Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Unbroken
Neville said:
for ever and always has such a splendid ring to it .... feels good too ..
what an impressive portfolio you have my friend ........... :)
July 22nd, 2021 06:56
Neville said:
for ever and always has such a splendid ring to it .... feels good too ..
what an impressive portfolio you have my friend ........... :)
July 22nd, 2021 06:56
Unbroken
L. B. Mek said:
\'where solitude lies in sandy lines
gone summer footprints of yours and my\'..
just these lines alone, flooded me
and overwhelmed those painstakingly built dams
to my regrets and bone-achingly, felt - hurts;
you\'ve got teary eyes, thirsting: for a Time
now, long forgotten
for a presence by my side
now - long, since shed
thank you, dear Fay!
for reaffirming that magic of Poetry, into my reality
and allowing me
to break free, my shackles to reminiscing\'s: fears...
July 22nd, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'where solitude lies in sandy lines
gone summer footprints of yours and my\'..
just these lines alone, flooded me
and overwhelmed those painstakingly built dams
to my regrets and bone-achingly, felt - hurts;
you\'ve got teary eyes, thirsting: for a Time
now, long forgotten
for a presence by my side
now - long, since shed
thank you, dear Fay!
for reaffirming that magic of Poetry, into my reality
and allowing me
to break free, my shackles to reminiscing\'s: fears...
July 22nd, 2021 04:16
Never Before
Neville said:
tis understandably understandable yet remarkably understated n true ................. :) ... x
July 21st, 2021 05:40
Neville said:
tis understandably understandable yet remarkably understated n true ................. :) ... x
July 21st, 2021 05:40
Constraint
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write Fay, I have just been helping a friend of mine with this problem with her partner of 25 years, she has managed to get him to leave and she is now free from that cage and is so happy now,
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write Fay, I have just been helping a friend of mine with this problem with her partner of 25 years, she has managed to get him to leave and she is now free from that cage and is so happy now,
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:19
Constraint
SureshG said:
All my life I have been troubled by ones control over another, and doubly so when it is inhumane. Your post succinctly highlights this.
July 20th, 2021 12:43
SureshG said:
All my life I have been troubled by ones control over another, and doubly so when it is inhumane. Your post succinctly highlights this.
July 20th, 2021 12:43
Constraint
jarcher54 said:
Seen that so many times, and sometimes the he is a she and/or the she is a he. Loyalty and oaths and pledges can be stronger than manacles and chains. Bittersweet observation Fay. You go girl!
July 20th, 2021 12:02
jarcher54 said:
Seen that so many times, and sometimes the he is a she and/or the she is a he. Loyalty and oaths and pledges can be stronger than manacles and chains. Bittersweet observation Fay. You go girl!
July 20th, 2021 12:02
Constraint
Neville said:
I could not help the smile that etched slow across the bottom half of this sad old fella\'s face .. not because of the message contained herein ..
but more because it became so very evident, the Lady F just gone an done it all again ....... :) x
July 20th, 2021 07:34
Neville said:
I could not help the smile that etched slow across the bottom half of this sad old fella\'s face .. not because of the message contained herein ..
but more because it became so very evident, the Lady F just gone an done it all again ....... :) x
July 20th, 2021 07:34
Anguish.
Neville said:
....... there is without any doubt at all, more than just the one masterpiece pinned to this page .................................... :) x
July 19th, 2021 13:01
Neville said:
....... there is without any doubt at all, more than just the one masterpiece pinned to this page .................................... :) x
July 19th, 2021 13:01
Anguish.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Brushes which fuse earth and sun\'..
what a captivating and vivid 1st line, dear Fay
a great dedication/tribute
for me, the most striking element of this painting
is how, it deliberately creates a blurry effect
the longer you look at it
and in-doing that, it reflects that furnace presence
of the sun in our lives
highlighting its heatstroke trait, to distort
our notion of reality...
what a visionary artist
I truly feel, the philosophical elements of some paintings
are ignored, too easily
July 19th, 2021 07:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Brushes which fuse earth and sun\'..
what a captivating and vivid 1st line, dear Fay
a great dedication/tribute
for me, the most striking element of this painting
is how, it deliberately creates a blurry effect
the longer you look at it
and in-doing that, it reflects that furnace presence
of the sun in our lives
highlighting its heatstroke trait, to distort
our notion of reality...
what a visionary artist
I truly feel, the philosophical elements of some paintings
are ignored, too easily
July 19th, 2021 07:11
Anguish.
dusk arising said:
To me van gogh\'s work is all about an expression of passion. Captured in your words today.
July 19th, 2021 06:57
dusk arising said:
To me van gogh\'s work is all about an expression of passion. Captured in your words today.
