Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
Probably The Vodka Talking
Heather T said:
Oh, they say many, many things. Eventually they\'ll run out if words. They say everything\'s eventual š.
July 22nd, 2017 19:32
Heather T said:
Oh, they say many, many things. Eventually they\'ll run out if words. They say everything\'s eventual š.
July 22nd, 2017 19:32
Daughter
malubotelho said:
Not everyone you help
Will prove to be grateful
Not everyone you love
Can be trusted
I love this verse. I must say that when you love someone you can not trust, that is a real pain. Specially if they are part of your family. Great poem Ed
July 21st, 2017 20:53
malubotelho said:
Not everyone you help
Will prove to be grateful
Not everyone you love
Can be trusted
I love this verse. I must say that when you love someone you can not trust, that is a real pain. Specially if they are part of your family. Great poem Ed
July 21st, 2017 20:53
Daughter
kevin browne said:
as a loving father myself, this poem fits perfectly. great imaginative write Edthepoet.
July 21st, 2017 13:06
kevin browne said:
as a loving father myself, this poem fits perfectly. great imaginative write Edthepoet.
July 21st, 2017 13:06
Daughter
Louis Gibbs said:
\"I only gave you life, now the living is up to you.\" What a beautiful, poignant line, Ed! Kudos on this one!. All of us who have daughters can appreciate.
July 21st, 2017 10:19
Louis Gibbs said:
\"I only gave you life, now the living is up to you.\" What a beautiful, poignant line, Ed! Kudos on this one!. All of us who have daughters can appreciate.
July 21st, 2017 10:19
MaƱana Karma
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I do hope that bullet never comes beneath the hammer.
July 21st, 2017 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I do hope that bullet never comes beneath the hammer.
July 21st, 2017 00:36
MaƱana Karma
kevin browne said:
mate I love this poem. brilliant skill in the in knowledge of illusions which fool us all. rejection is a hard thing to follow but we get that too. leaving a lover or losing lover causes all sorts of issues, tears and happiness. well said here a massive noted well done.
July 20th, 2017 11:39
kevin browne said:
mate I love this poem. brilliant skill in the in knowledge of illusions which fool us all. rejection is a hard thing to follow but we get that too. leaving a lover or losing lover causes all sorts of issues, tears and happiness. well said here a massive noted well done.
July 20th, 2017 11:39
Out Of The Hollow
Nicholas Browning said:
The last lines give me an image of ghost ships out in an ancient graveyard. (possibly around the 1400s) In the middle of a dense forest. Gotta say, cool stuff.
July 14th, 2017 12:20
Nicholas Browning said:
The last lines give me an image of ghost ships out in an ancient graveyard. (possibly around the 1400s) In the middle of a dense forest. Gotta say, cool stuff.
July 14th, 2017 12:20
Out Of The Hollow
MissileOfUncertainty said:
Wow! THIS. This is absolutely amazing! The flow is so... Raw. And I it keeps pulling me forward with it. Actually- it reminds me of the song Californiacation for some reason or another. Thanks for sharing!
July 14th, 2017 10:24
MissileOfUncertainty said:
Wow! THIS. This is absolutely amazing! The flow is so... Raw. And I it keeps pulling me forward with it. Actually- it reminds me of the song Californiacation for some reason or another. Thanks for sharing!
July 14th, 2017 10:24
Into The Furnace
ShannonXx said:
This has a great and useful message! Loved reading
July 14th, 2017 07:26
ShannonXx said:
This has a great and useful message! Loved reading
July 14th, 2017 07:26
Into The Furnace
burning-embers said:
Wow Ed that is wonderful. Truly wonderful writing and really hit me hard. I know exactly the feelings you have written here, lived them and your words brought them right back for me. +favs
July 13th, 2017 17:57
burning-embers said:
Wow Ed that is wonderful. Truly wonderful writing and really hit me hard. I know exactly the feelings you have written here, lived them and your words brought them right back for me. +favs
July 13th, 2017 17:57
Into The Furnace
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate verse with a brilliant last stanza - great read Ed.
July 13th, 2017 17:27
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate verse with a brilliant last stanza - great read Ed.
July 13th, 2017 17:27
Into The Furnace
kevin browne said:
tough times it seems. I hope you redeem your love for a women someday soon. a compassionate poem filled the thought of never given up, a brilliant undertone my friend.
July 13th, 2017 13:51
kevin browne said:
tough times it seems. I hope you redeem your love for a women someday soon. a compassionate poem filled the thought of never given up, a brilliant undertone my friend.
July 13th, 2017 13:51
The Middle Kids
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m the youngest and that line towards the end was perfect my friend.
I also give respect to my middle sis and old bro for helping learn from them.
Love your splattered paint, and the monkey with a fish. I\'ve used that twice in the last few days ;)
July 12th, 2017 10:51
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m the youngest and that line towards the end was perfect my friend.
I also give respect to my middle sis and old bro for helping learn from them.
