Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Discovery
Goldfinch60 said:
So wonderful Fay, that time when loved bloomed is so wonderful to remember.
Andy
July 2nd, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So wonderful Fay, that time when loved bloomed is so wonderful to remember.
Andy
July 2nd, 2021 00:19
Discovery
Neville said:
I am not sure I can say much more than what has already been said about these fine words you have made available to us all ... a splendid poem in all respects ... respect my friend ..... x
July 1st, 2021 17:06
Neville said:
I am not sure I can say much more than what has already been said about these fine words you have made available to us all ... a splendid poem in all respects ... respect my friend ..... x
July 1st, 2021 17:06
Discovery
flyingfish said:
I loved the expressions such as \'lowered its lashes and spread heaven\' Cheers
July 1st, 2021 15:26
flyingfish said:
I loved the expressions such as \'lowered its lashes and spread heaven\' Cheers
July 1st, 2021 15:26
Discovery
Doggerel Dave said:
Simple and pleasing, Fay.
\'Such a summer as this had buttons undone as heat crept\' - the excuse, the tension, anticipation - great!
July 1st, 2021 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Simple and pleasing, Fay.
\'Such a summer as this had buttons undone as heat crept\' - the excuse, the tension, anticipation - great!
July 1st, 2021 05:11
Discovery
dusk arising said:
Everything was so new and exciting for us as young lovers. The world became alive all those thousands of days ago.
And you captured all this with words which painted my vivid picture of special times. The clothes we wore, the music we heard, the language we spoke.
A really special poem today Fay for a has-been romantic like me. Into my favourites of course.
July 1st, 2021 04:19
dusk arising said:
Everything was so new and exciting for us as young lovers. The world became alive all those thousands of days ago.
And you captured all this with words which painted my vivid picture of special times. The clothes we wore, the music we heard, the language we spoke.
A really special poem today Fay for a has-been romantic like me. Into my favourites of course.
July 1st, 2021 04:19
Curbed
dusk arising said:
It\'s always struck me as obscene to capture and \'train\' a wild animal. The more the breeds natural existence is removed from association with humanity the greater the obscenity.
Your words today are very gentle with a subject i feel strongly about.
June 30th, 2021 21:43
dusk arising said:
It\'s always struck me as obscene to capture and \'train\' a wild animal. The more the breeds natural existence is removed from association with humanity the greater the obscenity.
Your words today are very gentle with a subject i feel strongly about.
June 30th, 2021 21:43
Curbed
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, I love raptors, there is a falconry near me and they do fly the captive birds but they also breed them a free them into Nature.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, I love raptors, there is a falconry near me and they do fly the captive birds but they also breed them a free them into Nature.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:36
Curbed
SureshG said:
Human cruelty has no bounds, for we have used our might and our intelligence to tame even the fiercest of adversaries, robbing them of their magnificence and their freedom that we are incapable of experiencing. Your words are truly humbling.
June 30th, 2021 14:30
SureshG said:
Human cruelty has no bounds, for we have used our might and our intelligence to tame even the fiercest of adversaries, robbing them of their magnificence and their freedom that we are incapable of experiencing. Your words are truly humbling.
June 30th, 2021 14:30
Curbed
Doggerel Dave said:
Dedicated to birds in cages also? A silly question: (\'all creatures\').
I really had not given the situation of trained raptors much consideration before you made your argument...many thanks Fay.
June 30th, 2021 08:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Dedicated to birds in cages also? A silly question: (\'all creatures\').
I really had not given the situation of trained raptors much consideration before you made your argument...many thanks Fay.
June 30th, 2021 08:56
Curbed
Neville said:
... a great poem crafted with such insight and sensitivity ...
.. top marks from me Fay and for so many reasons ..
.. I used to fly hawks and had a tawny from a owlet .. but never again ...
.. there really is nowt like true freedom ..................... x
June 30th, 2021 08:36
Neville said:
... a great poem crafted with such insight and sensitivity ...
.. top marks from me Fay and for so many reasons ..
.. I used to fly hawks and had a tawny from a owlet .. but never again ...
.. there really is nowt like true freedom ..................... x
June 30th, 2021 08:36
Patterns
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful write, Fay.
Fire in the morning sailors warning.
June 29th, 2021 15:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful write, Fay.
Fire in the morning sailors warning.
June 29th, 2021 15:27
Patterns
Goldfinch60 said:
Those patterns can bring such delight and warnings to us Fay.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 15:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Those patterns can bring such delight and warnings to us Fay.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 15:10
Patterns
dusk arising said:
Blimey, I\'m afraid to look in the fridge after reading that! Each time I hear a weather forecast I shall now imagine the metreologist forking through meringue for truths (TBH they might just as well be for all their inaccuracies).
