Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Missed
Saxon Crow said:
How much the land has been shaped and changed. So many such places are now beyond memory.
August 3rd, 2021 03:34
Saxon Crow said:
How much the land has been shaped and changed. So many such places are now beyond memory.
August 3rd, 2021 03:34
Difference
Neville said:
Most of what I found n felt and thought whilst reading \'Difference\' has already been said by those who visited this page before me ...
therefore, I can only echo the best of the best of em ............. coz ya worth it ........................................ x
August 2nd, 2021 16:57
Neville said:
Most of what I found n felt and thought whilst reading \'Difference\' has already been said by those who visited this page before me ...
therefore, I can only echo the best of the best of em ............. coz ya worth it ........................................ x
August 2nd, 2021 16:57
Difference
Goldfinch60 said:
Those differences fill our lives with joy and wonder Fay, beautifully sights painted with your words.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Those differences fill our lives with joy and wonder Fay, beautifully sights painted with your words.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:08
Difference
Accidental Poet said:
If for only your poetic skill, this world a better place Fay. 👍
July 31st, 2021 06:45
Accidental Poet said:
If for only your poetic skill, this world a better place Fay. 👍
July 31st, 2021 06:45
Difference
Saxon Crow said:
Very enjoyable and creative poem Fay. Very much enjoyed
July 31st, 2021 06:23
Saxon Crow said:
Very enjoyable and creative poem Fay. Very much enjoyed
July 31st, 2021 06:23
Difference
Doggerel Dave said:
My head now almost overwhelmed with visual imagery, Fay - Many thanks.
For me more accessible than GMH.
July 31st, 2021 05:51
Doggerel Dave said:
My head now almost overwhelmed with visual imagery, Fay - Many thanks.
For me more accessible than GMH.
July 31st, 2021 05:51
Ferment
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Fay, we must always forgive those we love.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Fay, we must always forgive those we love.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:44
Ferment
Doggerel Dave said:
Great wisdom there, Fay.
Most significantly you do include an apology (and I suspect implied, an explanation) as an initiating part of the process.
July 30th, 2021 19:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Great wisdom there, Fay.
Most significantly you do include an apology (and I suspect implied, an explanation) as an initiating part of the process.
July 30th, 2021 19:20
Ferment
Thekkinkkattil said:
Forgive and forget forsake your anger and restart your love .what lovely words.
July 30th, 2021 18:29
Thekkinkkattil said:
Forgive and forget forsake your anger and restart your love .what lovely words.
July 30th, 2021 18:29
Ferment
dusk arising said:
The rare commodity of forgiving oft finds its achilles heel in the unworthyness of the forgiven.
July 30th, 2021 12:19
dusk arising said:
The rare commodity of forgiving oft finds its achilles heel in the unworthyness of the forgiven.
July 30th, 2021 12:19
Ferment
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
Making up can be a sweet, sweet time.
July 30th, 2021 07:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
Making up can be a sweet, sweet time.
July 30th, 2021 07:48
Ferment
Accidental Poet said:
In true love\'s domain, forgiveness is always part of any quarrel. Wonderfully positive write Fay. 😉
July 30th, 2021 06:23
Accidental Poet said:
In true love\'s domain, forgiveness is always part of any quarrel. Wonderfully positive write Fay. 😉
July 30th, 2021 06:23
Ferment
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that Forgive - part
seldom aligns with our inability
to Forget... and so, we often doom ourselves
to that cycle of unhealed, yet
hurriedly, plunging hearts...
there\'s a genuine seriousness
to your choice wording, dear Fay
that insures we read and relate on a level
very intimate and personal,
unnervingly-so, at times;
a great write!
July 30th, 2021 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that Forgive - part
seldom aligns with our inability
to Forget... and so, we often doom ourselves
to that cycle of unhealed, yet
hurriedly, plunging hearts...
there\'s a genuine seriousness
to your choice wording, dear Fay
that insures we read and relate on a level
very intimate and personal,
unnervingly-so, at times;
a great write!
July 30th, 2021 06:01
Ferment
Neville said:
the longer you leave it the harder it gets ....
hope you get my drift ... I would hate to think Mr. O might have swooned again .......................... a great poem and one that all should read and heed .................. N :) x
July 30th, 2021 04:29
Neville said:
the longer you leave it the harder it gets ....
hope you get my drift ... I would hate to think Mr. O might have swooned again .......................... a great poem and one that all should read and heed .................. N :) x
July 30th, 2021 04:29
Sisters
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, I have a brother but no sisters and we get on so very well even after all these many years.
Andy
July 30th, 2021 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, I have a brother but no sisters and we get on so very well even after all these many years.
