Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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myself and me said:
Such a peaceful, harmonious night to merge yourself into the universe.
July 9th, 2021 10:49
myself and me said:
Such a peaceful, harmonious night to merge yourself into the universe.
July 9th, 2021 10:49
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
I have felt that. Love lying out on a clear night and reminding myself, \"I,m just a part of all of that\"
July 9th, 2021 07:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
I have felt that. Love lying out on a clear night and reminding myself, \"I,m just a part of all of that\"
July 9th, 2021 07:24
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L. B. Mek said:
\'Consciously losing time\'s track
the day\'s negatives melt
as senses fall up into space.\'
as usual, decadently worded dear Fay!
love the imagery of falling-up
as we surrender
to that soothing cadence of acceptance
knowing, its futile
to try and fight our learning curve: of plight...
July 9th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Consciously losing time\'s track
the day\'s negatives melt
as senses fall up into space.\'
as usual, decadently worded dear Fay!
love the imagery of falling-up
as we surrender
to that soothing cadence of acceptance
knowing, its futile
to try and fight our learning curve: of plight...
July 9th, 2021 04:27
Beginnings
SureshG said:
and in that moment they inhaled each other’s essence, so masterfully exposed by your words.
July 8th, 2021 13:17
SureshG said:
and in that moment they inhaled each other’s essence, so masterfully exposed by your words.
July 8th, 2021 13:17
Beginnings
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
The moment when chance and destiny collide. Beautiful.
July 8th, 2021 09:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
The moment when chance and destiny collide. Beautiful.
July 8th, 2021 09:23
Beginnings
Neville said:
we all need something to look forward to at the end of the day ..
and wot better than a new beginning eh\' Fay ..
mission accomplished my lady ... x
July 8th, 2021 08:04
Neville said:
we all need something to look forward to at the end of the day ..
and wot better than a new beginning eh\' Fay ..
mission accomplished my lady ... x
July 8th, 2021 08:04
Beginnings
L. B. Mek said:
and \'ding\', its began again
a smile, a second look - back
and a name
that simply singes, the strings
of your pulsating: hopeful heart..
what a wonderful depiction dear Fay
so acute in detail, so wondrous in poetic wording
a joy to read, thank you!
July 8th, 2021 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
and \'ding\', its began again
a smile, a second look - back
and a name
that simply singes, the strings
of your pulsating: hopeful heart..
what a wonderful depiction dear Fay
so acute in detail, so wondrous in poetic wording
a joy to read, thank you!
July 8th, 2021 05:50
Beginnings
Accidental Poet said:
I remember that beginning very long ago. Wonderful Fay. ; )
July 8th, 2021 05:26
Accidental Poet said:
I remember that beginning very long ago. Wonderful Fay. ; )
July 8th, 2021 05:26
Beginnings
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure at that point It\'s love... but I have felt that moment... Nice one, Fay.
July 8th, 2021 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure at that point It\'s love... but I have felt that moment... Nice one, Fay.
July 8th, 2021 05:07
Beginnings
Goldfinch60 said:
So very, very true Fay. Wonderful words, straight into favourites.
Andy
July 8th, 2021 04:38
Goldfinch60 said:
So very, very true Fay. Wonderful words, straight into favourites.
Andy
July 8th, 2021 04:38
Once
L. B. Mek said:
what a magnificently tumultuous storm
love brings into our lives
even, through the loneliness of distance..
such a striking picture, dear Fay
thank you for sharing it with us
and your wonderful take on it
(at least, for us fortunate few
there was: a \'Once\'
we can be thankful for that)
July 8th, 2021 02:49
L. B. Mek said:
what a magnificently tumultuous storm
love brings into our lives
even, through the loneliness of distance..
such a striking picture, dear Fay
thank you for sharing it with us
and your wonderful take on it
(at least, for us fortunate few
there was: a \'Once\'
we can be thankful for that)
July 8th, 2021 02:49
Once
rrodriguez said:
The song is still there since once it existed it can be sung again
Once again let\'s sing together the songs that united our hearts. Fay, this is a beautiful poem.