July 19th, 2021 06:57
Time Versus Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Fay, love can overcome all.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Fay, love can overcome all.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:08
Time Versus Love
MendedFences27 said:
Love is either a desert or a garden, never anything in between. The \"ageless young mistress\" of which you speak is imaginary, a dream in the mind of a lover, but the \"frequent undisguised thirst\" surely exists in reality. Love can be eternal if two hearts are in sync. What a beautiful poem for my Sunday respite. Loved it.- Phil A
July 18th, 2021 22:14
MendedFences27 said:
Love is either a desert or a garden, never anything in between. The \"ageless young mistress\" of which you speak is imaginary, a dream in the mind of a lover, but the \"frequent undisguised thirst\" surely exists in reality. Love can be eternal if two hearts are in sync. What a beautiful poem for my Sunday respite. Loved it.- Phil A
July 18th, 2021 22:14
Time Versus Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry Fay, but love (if indeed that\'s what we are talking about) old and comfortable is better.
Love-erly write, though.
July 18th, 2021 19:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry Fay, but love (if indeed that\'s what we are talking about) old and comfortable is better.
Love-erly write, though.
July 18th, 2021 19:29
Time Versus Love
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Aah, yes indeed…
“for those who love,
time is
Eternity!”
A wonderful write , my dear poetess.
Thank you for sharing .
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 16:39
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Aah, yes indeed…
“for those who love,
time is
Eternity!”
A wonderful write , my dear poetess.
Thank you for sharing .
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 16:39
Time Versus Love
Neville said:
you can beat an egg .. but you just can\'t beat an ageless young mistress Fay .............. x
timeless my lady .............. n true ... :) x
July 18th, 2021 08:42
Neville said:
you can beat an egg .. but you just can\'t beat an ageless young mistress Fay .............. x
timeless my lady .............. n true ... :) x
July 18th, 2021 08:42
Time Versus Love
Jerry Reynolds said:
Poet sips from the spring of \"Undisguised Thirst\" and delivers a distinguished verse.
July 18th, 2021 07:00
Jerry Reynolds said:
Poet sips from the spring of \"Undisguised Thirst\" and delivers a distinguished verse.
July 18th, 2021 07:00
Time Versus Love
dusk arising said:
Frequent undisguised thirst eh?? I\'ll have a pint of that please.
Time has certainly had a gobble at my passion.... i better find me that ageless young mistress you describe.
July 18th, 2021 06:16
dusk arising said:
Frequent undisguised thirst eh?? I\'ll have a pint of that please.
Time has certainly had a gobble at my passion.... i better find me that ageless young mistress you describe.
July 18th, 2021 06:16
Afterglow
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a wonderful time in the day Fay.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a wonderful time in the day Fay.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:44
Afterglow
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Fay – sunset – change captured. Would be invidious to single out any one line as my favorite; the whole package covers it for me.
July 17th, 2021 22:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Fay – sunset – change captured. Would be invidious to single out any one line as my favorite; the whole package covers it for me.
July 17th, 2021 22:05
Afterglow
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A wonderful read that reminded me of how blessed I am to be able to witness…
‘as afterglow merges to mystical beauty of twilight’s creating.’
A delightful ending to your poem.
For three months in a hospital room with a view, what I most looked forward to was that transition between day and night.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
July 17th, 2021 18:32
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A wonderful read that reminded me of how blessed I am to be able to witness…
‘as afterglow merges to mystical beauty of twilight’s creating.’
A delightful ending to your poem.
For three months in a hospital room with a view, what I most looked forward to was that transition between day and night.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
July 17th, 2021 18:32
Afterglow
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Watched a lot of sunsets all beautiful into themselves.
July 17th, 2021 18:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Watched a lot of sunsets all beautiful into themselves.
July 17th, 2021 18:11
Afterglow
Neville said:
ah\' without a doubt one of my three most favouritest times of day ..
and each, has a distinct afterglow or signature of its own ... a delight to read this early nocte .... x
July 17th, 2021 16:32
Neville said:
ah\' without a doubt one of my three most favouritest times of day ..
and each, has a distinct afterglow or signature of its own ... a delight to read this early nocte .... x
July 17th, 2021 16:32
Afterglow
dusk arising said:
aaaaah, twilight and dusk... the magical times as shadows deepen.
I love that first line, such a relaxed feel of night flowing across the sky. Well I love the whole poem, my fav time of day.
Going into my favs too.
July 17th, 2021 11:59
dusk arising said:
aaaaah, twilight and dusk... the magical times as shadows deepen.
I love that first line, such a relaxed feel of night flowing across the sky. Well I love the whole poem, my fav time of day.
Going into my favs too.
July 17th, 2021 11:59
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