Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
Blue is the Sea
Edthepoet said:
Thank you guys. Love is indeed messier than eating yogurt on a trampoline in a lift.
September 8th, 2017 12:23
Edthepoet said:
Thank you guys. Love is indeed messier than eating yogurt on a trampoline in a lift.
September 8th, 2017 12:23
Blue is the Sea
dusk arising said:
Yes, do the new things threaten the love or do they become a part of it. The way you deal with these things affects your partner. They can only respond if you create a drama. Insecurity probably wrecks more relationships than anything else.. Once again your writing is so fresh and you pick out those illustrative details perfectly. goes into my favourites
September 8th, 2017 01:08
dusk arising said:
Yes, do the new things threaten the love or do they become a part of it. The way you deal with these things affects your partner. They can only respond if you create a drama. Insecurity probably wrecks more relationships than anything else.. Once again your writing is so fresh and you pick out those illustrative details perfectly. goes into my favourites
September 8th, 2017 01:08
She\'ll Let You Be King
ruby.e said:
This is really well written and seems raw. Most people stereotype being used with a guy using a girl for her body, but you really showed the other side. An unsatisfied girl who\'s not looking for romance. Loved this poem.
September 3rd, 2017 21:39
ruby.e said:
This is really well written and seems raw. Most people stereotype being used with a guy using a girl for her body, but you really showed the other side. An unsatisfied girl who\'s not looking for romance. Loved this poem.
September 3rd, 2017 21:39
Snakes & Ladders
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The system in the world now seems to want to destroy those who work diligently and with pride.
Good tribute to your Father, may his retirement be full of contentment.
September 1st, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The system in the world now seems to want to destroy those who work diligently and with pride.
Good tribute to your Father, may his retirement be full of contentment.
September 1st, 2017 00:53
The Hipster & The Geisha
dusk arising said:
Nice writing Ed. Yep it sho\'nuff just comes up and hits ya when its ready and theres not a lot you can do except say \'here we go again\'. Nice writing again. I enjoyed reading this.
August 31st, 2017 03:49
dusk arising said:
Nice writing Ed. Yep it sho\'nuff just comes up and hits ya when its ready and theres not a lot you can do except say \'here we go again\'. Nice writing again. I enjoyed reading this.
August 31st, 2017 03:49
Inhale
FredPeyer said:
\'Sinking in a sea of what ifs\'
Very good writing, when I finished reading I had to take a deep breath!
August 25th, 2017 21:57
FredPeyer said:
\'Sinking in a sea of what ifs\'
Very good writing, when I finished reading I had to take a deep breath!
August 25th, 2017 21:57
Time Move Slowly
dusk arising said:
Sad. As time goes by you come to terms with, get used to situations. But it can all come back fresh in a flash. Nice writing.
August 24th, 2017 17:51
dusk arising said:
Sad. As time goes by you come to terms with, get used to situations. But it can all come back fresh in a flash. Nice writing.
August 24th, 2017 17:51
The Natives Were Butchered For This Sh*t?
dusk arising said:
And the meek shall inherit the earth DOH! mmmmm donuts. Yes i get the message everything gets dumbed down, dumber and dumber. Cool pointed writing mister.
August 23rd, 2017 18:34
dusk arising said:
And the meek shall inherit the earth DOH! mmmmm donuts. Yes i get the message everything gets dumbed down, dumber and dumber. Cool pointed writing mister.
August 23rd, 2017 18:34
I See..Said The Blind Man
dusk arising said:
So many damaged encounters or encounters with the damaged. Stunning writing style. The subject resonates with me very strongly.
August 23rd, 2017 02:40
dusk arising said:
So many damaged encounters or encounters with the damaged. Stunning writing style. The subject resonates with me very strongly.
