being very old! lol.
March 23rd, 2022 11:20
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
The warmest Spring for 180 years, one paper says. I remember the one in 1842 so well.... I was there in person, being very old! lol.
March 23rd, 2022 11:20
Urges
Accidental Poet said:
What better way to bid Adieu to Winter than with poetic words from Fay\'s wisdom? 🌹
March 23rd, 2022 07:41
Accidental Poet said:
What better way to bid Adieu to Winter than with poetic words from Fay\'s wisdom? 🌹
March 23rd, 2022 07:41
Urges
Doggerel Dave said:
You find some outstandingly beautiful images to go with your rich script, Fay.
Autumn here; this can be an experience with its own delights..................... Nah - still bloody raining.....
March 23rd, 2022 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
You find some outstandingly beautiful images to go with your rich script, Fay.
Autumn here; this can be an experience with its own delights..................... Nah - still bloody raining.....
March 23rd, 2022 07:14
Unfolding
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Well, the blossom tree in our front garden (there\'s not that many in our road - aww) buds about the first day of Spring. Some years it\'s up to two weeks later.
Let\'s hope it stays Spring-like, or reasonably so!
March 22nd, 2022 14:30
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Well, the blossom tree in our front garden (there\'s not that many in our road - aww) buds about the first day of Spring. Some years it\'s up to two weeks later.
Let\'s hope it stays Spring-like, or reasonably so!
March 22nd, 2022 14:30
Unfolding
Neville said:
You just painted my day & perfectly dear Fay .............. it truly feels like spring is upon us ... or prolet as we say in the starra planina mountains .. x
March 22nd, 2022 11:14
Neville said:
You just painted my day & perfectly dear Fay .............. it truly feels like spring is upon us ... or prolet as we say in the starra planina mountains .. x
March 22nd, 2022 11:14
Unfolding
L. B. Mek said:
another delectable Nature poem
from you, dear Fay
our beloved Blighty is sandwiched
in mother Nature\'s beauty, grinning
from sky, to blossoming tree...!
hail our Devine of Spring
welcome, our season
of galvanising respite
how timely, your warmth
soothes
our world weary heart\'s
March 22nd, 2022 08:06
L. B. Mek said:
another delectable Nature poem
from you, dear Fay
our beloved Blighty is sandwiched
in mother Nature\'s beauty, grinning
from sky, to blossoming tree...!
hail our Devine of Spring
welcome, our season
of galvanising respite
how timely, your warmth
soothes
our world weary heart\'s
March 22nd, 2022 08:06
Unfolding
dusk arising said:
By \'eck Fay, tha knows me too well, you\'ve described me to a T here \"A heap of frosty haired weed left by the high tide\".
What a lovely welcome reminder that spring has arrived with it\'s smile across the country. I shall find a place to walk among the bluebells and sit beneath the blossoms though I haven\'t been out to see any daffodils yet. I\'m hiding away from covid nasties. My family have it, Goldfinch and Teddy both have it.
Your words arrive like a gift vision of all the springtime pleasures I know are beyond my door when i dare to venture out.
March 22nd, 2022 07:56
dusk arising said:
By \'eck Fay, tha knows me too well, you\'ve described me to a T here \"A heap of frosty haired weed left by the high tide\".
What a lovely welcome reminder that spring has arrived with it\'s smile across the country. I shall find a place to walk among the bluebells and sit beneath the blossoms though I haven\'t been out to see any daffodils yet. I\'m hiding away from covid nasties. My family have it, Goldfinch and Teddy both have it.
Your words arrive like a gift vision of all the springtime pleasures I know are beyond my door when i dare to venture out.
March 22nd, 2022 07:56
Unfolding
dean langmuir said:
Spring is always welcome in Canada,we\'ve just had more snow,but your poem is just around the corner,glistening curls of unfolding life,awesome line,thanks,take care
March 22nd, 2022 07:31
dean langmuir said:
Spring is always welcome in Canada,we\'ve just had more snow,but your poem is just around the corner,glistening curls of unfolding life,awesome line,thanks,take care
March 22nd, 2022 07:31
You Are
Bella Shepard said:
\"Go gentle today\" is a beautiful mantra, one we should repeat often. Thank you for this very insightful poem!
March 18th, 2022 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
\"Go gentle today\" is a beautiful mantra, one we should repeat often. Thank you for this very insightful poem!
