Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
Stuck In The Bubble
FredPeyer said:
They say that the only difference between a rut and a grave is depth.
Great writing, great humor in a poem addressing some serious matter. As a two-time emigrant/immigrant all I can say is get out before that rut becomes a grave.
July 2nd, 2017 17:49
FredPeyer said:
They say that the only difference between a rut and a grave is depth.
Great writing, great humor in a poem addressing some serious matter. As a two-time emigrant/immigrant all I can say is get out before that rut becomes a grave.
July 2nd, 2017 17:49
Stuck In The Bubble
burning-embers said:
Say it like it is on the street. That\'s what you did with a bit of tongue in cheek here. If that\'s you in there, leave, new horizons, new challenges, new existence = new you.
July 2nd, 2017 11:44
burning-embers said:
Say it like it is on the street. That\'s what you did with a bit of tongue in cheek here. If that\'s you in there, leave, new horizons, new challenges, new existence = new you.
July 2nd, 2017 11:44
Nonsense & Boll****
kevin browne said:
fuck me, this is brilliant fun. great poem, including the French lesson.
July 1st, 2017 21:12
kevin browne said:
fuck me, this is brilliant fun. great poem, including the French lesson.
July 1st, 2017 21:12
Nonsense & Boll****
malubotelho said:
Seems like rap to me. Who gives f* this is just a comment. Who cares. By the way some call me Lucy and I\'m from Brazil. Steve is too old for me and probably don\'t f* anymore. Sorry, I just got carried away by your fun write. Thank you
July 1st, 2017 20:11
malubotelho said:
Seems like rap to me. Who gives f* this is just a comment. Who cares. By the way some call me Lucy and I\'m from Brazil. Steve is too old for me and probably don\'t f* anymore. Sorry, I just got carried away by your fun write. Thank you
July 1st, 2017 20:11
Nonsense & Boll****
burning-embers said:
Love it, good bawdy fun. Can hear a pub crowd singing those chorus\'s.
Cleverly put together.
July 1st, 2017 14:07
burning-embers said:
Love it, good bawdy fun. Can hear a pub crowd singing those chorus\'s.
Cleverly put together.
July 1st, 2017 14:07
Sweet Synergy
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the mysticism in this fine poem. It resonates with me. Words of an old soul! Very well expressed write, Ed.
June 29th, 2017 22:42
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the mysticism in this fine poem. It resonates with me. Words of an old soul! Very well expressed write, Ed.
June 29th, 2017 22:42
Will You Remind Me?
malubotelho said:
You have a fantastic way of writing. I\'m in love with your poems.
June 29th, 2017 21:14
malubotelho said:
You have a fantastic way of writing. I\'m in love with your poems.
June 29th, 2017 21:14
Sweet Synergy
kevin browne said:
love it love it and love it. you have certainly left your mark with this one. all is looking over you my friend.
June 29th, 2017 14:39
kevin browne said:
love it love it and love it. you have certainly left your mark with this one. all is looking over you my friend.
June 29th, 2017 14:39
Mr Nice Guy
FredPeyer said:
Great poem. Unfortunately we cannot control the growing up part. It just happens, sometimes in fits and spurts, and we have to try to make the best of it.
June 27th, 2017 11:29
FredPeyer said:
Great poem. Unfortunately we cannot control the growing up part. It just happens, sometimes in fits and spurts, and we have to try to make the best of it.
June 27th, 2017 11:29
Dare To Dream
kevin browne said:
keep on dreaming, my friend, they are full of everything you need to know if you catch them right. I am constantly dreaming or meditating on the poetry I wish I could write. you have done this brilliantly and I\'m really happy for you after writing such a beauty of a poem x
June 26th, 2017 10:22
kevin browne said:
keep on dreaming, my friend, they are full of everything you need to know if you catch them right. I am constantly dreaming or meditating on the poetry I wish I could write. you have done this brilliantly and I\'m really happy for you after writing such a beauty of a poem x
June 26th, 2017 10:22
From The Roof Tops
Louis Gibbs said:
An insightful exploration into self, and what does and doesn\'t matter. Well done, Ed!
