Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Saline Songs
Doggerel Dave said:
The rhythmic crash and flow of the waves and the tang of the salt all there, Fay.
That\'s St Michael\'s Mount in the picture , isn\'t it? Might have past you by very close, many moons ago.
March 12th, 2022 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
The rhythmic crash and flow of the waves and the tang of the salt all there, Fay.
That\'s St Michael\'s Mount in the picture , isn\'t it? Might have past you by very close, many moons ago.
March 12th, 2022 07:38
Saline Songs
Neville said:
one could very easily drown in these words ........................................... and salt of course is my only remaining addiction .................................... x
March 12th, 2022 05:15
Neville said:
one could very easily drown in these words ........................................... and salt of course is my only remaining addiction .................................... x
March 12th, 2022 05:15
Entrancement
SureshG said:
It’s so rare that a majestic scene can be phrased in even more majestic words - your humbled reader
March 11th, 2022 11:11
SureshG said:
It’s so rare that a majestic scene can be phrased in even more majestic words - your humbled reader
March 11th, 2022 11:11
Entrancement
Neville said:
I doubt if these words of yours could ever be bettered dear lady .. they are the perfect accompaniment to the image you have chosen to head this, their very own page ............ Neville x
March 11th, 2022 08:31
Neville said:
I doubt if these words of yours could ever be bettered dear lady .. they are the perfect accompaniment to the image you have chosen to head this, their very own page ............ Neville x
March 11th, 2022 08:31
Entrancement
rrodriguez said:
I gasp too seeing the burnt orange horizon from 30,000 plus feet as the sun bids adieu. Mind you, your last stanza caught me and entranced me in its poetic limpidity. Excellent write! There\'s so much to digest here. The description is brilliant!
March 11th, 2022 08:07
rrodriguez said:
I gasp too seeing the burnt orange horizon from 30,000 plus feet as the sun bids adieu. Mind you, your last stanza caught me and entranced me in its poetic limpidity. Excellent write! There\'s so much to digest here. The description is brilliant!
March 11th, 2022 08:07
Entrancement
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(I gasp
at the majestic serenity, spell
bestowed
in your last stanza, dear Fay)
March 11th, 2022 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(I gasp
at the majestic serenity, spell
bestowed
in your last stanza, dear Fay)
March 11th, 2022 06:08
The Simple
Rozina said:
Yes, simplicity, authenticity, that should be our way. Nice write.
March 10th, 2022 21:05
Rozina said:
Yes, simplicity, authenticity, that should be our way. Nice write.
March 10th, 2022 21:05
The Simple
Neville said:
beautiful words etched upon a skewed canvass ..................... x
March 10th, 2022 14:01
Neville said:
beautiful words etched upon a skewed canvass ..................... x
March 10th, 2022 14:01
The Simple
dusk arising said:
I wonder if western civilisation will find more value in the \'stuff\' we have taken for granted when it becomes more expensive as we head into an inflation spiral. Nay, more expensive will not become more prescious for we ever greed for more.
Thought provoking poetry today Fay.
March 10th, 2022 12:14
dusk arising said:
I wonder if western civilisation will find more value in the \'stuff\' we have taken for granted when it becomes more expensive as we head into an inflation spiral. Nay, more expensive will not become more prescious for we ever greed for more.
Thought provoking poetry today Fay.
March 10th, 2022 12:14
Be To Me
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! This was truly such a heartfelt composition of words you conveyed exquisitely. Give yourself a pat on the back, you deserve it!
March 10th, 2022 11:55
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! This was truly such a heartfelt composition of words you conveyed exquisitely. Give yourself a pat on the back, you deserve it!
March 10th, 2022 11:55
Be To Me
Rozina said:
Yes, I agree with your sentiments written so elegantly as always.
March 9th, 2022 20:51
Rozina said:
Yes, I agree with your sentiments written so elegantly as always.
March 9th, 2022 20:51
Be To Me
spilleronsheet said:
A wishful desire of “Be to Me” arouse as I went through those lines
And suddenly I realised so many wishes still hang on the cliffs of my life
Very well inked dear Fay
March 9th, 2022 14:35
spilleronsheet said:
A wishful desire of “Be to Me” arouse as I went through those lines
And suddenly I realised so many wishes still hang on the cliffs of my life
Very well inked dear Fay
March 9th, 2022 14:35
Be To Me
dusk arising said:
Be my rock, the one who is my always. Be the end of doubt and the pleasure of each dawn.
Wow you struck a chord in me today. Me, the one who has given up, decided henceforth is a path to be taken alone for my sanity\'s sake. But look what i just wrote. Speaks of a desire put aside. Yep, this one landed on me like a ton of bricks. Beautifully written Fay. Well done and thank you.