Andy
July 30th, 2021 00:13
Sisters
SureshG said:
Sisters, brothers, siblings or friends
It’s a joy to be able to recall any relationship if presented in such words as yours
July 29th, 2021 12:29
SureshG said:
Sisters, brothers, siblings or friends
It’s a joy to be able to recall any relationship if presented in such words as yours
July 29th, 2021 12:29
Sisters
PrEm Ji said:
Sisters are truly wonderful…
They share the same blood… same world
July 29th, 2021 09:44
PrEm Ji said:
Sisters are truly wonderful…
They share the same blood… same world
July 29th, 2021 09:44
Sisters
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
I was blessed with two sisters, am the better man for it.
July 29th, 2021 08:54
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
I was blessed with two sisters, am the better man for it.
July 29th, 2021 08:54
Sisters
Accidental Poet said:
The bond between Sisters is a strong and unbreakable union. Excellent write Dear Fay. 👍
July 29th, 2021 07:39
Accidental Poet said:
The bond between Sisters is a strong and unbreakable union. Excellent write Dear Fay. 👍
July 29th, 2021 07:39
Sisters
dusk arising said:
Made me think of my two granddaughters and how different they are yet how close they are. The future is theirs to step in all the same puddles each generation has splashed.
July 29th, 2021 05:49
dusk arising said:
Made me think of my two granddaughters and how different they are yet how close they are. The future is theirs to step in all the same puddles each generation has splashed.
July 29th, 2021 05:49
Sisters
L. B. Mek said:
what a first line, dear Fay
I have the same yearning
for the brother
I\'m yet to meet, (metaphorically, that is);
such a great read!
July 29th, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
what a first line, dear Fay
I have the same yearning
for the brother
I\'m yet to meet, (metaphorically, that is);
such a great read!
July 29th, 2021 05:02
Weight
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay.
I so relate to \"plugs on regretful mistakes\" the walls of my mind look like a porcupine.
July 28th, 2021 08:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay.
I so relate to \"plugs on regretful mistakes\" the walls of my mind look like a porcupine.
July 28th, 2021 08:37
Weight
Accidental Poet said:
With a heavy heart, one can relate so well. Love can take us all to highs and lows, but it all balances out. Great write Fay.
July 28th, 2021 07:41
Accidental Poet said:
With a heavy heart, one can relate so well. Love can take us all to highs and lows, but it all balances out. Great write Fay.
July 28th, 2021 07:41
Weight
dusk arising said:
So true. The purposefulness of life falls away when ones love affair ends on such wrong notes as you describe. On the other hand though a feeling of release, freedom and back to enjoying being ones self can be welcome. It rather depends upon how one feels about break-up.
Your sensitive wording took me back to endings i have lived through. I\'m pleased to report the last one found me welcoming the freedom.
July 28th, 2021 04:47
dusk arising said:
So true. The purposefulness of life falls away when ones love affair ends on such wrong notes as you describe. On the other hand though a feeling of release, freedom and back to enjoying being ones self can be welcome. It rather depends upon how one feels about break-up.
Your sensitive wording took me back to endings i have lived through. I\'m pleased to report the last one found me welcoming the freedom.
July 28th, 2021 04:47
Weight
Doggerel Dave said:
You have clearly defined in poetic form the desolate void which attends the end of a close relationship, Fay.
Cannot state I enjoyed this, but acknowledge the rich descriptive qualities in your piece.
Thanks.
July 28th, 2021 04:33
Doggerel Dave said:
You have clearly defined in poetic form the desolate void which attends the end of a close relationship, Fay.
Cannot state I enjoyed this, but acknowledge the rich descriptive qualities in your piece.
Thanks.
July 28th, 2021 04:33
Weight
Neville said:
you have drawn my attention to the heavy vacuum so oft left behind and which many of us can sadly relate ..
sometimes they take a lifetime to create, yet may be gone in a tear and a blink ............................ x
July 28th, 2021 03:32
Neville said:
you have drawn my attention to the heavy vacuum so oft left behind and which many of us can sadly relate ..
sometimes they take a lifetime to create, yet may be gone in a tear and a blink ............................ x
July 28th, 2021 03:32
Weight
Goldfinch60 said:
Compelling words evolved from a compelling image Fay. Magnificent.
Into favourites.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Compelling words evolved from a compelling image Fay. Magnificent.
Into favourites.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 03:29
Blackrock
dusk arising said:
One imagines that with satelite navigation fears of blackrock are subdued... until it all goes wrong one stormy night. Blackrock will have it;s way with any who venture near.
Word goes out ... heed the poetic wanring.
July 27th, 2021 08:51
dusk arising said:
One imagines that with satelite navigation fears of blackrock are subdued... until it all goes wrong one stormy night. Blackrock will have it;s way with any who venture near.
Word goes out ... heed the poetic wanring.
July 27th, 2021 08:51
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