Love your splattered paint, and the monkey with a fish. I\'ve used that twice in the last few days ;)
July 12th, 2017 10:51
The Sound Of A Gong.
kevin browne said:
flush the excess money down the toilet and but the wealth up in your heart and soul. a true wealth may sit inside you or years and years until one day you discover you have a talent to show and help the world with. now that\'s wealth!. as usual, reading your work only leaves us staring and pondering over the art you produce. a fine write here my friend.
July 11th, 2017 01:21
kevin browne said:
flush the excess money down the toilet and but the wealth up in your heart and soul. a true wealth may sit inside you or years and years until one day you discover you have a talent to show and help the world with. now that\'s wealth!. as usual, reading your work only leaves us staring and pondering over the art you produce. a fine write here my friend.
July 11th, 2017 01:21
The Sound Of A Gong.
kevin browne said:
flush the excess money down the toilet and but the wealth up in your heart and soul. a true wealth may sit inside you or years and years until one day you discover you have a talent to show and help the world with. now that\'s wealth!. as usual, reading your work only leaves us staring and pondering over the art you produce. a fine write here my friend.
July 11th, 2017 01:20
kevin browne said:
flush the excess money down the toilet and but the wealth up in your heart and soul. a true wealth may sit inside you or years and years until one day you discover you have a talent to show and help the world with. now that\'s wealth!. as usual, reading your work only leaves us staring and pondering over the art you produce. a fine write here my friend.
July 11th, 2017 01:20
The Sound Of A Gong.
FredPeyer said:
Ed, the line starting with \"interpretation of...\" really got me thinking. Twenty, or maybe a hundred people can look at the same thing and every one of them sees something different.
Great writing, great subject matter!
Thank you.
July 10th, 2017 13:05
FredPeyer said:
Ed, the line starting with \"interpretation of...\" really got me thinking. Twenty, or maybe a hundred people can look at the same thing and every one of them sees something different.
Great writing, great subject matter!
Thank you.
July 10th, 2017 13:05
The Sound Of A Gong.
Fay Slimm. said:
The futility and cruelty of war is well brought out in this questioning verse Ed - - the final stanza speaks a clear message - a compelling read.
July 10th, 2017 13:02
Fay Slimm. said:
The futility and cruelty of war is well brought out in this questioning verse Ed - - the final stanza speaks a clear message - a compelling read.
July 10th, 2017 13:02
Blackbird
burning-embers said:
Yes it is amazing that we dream such beauty whilst living on the aggressive ball of ugliness mankind has made much of this planet into. Love the pounding madness of the first part and the sweet beautiful gentleness of the contrasting finale. Really good.
July 8th, 2017 09:09
burning-embers said:
Yes it is amazing that we dream such beauty whilst living on the aggressive ball of ugliness mankind has made much of this planet into. Love the pounding madness of the first part and the sweet beautiful gentleness of the contrasting finale. Really good.
July 8th, 2017 09:09
I Gave You The Voodoo
burning-embers said:
Driven to punish and decry, but the pain of the punisher shows through.
July 7th, 2017 11:43
burning-embers said:
Driven to punish and decry, but the pain of the punisher shows through.
July 7th, 2017 11:43
Dead Sara
malubotelho said:
Really fantastic writing. I like to read you. One reason why I searched for s site like this was really to read what the actual poets were writing. Poets like you, fresh from the oven. I\'m thrilled to read from people of all ages here. The old, the young, the good, the bad. Such a fantastic diversity. Thank you all.
July 5th, 2017 23:40
malubotelho said:
Really fantastic writing. I like to read you. One reason why I searched for s site like this was really to read what the actual poets were writing. Poets like you, fresh from the oven. I\'m thrilled to read from people of all ages here. The old, the young, the good, the bad. Such a fantastic diversity. Thank you all.
July 5th, 2017 23:40
Dead Sara
burning-embers said:
This actually made me feel old because it brought back so clearly people i would meet when i was a younger thing, places and peole so far removed from what i am now. Thank you. This really awakened long undisturbed memories.
July 5th, 2017 01:47
burning-embers said:
This actually made me feel old because it brought back so clearly people i would meet when i was a younger thing, places and peole so far removed from what i am now. Thank you. This really awakened long undisturbed memories.
July 5th, 2017 01:47
Dead Sara
FredPeyer said:
What an incredible description and an even more incredible name. And the last two lines really got to me.
Great writing Ed!
July 4th, 2017 22:09
FredPeyer said:
What an incredible description and an even more incredible name. And the last two lines really got to me.
Great writing Ed!
July 4th, 2017 22:09
Sham Alama Ding Dong
malubotelho said:
Crazy cute ding dong written. I don\'t understand English so it is ok.
July 3rd, 2017 16:43
malubotelho said:
Crazy cute ding dong written. I don\'t understand English so it is ok.
July 3rd, 2017 16:43
Sham Alama Ding Dong
burning-embers said:
Do wop ya do do well boy! Do wop ya dun did gud.
July 3rd, 2017 12:28
burning-embers said:
Do wop ya do do well boy! Do wop ya dun did gud.
July 3rd, 2017 12:28
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