Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Blackrock
Accidental Poet said:
A well penned warning of disastrous ruin on coastal rocks. Hence the need for Lighthouses along dangerous coastlines.
July 27th, 2021 08:25
Accidental Poet said:
A well penned warning of disastrous ruin on coastal rocks. Hence the need for Lighthouses along dangerous coastlines.
July 27th, 2021 08:25
Blackrock
L. B. Mek said:
those toothy jaws of ill-fate, waiting
for boisterous naivety
to sail across their path, boldly
so they can feast, as natured
intended;
as those curating waves of Time:
decreed...
(a wonderfully imaginative
scenic depiction
you\'ve shared with us today
dear Fay)
July 27th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
those toothy jaws of ill-fate, waiting
for boisterous naivety
to sail across their path, boldly
so they can feast, as natured
intended;
as those curating waves of Time:
decreed...
(a wonderfully imaginative
scenic depiction
you\'ve shared with us today
dear Fay)
July 27th, 2021 05:49
Blackrock
Neville said:
them there rocks are more dangerous than many men and fools have ever imagined ... they dont dish out names like black rock for nowt .................
... I consider my self blessed but I love the ruggedness of your coastline even more ............ maybe :) x
July 27th, 2021 04:00
Neville said:
them there rocks are more dangerous than many men and fools have ever imagined ... they dont dish out names like black rock for nowt .................
... I consider my self blessed but I love the ruggedness of your coastline even more ............ maybe :) x
July 27th, 2021 04:00
Awesome
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, striking words Fay, but I can see the tree is still there.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, striking words Fay, but I can see the tree is still there.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:37
Awesome
Doggerel Dave said:
R.I.P. old oak –You went down in a blaze of glory memorialized in beautiful effortless (‘doubt that – Ed) verse which ensures your immortality.
Great stuff, Fay.
July 26th, 2021 18:05
Doggerel Dave said:
R.I.P. old oak –You went down in a blaze of glory memorialized in beautiful effortless (‘doubt that – Ed) verse which ensures your immortality.
Great stuff, Fay.
July 26th, 2021 18:05
Awesome
Saxon Crow said:
Personally I always come alive in a thunderstorm. Nothing but empowering feelings. Great poem Fay
July 26th, 2021 14:22
Saxon Crow said:
Personally I always come alive in a thunderstorm. Nothing but empowering feelings. Great poem Fay
July 26th, 2021 14:22
Awesome
SureshG said:
An unexpected imagery, but your composition though did strike me with an intensity of a lightening bolt.
Decades ago, I wrote on the subject of how humans may have discovered ’fire’, and concluded on the same analogy.
July 26th, 2021 12:56
SureshG said:
An unexpected imagery, but your composition though did strike me with an intensity of a lightening bolt.
Decades ago, I wrote on the subject of how humans may have discovered ’fire’, and concluded on the same analogy.
July 26th, 2021 12:56
Awesome
dusk arising said:
Such poetic fruit from your storm tree. Dare i shelter neath such a majestic stalwart, no indeed not under skies darkened with your verse. I\'d seek a more welcoming spot hoping for a cuppa.
Great imagery and cleverly, nay pleasingly, presented.
July 26th, 2021 09:29
dusk arising said:
Such poetic fruit from your storm tree. Dare i shelter neath such a majestic stalwart, no indeed not under skies darkened with your verse. I\'d seek a more welcoming spot hoping for a cuppa.
Great imagery and cleverly, nay pleasingly, presented.
July 26th, 2021 09:29
Awesome
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
your words sparkled into life
with undefeatable zest, form to line
testifying
to that majestic quality of Nature\'s power!
a great read, dear Fay
and aesthetically so enthralling, great use
of poetry\'s tools
to reinforce your worded imagery
insuring you engage your readers, even more
July 26th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
your words sparkled into life
with undefeatable zest, form to line
testifying
to that majestic quality of Nature\'s power!
a great read, dear Fay
and aesthetically so enthralling, great use
of poetry\'s tools
to reinforce your worded imagery
insuring you engage your readers, even more
July 26th, 2021 06:23
Awesome
Neville said:
awesome indeed in both word & form
no doubt about it .. that\'s a POETREE :)
July 26th, 2021 03:54
Neville said:
awesome indeed in both word & form
no doubt about it .. that\'s a POETREE :)
July 26th, 2021 03:54
Preparation
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, I will be there on my horse with my armour on but my ardour uncovered.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, I will be there on my horse with my armour on but my ardour uncovered.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:45
Preparation
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey missus, that\'s just like the exchage we had behind the youth club in August \'67. I remember it well.
