Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
That Affair
PrEm Ji said:
love is the undercurrent of a fruitful life... which doesn\'t mean that everyone should love you...
you can open the windows of love towards the world, nature, humanity or anything you love...
July 12th, 2021 12:42
PrEm Ji said:
love is the undercurrent of a fruitful life... which doesn\'t mean that everyone should love you...
you can open the windows of love towards the world, nature, humanity or anything you love...
July 12th, 2021 12:42
That Affair
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully written, Fay.
Love is always multi-faceted, albeit secret or in the open. Why do some people have the ability, to \"Touch your life with glow,\" from great distances and others up close cannot? You approach this beautifully.
July 12th, 2021 08:57
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully written, Fay.
Love is always multi-faceted, albeit secret or in the open. Why do some people have the ability, to \"Touch your life with glow,\" from great distances and others up close cannot? You approach this beautifully.
July 12th, 2021 08:57
That Affair
L. B. Mek said:
what a decadently exquisite, depiction
of that intoxicating chemistry, that ignites
invading, without warning
and making us sully
our years of devoted loyalty
because:
\'love touches life with glow
well describes that affair
whose breath instinctively
embraces the air of infinity.\'
simply a Brilliant write, dear Fay
July 12th, 2021 06:19
L. B. Mek said:
what a decadently exquisite, depiction
of that intoxicating chemistry, that ignites
invading, without warning
and making us sully
our years of devoted loyalty
because:
\'love touches life with glow
well describes that affair
whose breath instinctively
embraces the air of infinity.\'
simply a Brilliant write, dear Fay
July 12th, 2021 06:19
That Affair
Neville said:
ahhh .. he doesn\'t want to exhale but breathe her in and deeply ... x
July 12th, 2021 03:06
Neville said:
ahhh .. he doesn\'t want to exhale but breathe her in and deeply ... x
July 12th, 2021 03:06
That Affair
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words once more Fay, that breath of love is so very, very true.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words once more Fay, that breath of love is so very, very true.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 02:44
That Tap
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, whimsical words Fay, I am tapping away (on my keyboard of course).😍
Andy
July 12th, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, whimsical words Fay, I am tapping away (on my keyboard of course).😍
Andy
July 12th, 2021 00:46
That Tap
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You have stirred an old man\'s heart remembering the late-night booty call.
July 11th, 2021 07:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You have stirred an old man\'s heart remembering the late-night booty call.
July 11th, 2021 07:58
That Tap
Neville said:
Just wot the doctor ordered dear Fay .. tickled my fancy anyway :)
July 11th, 2021 06:54
Neville said:
Just wot the doctor ordered dear Fay .. tickled my fancy anyway :)
July 11th, 2021 06:54
That Tap
dusk arising said:
Oh for those clandestine secret meetings when one has to be pretty nifty at chucking small cippings at the bedroom window.... the rest is 2nd nature.
Love the way you tell the story.
July 11th, 2021 03:14
dusk arising said:
Oh for those clandestine secret meetings when one has to be pretty nifty at chucking small cippings at the bedroom window.... the rest is 2nd nature.
Love the way you tell the story.
July 11th, 2021 03:14
That Tap
Poetic Dan said:
Good morning and happy Sunday, thank you for a pleasant read!
July 11th, 2021 02:54
Poetic Dan said:
Good morning and happy Sunday, thank you for a pleasant read!
July 11th, 2021 02:54
Such is Nostalgia
dusk arising said:
Nostalgia, those glimpses of yesterdays now long passed which bring back too the attached personal experiences of then. Of holding mothers hand, of sisters home from school, of comfort and protected safety taken for granted.
All sperkrd by your fine words today.
July 10th, 2021 13:07
dusk arising said:
Nostalgia, those glimpses of yesterdays now long passed which bring back too the attached personal experiences of then. Of holding mothers hand, of sisters home from school, of comfort and protected safety taken for granted.
All sperkrd by your fine words today.
July 10th, 2021 13:07
Such is Nostalgia
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Dreams of yesterday come more often now that each day is less eventful.
July 10th, 2021 08:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Dreams of yesterday come more often now that each day is less eventful.
July 10th, 2021 08:59
Such is Nostalgia
Neville said:
Takes this old fella back a bit and then some ..
No kiddin, superly sentimental n filled me with such a wanting for yesteryear ..
Nostalgia rules my today n truly .. x
July 10th, 2021 08:57
Neville said:
Takes this old fella back a bit and then some ..
No kiddin, superly sentimental n filled me with such a wanting for yesteryear ..
