Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Shall and Because
flyingfish said:
Many memorable phrases to enjoy =>
\"Because cinders get cold when unbellowed.\" There\'s a lot there!
July 13th, 2021 12:50
flyingfish said:
Many memorable phrases to enjoy =>
\"Because cinders get cold when unbellowed.\" There\'s a lot there!
July 13th, 2021 12:50
Shall and Because
SureshG said:
You have the mastery of using the features of a revered creature and poetize it to reflect the emotions of another.
July 13th, 2021 12:37
SureshG said:
You have the mastery of using the features of a revered creature and poetize it to reflect the emotions of another.
July 13th, 2021 12:37
Shall and Because
L. B. Mek said:
\'Because each granite-necked, minute
strangles past bliss
shall grief\'s set vessel, so anchored
reach, love\'s fair coastline no more ?
Shall a tear-drenched spark
within dark\'s loss
not fire venturesome\'s calling ?\'
(I just wanted to unravel and point out
that magic flow, you hide - knowingly
so we lesser scribblers, can get a glimpse
of your Poetry\'s
unquestionable brilliance, dear Fay)
A great write!
July 13th, 2021 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'Because each granite-necked, minute
strangles past bliss
shall grief\'s set vessel, so anchored
reach, love\'s fair coastline no more ?
Shall a tear-drenched spark
within dark\'s loss
not fire venturesome\'s calling ?\'
(I just wanted to unravel and point out
that magic flow, you hide - knowingly
so we lesser scribblers, can get a glimpse
of your Poetry\'s
unquestionable brilliance, dear Fay)
A great write!
July 13th, 2021 06:17
Shall and Because
Neville said:
wot the world needs most is love not moreofus or heavens above even lessofus .. but let each oneofus have access to a thesaurus .. maybe it woz the knock on me head yesterday ....... splendifourously penned me friend .. x :)
July 13th, 2021 04:04
Neville said:
wot the world needs most is love not moreofus or heavens above even lessofus .. but let each oneofus have access to a thesaurus .. maybe it woz the knock on me head yesterday ....... splendifourously penned me friend .. x :)
July 13th, 2021 04:04
Shall and Because
dusk arising said:
Questions of the moment indeed. If the heart and mind are ready - why not?
July 13th, 2021 03:12
dusk arising said:
Questions of the moment indeed. If the heart and mind are ready - why not?
July 13th, 2021 03:12
That Affair
Accidental Poet said:
Love has an agenda all it\'s own. And should it favor you, it\'s the best feeling ever. Great write Fay. ; )
July 12th, 2021 18:50
Accidental Poet said:
Love has an agenda all it\'s own. And should it favor you, it\'s the best feeling ever. Great write Fay. ; )
July 12th, 2021 18:50
That Affair
PrEm Ji said:
love is the undercurrent of a fruitful life... which doesn\'t mean that everyone should love you...
you can open the windows of love towards the world, nature, humanity or anything you love...
July 12th, 2021 12:42
PrEm Ji said:
love is the undercurrent of a fruitful life... which doesn\'t mean that everyone should love you...
you can open the windows of love towards the world, nature, humanity or anything you love...
July 12th, 2021 12:42
That Affair
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully written, Fay.
Love is always multi-faceted, albeit secret or in the open. Why do some people have the ability, to \"Touch your life with glow,\" from great distances and others up close cannot? You approach this beautifully.
July 12th, 2021 08:57
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully written, Fay.
Love is always multi-faceted, albeit secret or in the open. Why do some people have the ability, to \"Touch your life with glow,\" from great distances and others up close cannot? You approach this beautifully.
July 12th, 2021 08:57
That Affair
L. B. Mek said:
what a decadently exquisite, depiction
of that intoxicating chemistry, that ignites
invading, without warning
and making us sully
our years of devoted loyalty
because:
\'love touches life with glow
well describes that affair
whose breath instinctively
embraces the air of infinity.\'
simply a Brilliant write, dear Fay
July 12th, 2021 06:19
L. B. Mek said:
what a decadently exquisite, depiction
of that intoxicating chemistry, that ignites
invading, without warning
and making us sully
our years of devoted loyalty
because:
\'love touches life with glow
well describes that affair
whose breath instinctively
embraces the air of infinity.\'
simply a Brilliant write, dear Fay
July 12th, 2021 06:19
That Affair
Neville said:
ahhh .. he doesn\'t want to exhale but breathe her in and deeply ... x
July 12th, 2021 03:06
Neville said:
ahhh .. he doesn\'t want to exhale but breathe her in and deeply ... x
July 12th, 2021 03:06
That Affair
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words once more Fay, that breath of love is so very, very true.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words once more Fay, that breath of love is so very, very true.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 02:44
That Tap
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, whimsical words Fay, I am tapping away (on my keyboard of course).😍
Andy
July 12th, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, whimsical words Fay, I am tapping away (on my keyboard of course).😍
Andy
July 12th, 2021 00:46
That Tap
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You have stirred an old man\'s heart remembering the late-night booty call.