Into my favourites of course.
March 9th, 2022 09:26
dusk arising said:
Be my rock, the one who is my always. Be the end of doubt and the pleasure of each dawn.
Wow you struck a chord in me today. Me, the one who has given up, decided henceforth is a path to be taken alone for my sanity\'s sake. But look what i just wrote. Speaks of a desire put aside. Yep, this one landed on me like a ton of bricks. Beautifully written Fay. Well done and thank you.
Into my favourites of course.
March 9th, 2022 09:26
Be To Me
Neville said:
... splendiferous aint a word I have ever used before .. in fact, I\'m not sure it is a recognised word at all, but I have no doubt the lady with the golden nibs shall get my drift ... x
March 9th, 2022 08:26
Neville said:
... splendiferous aint a word I have ever used before .. in fact, I\'m not sure it is a recognised word at all, but I have no doubt the lady with the golden nibs shall get my drift ... x
March 9th, 2022 08:26
Be To Me
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Aww, why \'they\' say to me: \'Be to me one who never sings\'?! It\'s not the words, it\'s me out of tune. heehee.
March 9th, 2022 06:53
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Aww, why \'they\' say to me: \'Be to me one who never sings\'?! It\'s not the words, it\'s me out of tune. heehee.
March 9th, 2022 06:53
I Would
Doggerel Dave said:
I never knew you cared...
Such rich language, Fay - so rich , I don\'t think I\'ll need lunch!
Beauteous - and that\'s as far as I can go in an attempt to emulate your tone.
You took me to fabled places that once inhabited a corner of my imagination. Enjoyed X 3, or 4, or......
March 8th, 2022 19:02
Doggerel Dave said:
I never knew you cared...
Such rich language, Fay - so rich , I don\'t think I\'ll need lunch!
Beauteous - and that\'s as far as I can go in an attempt to emulate your tone.
You took me to fabled places that once inhabited a corner of my imagination. Enjoyed X 3, or 4, or......
March 8th, 2022 19:02
I Would
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
You are an awesome Poetess. I love the visual you chose to accompany your amazing poem. I think you’ve used that visual before. I liked more and more each time I see it. Looking at it, I envision you sitting there writing your poems.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 8th, 2022 16:49
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
You are an awesome Poetess. I love the visual you chose to accompany your amazing poem. I think you’ve used that visual before. I liked more and more each time I see it. Looking at it, I envision you sitting there writing your poems.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 8th, 2022 16:49
I Would
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what an impassioned write! I wish I were the recipient of such fervent words being sent! This is really genuine and beautiful!
March 8th, 2022 13:37
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what an impassioned write! I wish I were the recipient of such fervent words being sent! This is really genuine and beautiful!
March 8th, 2022 13:37
I Would
dusk arising said:
And if thee were my nurse dear poet i\'m sure thine holding of my pulsing wrist should cause a race to alarm thy fine countenance and thine hastening to quell my sudden flush of temperature. Such that my noble doctor may chide you for your effect upon me until such time as in convalescence convivial chatter may proceed your bearing witness to how fine a rose you have brought to my cheeks.
March 8th, 2022 13:17
dusk arising said:
And if thee were my nurse dear poet i\'m sure thine holding of my pulsing wrist should cause a race to alarm thy fine countenance and thine hastening to quell my sudden flush of temperature. Such that my noble doctor may chide you for your effect upon me until such time as in convalescence convivial chatter may proceed your bearing witness to how fine a rose you have brought to my cheeks.
March 8th, 2022 13:17
I Would
Neville said:
Having now visited this page on several occasions, I must now concede that any words I might subsequently bestow, would almost certainly pale beside the wondrousness of these you have so meticulously framed within the confines of a poem .. I bow humbly & deep in awe of your pen .. and award you top marks and ten out of ten ........................ Yes, tis that goodly good .................. Neville x
March 8th, 2022 12:53
Neville said:
Having now visited this page on several occasions, I must now concede that any words I might subsequently bestow, would almost certainly pale beside the wondrousness of these you have so meticulously framed within the confines of a poem .. I bow humbly & deep in awe of your pen .. and award you top marks and ten out of ten ........................ Yes, tis that goodly good .................. Neville x
March 8th, 2022 12:53
I Would
orchidee said:
I never knew that you would do so much! Well, I know know, from this good write. lol.
March 8th, 2022 11:32
orchidee said:
I never knew that you would do so much! Well, I know know, from this good write. lol.
March 8th, 2022 11:32
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