Forsooth fair one. Thou dust impart a stimulant most becoming and verily beyond the capture of words other than those with such lavish layn before me by the caress of your loving digits upon quill of delight. Ahead calls the luxury oiling of the wills in the togetherness of our garden\'s inner promise. Now where\'s the bliddy viagra?
By \'eck Fay, a right cracker of a post.
July 25th, 2021 10:55
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey missus, that\'s just like the exchage we had behind the youth club in August \'67. I remember it well.
Forsooth fair one. Thou dust impart a stimulant most becoming and verily beyond the capture of words other than those with such lavish layn before me by the caress of your loving digits upon quill of delight. Ahead calls the luxury oiling of the wills in the togetherness of our garden\'s inner promise. Now where\'s the bliddy viagra?
By \'eck Fay, a right cracker of a post.
July 25th, 2021 10:55
Preparation
Saxon Crow said:
It just conjures Artharian times to my mind Fay. Superb
July 25th, 2021 08:56
Saxon Crow said:
It just conjures Artharian times to my mind Fay. Superb
July 25th, 2021 08:56
Preparation
Doggerel Dave said:
Satisfactorily olfactory, Fay.
I\'m likely to get lost in reminiscence if I ponder on this for too long.
Thanks
July 25th, 2021 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Satisfactorily olfactory, Fay.
I\'m likely to get lost in reminiscence if I ponder on this for too long.
Thanks
July 25th, 2021 08:13
Preparation
Neville said:
ye gods and verily by both saints John & George .. even his ardour would be gettin arder ...
three courses on a single plate .. I remember knights like that ... but now consigned to days of yore i fear ...
The perfect example of subtle and tasteful literary seducery I have come upon in yonks .... erotica for ladies and gentlemen of taste .... :) x
July 25th, 2021 02:59
Neville said:
ye gods and verily by both saints John & George .. even his ardour would be gettin arder ...
three courses on a single plate .. I remember knights like that ... but now consigned to days of yore i fear ...
The perfect example of subtle and tasteful literary seducery I have come upon in yonks .... erotica for ladies and gentlemen of taste .... :) x
July 25th, 2021 02:59
Preparation
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I tend to swoon with \'ardour\' in my dafter moments! lol.
July 25th, 2021 02:30
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I tend to swoon with \'ardour\' in my dafter moments! lol.
July 25th, 2021 02:30
Bliss
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Fay, may that bliss be forever with you.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Fay, may that bliss be forever with you.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:30
Bliss
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Fay. Another enjoyable poem, one only to be read and enjoyed with \"volcanic abandon.\"
July 24th, 2021 20:20
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Fay. Another enjoyable poem, one only to be read and enjoyed with \"volcanic abandon.\"
July 24th, 2021 20:20
Bliss
Doggerel Dave said:
Bliss? Feels more like fever to me, Fay. Must have needed to put some time between yourself and the union to write such well ordered verse..... Say ten minutes?
July 24th, 2021 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Bliss? Feels more like fever to me, Fay. Must have needed to put some time between yourself and the union to write such well ordered verse..... Say ten minutes?
July 24th, 2021 20:13
Celled
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Allegedly the goal of a war is to restore peace…
does it really!?
An excellent write…
as always!
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 12:06
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Allegedly the goal of a war is to restore peace…
does it really!?
An excellent write…
as always!
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 12:06
Bliss
Neville said:
like minds entwined but a page apart
deliriously delightful my Lady Fay ..
:) x
July 24th, 2021 11:51
Neville said:
like minds entwined but a page apart
deliriously delightful my Lady Fay ..
:) x
July 24th, 2021 11:51
Celled
Neville said:
this is spooky .. I was planning to post a scribble with the title Cell Me .. now shelved until a rainy day ... your version, like the proverbial goose\'s golden egg, would surely be hard to beat ..... N :)
July 23rd, 2021 17:02
Neville said:
this is spooky .. I was planning to post a scribble with the title Cell Me .. now shelved until a rainy day ... your version, like the proverbial goose\'s golden egg, would surely be hard to beat ..... N :)
July 23rd, 2021 17:02
Celled
Accidental Poet said:
No war won ever worth the price paid. Great write Fay.
July 23rd, 2021 07:31
Accidental Poet said:
No war won ever worth the price paid. Great write Fay.
July 23rd, 2021 07:31
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