August 23rd, 2017 02:40
EU What pal?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I totally agree with you. I am one of \'the old fogies\' but we need to be part of Europe which may eventually lead to one combined world where ALL work for each other
August 17th, 2017 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I totally agree with you. I am one of \'the old fogies\' but we need to be part of Europe which may eventually lead to one combined world where ALL work for each other
August 17th, 2017 00:44
EU What pal?
burning-embers said:
PMSL @ poetic gatekeepers of enlightenment?
August 16th, 2017 19:33
burning-embers said:
PMSL @ poetic gatekeepers of enlightenment?
August 16th, 2017 19:33
Exiled Mind
Heather T said:
Passionately honest look at where we find ourselves just before the exile.
August 9th, 2017 16:51
Heather T said:
Passionately honest look at where we find ourselves just before the exile.
August 9th, 2017 16:51
Narcissique
Adri said:
Wow! That was amazing! \"I\'m the water that let\'s you sail.\" One of my favorite lines!
Tc,🦋
August 8th, 2017 16:43
Adri said:
Wow! That was amazing! \"I\'m the water that let\'s you sail.\" One of my favorite lines!
Tc,🦋
August 8th, 2017 16:43
Hired Gun
burning-embers said:
This stunning, i wish you had given some notes of background because i\'d love to know the dilemma. Nonetheless i read this 4 times and its so powerful. I really like it, it draws me in and gets me searching for clues.
edit GULP! just saw the title, no clues needed now, still stunning work.
August 1st, 2017 07:07
burning-embers said:
This stunning, i wish you had given some notes of background because i\'d love to know the dilemma. Nonetheless i read this 4 times and its so powerful. I really like it, it draws me in and gets me searching for clues.
edit GULP! just saw the title, no clues needed now, still stunning work.
August 1st, 2017 07:07
The Fury Of A Patient Man
FredPeyer said:
Ed, I really like your poem and the title \"the fury of a patient man\' sounds great!
I agree with the conclusion of the poem as well.
July 29th, 2017 23:55
FredPeyer said:
Ed, I really like your poem and the title \"the fury of a patient man\' sounds great!
I agree with the conclusion of the poem as well.
July 29th, 2017 23:55
Red Morning Sky
burning-embers said:
Yes mate, when you know you\'ve got that river flowing strong in you its time to question those reasons you made the changes you\'ve been living by. Maybe the healing/growing is done. The worlds waiting for you.
July 28th, 2017 14:25
burning-embers said:
Yes mate, when you know you\'ve got that river flowing strong in you its time to question those reasons you made the changes you\'ve been living by. Maybe the healing/growing is done. The worlds waiting for you.
July 28th, 2017 14:25
Along The Execution Mile
kevin browne said:
brilliant and I love it. just imaging doing what you write. good one my friend.
July 24th, 2017 18:45
kevin browne said:
brilliant and I love it. just imaging doing what you write. good one my friend.
July 24th, 2017 18:45
Probably The Vodka Talking
ShannonXx said:
Really agree with the message of this! Love it
July 23rd, 2017 08:47
ShannonXx said:
Really agree with the message of this! Love it
July 23rd, 2017 08:47
Probably The Vodka Talking
Seek said:
After reading this, no one dares mess with you! The writing\'s on the wall for them. I\'ll have some of what you\'re having too!
July 23rd, 2017 00:52
Seek said:
After reading this, no one dares mess with you! The writing\'s on the wall for them. I\'ll have some of what you\'re having too!
July 23rd, 2017 00:52
Probably The Vodka Talking
malubotelho said:
Ya, let\'s hear only what the vodka says. A pink margarita for me.
July 22nd, 2017 19:57
malubotelho said:
Ya, let\'s hear only what the vodka says. A pink margarita for me.
July 22nd, 2017 19:57
Probably The Vodka Talking
niallprideaux said:
Agreed. Fuck what everyone else says
July 22nd, 2017 19:34
niallprideaux said:
Agreed. Fuck what everyone else says
July 22nd, 2017 19:34
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