Nostalgia rules my today n truly .. x
July 10th, 2021 08:57
Such is Nostalgia
Doggerel Dave said:
As you so rightly point out - it\'s a very nostalgic piece, Fay..... Few or no hobnail boots around there now...
Loverly short piece full of wistful images... Cant help feeling a little sentimental for olde times long gone...
July 10th, 2021 04:12
Doggerel Dave said:
As you so rightly point out - it\'s a very nostalgic piece, Fay..... Few or no hobnail boots around there now...
Loverly short piece full of wistful images... Cant help feeling a little sentimental for olde times long gone...
July 10th, 2021 04:12
Submitting
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one with the cosmos is such a wonderful place to be Fay.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Being at one with the cosmos is such a wonderful place to be Fay.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:10
Submitting
Neville said:
I am right beside you Fay .. another splendid post today ma\'am ..
He loves the term me-ness too n truly :) ... x
July 9th, 2021 11:43
Neville said:
I am right beside you Fay .. another splendid post today ma\'am ..
He loves the term me-ness too n truly :) ... x
July 9th, 2021 11:43
Submitting
myself and me said:
Such a peaceful, harmonious night to merge yourself into the universe.
July 9th, 2021 10:49
myself and me said:
Such a peaceful, harmonious night to merge yourself into the universe.
July 9th, 2021 10:49
Submitting
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
I have felt that. Love lying out on a clear night and reminding myself, \"I,m just a part of all of that\"
July 9th, 2021 07:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
I have felt that. Love lying out on a clear night and reminding myself, \"I,m just a part of all of that\"
July 9th, 2021 07:24
Submitting
L. B. Mek said:
\'Consciously losing time\'s track
the day\'s negatives melt
as senses fall up into space.\'
as usual, decadently worded dear Fay!
love the imagery of falling-up
as we surrender
to that soothing cadence of acceptance
knowing, its futile
to try and fight our learning curve: of plight...
July 9th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Consciously losing time\'s track
the day\'s negatives melt
as senses fall up into space.\'
as usual, decadently worded dear Fay!
love the imagery of falling-up
as we surrender
to that soothing cadence of acceptance
knowing, its futile
to try and fight our learning curve: of plight...
July 9th, 2021 04:27
Beginnings
SureshG said:
and in that moment they inhaled each other’s essence, so masterfully exposed by your words.
July 8th, 2021 13:17
SureshG said:
and in that moment they inhaled each other’s essence, so masterfully exposed by your words.
July 8th, 2021 13:17
Beginnings
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
The moment when chance and destiny collide. Beautiful.
July 8th, 2021 09:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
The moment when chance and destiny collide. Beautiful.
July 8th, 2021 09:23
Beginnings
Neville said:
we all need something to look forward to at the end of the day ..
and wot better than a new beginning eh\' Fay ..
mission accomplished my lady ... x
July 8th, 2021 08:04
Neville said:
we all need something to look forward to at the end of the day ..
and wot better than a new beginning eh\' Fay ..
mission accomplished my lady ... x
July 8th, 2021 08:04
Beginnings
L. B. Mek said:
and \'ding\', its began again
a smile, a second look - back
and a name
that simply singes, the strings
of your pulsating: hopeful heart..
what a wonderful depiction dear Fay
so acute in detail, so wondrous in poetic wording
a joy to read, thank you!
July 8th, 2021 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
and \'ding\', its began again
a smile, a second look - back
and a name
that simply singes, the strings
of your pulsating: hopeful heart..
what a wonderful depiction dear Fay
so acute in detail, so wondrous in poetic wording
a joy to read, thank you!
July 8th, 2021 05:50
Beginnings
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure at that point It\'s love... but I have felt that moment... Nice one, Fay.
July 8th, 2021 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure at that point It\'s love... but I have felt that moment... Nice one, Fay.
July 8th, 2021 05:07
Beginnings
Goldfinch60 said:
So very, very true Fay. Wonderful words, straight into favourites.
Andy
July 8th, 2021 04:38
Goldfinch60 said:
So very, very true Fay. Wonderful words, straight into favourites.
Andy
July 8th, 2021 04:38
Once
L. B. Mek said:
what a magnificently tumultuous storm
love brings into our lives
even, through the loneliness of distance..
such a striking picture, dear Fay
thank you for sharing it with us
and your wonderful take on it
(at least, for us fortunate few
there was: a \'Once\'
we can be thankful for that)
July 8th, 2021 02:49
L. B. Mek said:
what a magnificently tumultuous storm
love brings into our lives
even, through the loneliness of distance..
such a striking picture, dear Fay
thank you for sharing it with us
and your wonderful take on it
(at least, for us fortunate few
there was: a \'Once\'
we can be thankful for that)
July 8th, 2021 02:49
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