Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
We Deserve It.
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, I myself will be investing in a new pair of running shoes, cos that old pair are too slow.
March 3rd, 2022 05:48
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, I myself will be investing in a new pair of running shoes, cos that old pair are too slow.
March 3rd, 2022 05:48
Timed
Neville said:
poetry personified if you dont mind me saying .. or as we say round here Gert lush ma\'am ................ Neville x
March 2nd, 2022 09:09
Neville said:
poetry personified if you dont mind me saying .. or as we say round here Gert lush ma\'am ................ Neville x
March 2nd, 2022 09:09
Attack
Goldfinch60 said:
I so enjoy watching raptors, very elegant birds Fay and you words surely do them justice.
Andy
March 2nd, 2022 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I so enjoy watching raptors, very elegant birds Fay and you words surely do them justice.
Andy
March 2nd, 2022 01:23
Attack
Rocky Lagou said:
What a magnificent display Fay! This hawk feels so real and alive! I also enjoy the creative incorporation of text symbols to convey the message. Hope your wrist gets better! Have a great day!
March 1st, 2022 10:20
Rocky Lagou said:
What a magnificent display Fay! This hawk feels so real and alive! I also enjoy the creative incorporation of text symbols to convey the message. Hope your wrist gets better! Have a great day!
March 1st, 2022 10:20
Attack
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, both you and Neville
taking damage
someone, must be trying to take out
the very best of MPS
before they starts their poetic warmongering...
lol
(hope you get well soon, dear Fay)
and thank you, I too remember this read
especially these wondrous lines:
\'snatching bait
in what seems frenzy
quickly shoots tree-ward
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
before
dark blackens sky
to ebony crystal.
As sinks
the cherry-plum sun
I admit
that for chicks
to exist
hunger has to be sated\'
March 1st, 2022 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, both you and Neville
taking damage
someone, must be trying to take out
the very best of MPS
before they starts their poetic warmongering...
lol
(hope you get well soon, dear Fay)
and thank you, I too remember this read
especially these wondrous lines:
\'snatching bait
in what seems frenzy
quickly shoots tree-ward
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
before
dark blackens sky
to ebony crystal.
As sinks
the cherry-plum sun
I admit
that for chicks
to exist
hunger has to be sated\'
March 1st, 2022 05:48
Attack
Doggerel Dave said:
I can feel the ambivalence Fay, in your perfectly calibrated piece (which I\'ve not read before). Nature in the raw, and that\'s the way it goes...
I hope you heal fast.
March 1st, 2022 05:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I can feel the ambivalence Fay, in your perfectly calibrated piece (which I\'ve not read before). Nature in the raw, and that\'s the way it goes...
I hope you heal fast.
March 1st, 2022 05:01
Attack
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a raptor, either for speed, or beauty ....................... made me wanna float up yonder with them windhovers leeward ........ and I do remember this un well Fay ... x
March 1st, 2022 04:39
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a raptor, either for speed, or beauty ....................... made me wanna float up yonder with them windhovers leeward ........ and I do remember this un well Fay ... x
March 1st, 2022 04:39
Where Went Love ?
Jane Clemons said:
Spring love, passionate love, love nearing the end resulting in lost love. Brilliant ! With your words, you were able to make my heart sad...in a good way. Thank you
February 24th, 2022 23:29
Jane Clemons said:
Spring love, passionate love, love nearing the end resulting in lost love. Brilliant ! With your words, you were able to make my heart sad...in a good way. Thank you
February 24th, 2022 23:29
Being Alive
Jane Clemons said:
This is lovely. The nearer we come to the end of our lives....the greater the appreciation of it ! You said it so well. I am just becoming familiar with your
writing and admire you so much !
February 24th, 2022 23:16
Jane Clemons said:
This is lovely. The nearer we come to the end of our lives....the greater the appreciation of it ! You said it so well. I am just becoming familiar with your
writing and admire you so much !
February 24th, 2022 23:16
Being Alive
Neville said:
Grab every moment with both hands & hold on tightly ............................ outstanding in dear friend ........Neville x
February 24th, 2022 16:17
Neville said:
Grab every moment with both hands & hold on tightly ............................ outstanding in dear friend ........Neville x
February 24th, 2022 16:17
Being Alive
spilleronsheet said:
You captured the essence so well dear Fay
So thankful for these lines of gratitude
And reading it makes me feel lucky
The thought I had been missing
It tells me, spring back and attack on your work
“You can do”
Since your alive
Thanks a lot dear Fay
February 23rd, 2022 15:56
spilleronsheet said:
You captured the essence so well dear Fay
So thankful for these lines of gratitude
And reading it makes me feel lucky
The thought I had been missing
It tells me, spring back and attack on your work
“You can do”
Since your alive
Thanks a lot dear Fay
February 23rd, 2022 15:56
Being Alive
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Fay! I love this message! Take in all that life can provide and live it to the fullest! 💖💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:49
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Fay! I love this message! Take in all that life can provide and live it to the fullest! 💖💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:49
Being Alive
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay yes yes yes..... So very true in my life. I feel every word of your poem in my heart and bones. And now i want to go outdoors and soak it all up after two years of hiding away in fear of this pandemic. (I shall of course be taking precautions not to become a victim of it)
A must for my favourites.
