Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
The Picture I Can\'t Paint
smallest_stars said:
I enjoyed this poem. It was thought provoking, especially the last stanza. Profound!
It has a good rhythm to it too, though I think some punctuation in certain places would make it flow even better.
June 21st, 2018 20:09
smallest_stars said:
I enjoyed this poem. It was thought provoking, especially the last stanza. Profound!
It has a good rhythm to it too, though I think some punctuation in certain places would make it flow even better.
June 21st, 2018 20:09
I probably won\'t laugh at your jokes
Syd said:
Jenny was a friend of mine - the killers.
Enjoyed Ed.
- Syd
June 20th, 2018 19:35
Syd said:
Jenny was a friend of mine - the killers.
Enjoyed Ed.
- Syd
June 20th, 2018 19:35
I probably won\'t laugh at your jokes
dusk arising said:
The past accompanies us everywhere, be it physically or only in our dreams.
Your mix of emotions expressed here chimed with me completely. i felt this, i know the place it comes from.
Once more you cut thru the crap and get to the nitty gritty of \'lifes a bitch - then you die\'.
Goes into my favourites.
June 19th, 2018 04:28
dusk arising said:
The past accompanies us everywhere, be it physically or only in our dreams.
Your mix of emotions expressed here chimed with me completely. i felt this, i know the place it comes from.
Once more you cut thru the crap and get to the nitty gritty of \'lifes a bitch - then you die\'.
Goes into my favourites.
June 19th, 2018 04:28
The Preacher
dusk arising said:
This reads like the story of my existence now at age 66. Once again you show tremendous insight and i envy your ability as a wordsmith. This piece joins quite a few other pieces of yours in my favourites. I was reading my favourites to a friend recently and they too found your work remarkably good.
May 4th, 2018 08:19
dusk arising said:
This reads like the story of my existence now at age 66. Once again you show tremendous insight and i envy your ability as a wordsmith. This piece joins quite a few other pieces of yours in my favourites. I was reading my favourites to a friend recently and they too found your work remarkably good.
May 4th, 2018 08:19
The Preacher
onepauly said:
even when you choose you don\'t choose. you cant. just pretend you can.
May 3rd, 2018 13:28
onepauly said:
even when you choose you don\'t choose. you cant. just pretend you can.
May 3rd, 2018 13:28
Up in Flames
onepauly said:
drunken words don\'t mean much.
very good way to describe it.
April 27th, 2018 13:29
onepauly said:
drunken words don\'t mean much.
very good way to describe it.
April 27th, 2018 13:29
Spent Forever Chasing Ghosts
onepauly said:
the ghost we are chasing is ourselves. each and every.
April 23rd, 2018 14:49
onepauly said:
the ghost we are chasing is ourselves. each and every.
April 23rd, 2018 14:49
More To A Meaning
kevin browne said:
well penned, ED, beautifully phrased and just left me wanting more. great stuff.
April 11th, 2018 19:29
kevin browne said:
well penned, ED, beautifully phrased and just left me wanting more. great stuff.
April 11th, 2018 19:29
Blood Orange
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i like this .. especially the lines..
\'\'When the sky turns blood orange
And the airwaves lay empty
Will you know what you wanted?\'\'
April 3rd, 2018 14:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i like this .. especially the lines..
\'\'When the sky turns blood orange
And the airwaves lay empty
Will you know what you wanted?\'\'
April 3rd, 2018 14:04
Say It Louder Baby
dusk arising said:
enigmatic women can be so attractive , but there are those who just play with enigma....it\'s all they have.... and quite insufficient i have found.
again, i really like the way you write.
March 27th, 2018 17:33
dusk arising said:
enigmatic women can be so attractive , but there are those who just play with enigma....it\'s all they have.... and quite insufficient i have found.
again, i really like the way you write.
March 27th, 2018 17:33
Toe to Toe
Lorna said:
You and love sound like a good ring fight......... well expressed!