March 18th, 2022 12:34
Young Emotion
SureshG said:
YOUNG EMOTIONS, poetically scribed and to reminisce, thank you dear Fay.
First time the HEART PALPITATED and the BRAIN FROZE
March 18th, 2022 09:19
SureshG said:
YOUNG EMOTIONS, poetically scribed and to reminisce, thank you dear Fay.
First time the HEART PALPITATED and the BRAIN FROZE
March 18th, 2022 09:19
Young Emotion
Neville said:
Cor blimey, here you just perfectly nailed both happiness & and young love Fay .. aye lass, poemed to perfection................................ x
March 18th, 2022 07:58
Neville said:
Cor blimey, here you just perfectly nailed both happiness & and young love Fay .. aye lass, poemed to perfection................................ x
March 18th, 2022 07:58
Young Emotion
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, that happiness comes from so many different places.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, that happiness comes from so many different places.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:46
You Are
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll heed your wisdom, dear Fay
and savour these words
though it rained yesterday
and will I\'m sure, likely rain
at some point, today
I will, treasure
those sunshine rays, between
the passing of each brooding cloud
and cherish, this gift of life
rather than lament, all that\'s wrongness
with my world,
at least
Today
I will, since
you reminded me to
with the wise gaiety, imbued
in the inked vitality
of your, empowering Poetry!
\'go gentle\': indeed...
March 17th, 2022 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll heed your wisdom, dear Fay
and savour these words
though it rained yesterday
and will I\'m sure, likely rain
at some point, today
I will, treasure
those sunshine rays, between
the passing of each brooding cloud
and cherish, this gift of life
rather than lament, all that\'s wrongness
with my world,
at least
Today
I will, since
you reminded me to
with the wise gaiety, imbued
in the inked vitality
of your, empowering Poetry!
\'go gentle\': indeed...
March 17th, 2022 04:11
You Are
Neville said:
Hey Fay ... what a cracking sentiment you have penned, poemed & posted today .... I\'m with the old dog downstairs, I think these words should be stamped inside all of your Christmas next cards, at least ................... Neville x
March 17th, 2022 02:01
Neville said:
Hey Fay ... what a cracking sentiment you have penned, poemed & posted today .... I\'m with the old dog downstairs, I think these words should be stamped inside all of your Christmas next cards, at least ................... Neville x
March 17th, 2022 02:01
You Are
Doggerel Dave said:
I haven\'t had much experience Fay, but I will give it a try - how could I not with a message of such simplicity and elegance?
You should put that on a card and send to all your friends.....
March 16th, 2022 19:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I haven\'t had much experience Fay, but I will give it a try - how could I not with a message of such simplicity and elegance?
You should put that on a card and send to all your friends.....
March 16th, 2022 19:17
Restorations
Goldfinch60 said:
Those time of silence in our lives are so important Fay.
Andy
March 14th, 2022 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those time of silence in our lives are so important Fay.
Andy
March 14th, 2022 02:18
Restorations
myself and me said:
The beautiful, peaceful moment of the day to enjoy.
March 13th, 2022 20:09
myself and me said:
The beautiful, peaceful moment of the day to enjoy.
March 13th, 2022 20:09
Restorations
Accidental Poet said:
With each new dawn, a new gift. Thanks Fay for shining your light. 😊
March 13th, 2022 10:01
Accidental Poet said:
With each new dawn, a new gift. Thanks Fay for shining your light. 😊
March 13th, 2022 10:01
Restorations
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
And now my next poem: \'There exists a silence.... far away from my singing\'. It\'s in Cuckoo Land!\' heehee.
March 13th, 2022 09:09
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
And now my next poem: \'There exists a silence.... far away from my singing\'. It\'s in Cuckoo Land!\' heehee.
March 13th, 2022 09:09
Restorations
Neville said:
perfectly postulated & wrapped in a poem of profound beauty .......... N x
March 13th, 2022 07:34
Neville said:
perfectly postulated & wrapped in a poem of profound beauty .......... N x
March 13th, 2022 07:34
Saline Songs
myself and me said:
A song filled with power, love and beauty. Wonderful as always.
March 12th, 2022 12:47
myself and me said:
A song filled with power, love and beauty. Wonderful as always.
March 12th, 2022 12:47
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