Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
Chasing Shadows
Garry said:
Lovely opening verse. Beautiful and mysterious. Well written as it leads usto an almost perfect ending.
Love the image conjured up in the last 3 lines.
April 7th, 2017 03:02
Garry said:
Lovely opening verse. Beautiful and mysterious. Well written as it leads usto an almost perfect ending.
Love the image conjured up in the last 3 lines.
April 7th, 2017 03:02
Walking Free
Mello said:
Wow it\'s different really complex and interesting. Liked the start keep writing.
March 25th, 2017 18:55
Mello said:
Wow it\'s different really complex and interesting. Liked the start keep writing.
March 25th, 2017 18:55
She\'s got Rock and Roll
trinhead said:
Loved the image of this fearless girl of rock n roll
March 24th, 2017 17:52
trinhead said:
Loved the image of this fearless girl of rock n roll
March 24th, 2017 17:52
Empty Pockets
Garry said:
Looked at three of your poems so far, Enjoyed them all looking forward to checking out the rest.
March 22nd, 2017 16:51
Garry said:
Looked at three of your poems so far, Enjoyed them all looking forward to checking out the rest.
March 22nd, 2017 16:51
Ransom
Garry said:
Too good for a country and western song😯, Though it would work ad lyrics. Live the ideas and images it evokes
March 22nd, 2017 16:49
Garry said:
Too good for a country and western song😯, Though it would work ad lyrics. Live the ideas and images it evokes
March 22nd, 2017 16:49
Miles and Miles
Garry said:
Very good. Really enjoyed the rythms and the flow. Good \'story\' too.
March 22nd, 2017 16:46
Garry said:
Very good. Really enjoyed the rythms and the flow. Good \'story\' too.
March 22nd, 2017 16:46
Another Day.
Michael Edwards said:
This just flows and has such great lines - a super piece Ed.
March 3rd, 2017 22:33
Michael Edwards said:
This just flows and has such great lines - a super piece Ed.
March 3rd, 2017 22:33
Another Day.
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the flow of this romantic invitation - good write Ed.
March 3rd, 2017 13:12
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the flow of this romantic invitation - good write Ed.
March 3rd, 2017 13:12
Stop Going in for the Kill
AtheistAngel- Daniel Mc\'leod said:
Very deep. Powerful.
February 22nd, 2017 11:28
AtheistAngel- Daniel Mc\'leod said:
Very deep. Powerful.
February 22nd, 2017 11:28
Face in the Flames
Elbeanzio said:
Well written. Feel for you. Reminds me of a friend I knew when I was younger. Told me many years on that she panicked. But life had moved on by then. What\'s meant to be is meant to be I guess...
February 20th, 2017 20:09
Elbeanzio said:
Well written. Feel for you. Reminds me of a friend I knew when I was younger. Told me many years on that she panicked. But life had moved on by then. What\'s meant to be is meant to be I guess...
February 20th, 2017 20:09
Face in the Flames
P.H.Rose said:
This is superb
I love it...
really good vibe
To it, flows really well
Good job....
February 20th, 2017 18:46
P.H.Rose said:
This is superb
I love it...
really good vibe
To it, flows really well
Good job....
February 20th, 2017 18:46
Face in the Flames
MendedFences27 said:
A sad reflection on lost love. We\'ve been there and it hurts. The reminders are everywhere, and the pain won\'t leave. But - it\'s just a matter of time, before a new face appears in the flame, and many years down the road, the memories vanish. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 12:28
MendedFences27 said:
A sad reflection on lost love. We\'ve been there and it hurts. The reminders are everywhere, and the pain won\'t leave. But - it\'s just a matter of time, before a new face appears in the flame, and many years down the road, the memories vanish. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 12:28
Strike a Match
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, but playing with fire was ever too tantalizing. The grown-ups forbade us, but we liked getting our fingers singed one time too many. This is a pretty number in tribute to that waltzing folly, and perfectly spot-on for this Valentine\'s Eve. Thanks for sharing.
February 13th, 2017 21:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, but playing with fire was ever too tantalizing. The grown-ups forbade us, but we liked getting our fingers singed one time too many. This is a pretty number in tribute to that waltzing folly, and perfectly spot-on for this Valentine\'s Eve. Thanks for sharing.
February 13th, 2017 21:15
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