July 7th, 2021 10:29
rrodriguez said:
The song is still there since once it existed it can be sung again
Once again let\'s sing together the songs that united our hearts. Fay, this is a beautiful poem.
July 7th, 2021 10:29
Once
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Eloquently expressed. Love is often best understood as memory.
July 7th, 2021 08:40
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Eloquently expressed. Love is often best understood as memory.
July 7th, 2021 08:40
Once
Neville said:
.. very occasionally, I run out of, or can not find the right words to express the way in which certain collections of words make me feel .. \'Once\' is a good example and I shall say only this once ..
\'Amazingly awesome\' ... anything else would swiftly become but a cliché ... x
July 7th, 2021 06:14
Neville said:
.. very occasionally, I run out of, or can not find the right words to express the way in which certain collections of words make me feel .. \'Once\' is a good example and I shall say only this once ..
\'Amazingly awesome\' ... anything else would swiftly become but a cliché ... x
July 7th, 2021 06:14
Myself
SureshG said:
I have, for a very long time, been contemplating on writing about this very cycle of water and wrote many a lines, but out of frustration left them unfinished, and now I know why - I don’t have your talent.
July 6th, 2021 12:29
SureshG said:
I have, for a very long time, been contemplating on writing about this very cycle of water and wrote many a lines, but out of frustration left them unfinished, and now I know why - I don’t have your talent.
July 6th, 2021 12:29
Myself
Neville said:
I remember your \'Myself\' Fay from the time this little beauty headlined before .. I think maybe twice even ..
anyway, I thought you should know, not only is \'Myself\' worth airing every now and again, but it loses none of the original impact or appeal during my subsequent visits ... x
July 6th, 2021 08:49
Neville said:
I remember your \'Myself\' Fay from the time this little beauty headlined before .. I think maybe twice even ..
anyway, I thought you should know, not only is \'Myself\' worth airing every now and again, but it loses none of the original impact or appeal during my subsequent visits ... x
July 6th, 2021 08:49
Myself
dusk arising said:
Oh this can so easily be transposed into ones own life having grown up in the countryside and matured into the hubbub of a big city.
One\'s roots stay within the character and become the pivot upon which all judgement is made.
Into my favourites with pleasure.
July 6th, 2021 06:47
dusk arising said:
Oh this can so easily be transposed into ones own life having grown up in the countryside and matured into the hubbub of a big city.
One\'s roots stay within the character and become the pivot upon which all judgement is made.
Into my favourites with pleasure.
July 6th, 2021 06:47
Myself
Doggerel Dave said:
The river\'s growth and passage captured in rich descriptive personification.
I\'d really have wanted to see you create that, Fay - did it just pour gently, then fast, like the river, out of you, or did you sometimes find your self drift off into a tributary and then need to force yourself back to the main flow...?
July 6th, 2021 06:00
Doggerel Dave said:
The river\'s growth and passage captured in rich descriptive personification.
I\'d really have wanted to see you create that, Fay - did it just pour gently, then fast, like the river, out of you, or did you sometimes find your self drift off into a tributary and then need to force yourself back to the main flow...?
July 6th, 2021 06:00
Myself
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful - as ever, dear Fay
\'where my hum
is welcomed
by mossy pebbles
and where birds come
to drink and wet
feet and feathers
in my warm shallows
before I roll on
having to settle
for large water duets\'
July 6th, 2021 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful - as ever, dear Fay
\'where my hum
is welcomed
by mossy pebbles
and where birds come
to drink and wet
feet and feathers
in my warm shallows
before I roll on
having to settle
for large water duets\'
July 6th, 2021 03:55
Back Then
L. B. Mek said:
\'Fermented in thrills we became
effervescently fueled,
felt mercurial bliss and entered
new dimensional levels.\'
Brilliant!
your poem could make Love blossom
in a divorce court!
July 6th, 2021 02:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Fermented in thrills we became
effervescently fueled,
felt mercurial bliss and entered
new dimensional levels.\'
Brilliant!
your poem could make Love blossom
in a divorce court!
July 6th, 2021 02:00
Back Then
Goldfinch60 said:
Back then, words we all used remembering those wonderful times in our passed life.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Back then, words we all used remembering those wonderful times in our passed life.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 00:54
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