March 24th, 2018 14:30
Lorna said:
You and love sound like a good ring fight......... well expressed!
March 24th, 2018 14:30
Quite Alright
Lorna said:
Hardest lesson to ever learn - is that no one can tell you how to live.... I like the defiance in the poem.........
March 18th, 2018 04:39
Lorna said:
Hardest lesson to ever learn - is that no one can tell you how to live.... I like the defiance in the poem.........
March 18th, 2018 04:39
Honey Fire
dusk arising said:
Oh i met her so many times, more often watched her dance from afar. Luckily i noticed the corpses left behind which kept me away. I tried to write about this years ago and gave up.
You hit the nail squarely on the head again here. + favs
March 2nd, 2018 13:51
dusk arising said:
Oh i met her so many times, more often watched her dance from afar. Luckily i noticed the corpses left behind which kept me away. I tried to write about this years ago and gave up.
You hit the nail squarely on the head again here. + favs
March 2nd, 2018 13:51
The Night Before
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey this is raw. Life down an east end pub m8. East end of anytown.
March 1st, 2018 13:39
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey this is raw. Life down an east end pub m8. East end of anytown.
March 1st, 2018 13:39
Banging on the Bandit
dusk arising said:
Your stuff is always down to earth and hits the nail smack on its head.
\"Hand to mouth and tongue in cheek
Debt collection hide and seek\" I just loved those lines.
This goes into my favourites. Thank you.
February 27th, 2018 17:05
dusk arising said:
Your stuff is always down to earth and hits the nail smack on its head.
\"Hand to mouth and tongue in cheek
Debt collection hide and seek\" I just loved those lines.
This goes into my favourites. Thank you.
February 27th, 2018 17:05
Breeze Blocks
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this ! the opposing, attracted to the opposite gender , but you would much rather be alone because you feel less chaotic in your mind ! it sounds like you are struggling to understand her .. great write
February 25th, 2018 19:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this ! the opposing, attracted to the opposite gender , but you would much rather be alone because you feel less chaotic in your mind ! it sounds like you are struggling to understand her .. great write
February 25th, 2018 19:21
Get out
dusk arising said:
Oh my word do i feel the spirit of your words in my own life right now. Would that i had written this like some kind of exorcism to rid me of the other spirit that haunts my breathing days.
Powrful, meaningful.
February 23rd, 2018 16:25
dusk arising said:
Oh my word do i feel the spirit of your words in my own life right now. Would that i had written this like some kind of exorcism to rid me of the other spirit that haunts my breathing days.
Powrful, meaningful.
February 23rd, 2018 16:25
Coming Soon
dusk arising said:
This is like you teling someone to stop being false and be what you really are, for it will happen, theyre worth telling for youve seen the real kernel within them..... which youre encouraging to blossom.
i hope i\'ve read this right, its very clever.
February 7th, 2018 15:39
dusk arising said:
This is like you teling someone to stop being false and be what you really are, for it will happen, theyre worth telling for youve seen the real kernel within them..... which youre encouraging to blossom.
i hope i\'ve read this right, its very clever.
February 7th, 2018 15:39
Breeze Blocks
dusk arising said:
Wow! powerful stuff. Seems like you are at one with yourself when alone. The othher is certainly against your grain..... but soddit... the human condition.... opposites attract. = Mad isn\'t it.
Your stuff is always really entertaining.
February 6th, 2018 17:50
dusk arising said:
Wow! powerful stuff. Seems like you are at one with yourself when alone. The othher is certainly against your grain..... but soddit... the human condition.... opposites attract. = Mad isn\'t it.
Your stuff is always really entertaining.
February 6th, 2018 17:50
Charmless Hearts
Aislinn Wilson said:
I really feel like this would hit full potential if performed by a rock band
January 15th, 2018 20:16
Aislinn Wilson said:
I really feel like this would hit full potential if performed by a rock band
January 15th, 2018 20:16
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