June 25th, 2017 09:45
Louis Gibbs said:
An insightful exploration into self, and what does and doesn\'t matter. Well done, Ed!
June 25th, 2017 09:45
From The Roof Tops
kevin browne said:
a good capture of life involving all the things we need to sort out. this is such a good read it needs the compliments which are deserved. a great well done.
June 25th, 2017 09:39
kevin browne said:
a good capture of life involving all the things we need to sort out. this is such a good read it needs the compliments which are deserved. a great well done.
June 25th, 2017 09:39
Runaway Train
Edthepoet said:
You girls were right, it works as a song, so I come up with a 2nd verse :)
We came to go faster
So show me
You can last
We came for the chancers
So show me
Where there sat
Show me to the ones
Who\'ll swing and miss us
Show me to the ones
Who\'ll take us on
When the lights
Stop shaking
And the bar
Stops rocking
Baby thats our cue
When the roof
Stops lifting
And the street
Stops swinging
Baby its time to move
So Runaway train
Keep running
Onto the next town
Runaway train
Keep running
To where it\'s going down
Runaway train
Keep running
Onto that fresh sound
Runaway train
Keep running
Until we hit the ground.
June 24th, 2017 17:22
Edthepoet said:
You girls were right, it works as a song, so I come up with a 2nd verse :)
We came to go faster
So show me
You can last
We came for the chancers
So show me
Where there sat
Show me to the ones
Who\'ll swing and miss us
Show me to the ones
Who\'ll take us on
When the lights
Stop shaking
And the bar
Stops rocking
Baby thats our cue
When the roof
Stops lifting
And the street
Stops swinging
Baby its time to move
So Runaway train
Keep running
Onto the next town
Runaway train
Keep running
To where it\'s going down
Runaway train
Keep running
Onto that fresh sound
Runaway train
Keep running
Until we hit the ground.
June 24th, 2017 17:22
Runaway Train
Baylee said:
I was thinking the same thing regarding this poem becoming a song. Do you sing/play an instrument?
June 23rd, 2017 22:45
Baylee said:
I was thinking the same thing regarding this poem becoming a song. Do you sing/play an instrument?
June 23rd, 2017 22:45
Runaway Train
FredPeyer said:
Ed, I really like your poem. It is very well written. You seem to be a passenger on this runaway train. How about getting into the driver\'s cabin and taking over?
June 23rd, 2017 12:11
FredPeyer said:
Ed, I really like your poem. It is very well written. You seem to be a passenger on this runaway train. How about getting into the driver\'s cabin and taking over?
June 23rd, 2017 12:11
Take Another Look Around
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, one day we will give peace a chance but not in my lifetime.
June 22nd, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, one day we will give peace a chance but not in my lifetime.
June 22nd, 2017 00:55
Take Another Look Around
Louis Gibbs said:
Strong expression on the state of the world, Ed! It is a mess ... but then, what if it is exactly as it is meant to be?
June 21st, 2017 10:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Strong expression on the state of the world, Ed! It is a mess ... but then, what if it is exactly as it is meant to be?
June 21st, 2017 10:24
Take Another Look Around
FredPeyer said:
Once in a while we do wake up, look at the French revolution for example. But so many times one bad is replaced by another bad. But no matter, I do believe in the good of man and that one day, probably in the far future only, good will prevail. Good write!
June 21st, 2017 10:14
FredPeyer said:
Once in a while we do wake up, look at the French revolution for example. But so many times one bad is replaced by another bad. But no matter, I do believe in the good of man and that one day, probably in the far future only, good will prevail. Good write!
June 21st, 2017 10:14
Take Another Look Around
kevin browne said:
people live off their own fear and thrive on it. just in case you lose everything. fantastic when the ride is just about to start. cool piece here.
June 21st, 2017 10:02
kevin browne said:
people live off their own fear and thrive on it. just in case you lose everything. fantastic when the ride is just about to start. cool piece here.
June 21st, 2017 10:02
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