Super picture - though it reminded me of a still they showed me from my last endoscopy.
OK so i\'ve had my fun. I returned to the picture and taking each verse in turn saw your words repeated in the image before me. Quite amazing comparisons and quite quite accurate too.
How creative a mind you possess.
June 29th, 2021 13:30
dusk arising said:
Blimey, I\'m afraid to look in the fridge after reading that! Each time I hear a weather forecast I shall now imagine the metreologist forking through meringue for truths (TBH they might just as well be for all their inaccuracies).
Super picture - though it reminded me of a still they showed me from my last endoscopy.
OK so i\'ve had my fun. I returned to the picture and taking each verse in turn saw your words repeated in the image before me. Quite amazing comparisons and quite quite accurate too.
How creative a mind you possess.
June 29th, 2021 13:30
Patterns
Neville said:
I am well and truly ... both warmed and warned ..enjoyed to the bloomin hilt dear Fay ............ x
June 29th, 2021 07:26
Neville said:
I am well and truly ... both warmed and warned ..enjoyed to the bloomin hilt dear Fay ............ x
June 29th, 2021 07:26
Patterns
L. B. Mek said:
I literally spent some five minutes
just dreamily gazing at that breath-taking picture
if you took that yourself, then I\'m genuinely jealous!
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
June 29th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
I literally spent some five minutes
just dreamily gazing at that breath-taking picture
if you took that yourself, then I\'m genuinely jealous!
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
June 29th, 2021 04:54
Distancing
Goldfinch60 said:
So much emotion in your words Fay, saying goodbye can be so hard to do.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 00:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So much emotion in your words Fay, saying goodbye can be so hard to do.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 00:03
Ponderings
L. B. Mek said:
what a brilliantly philosophical interpretation
of the wisdom, imbedded
in each nuanced insight, we glean
of Nature\'s majestic brilliance, dear Fay..
thanks for sharing
June 28th, 2021 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
what a brilliantly philosophical interpretation
of the wisdom, imbedded
in each nuanced insight, we glean
of Nature\'s majestic brilliance, dear Fay..
thanks for sharing
June 28th, 2021 06:18
Distancing
Neville said:
Don\'t ya just hate goodbyes ... I think the term its self is often something of a misnomer ......... perfectly penned in such style as only our dear Lady Fay can pen em .. :)
.... Neville ............ x
June 28th, 2021 04:06
Neville said:
Don\'t ya just hate goodbyes ... I think the term its self is often something of a misnomer ......... perfectly penned in such style as only our dear Lady Fay can pen em .. :)
.... Neville ............ x
June 28th, 2021 04:06
Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these Fay your life will become so enriched.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these Fay your life will become so enriched.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:26
Ponderings
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Especially for one who\'s view is all is one thing happening.
June 27th, 2021 16:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Especially for one who\'s view is all is one thing happening.
June 27th, 2021 16:46
Ponderings
dusk arising said:
I have pondered these things and more. All are seen from our sentient viewpoint but there is surely so much more going on. Communication is closed to us. The nearest we get is with our lovely companion the dog.
Lets be honest though, we barely communicate with each other. War and famine etc.
Your post encourages the mind to go where it may never have considered to trespass before. There fore encouraging one\'s mind to expand.... wholesome.
June 27th, 2021 14:50
dusk arising said:
I have pondered these things and more. All are seen from our sentient viewpoint but there is surely so much more going on. Communication is closed to us. The nearest we get is with our lovely companion the dog.
Lets be honest though, we barely communicate with each other. War and famine etc.
Your post encourages the mind to go where it may never have considered to trespass before. There fore encouraging one\'s mind to expand.... wholesome.
June 27th, 2021 14:50
Ponderings
SureshG said:
A different motif from you, much easier to absorb, and yes, I wonder, if others ponder, as we humans do?
Light hearted but very enjoyable
June 27th, 2021 11:00
SureshG said:
A different motif from you, much easier to absorb, and yes, I wonder, if others ponder, as we humans do?
Light hearted but very enjoyable
June 27th, 2021 11:00
Ponderings
Doggerel Dave said:
Ponderings, on the evidence of what you present here have certainly enriched your life, but also ours..An imagination energising piece, Fay
June 27th, 2021 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Ponderings, on the evidence of what you present here have certainly enriched your life, but also ours..An imagination energising piece, Fay
June 27th, 2021 07:51
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