July 11th, 2021 07:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You have stirred an old man\'s heart remembering the late-night booty call.
July 11th, 2021 07:58
That Tap
Neville said:
Just wot the doctor ordered dear Fay .. tickled my fancy anyway :)
July 11th, 2021 06:54
Neville said:
Just wot the doctor ordered dear Fay .. tickled my fancy anyway :)
July 11th, 2021 06:54
That Tap
dusk arising said:
Oh for those clandestine secret meetings when one has to be pretty nifty at chucking small cippings at the bedroom window.... the rest is 2nd nature.
Love the way you tell the story.
July 11th, 2021 03:14
dusk arising said:
Oh for those clandestine secret meetings when one has to be pretty nifty at chucking small cippings at the bedroom window.... the rest is 2nd nature.
Love the way you tell the story.
July 11th, 2021 03:14
That Tap
Poetic Dan said:
Good morning and happy Sunday, thank you for a pleasant read!
July 11th, 2021 02:54
Poetic Dan said:
Good morning and happy Sunday, thank you for a pleasant read!
July 11th, 2021 02:54
Such is Nostalgia
dusk arising said:
Nostalgia, those glimpses of yesterdays now long passed which bring back too the attached personal experiences of then. Of holding mothers hand, of sisters home from school, of comfort and protected safety taken for granted.
All sperkrd by your fine words today.
July 10th, 2021 13:07
dusk arising said:
Nostalgia, those glimpses of yesterdays now long passed which bring back too the attached personal experiences of then. Of holding mothers hand, of sisters home from school, of comfort and protected safety taken for granted.
All sperkrd by your fine words today.
July 10th, 2021 13:07
Such is Nostalgia
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Dreams of yesterday come more often now that each day is less eventful.
July 10th, 2021 08:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Dreams of yesterday come more often now that each day is less eventful.
July 10th, 2021 08:59
Such is Nostalgia
Neville said:
Takes this old fella back a bit and then some ..
No kiddin, superly sentimental n filled me with such a wanting for yesteryear ..
Nostalgia rules my today n truly .. x
July 10th, 2021 08:57
Neville said:
Takes this old fella back a bit and then some ..
No kiddin, superly sentimental n filled me with such a wanting for yesteryear ..
Nostalgia rules my today n truly .. x
July 10th, 2021 08:57
Such is Nostalgia
Accidental Poet said:
The rear-view mirror always with a magnetic pull upon the eyes. Great write Fay. ; )
July 10th, 2021 07:48
Accidental Poet said:
The rear-view mirror always with a magnetic pull upon the eyes. Great write Fay. ; )
July 10th, 2021 07:48
Such is Nostalgia
Doggerel Dave said:
As you so rightly point out - it\'s a very nostalgic piece, Fay..... Few or no hobnail boots around there now...
Loverly short piece full of wistful images... Cant help feeling a little sentimental for olde times long gone...
July 10th, 2021 04:12
Doggerel Dave said:
As you so rightly point out - it\'s a very nostalgic piece, Fay..... Few or no hobnail boots around there now...
Loverly short piece full of wistful images... Cant help feeling a little sentimental for olde times long gone...
July 10th, 2021 04:12
Submitting
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one with the cosmos is such a wonderful place to be Fay.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one with the cosmos is such a wonderful place to be Fay.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:10
Submitting
Neville said:
I am right beside you Fay .. another splendid post today ma\'am ..
He loves the term me-ness too n truly :) ... x
July 9th, 2021 11:43
Neville said:
I am right beside you Fay .. another splendid post today ma\'am ..
He loves the term me-ness too n truly :) ... x
July 9th, 2021 11:43
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