February 23rd, 2022 09:54
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay yes yes yes..... So very true in my life. I feel every word of your poem in my heart and bones. And now i want to go outdoors and soak it all up after two years of hiding away in fear of this pandemic. (I shall of course be taking precautions not to become a victim of it)
A must for my favourites.
February 23rd, 2022 09:54
Being Alive
Dove said:
Beautiful, I’m a nature lover too Opacarophile & Selenophile
February 23rd, 2022 09:38
Dove said:
Beautiful, I’m a nature lover too Opacarophile & Selenophile
February 23rd, 2022 09:38
Being Alive
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
My first read of the day. The title of your poem invited me to read your beautifully scripted words. ‘Being Alive’ is a gift…a gift not to be taken for granted because we don’t know what’s in store for us even within the next minute. So let’s appreciate and enjoy every breath we take…and right now I’m enjoying perusing through today’s postings.
Thank you for sharing your pen. Your poems are always a delight to read.🤗
Laura🌻
February 23rd, 2022 09:06
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
My first read of the day. The title of your poem invited me to read your beautifully scripted words. ‘Being Alive’ is a gift…a gift not to be taken for granted because we don’t know what’s in store for us even within the next minute. So let’s appreciate and enjoy every breath we take…and right now I’m enjoying perusing through today’s postings.
Thank you for sharing your pen. Your poems are always a delight to read.🤗
Laura🌻
February 23rd, 2022 09:06
Being Alive
Rozina said:
Very true. As I age I appreciate more and more my surroundings, what I took for granted before. You’ve hit the nail on the head, so poetically.
February 23rd, 2022 08:39
Rozina said:
Very true. As I age I appreciate more and more my surroundings, what I took for granted before. You’ve hit the nail on the head, so poetically.
February 23rd, 2022 08:39
Being Alive
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully said. You\'ve captured that rush of life that comes to those of us who perhaps find our years dwindling. I loved this poem!
February 23rd, 2022 07:17
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully said. You\'ve captured that rush of life that comes to those of us who perhaps find our years dwindling. I loved this poem!
February 23rd, 2022 07:17
Armed Rules
Neville said:
I think by now you know my feelings, thoughts and attitude to war .. This is wholly brilliant Fay .. I couldn\'t agree more ... So there you are .. Cult part formed ... maybe x
February 23rd, 2022 05:05
Neville said:
I think by now you know my feelings, thoughts and attitude to war .. This is wholly brilliant Fay .. I couldn\'t agree more ... So there you are .. Cult part formed ... maybe x
February 23rd, 2022 05:05
Where Went Love ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Fay, so sad that all that love was lost.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Fay, so sad that all that love was lost.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:45
Where Went Love ?
Rozina said:
I love reading these lovely words of yours. Thank you.
February 22nd, 2022 21:07
Rozina said:
I love reading these lovely words of yours. Thank you.
February 22nd, 2022 21:07
Where Went Love ?
Rocky Lagou said:
You worded this to a T. Such a strong emotion expressed so beautifully. Bravo! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:29
Rocky Lagou said:
You worded this to a T. Such a strong emotion expressed so beautifully. Bravo! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:29
Where Went Love ?
Dove said:
Lol what a visual, skinny dipping and then running ... Oh love is just as fleeting!
Beautiful to read!
February 22nd, 2022 11:29
Dove said:
Lol what a visual, skinny dipping and then running ... Oh love is just as fleeting!
Beautiful to read!
February 22nd, 2022 11:29
Where Went Love ?
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, Fay! It delights and does not disappoint in remembrances of days gone past.
February 22nd, 2022 10:54
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, Fay! It delights and does not disappoint in remembrances of days gone past.
February 22nd, 2022 10:54
Where Went Love ?
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Spring comes round again, but I dread the skinny dipping bit. It makes me swoon! lol.
Don\'t be such a snowflake, says Fido. heehee.
February 22nd, 2022 09:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Spring comes round again, but I dread the skinny dipping bit. It makes me swoon! lol.
Don\'t be such a snowflake, says Fido. heehee.
February 22nd, 2022 09:43
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